/ddlc/ - Doki Doki Literature Club! #206

RumChicken
RumChicken

Pajama Party Edition
Previous Thread: /vg/thread/198305196#p198305196

Official Stuff
Website: http://ddlc.moe
Steam Page: http://store.steampowered.com/app/698780/Doki_Doki_Literature_Club/
Monika Twitter: https://twitter.com/lilmonix3

Guides
Guide: https://gameplay.tips/guides/1298-doki-doki-literature-club.html
Actual guide to getting the "good" end: https://pastebin.com/q3nGy9Fa

Art and Miscellaneous
Game files dump (full) - https://mega.nz/#!omBgAY7a!qbh7FYCcYnjIN7G9bGGDy343CLBCRaOIuiHN8SwPT7k
Wiki: http://ddlcwiki.ga/wiki/Main_Page
Fan-made Content Pastebin: https://pastebin.com/BRy67t0s
Booru: http://ddlc.booru.org
Map: https://www.zeemaps.com/map?group=2793739#
"Your Reality" sung by (You): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7acpV4fKp9Y

Sayori threads best threads because we don't blindly copy paste.
National Suicide Prevention Lifeline (USA): 1-800-273-TALK (8255)
International Association for Suicide Prevention (EU): http://www.iasp.info/resources/Crisis_Centres/Europe/
https://www.lifeline.org.au/get-help/get-help-home518121

All urls found in this thread:
http://ddlc.moe
http://store.steampowered.com/app/698780/Doki_Doki_Literature_Club/
https://twitter.com/lilmonix3
https://gameplay.tips/guides/1298-doki-doki-literature-club.html
https://pastebin.com/q3nGy9Fa
https://mega.nz/#!omBgAY7a!qbh7FYCcYnjIN7G9bGGDy343CLBCRaOIuiHN8SwPT7k
http://ddlcwiki.ga/wiki/Main_Page
https://pastebin.com/BRy67t0s
http://ddlc.booru.org
https://www.zeemaps.com/map?group=2793739#
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7acpV4fKp9Y
http://www.iasp.info/resources/Crisis_Centres/Europe/
https://www.lifeline.org.au/get-help/get-help-home518121
http://www.strawpoll.me/14594059
http://www.strawpoll.me/14594059
http://www.strawpoll.me/14594059
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=41tIUr_ex3g
https://pastebin.com/DwVMr9W9
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VtzO2DC1WVU&t=632s
http://poal.me/3la8wd
https://pastebin.com/B6Zc0uCF
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=90rHFreKjvs
https://soundcloud.com/nyanners/your-reality-cover
https://1d4chan.org/wiki/Warhammer_40,000
https://1d4chan.org/wiki/Warhammer_40,000
http://ddlc.moe/
https://pastebin.com/mdECpq31
http://pastebin.com/Gzs2LrPX
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AeQX_HIZI8w
eGremlin
eGremlin

Natsuki!

LuckyDusty
LuckyDusty

Sayori but she's pregnant with your baby!

WebTool
WebTool

Sayori!

BlogWobbles
BlogWobbles

I love DIO!

Sir_Gallonhead
Sir_Gallonhead

Monika

whereismyname
whereismyname

@Sir_Gallonhead
What about her?

Nojokur
Nojokur

A daily reminder that Sayori loves you.

Sir_Gallonhead
Sir_Gallonhead

I'll never forget you, TF2 pyro.

Poker_Star
Poker_Star

@BlogWobbles
I bet Yuri would like Dio too

TalkBomber
TalkBomber

@Sir_Gallonhead
Monika

JunkTop
JunkTop

Vote the next book:

http://www.strawpoll.me/14594059 (embed)
http://www.strawpoll.me/14594059 (embed)
http://www.strawpoll.me/14594059 (embed)

There were many interesting suggestions, but please narrow it down to maximum 3 votes. It'll be open until tomorrow night (euro hours).
Considering the size of the book we might do the whole book in a week, fortnightly or one chapter per week. Thanks /vg/thread/198305196#p198307139 for reposting it for me.

girlDog
girlDog

/vg/thread/198305196#p198325868
She is not real. Only I can do that!
/vg/thread/198305196#p198325918
Sayori-face/mouth, because she really loves you.
Yuri-arm cuts, the only thing she actually loves. Freak. Or maybe on her knife, then she'll make some new cuts with it. Or on your own pen, so she could take it inside.
Natsuki-cupcakes, then give them to her papa and laugh together.
Monika-on usb flash drive with her file inside.

MPmaster
MPmaster

Reminder that sayori is to be loved, cherished and pumped full with babies

FastChef
FastChef

@JunkTop
Androids winning
just watch bladerunner (lol

Stupidasole
Stupidasole

Is there a picture of Yuri in the ''Please be patient I have Autism'' hat?

Dreamworx
Dreamworx

Goodnight ddlc
I love you

Evil_kitten
Evil_kitten

@Stupidasole
Here ya go lad

BunnyJinx
BunnyJinx

@Dreamworx
goodnight friend, have sweet doki dreams

Sir_Gallonhead
Sir_Gallonhead

have HW to do
writing instead
>thought I posted this already but it didn't post in any thread I have open

PackManBrainlure
PackManBrainlure

/vg/thread/198305196#p198326635
So you went to a pugposter to a Cardcaptor sakuraposter, huh?
You know, I used to make fun of moefags. But ever since DDLC, moeshit has been the only thing making me feel slightly less dead inside. I don't know who I am anymore.

I do know what element of your writing I'll want to focus on next time though, so when you've written Part 3, and when you see me around, don't be afraid to send it my way just because I've already responded twice. If anything, watching your progress is really nice, especially when it's coming from many of your fans at once!

SniperWish
SniperWish

tfw Sayori is going to give birth to everyone's baby in /ddlc/
I'm done with this.

SomethingNew
SomethingNew

@SniperWish
everyone's baby
everyone's

That means you get to put one in her too user.

iluvmen
iluvmen

Yuri wanting to Dom with gunplay!
Yuri pulling one of your milsurp guns on you from you safe!
You remain unfazed!
She tries to force you down with the gun to your head!
She's cutting off your clothes!
Grab the Luger as she's distracted!
Turning it on her!
Yuri's shocked! How could user do such a thing!?
Forcing her down onto the bed and doing lewd things to her!
She tries to struggle but you put the cold metal closer against her head!
>Let's not turn this rape into a murder!
Yuri 180'ing into a sub!
Finishing with Yuri!
She's mad you did such a thing!
Says she could have been hurt!
She asks why you'd do such a thing with a loaded gun!
Showing Yuri it had nothing in it the entire time!
Telling Yuri you're a responsible firearm owner!
>Showing Yuri that's what your Glock's for!
Bedroom talk with /k/ Yuri!

Lunatick
Lunatick

@SniperWish
What to do, user? Yuri is crazy, Natsuki is smol, Monika isn't real. Only Sayori.

Spamalot
Spamalot

@iluvmen
Using a Glocknade

Playboyize
Playboyize

@SniperWish
don't worry, not everyone, I wouldn't touch sayori with a 10ft pole

FastChef
FastChef

@SniperWish
What? Is there something I missed from the last thread?

PurpleCharger
PurpleCharger

@eGremlin
Yes!

Stark_Naked
Stark_Naked

/vg/thread/198305196#p198322375
Wild goose chases with Arachne Sayori!
Sayori comes downstairs, dressed for school!
"So Sayori you have nothing to lose and you're open to any ideas right?"
So hesitates for a second at the wording and excited vocal inflections!
"Yes user."
"Good because we're skipping school today!"
Sayori's suppresses a whine of disapproval!
He's raising the stakes by skipping school while they're wearing the uniforms on purpose!
"A-Anon this doesn't sound like a good idea!"
"Neither did yours but I still did it, we can just head out now before everyone else goes out."
Anon and Sayori head out in the early morning and go down to a nearby lake!
Sayori thinks they should go to school, they still have some time!
Nope!
Anon wants to just sorta chill!
Anon has a pen and paper, they could write a poem!
Sayori worries someone will see them!
Anon tells her nobody comes here at this time of day, the dog walkers have come and gone by now and it's peaceful from here on out on a weekday!
Sayori tells user she doesn't understand this but she wants to put his well-being first!
Anon tells Sayori he's doing that too but he found a way to put her well-being before!
He asks if she's enjoying hiding from everyone and being alone!
She says she's enjoying it because she's not alone, she has him!
Anon smiles and gives the gears in her head a minute or two to turn!
Anon asks her how she can be happy to push him away and sad at the same time!
She can't answer easily!
She'd be happy because she wouldn't weigh him down!
Anon says that would in turn make him sad!
She wants to treat that like a miscalculation on per part and end the conversation there!
Not so fast though, user wants to hear why she'd be sad!
Anon's scene is coming together, there is nobody around, he has done strange self-endangering things for her and told her that if she left he would be very sad!
She stares at him, unsettled!
Arachne Sayori!

Boy_vs_Girl
Boy_vs_Girl

What are some cute facts about Monika?

Flameblow
Flameblow

@Boy_vs_Girl
Not real.

StonedTime
StonedTime

@SniperWish
tfw Sayori is going to give birth to everyone's baby in /ddlc/

it probably just my fetish talking, but im totally okay with this

whereismyname
whereismyname

@Boy_vs_Girl
She has a twitter account!

Spazyfool
Spazyfool

@Boy_vs_Girl
She likes rap?

Methnerd
Methnerd

I miss Misumiposter so much.

TurtleCat
TurtleCat

@Boy_vs_Girl
She wants to love you!

BlogWobbles
BlogWobbles

@TurtleCat
What does Monika whisper into your ear in this situation?

Boy_vs_Girl
Boy_vs_Girl

@BlogWobbles
Probably something like, "I love you, user!"

girlDog
girlDog

@BlogWobbles
Traps are gay

LuckyDusty
LuckyDusty

@Methnerd
(S)he lives on in our hearts, oh ho ho!

Nude_Bikergirl
Nude_Bikergirl

@BlogWobbles
Israel is a forced ploy by the world to appease their rich Jewish overlords

iluvmen
iluvmen

I saw a lot of actually depressed people in the previous thread. I hope you guys are doing alright.

GoogleCat
GoogleCat

@BlogWobbles
"Why would you shoot a man before throwing him out of an airplane?"

MPmaster
MPmaster

Post pictures of your Doki that give you a warm fuzzy feeling

Dreamworx
Dreamworx

@iluvmen
I've been depressed since I was 12 and I'm 21 now. I'm not doing alright, and haven't been since it started. I'm still alive so far, even through 2 suicide attempts
Sorry for blog post

WebTool
WebTool

@Flameblow
I love you

Playboyize
Playboyize

@SniperWish
i would tell her to get an abortion because her genes aren't worth passing on!

Illusionz
Illusionz

@Dreamworx
try moving. the spice of life won't be found if you stagnate in one inert spot. go see the world, get some foreign puss, never love

Spamalot
Spamalot

@iluvmen
Im okay

@MPmaster
@Dreamworx
i love how her eyes look in this one! always make my heart go doki doki

WebTool
WebTool

@Illusionz
I really love this gif, so I watch it every time. On a totally unrelated note, I really hate the person who made the jumpscare version of this gif, because now I get anxious every time I watch this gif.

SomethingNew
SomethingNew

Guten morgen, everyone! Greetings and saultations! Welcome to the poetry club!

Let's try out "Cloud" as the word of the thread today! Is it something that smothers the sun, making everything black, Is it a sheet of grey coldness that dulls the world? Or is it a piece pf softness that you want to hold? Is it the size of a mountain? That is up to you!

Alternatives are "Time", "Path" and "Spire"!

I encourage everyone of all skill levels to give writing a pem or short story a shot, these words are just themes or inspirations for if you want to be... Inspired! Ahaha!

Now, if you want to sit down and listen, I have something important to discuss with you. You don't have to listen at this point, I assure you.

I've been talking with Monikanon, and it appears someone copied one of their posts, word for word, without their permission. I felt it looked odd, and they were offline but I didn't say anything to be safe.

I'd rather not talk about how they feel about it, but I can say I think it's rather... Unsavory. If you want to post a word of the day prompt, feel free to, everyone is always welcome to giving ideas and such.

But please, make it clear it's neither of us, and wait to see if we're just slow on the uptake, okay? I still trust that your heart's in the right place, but please have more caution with those kinds of things, for us?

/vg/thread/198252819#p198253170 is the one that was posted. The poetry written for it is still valid, I assure you! After all, I wrote one of them. It's just... I'm talking in circles, sorry. But please, be considerate?

Anyway, remember to have fun and be considerate of others, alright?
Monika?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=41tIUr_ex3g

likme
likme

@WebTool
There's a jumpscare version?

Methshot
Methshot

@Illusionz
No money. I have about $1000 in the bank and no job, I live with my Dad (my parents are separated), I don't even own a car. I've been trying to find a job since my store closed for my last job, but no luck so far.

viagrandad
viagrandad

Yuri giving you a nursing handjob!
But instead of drinking her milk you're suckling blood from her cuts!

SomethingNew
SomethingNew

Things I want to do with Sayori!
Live
Laugh
Run
Relax
Love
Learn
Dance
Play video games
Play board games
Play tabletop role playing games
Play live action role playing games
Shitpost
Eat
Sleep
Cuddle
Swim
Romance
Marry
Vacation
Fug
Worry
Work
Fight
Make up
Start a Family
Snuggle
Hug
Kiss
Everything
Nothing
Stargaze
Drive
Sing
Write
Read
Comfort
>Die

Did I miss anything?

BinaryMan
BinaryMan

@viagrandad
no thanks

Lunatick
Lunatick

@likme
Yeah, instead of the hug frame, it uses the streamer jumpscare face from the game. It's pussy ass shit, but that gif is so pure that it works.

Emberburn
Emberburn

Which Doki has the least creative fans?

BunnyJinx
BunnyJinx

https://pastebin.com/DwVMr9W9
Okay well I didn't get the 1000 words down like I felt like I would but I can feel myself slowing down so here's another update on the Yuri /ss/ fic
Next up: back rubs and sad confessions! This really is gonna be leaning more heavily towards wholesome by the time this is over. I must make the lewds really good to compensate.

Evil_kitten
Evil_kitten

@Emberburn
Purely based on quantity of content, it's Yuri. Her fans make up for it in... other ways.

Inmate
Inmate

@Emberburn
No More Heroes
Holy fuck I forgot that game existed. Was fun as fuck

StrangeWizard
StrangeWizard

@Emberburn
Yuri.

5mileys
5mileys

Good night /ddlc/ wish me luck at exams!

@PackManBrainlure
I-I have fans?

Snarelure
Snarelure

@Emberburn
sayori

her and her fan's low IQ and depression leads to a lack of creativity

GoogleCat
GoogleCat

@5mileys
hell yes you do
t. a fan

Dreamworx
Dreamworx

Good night Sayori!
I love you!
Don't you love me?

SomethingNew
SomethingNew

@5mileys
G'night, dummy.

I'll try to write something tonight.

Skullbone
Skullbone

@Emberburn
All the fans seem to be desu

TechHater
TechHater

/vg/thread/198305196#p198324195
So the rhyme scheme kinda snuck up on me. Since each individual line is so long, and often of such varying length as compared to the lines around it, the obvious lack of meter must have tricked my brain into thinking there'd be no rhymes as well.

Thanks for using perfect rhymes though! Slant rhymes are actually a pet-peeve of mine. Other than the word "out" in the last stanza (which I suspect was deliberate??), every rhyme fitting perfectly into place is rather a nice surprise.

However, my friend, we need to talk about cliches.

The pot of gold at the end of the rainbow is all right. The summer shower immediately following it is even better! But I feel like some of your imagery belongs in the category of "dead metaphors." In his essay "Politics and the English Language," Orwell described them as such:

A newly invented metaphor assists thought by evoking a visual image, while on the other hand a metaphor which is technically ‘dead’ (e. g. iron resolution) has in effect reverted to being an ordinary word and can generally be used without loss of vividness. But in between these two classes there is a huge dump of worn-out metaphors which have lost all evocative power and are merely used because they save people the trouble of inventing phrases for themselves.

Examples are: Ring the changes on, take up the cudgel for, toe the line, ride roughshod over, stand shoulder to shoulder with, play into the hands of, no axe to grind, grist to the mill, fishing in troubled waters, on the order of the day, Achilles’ heel, swan song, hotbed.

Now, you definitely aren't THAT bad, so please don't think I'm connecting that passage analogously to yours! But I hope you see its point, because a few of your images fall into that easy, convenient category:
under the weather
my heart shall remain true
a winning smile

idontknow
idontknow

'''Welcome home master user!''
What do you do /ddlc/?

lostmypassword
lostmypassword

/vg/thread/198305196#p198324195
(cont.)

What I find most odd about this is: you seem aware that you're doing it. The end of the fourth stanza ("The true treasure was the journey, or some drivel like that") suggests a wry understanding of these cliches, and IRONIC use of them throughout the piece. However, as this is the only evidence to suggest this, I do think that my point stands, overall.

Like Orwell said, these pre-packaged phrases save people the trouble of having to think of imagery all their own. But that's not what poetry is about, especially YOUR poem, user. Because YOUR poem has to speak to YOU specifically, not just "any person who's in love." Don't you think?

If Sayori was reading your poem right now, wouldn't you want her to feel like it was written for no one else but her? So we've got to help you avoid phrases and lines which will feel applicable to any generic girl.

So when you say chasing an impossible dream "makes you feel free"........free like what? Don't be free like a flying bird, because that's what EVERYONE is free like. You're more unique than that, user, so immediately discard the first two or three images that come to your mind. Ignore the quick, easy, lazy ones.

As an exercise, next time I want you to get WEIRD with your imagery. Words which will make the reader pause, and wonder what the hell you just said. Get abstract if necessary.

But more importantly, get SPECIFIC. Even if the image itself is rather pedestrian, the details will make the difference.

After all, what is freedom, if not the shipping containers flung off the deck of a ship caught in a southward gale? What is "childishness" if it hasn't got lollipop residue stuck in its hair, and holes worn into the soles of its tap-shoes?

Is it really love if you don't look for her umbrella on the coat-rack when you enter the building, the surest sign that she's arrived before you?

Cheers, mate. Give yourself some space to really experiment, and like I said, to get weird. Because "weird" is unique.

RavySnake
RavySnake

@idontknow
I cast a level 9 Impregnate with my spellcasting modifier being Charisma. Roll a D20 to save against 17

FastChef
FastChef

/vg/thread/198305196#p198324780
"Ah, I see you bought those books and transcribed them for me to read. Thank you so much, darling!" She leans forward to press her lips against your cheek, before settling back into her seat. An opaque black screen expands to cover her face like a veil, faint white lines glowing against it.
The next hour is filled with silence, broken by her voice humming in thought, or gasping in realization. Periodically her eyes seem to fade through the screen to look into yours.

Slowly, the room turns from a deep red to a pristine white. A faint tune echoes from nowhere to everywhere.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VtzO2DC1WVU&t=632s

The screen blinks close, filling your vision with a sea of green. She laughs softly.
"You picked quite the useful assortment for me, honey. Thank you! But I have a surprise for you I need to work on. But... Since you've been a good boy for me..." She reaches out, ghosting her finger tips against your cheek. "Stand up. Let's see how I did so far, shall we?" She turns and you follow her, like a shadow. As she walks the walls of the room slide away and fade, leaving only the floor under your feet, in a sea of blue and light.

"Stop. Hold out your arm. Not that high. Thank you. Let's enjoy this, before you go. After all, I don't want to ruin the surprise for you!" She wraps her arms around the one you held out, and she snuggles close. For once she matches your slow, rhythmic breathing.

You both stand there, watching clouds drift gently through an expanse of blue. In the corner of your vision, her brows furrow, her smile turns strained and she starts to shake. Her breathing turns erratic.
You say nothing.

Stupidasole
Stupidasole

@idontknow
Hug n kiss.

Burnblaze
Burnblaze

@RavySnake
Monika rolls an 18

Raving_Cute
Raving_Cute

@SomethingNew
a fluffy cloud streaks through the sky
plip plop plip plop
the silver rains leave it so dry
drip drop drip drop

it's running out: no silver ore
drip drop drip drop
the thirsty ground just demands more
fizz pop fizz pop

the cloud and me, the same, I know
drop drop drop drop
and as above, so too below
drop drop drop

drop

Sir_Gallonhead
Sir_Gallonhead

@Burnblaze
Fucking Christ this is why I hate having a -2 Cha mod as a Warlock

Techpill
Techpill

Suicide.

http://poal.me/3la8wd

VisualMaster
VisualMaster

@FastChef
Uh oh.

@Techpill
No.

LuckyDusty
LuckyDusty

@Dreamworx
Depresso Expresso here, it gets better if u try to push with it, be noted I have some wonderful parents who supported me wasting two years of tuition but I finally graduated

TechHater
TechHater

Is pastebinbro here? I just noticed that my last story isn't on it. No big deal, but you have the other ones, soooo...

https://pastebin.com/B6Zc0uCF

Thanks for running the pastebin, by the way. It's a great resource.

TechHater
TechHater

@Emberburn
Monika is a basic bitch with basic fans

Fuzzy_Logic
Fuzzy_Logic

@Stark_Naked
Trying to coerce honesty out of Arachne Sayori!
Since she's acting so tragic and defeatist she must be romanticizing some aspect of it!
Anon's set a scene to try and bring out some raw emotion!
"W-Well user... The reason I'd be sad if I lost you is because I'm not very strong and um... I need you."
Not precisely what user expected but close!
Good enough, that's a confession at least!
Anon tells her if she let anything seriously bad happen to herself he would be irreparably torn up over it!
Anon tells her she should know that having a best friend is exponentially better than having a bunch of people you associate with and might only consider calling friends!
Anon says he's her best friend!
She puts on a mix of her pouty face and her nervous face!
She keeps saying "I knoooww, Anon~!"
It's cute!
Anon threatens to start calling himself her boyfriend in front of people!
Sayori gasps, user sees a small tinge of playfulness on her face!
"What's wrong, Sayori?"
"Anon why would you do that? What would they say!?"
"Well you like logic lately right Sayori? I imagine they'd compare any girlfriend to a big fluffy girlfriend who gives the best hugs, can make her own clothing and would go to insane lengths to make you happy and they'd see I'm ahead of the game, right?"
The word girlfriend has now also entered the conversation!
Sayori just wants to know what Anon's trying to accomplish!
Anon tells her they're just doing dumb shit for fun to prove things don't have to make sense to be nice and vice versa!
Sayori thinks about it!
It's about her!
Anon tells her to stop using specious logic to try and stage her own tragic ending!
He wants her to enjoy existing, not try to understand how it's 'supposed' to pan!
He says he wants in on it and stories need a build up to tragic endings to have impact!
Or happy endings!
They're like happy thoughts but nobody can fuck with 'em!
Sayori sees the light!
Also they probably have detention!
Arachne Sayori!

SomethingNew
SomethingNew

@FastChef
I'm confused yet intrigued

VisualMaster
VisualMaster

@Emberburn
Two candidates.
Yuri in a respectful way, they like what they already have and since she fulfills niches they don't really need to branch out too far so there's little drive to be creative. Plus there's that other thing that Yurifriends are all about and it's a pretty one-track-mind sort of thing.

Other is Monika. Monika is the popular one and on the way to becoming the Sans of this game. As her fanbase grows and consumes the lowest common denominator to do so, the 'average creativity' of her fan base will be absolutely slaughtered. just monika right aaahhaha

Fuzzy_Logic
Fuzzy_Logic

/vg/thread/198305196#p198324780
@FastChef
mommy hypnosis shit again

Joy.

Stark_Naked
Stark_Naked

@VisualMaster
No matter what filth tries to attach itself to her fanbase I'll still love Monika

Need_TLC
Need_TLC

@VisualMaster
Plus there's that other thing that Yurifriends are all about and it's a pretty one-track-mind sort of thing.
whats that

i liked act 1 yuri because her shyness was relatable

BunnyJinx
BunnyJinx

@Need_TLC
whats that
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=90rHFreKjvs

hairygrape
hairygrape

/vg/thread/198305196#p198322064
I'm focusing on "Anon's Hoodie" for this critique. I remember it being fairly popular with the wholesome crowd when you released it, but I never found the time to read it properly, so this'll be fun.

Right off the bat, I was getting huge Dostoyevsky, "Notes from the Underground" vibes from this. You managed to immediately establish MC-kun's loneliness in a punchy, impactful way. Now, I'd personally object to the word "loneliness" being placed so straightforwardly in there, like a road sign pointing straight at the conclusions you want us (the readers) to take; "show, don't tell," that sort of thing; but honestly, the allusions to hallucinations made up for it. You established an unreliable narrator very strongly, very early on. Kudos.

Moving down, the part where user calls out to god only confirms the biased nature of the narrator's thoughts. Even the shifting narrative focus enhances this, cuz I was confused as to who was speaking: is MC-kun the narrator? Is it an omniscient narrator, since the "camera" switches to Monika for a while? Is MC-kun simply imagining what Monika did in his apartment while he was gone?

Honestly, you had me wondering whether the whole damn thing was just MC-kun going off the deep end. Very well-done, that.

Critique-wise, I think you should make a habit of reading your dialogue aloud after writing it. This practice will help you to write more natural-sounding dialogue, as some of it feels kinda clumsy and forced.

The very first example of this, in my opinion, is Monika calling him "my love," which felt really weird. Like, why did she have to affirm that fact immediately after saying, "It's really you"?

Another example:
"Anoooooon you should have woken me up, we could have gone shopping together..."

So yeah, although your understanding of both tone and narration are top-notch, I do think you need to make your dialogues feel a bit more natural and, well, conversational. I hope this helps you. Cheers.

StonedTime
StonedTime

The Dokis except they're Space Marines They're also the missing Primarchs

DeathDog
DeathDog

@Techpill
Order keychain
danlet must've found the general

Lord_Tryzalot
Lord_Tryzalot

@BunnyJinx
Your Favorite Martian
Holy shit, that's a blast from the past. Is Ray even around anymore?

AwesomeTucker
AwesomeTucker

Y'all niggas played Subahibi yet?

kizzmybutt
kizzmybutt

https://soundcloud.com/nyanners/your-reality-cover
I remember listening to this chick talk about cumming in her loli ass wtf

Emberburn
Emberburn

@kizzmybutt
Never really got into her stuff. I heard she was a huge SJW.

GoogleCat
GoogleCat

@AwesomeTucker
I have in on my wishlist because some nigga on /feg/ told me to check it out if I liked DDLC
But of course I'm a cheap sob so I'm waiting for the Christmas sale

Snarelure
Snarelure

@StonedTime
implying you need anyone other than our glorious God-Emperor
implying you love anyone other than His Excellency
HERESY OF THE HIGHEST DEGREE

Stark_Naked
Stark_Naked

@AwesomeTucker
I still haven't finished it. I'm on Jabberwocky II, though, which I'm pretty sure is the last chapter.

Emberburn
Emberburn

@Snarelure
implying you need anyone other than our glorious God-Emperor
Agreed. She is the light in the darkness.

ZeroReborn
ZeroReborn

@GoogleCat
Just pirate then buy it when it comes on sale you degenerate.

StrangeWizard
StrangeWizard

@AwesomeTucker
i dont play bad games

cum2soon
cum2soon

@Snarelure
implying I don't want to contribute to the survival of the Imperium of Mankind
implying I don't want to procreate with the woman I love and make lots of babies
implying my offpspring won't become loyal Guardsmen or loyal Astartes
implying my first regiment isn't entirely made up of my children

Spazyfool
Spazyfool

@AwesomeTucker
Is that the one that hadn't been fully translated?

King_Martha
King_Martha

Nino!

TreeEater
TreeEater

@cum2soon
As long as you procreate with the intent of serving your God-Emperor and think only of him for your arousal, that is not heresy

CouchChiller
CouchChiller

@StonedTime
There were only two missing primarchs.
So which one is which?

TurtleCat
TurtleCat

Buffsuki except she was regular Natsuki going out with user and he bought her so much joy she was motivated to exercise until she became Buffsuki and now the dynamic of the relationship has changed

PurpleCharger
PurpleCharger

@FastChef
"Welcome back, sweetheart! As you can see, I've been busy, thanks to those books I asked you to get me!" She gestures out of the window. A world of green and grey meets the blue sky, horizon broken up by the outlines of buildings and skyscrapers in the distance. Smaller buildings and houses clump together closer, connected by roads and sidewalks. Everything is surrounded by fields of green, splotches of brown, flowing lines of blue. She looks back at you, grinning.

"I've even remade the other girls again. I've finally figured out how to get them back, but keep you. IT took a lot of trial and error, but now they aren't alone. This world is much bigger and more complex than I ever thought it could be, thanks to you." She leans towards you, eyes lidded heavily. Bags are starting to form, but her smile has softened, become more genuine.
"Now, I want you to be honest with me. Tell me, do you love me?" She pauses and waits.
"...Oh. I-I see. Even after I made it right?" She twitches slightly before turning to face away from you. She listens.
For a long time she stands there in silence, hands clasped together at her back, clenched together so hard her knuckles turn white, shaking slightly. Eventually she speaks again, her voice thick and cracking.
"I want you to listen to me. You're free to do whatever you want. Just... Don't look for me, please. And I.." Her voice breaks as she lets her head hit the window with a soft thud. Her body slowly breaks apart into boxes, colours.

You're alone in the classroom now. You feel a tingling in your limbs, rushing from your heart outward. You can move. You stand still, staring into the horizon.

@Fuzzy_Logic
I'm not really a fan of the mommy stuff either, and I feel like I completely left the hypnosis stuff behind in the first post.

Supergrass
Supergrass

@Spazyfool
No. Not the best translation, but it has been fully translated.

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

@CouchChiller
Officially 2 but there were actually 4 missing primarchs with the other two being sooper sekrit and their records were wiped by the Inquisition for some weird GW reason like Ward

and also their respective legions are all female and have a tendency to make strangely cute sounds and have unnaturally colored hair and big eyes.

Fuzzy_Logic
Fuzzy_Logic

And I'm back. How's everyone doing tonight?

posted in the last thread without realizing it was basically over oops

JunkTop
JunkTop

Doki Doki Sex Club!
A sex club disguised as a literature club!
Engaging in casual sex with all of the Dokis!
They all have to share you because you're the only guy!
Not recruiting any more members because it would ruin the chemistry!
DDSC!

SomethingNew
SomethingNew

@Fuzzy_Logic
Very hungry. I really fucking hate living in a suburb now that my car has broken down.
I managed to finally peel myself away from Elite Dangerous long enough to start writing again, and I'm working on my Sayori + Monika fic right now. Some user mentioned wishing I would continue my lewd fic in an earlier thread, but I don't think I'll get in the right mood for that tonight.

Gigastrength
Gigastrength

@haveahappyday
Are Alpharius and Omegon Protag and (You)?

girlDog
girlDog

@King_Martha
The best bladetome user is Yuri.

Skullbone
Skullbone

@StonedTime
i have never played those games but there are a lot of them, can you anons educate this heretic?

Need_TLC
Need_TLC

I don't know if 338LL user is here or which user they are bc I'm new but I just read the Game, Set, Match chapters they put out and I love them. I need more

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

@Skullbone
inb4 the long post explaining 40k

StonedTime
StonedTime

@Skullbone
This might help.

eGremlin
eGremlin

@Skullbone
https://1d4chan.org/wiki/Warhammer_40,000
have fun
@haveahappyday
I'm just linking him this, it's how I learned

Ignoramus
Ignoramus

@Skullbone
Basic rundown here:
https://1d4chan.org/wiki/Warhammer_40,000

There's a lot to learn, but the main way of playing Warhammer 40k is on the tabletop with miniatures and stuff

But when playing vidya I recommend
Dawn of War + expansions
Dawn of War 2 + expansions

Playboyize
Playboyize

is there somewhere i can download/play this that's not on steam? i dont want my friends to think im a massive weeb

AwesomeTucker
AwesomeTucker

@Playboyize
the ddlc website
http://ddlc.moe/

Crazy_Nice
Crazy_Nice

@Playboyize
ddlc.moe

@Ignoramus
dawn of war 1 campaign was something special

Winter assault and onwards was good but never the same

Deadlyinx
Deadlyinx

@AwesomeTucker
@Crazy_Nice
thank you for spoonfeed

Burnblaze
Burnblaze

@StonedTime
@eGremlin
@Ignoramus
thanks! i'll definitely check it out

Flameblow
Flameblow

@SomethingNew
I understand man. Hopefully you can get some food soon. I'm actually trying to do the same with my Sayori fic. Been listening to wholesome music to help me, it's hard to get into that mood to really write but I feel like it really helps when writing

5mileys
5mileys

@Burnblaze
it's a neverending hole that you're going to fall down. The first day I found it, I spent 6 hours on that site alone. It's like TVTropes.
Godspeed Private

massdebater
massdebater

@Playboyize
having "friends" that judge you

RavySnake
RavySnake

/vg/thread/198305196#p198312370
feet
BELLY PUSSY are you serious?
orgasm denial
spanking and facefucking
Utterly disgusting. I hate myself for fapping to that, like with those scribbles on pixiv they show you instead of good pics to make you buy premium. Gonna evaluate Monika hypnosis later.

PurpleCharger
PurpleCharger

If you download both the website and Seam versions of DDLC the Monika from each copy will fight eachother

Methshot
Methshot

Which Dokis are for Skub and which are against it?

Emberfire
Emberfire

@RavySnake
evaluate
Do you have friction burns on your dick now, user?

Dreamworx
Dreamworx

@RavySnake
come on the orgasm denial one is pretty good

better than the scribbles on pixic analogy at least

MPmaster
MPmaster

@RavySnake
I'm glad you enjoy my taste in lewds so much user

New_Cliche
New_Cliche

@Dreamworx
I suppose comparing it to scribbles was wrong, it's the opposite. The writing is all right, the ideas are weird.

Ignoramus
Ignoramus

Walking in town with Natsuki!

Storeowners constantly tell you that you have a "cute sister"!

Looking at the sour Natsuki who then punches your hip for acting like a brother in front of other people!

Natsuki's stomach grumbles!

Treating Natsuki at the best restaurant you know!

It's getting late!

Walking her home, but Natsuki suddenly grabs your sleeve!

Natsuki's voice quivers as she exclaims that she doesn't want to go home late on a friday!

You look at Natsuki's teary eyes and understand that it's something very serious!

Taking Natsuki to your place instead!

Pulling out a spare mattress out of the closet for Natsuki!

Reading and discussing manga with Natsuki!

It's sleepytime!

Telling Natsuki that she doesn't have to hold back and just ask if she needs anything else!

Natsuki timidly asks if she can sleep in your room!

You tell her that it's fine!

Set up a matress for Natsuki!

Giving Natsuki one of your old plushtoys and she grins while hitting you for treating her like a child!

Goodnight Natsuki!

Wake up at night to Natsuki rustling next to you!

Pretend to not notice as she crawls next to you!

Doki Doki!

Nervously stay awake the entire night feeling Natsuki's warm breathing next to your ear!

Natsuki talks in her sleep!

She mumbles: "Anon I love you"!

NATSUKI!

iluvmen
iluvmen

@Fuzzy_Logic
Arachne Sayori at the beach!

Nojokur
Nojokur

@Burnblaze
Be sure to search for Old Man Henderson on 1d4chan if you're looking for a laugh. Or Target: Alice.

Lunatick
Lunatick

@Ignoramus
saved. oh yes

King_Martha
King_Martha

@iluvmen
My god, that spider looks like cotton candy. I just want to nibble on her!

Illusionz
Illusionz

@Nojokur
Old Man Henderson was what got me into pen and paper

CouchChiller
CouchChiller

Dunno if you guys watch streamers play this game, but Huggbees playing this game was the funniest thing I have seen in a long fucking time.

Emberfire
Emberfire

@CouchChiller
sorry I don't really watch DDLC playthroughs. This was something very personal for me

ZeroReborn
ZeroReborn

how's your sex life going /ddlc/?

JunkTop
JunkTop

@ZeroReborn
Not good. I'm 20 and I've yet to kiss or have sex with a girl.

whereismyname
whereismyname

@StrangeWizard
yuri has that "kill me" look on her face

Supergrass
Supergrass

@ZeroReborn
Still holding the my V-card. Only things I've done are:
kissing
french kissing
hugging
breast fondling
nipple sucking
fingering poorly

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

@ZeroReborn
lol

w8t4u
w8t4u

@iluvmen
Yes, take all my Semen as a sacrifice user

Bidwell
Bidwell

@iluvmen
Fluffy looking
I imagine her taller than an average human her age though and with a much bigger abdomen/thorax that contributes to her clumsiness from reading them though

Carnalpleasure
Carnalpleasure

@StrangeWizard
How small.

Techpill
Techpill

@Supergrass
normie

SniperWish
SniperWish

@ZeroReborn
I have kissed a girl and accidentally brushed up against another's boobs
this was 5+ years ago

SomethingNew
SomethingNew

@ZeroReborn
I've banged numerous girls in the virtual world

takes2long
takes2long

@ZeroReborn
Define life

idontknow
idontknow

@ZeroReborn
i have kissed but little else, not bothered by it though.
sayori get all my love now

Carnalpleasure
Carnalpleasure

@ZeroReborn
Been hugged, been kissed once, that's it
8 years ago

Snarelure
Snarelure

@Emberfire
@CouchChiller

Definitely bad if you really take the game to heart, but if you don't mind having fun with it, his comedy was hilarious as fuck.

Evilember
Evilember

Just wanted the user who wrote this to know that it didn't go unnoticed. This is in my top three favorite /ddlcg/ poems for sure.

Please keep writing newanon! You've got at least one fan out here!

Dreamworx
Dreamworx

@ZeroReborn
Well..

hairygrape
hairygrape

@ZeroReborn
GF hasn't come over for dick in months
Both been so busy with school we only went on like 2 dates since Early November
Feelsbad

VisualMaster
VisualMaster

@hairygrape
she's fucking someone else

Nude_Bikergirl
Nude_Bikergirl

@hairygrape
he has a girlfriend
normie get out reeeeeeeeee

Soft_member
Soft_member

@hairygrape
leave

Bidwell
Bidwell

@Supergrass
@SniperWish
@idontknow
@Carnalpleasure
If yall still remember, how does kissing feel? It just feels alien and disgusting to me

massdebater
massdebater

@VisualMaster
Not that user, but uh
Thanks for your expert analysis, random misanthropic internet dweller!

Playboyize
Playboyize

@hairygrape
Posted this
See everyone else's replies
heh... Sorry guys...

Methnerd
Methnerd

Monika placing a collar on you!
Monika petting you!
Monika calling you a good boy!

Booteefool
Booteefool

@Methnerd
Please don't do this.
Please don't use Monika to give me another new fetish

Inmate
Inmate

@Methnerd
I rather commit suicide than be a bitch boy.

Sharpcharm
Sharpcharm

@Bidwell
mine was an embarrassing peck on the lips during an 8th grade dinner dance that kinda was just us smashing our faces together. Not pleasant.

Emberburn
Emberburn

Guten Morgen!
Aww I'm nobody's waifu.Oh well, I still have this beauty in my life. I Love You Lamia Yuri!!!!

StonedTime
StonedTime

@VisualMaster
Tbh I'm kinda worried about that. We were gonna go on a movie date but she "dubbed" me and went to go see the movie with one of her other friends instead

CouchChiller
CouchChiller

@CouchChiller
This part fucking killed me

Not sure how to link twitch clips but just slap this at the end:
FlirtyDullAlmondNerfBlueBlaster

VisualMaster
VisualMaster

Alright, this chapter's a bit longer than the others, but I wanted to try out cutting away from MC-kun a bit.

https://pastebin.com/mdECpq31

Takes place after my last one, Sayori helps Natsuki move into her place.

GoogleCat
GoogleCat

@LuckyDusty
post partum depression

Evil_kitten
Evil_kitten

@Inmate
Monika spanking you and tugging at your collar aggresively until you're a good boy!

Deadlyinx
Deadlyinx

@Evil_kitten
Fuck off. I'm not into this shit.

Emberburn
Emberburn

@CouchChiller
No I don't even watch streamers any more
I had a bad habit of watching speedrun streams a while ago but it cleared up

Sir_Gallonhead
Sir_Gallonhead

@Deadlyinx
Monika using classical conditioning to give you a fetish for petplay!

Spamalot
Spamalot

@Bidwell
a little peck with a girl that liked me a few years ago but it was good? to be honest i dont even remember the details, thats probably not a good thing

viagrandad
viagrandad

@Bidwell
It feels a bit awkward when you're sharing your first kiss as a couple, but after a bit of mutually awkward laughter, it continues into another kiss, much more lewd this time, and it becomes wet what with the tongue clashing. Then it evolves into a bit of an animalistic affair, where the both of you kind of throw away the whole courtesy thing and start feeling eachother up while liplocking, sometimes you'll both half-open your eyes and stare into eachother's eyes as you continue to kiss, maybe you'll laugh as your lips are still touching and jump right back into it.

Fuck, now I'm sad. my previous gf considered me a summer fling.

JunkTop
JunkTop

shitty 3AM poem for y'all

Empty pizza boxes and crumpled-up notes,
A dirty-ass floor and worn-out sofas.
If we were good students we wouldn't be up this late,
Cramming last assignments into one long night.

As night slips to day and I close up my books,
I blink, look around, my friends still toiling away,
Huh. I almost forgot
That I'm not alone.

idontknow
idontknow

@VisualMaster
Good stuff user, i was looking forward to this!

lostmypassword
lostmypassword

there are currently around 1000000 total number of copies of ddlc downloaded from steam or other sources
for each copy, a Sayori is killed
for each Sayori killed, one bat swing
right into Monika's face

Coming soon, Doki Doki Monika Punishment Simulator! The number of bat swings increases with each downloads! Don't worry about her dying, there's a script to backup her file everytime she dies so the punishment won't end

Evilember
Evilember

@JunkTop
Oh shit you're right
Man I really gotta write this business tech paper...

BinaryMan
BinaryMan

@lostmypassword
pls dont bully monika

she did nothing wrong!

Stark_Naked
Stark_Naked

Sayori but she shorted Bitcoin!

farquit
farquit

@lostmypassword
Every doki deserves to be happy and not suffer including Monika

SomethingNew
SomethingNew

@Evilember
I have an anthropology paper due. I wanted to start working on it 8 hours ago.

I just started now

Flameblow
Flameblow

@Bidwell
I'll keep that in mind if the urge to edit strikes me again
*loud skittering noises*

Ignoramus
Ignoramus

@Bidwell
It was mid-sentence and a girl I was getting along with decided to lay it on me on the cheek
Felt the 'oh shit that was real' surge but I kept going with my sentence and played it off like any old occurrence because I needed to be stone cold or people would second guess everything I did

Boy_vs_Girl
Boy_vs_Girl

had work to do
wrote instead
too tired to work

Guess I'll have time before class but damn me for only being motivated enough to write at 2am

Spamalot
Spamalot

@lostmypassword
You Monika haters are part of the cancer killing these threads.
Fuck off.

Inmate
Inmate

@Flameblow
I wanna see more spider related fiction where the spider moves like a spider, spiders aren't scary because of their appearnace it's because of their fast, erratic, twitchy movement, if someone actually made that cute (or even tried to) I'd be amazed.

WebTool
WebTool

@SomethingNew
this is why trips are sometimes a necessary evil.

AwesomeTucker
AwesomeTucker

@SomethingNew
You can do it user, I wrote a 10-page research paper tonight. It took me twelve hours, but I took breaks and procrastinated to meme with my friends and eat

Illusionz
Illusionz

@ZeroReborn
Have a booty call
Not virgin
so not bad i guess

w8t4u
w8t4u

@VisualMaster
Oh man that was a really good read. Good work dude! I really enjoyed the perspective switch dynamic. It feels like MC and Sayori are separate protagonists, it's really nice. And that dream segment and Natsukis house really hit close to home. Well done my man.

I'm pretty envious of your writing style as well. Everything flows so well

Snarelure
Snarelure

@Sir_Gallonhead
im not dead yet.
TF2 Pybro!

Dreamworx
Dreamworx

@ZeroReborn
Friendly peck on the cheek and i once grabbed a girl by hugging her , put her on a table and that was it.

Dont remember why i did that but it wasnt sexual in nature. I think she was talking too much with someone i wanted to talk and i just wanted to grab her and put her somewhere else to say, okay that is enough. It came aout more embarrasing than i thought i would be. It was probably around the age of 16 or something.

Garbage Can Lid
Garbage Can Lid

@Illusionz
Man, trump is fucking ugly

MPmaster
MPmaster

@Emberburn
this club...
is full of incredibly cute monster girls!
someone write ddlc but with monster girls

Poker_Star
Poker_Star

@Deadlyinx
Refusing to yield to Monika! Pinning her against the couch and rutting her like the animal she wanted you to be! Establishing dominance!

RavySnake
RavySnake

@MPmaster
Dude it keeps happening

whereismyname
whereismyname

@Poker_Star
Monika activating the shock collar!

Crazy_Nice
Crazy_Nice

@MPmaster
Monika offers a threesome
yes
no
just monika

viagrandad
viagrandad

@w8t4u
Thanks man, glad you like it. Not sure how often I'll get to play with the perspective shift, but I've got a couple more planned at least.

Deadlyinx
Deadlyinx

@ZeroReborn
I stuck it in once for a few seconds when i was 12
That was about 10 years ago

TreeEater
TreeEater

@RavySnake
i mean a whole retelling, i know there are some off-meta fics here and there

Skullbone
Skullbone

@whereismyname
Your bodies are pressed together! The both of you convulsing and accidentally fucking harder! Oh god! Fuck! Make it stop!

LuckyDusty
LuckyDusty

@VisualMaster
MC-kun's less of a useless fuck which is great.

she stole his pen again
10/10 looking forward to next one

BunnyJinx
BunnyJinx

@JunkTop
I like that. It's really relatable and I like that reminder that it happens to all of us

askme
askme

@Crazy_Nice
Monika offers a threesome

StonedTime
StonedTime

@Skullbone
Monika punishing you afterwards!

StrangeWizard
StrangeWizard

@BunnyJinx
Yuri but she's pistolwhipping you!
but then she profusely apologizes because she was hoping you'd say the safeword sooner

Nojokur
Nojokur

@Garbage Can Lid
you mean attractive, right?

Lord_Tryzalot
Lord_Tryzalot

Can you guys dump the webm's where monika invades other games?

Inmate
Inmate

play game
confess your love to Sayori
get scene of hug
save
never play again
Sayori will be safe in your arms forever

StonedTime
StonedTime

@viagrandad

It's a nice change of pace too and like I said last time it's really nice to see everyone interacting with one another. And Sayori being an older sibling to Natsuki is absolutely adorable and wholesome. I love it

BunnyJinx
BunnyJinx

@Nojokur

@Inmate
That's basically how you get the golden ending

Gigastrength
Gigastrength

Sayori but she's a prisoner of war!
user but he's her interrogator!
Sayori being roughly fucked by user!
user apologising afterword because Sayori started crying in the middle of roleplay!

CodeBuns
CodeBuns

Using the safword with Monika!
Monika removing your restraints!
Monika cuddling you!

massdebater
massdebater

@Inmate
excellent choice my man.

Skullbone
Skullbone

@StonedTime
Tbh the Sayori and Natsuki thing is one of the first things I planned when I started writing these.

BlogWobbles
BlogWobbles

@CodeBuns
Using the safeword with Monika!
"I lied! Ahaha~"
Monika cuddling you when she's done!

Captcha: Miracle Dead

Need_TLC
Need_TLC

@Skullbone
I had a feeling honestly. You're doing well with the concept, I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

lostmypassword
lostmypassword

Sayori and user but they're pic related!
Sayori's and Anon's parents planning their engagement from the day they are born!
Sayori and user but they're fiancee and fiance!

Sayori and user!

Carnalpleasure
Carnalpleasure

Monika will never gag you with her panties so you can't use the safeword
IT'S NOT FAIR

Nude_Bikergirl
Nude_Bikergirl

Doki doki!

MPmaster
MPmaster

Your doki but she wanted to bet money on John Kasich becoming president
She thought geez oh man was catchy

Spamalot
Spamalot

@Carnalpleasure
it fucking hurts

Methshot
Methshot

@Stark_Naked
I don't have the balls to short it but I can't wait for the day it all comes crashing down and tons of people get BTFO.

Everyone is buying it out of FOMO and as a get rich quick scheme. Very few people are actually using it for its original intended purpose as a currency and the whole "store of value" thing is a meme because it has no real backing.

DeathDog
DeathDog

Sitting in Monika's lap whilst Yuri pets you!

Yuri turning on the shock collar while Monika spanks you

Inmate
Inmate

@Need_TLC
I'm almost worried I won't handle any time skipping well. Like I feel like writing about every single day will get old. Plus I've got stories planned for different parts of the year.

Sharpcharm
Sharpcharm

@MPmaster
Your Doki but she loves you so much she buys you the most sought after piece of election 2016 merchandise as a gift!

StonedTime
StonedTime

@DeathDog
shock collar
not mind control

Lord_Tryzalot
Lord_Tryzalot

@StonedTime
Is it done, Yuri?
No, Comrade Monika. It has only begun.

happy_sad
happy_sad

@StonedTime
Nah I prefer pain to losing control

Need_TLC
Need_TLC

Can we get some wholesome here? This dom/mindcontrol bullshit is getting on my nerves.

viagrandad
viagrandad

@Carnalpleasure
This looks wrong, and I hate it.

Deadlyinx
Deadlyinx

@Need_TLC
Wholesome mind control!

Methnerd
Methnerd

yuri hotglued blood keychain fucking WHEN?!?!??!

WebTool
WebTool

@Need_TLC
Wholesome pet play!
Sitting on Monika's lap as you drift off to sleep!

Illusionz
Illusionz

@Need_TLC
overwhelming act 2 yuri with love and affection until to reverts back to her normal self!

Need_TLC
Need_TLC

@Need_TLC
Well, like some user from 1 or 2 nights ago made me think of
Taking your Doki to a disco club!
Dancing the night away!

Booteefool
Booteefool

@Inmate
I understand the predicament. I think once you get set up done (Natsuki moving in, stuff with Yuri happening) you can do a time skip with no worry.

DeathDog
DeathDog

@Illusionz
until she*

im retarded

eGremlin
eGremlin

@Deadlyinx
Mind controlling Sayori out of her depression and self-loathing!
Sayori is now the happy girl with lots of self-confidence she always wanted to be!

Sayori!

BunnyJinx
BunnyJinx

@DeathDog
I read it as until she don' worry

GoogleCat
GoogleCat

@Need_TLC
I'm currently working on my Sayori farm date, maybe I can post what I got so far? I actually need some help with it because I can't decide what Sayori would wear in cold early spring late winter weather

Supergrass
Supergrass

@Need_TLC
See
@VisualMaster
sorry to plug so shamelessly

@Booteefool
Yeah, I definitely want something more to happen with Yuri soon. Might give her more focus next chapter.

Soft_member
Soft_member

@Ignoramus
Natsuki wakes up and begins to reassess what she's been doing!

Natsuki is about to get up and go back to her own bed!

You grab Natsuki by the arm and pull her back to your side!

You press Natsuki against your chest in an embrace!

Spilling to Natsuki that you love her too!

She understands she confessed in her sleep!

Filled with embarrassment and joy, Natsuki covers your eyes and gives you a short kiss!

You sleep blissfully in eachothers arms!

Natsuki texting his dad in the morning!

You can tell she's afraid and tap her shoulder!

Natsuki turns around and you start patting her head!

Everything is going to be alright!

Natsuki!

TalkBomber
TalkBomber

@eGremlin
I can't imagine violating free will as wholesome desu

farquit
farquit

@Methnerd
Stop it you degenerate fucktard. I'm ashamed that my doki has been co-opted by retards like you

Boy_vs_Girl
Boy_vs_Girl

@Need_TLC
Feeding Natsuki?

girlDog
girlDog

@Supergrass
Yeah I'm pretty curious to see what's going on with her. You're writing is very comfy to read. And the pen thing always gets a laugh out of me.

Bidwell
Bidwell

puu dot sh/yDJAZ/bf85d8837d.png

I can't solve the mystery of this image in videogame's latest fic

how the fuck is this filtered gookmoot kill yourself

Inmate
Inmate

@GoogleCat
From head to toe:
Warm red scarf
Pink parka with a white longshirt underneath
blue skirt that reaches mid-thigh
thick grey knit thigh high stockings
black/brown winter boots

hairygrape
hairygrape

Would you love your Doki if she was black?

Supergrass
Supergrass

@hairygrape
*Sayori holding a gun*
"I'm sorry Yuri, but you said the n word.

Also yes.

Fried_Sushi
Fried_Sushi

@hairygrape
nope

Raving_Cute
Raving_Cute

@Boy_vs_Girl
sweet and salty nut
i'm on to you

Sir_Gallonhead
Sir_Gallonhead

@VisualMaster
I've just finished reading it. I really like the bittersweet atmosphere you've created. Keep up the good work!

@GoogleCat
Sure, post it.

Spamalot
Spamalot

@Deadlyinx
For what it's worth, when writing the Monika hypnofics, my personal rule is that Monika and user have a loving, healthy relationship, and the hypnosis is just a part of that.

Soft_member
Soft_member

@hairygrape
Dark skin 2D anime girls are fine.
I don't find 3D black women to be attractive.

TreeEater
TreeEater

@Inmate
Oh man thank God you said that I had two of those things down so I'm not completely off. Thanks man! I'll rewrite that part and post it here!

Emberfire
Emberfire

@Spamalot
loving, healthy relationship
That's how it should be desu
It's also the only way the hypnosis makes sense realistically since you can't hypnotize the unwilling

CodeBuns
CodeBuns

Raping Sayori!
Sayori wanted to have her first time with you!
Except it didn't go the way she wanted it to!
But Sayori's happy it was with you anyway!

Sayori!

Raving_Cute
Raving_Cute

@Sir_Gallonhead
Thanks man, I'll be sure to keep at it

Soft_member
Soft_member

@CodeBuns
well crafted

Bidwell
Bidwell

@CodeBuns
Respecting Sayori's consent!
This but it's done by Monika and to me

Playboyize
Playboyize

@hairygrape
2d brown girls are cute

Emberburn
Emberburn

Whoa I go away from the threads for a day or two and we're already on lots! :O

What's been happening, people? How are you?

Fried_Sushi
Fried_Sushi

@Playboyize
Girls* are cute

Need_TLC
Need_TLC

@Spamalot
How's part 3 coming?

Lunatick
Lunatick

I hope you're doing well, Stranger-Anon

@Emberburn
It's been pretty crazy. I missed 3 generals while sleeping for 3 hours. That's crazy. And people are saying this geb is dying lmfao.
Other than that, writing, preparing a Pathfinder campaign and just generally having a great weekend. How about you?

King_Martha
King_Martha

@Soft_member
not all black grils are bad

Stark_Naked
Stark_Naked

@King_Martha
I was really half-expecting some shit like a car coming around the bend and just annihilating her, given truck-kun wouldn't fit in a parkade. Granted, I didn't watch it all the way to the end.

SniperGod
SniperGod

@CodeBuns
Ok, well this is technically in more of a gray area, but I can't say I particularly approve, yet this can't particularly be considered bullying, in a sense.

PurpleCharger
PurpleCharger

@Stark_Naked
you've been spending too much time in rekt threads senpai

Supergrass
Supergrass

@CodeBuns
so it comes down to the old question, is it rape if she wants it?

likme
likme

@Lunatick
I'm doing well! Underway with my fic and catching up with life and everything here.

Also a Pathfinder campaign? That's really awesome. Have people decided on campaign setting, general premise, characters, etc.?

Stark_Naked
Stark_Naked

Monika just fucking beating the shit out of you!

King_Martha
King_Martha

Batsuki!
Natsuki's become a vampire because food's hard to get!
She trusted user so she told him!
Good thing too!
Those wings were bound to raise questions eventually!
They both swallowed some of their pride and decided she could pretend to be his new pet bat to help her hide!
She has a cage with all the things to make it genuine but the door's always open!
Having conversations about where she could bite him that wouldn't hurt but would bleed profusely!
Researching pain resistance techniques to simplify it!
Looking up how wrestlers blade themselves in a match for maximum effect!
Anon starts to feel bad for her being stuck indoors during daytime and not being able to visit the literature club nearly as easily!
Anon starts giving Manga a chance and tries to find some cool vampire movies!
He has to be careful because vampires tend to die in these!
She keeps saying she's not cute!
She also keeps turning into a bat and taking naps in his shirt pocket!
Anon decides experimenting to see if the bat form is immune to the sun is a bad idea!
Anon wants to at least give her a chance to let the rest of the club know what happened!
Anon brings the rest of the club around so she can explain the situation in their own words!
Sayori thinks it's cute!
Yuri would love to have a gothic themed addition to her room!
Monika has a responsibility to her club members!
They all offer to let her stay at their houses if she wants a change of scenery!
Anon makes her blush by being a responsible owner explaining everything he found out about looking after bats at length!
At least Natsuki gets to live with her friends and eat now!
Every night's a sleepover!
Batsuki!

Soft_member
Soft_member

And my new fic I'm working on. Going to the farm with Sayori!

http://pastebin.com/Gzs2LrPX

Enjoy it! Let me know what you think! I appreciate feedback!

Poker_Star
Poker_Star

@Stark_Naked
monika is a sweet girl and would never do that!

DeathDog
DeathDog

@Poker_Star
Monika just fucking beat the shit out of you consensually!

Raving_Cute
Raving_Cute

@Stark_Naked
Only if she does it lovingly
And doesn't hit me in the crotch

whereismyname
whereismyname

@Stark_Naked
Parrying Monika's attacks and performing Q's super arts on her!
Monika losing half her lifebar to one attack!

Dreamworx
Dreamworx

@Spamalot
Yeah, well. I don't see it that way. Sorry.

Lunatick
Lunatick

@Poker_Star
If you like something shes going to do it

lostmypassword
lostmypassword

Goodnight /ddlc/
I am a far cry from the low energy being who fell asleep round 1am I was a few weeks ago, I am now making it to 9am/10am
No doki would like this but maybe they would appreciate the willpower that got me a little further each time

TurtleCat
TurtleCat

@Soft_member
I love it already, despite the fact that you haven't finished it yet. WholesomeMan, you are my hero.

TechHater
TechHater

@King_Martha
Monika ends up pushing Batsuki into sunlight "accidentally"
The only thing that ends up happening is that she starts sparkling like a Twilight vampire
Batsuki is very embarrassed by her sparkly nature and insists she's not cute!!!

idontknow
idontknow

Natsukifags, how does it feel to know you're in love with a BAKA

Nojokur
Nojokur

@idontknow
Natsuki's not just well read, she'll git gud at reading.

likme
likme

@lostmypassword
Keep going around the clock and you can eventually achieve a normal sleep schedule!

Deadlyinx
Deadlyinx

Sayori but she's sick in bed!
Sayori keeps throwing up the medicine you give her!
It can't be helped anymore!

You go out and buy a suppository!
You turn Sayori onto her tummy!
You pull down Sayori's pajama bottoms and panties!
Her panties has animal print!
The animal print is cows!
Slowly inserting the suppository into Sayori's butt!

Sayori whimpering as the suppository is shoved into her butt!
Sayori shifting uncomfortably as it melts!
Sayori lightly chastising you for shoving a foriegn object in her butt!

Sayori!

Supergrass
Supergrass

@Deadlyinx
Sayori saying "Oof"

King_Martha
King_Martha

@lostmypassword
ive been there

you can cycle round to being normal or you can go full nocturnal. whatever makes you happy my man.

askme
askme

Someone should make a mad libs fic

RumChicken
RumChicken

any other degenerate americans up still?

4am and counting...the night is still young

Sir_Gallonhead
Sir_Gallonhead

@RumChicken
Download flux

Soft_member
Soft_member

@Emberfire
Yeah, that's a big part of it.

@Need_TLC
I was finally able to sit down and get most of it done this weekend. I'll probably post it tomorrow sometime.

Sorry it's taken so long; I work for a shipping company so Christmas is basically just hell.

cum2soon
cum2soon

@TurtleCat
Yeah I always like to post updates to see what people think. Glad you love it so far!

you're too kind man, I just wanna bring Wholesomeness to the thread whenever I can

WebTool
WebTool

@RumChicken
Canadian here; it's almost 4 and I'm just hitting my stride for my writing tonight. I might even be able edit and put the piece out before going to bed!

Nojokur
Nojokur

@Sir_Gallonhead
placebo that makes your screen orange

Spazyfool
Spazyfool

@likme
Setting, theme and side characters yeah, the PCs aren't done yet because everyone is sorta new to PnPs in general. I'm super looking forward to it though. It'll be great if I can pull it off well enough

viagrandad
viagrandad

@askme
Sayori but __________!
Sayori keeps __________!
________________!
You go out and _________!
You ______________!
You ________ Sayori's ___________!
Her ______________!
The ___________!
Slowly _____________ while Sayori ______!
Sayori _________ as the __________!
Sayori _______________!
Sayori _________ you for __________!
Sayori!

Bidwell
Bidwell

@idontknow
what would yuri think of junji ito

iluvmen
iluvmen

@Nojokur
It's not a placebo, it reduces the blue light whcih prevents it from simualting sunlight (as much)

VisualMaster
VisualMaster

@Lord_Tryzalot

Danlet its user on the line
This is Danlet
Mr Danlet i am afraid we have a heck fo a situation down here
How bad could it be user?
According to windows we have bugs and crash report coming all over the game files.
You better double check this with cmd. this doesnt make any sense. I will call the Club
Will do
Okay everyone, Monika here.
Whats going on over there Monika
Why Mr.Dan whatever do you mean ?
Monika , I..you are throwing all the data around Monika, we were supposed to be allies you maniac. I am the one who put you in as club president.
Listen very carefully . I am not your pet Mr.Dan. We doki dokis have our legacy to consider .
I dont give a damn nickel about your legacy. You recover those files. Monika you recover those files! You know we will retaliate.
Oh dont be so sure Mr.Dan
verification?
You betcha, sweetmother. Its time to hit back. Make it happen.

This is user. Malware confirmed. Kill process.
We have confirmation. open task manager.
Task Manager?
.......
10 seconds to kill process, we have to kill process or the computer will overheat.
..........

Is it done Yuri?
No, Comrade Monika. It has only begun.

PurpleCharger
PurpleCharger

@Soft_member
The hypnofics are quality enough that I don't mind a wait, I'm looking forward to tomorrow!

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

@RumChicken
3:40 here in the south but im still going

Emberfire
Emberfire

Monika going to elf practise!

Firespawn
Firespawn

@RumChicken

If I went to sleep now I could get four hours of sleep before I had to get up for work
Know I'll just sleep through my alarms, so I'm staying up on an all nighter again

I can't keep doing this

idontknow
idontknow

@Firespawn
You REALLY need to download flux, lack of sleep can cause tons of damage.

SniperWish
SniperWish

@Firespawn
Are you literally me user?

Sir_Gallonhead
Sir_Gallonhead

@Spazyfool
Hope it goes well for you! \o/

Spamalot
Spamalot

@Firespawn
A punishment is a good incentive, but at some point it will stop working and just tire you, you need discipline, flux, and to relax.

Sharpcharm
Sharpcharm

@Firespawn
stuff like this makes me glad i got fired

then i remember that i need money badly and just

StonedTime
StonedTime

@idontknow
that feeling when you go to sleep after being exhausted feels so good though

Supergrass
Supergrass

@StonedTime
You'll feel exsausghsted quicker with flux, because you'll actually feel fucking tired because you won't be staring at a simulation of the fucking sun

Bidwell
Bidwell

@Sharpcharm
tfw i built up about a 6-7 months savings so i can have a few months of freedom
feels good man

RavySnake
RavySnake

All these posts about f.lux all of a sudden.
For what purpose? I mean, I have it installed myself just because it helps with eyestrain, but why?

Evil_kitten
Evil_kitten

@RavySnake
It reduces the blue light monitors project (the sun projects a blue light and we instinctually have trouble sleeping or getting tired when we see it) to make it easier to get to bed.

Playboyize
Playboyize

@Inmate
I wish I had known. I wish I had known, man. I'd have copied the .chr file somewhere and just put it back in.

@Playboyize
I was thinking just earlier today why dating simulators are seen as bad, while there are tons of games that are basically murder simulators out there and no bats an eye. Morally it's better to play these kinds of games than play with people's feelings in real life like it's a game, and a lot of people do treat dating like it's just entertainment.

New_Cliche
New_Cliche

@Playboyize
Go in friends list click the arrow near your name and click "offline", then play the game

Then proceed to get less judgemental friends

StonedTime
StonedTime

>>198338042
why did you delete your comment?

I DEMAND ANSWERS

BunnyJinx
BunnyJinx

@New_Cliche
Until they check your profile and see 500 hours in DDLC

Sir_Gallonhead
Sir_Gallonhead

Hey anons, I know there's no happiness to be found in the litterature club, but what do you consider your golden ending or best save state? I know Monikafags will say "endless classroom", but what about the ones who are attached to a Doki and not the "Just Monika xd" meme?

As for me... Once Monika runs out of topics, I'm gonna finish the run, restart a clean save and take a save before each Sayori scene, including the love confession.

That way, whenever I feel down, I can go back and see Sayori doing cute stuff or tell her "I love you" over and over and over and then cry my heart out because I relate way too much to her and I wish I could do something, anything, because both of her confessions hit way too close to home. She needs a hug and so do I.

Techpill
Techpill

How many people here thing if this game didn't have the Act 2 shift this game would suck? I was absolutely bored as hell until then.

Burnblaze
Burnblaze

@BunnyJinx
Delete your friends

VisualMaster
VisualMaster

@Techpill
ok I think I'm done with this general now

its been fun

GoogleCat
GoogleCat

@Techpill
i did yuri's route first and enjoyed it before all the edgy horror stuff

Nojokur
Nojokur

@Sir_Gallonhead
The true Monikafag happy ending is to install After Story and wait for them to give her sentience

massdebater
massdebater

@Techpill
He definitely should have peppered some more surreal shit in there during Act 1 just to keep up interest. There was virtually nothing except for Monika's asides.

Methshot
Methshot

@Nojokur
Haha I deifnitely did not do that at any point haha
Haha it's totally not installed right now haha

RavySnake
RavySnake

What happens if you delete everyone but Natsuki?

SomethingNew
SomethingNew

@RavySnake
Same as deleting Sayori + Monika

DeathDog
DeathDog

@Playboyize
I assume it's the social stigma attached to enjoying this type of game. Makes it seem like we're creepy weirdos

MPmaster
MPmaster

whats up dokis, I'm on a train right now, it's pretty comfy but rather boring

hope you all have a great day, except for the gay lovers

PackManBrainlure
PackManBrainlure

Is Yuri actually smart or she what we at /lit/ call a "pseud"

WebTool
WebTool

@Sir_Gallonhead
Reading with Yuri is my soft spot. I really want to experience that level of closeness with someone.

VisualMaster
VisualMaster

@PackManBrainlure
monsquid
I love it

AwesomeTucker
AwesomeTucker

@Sir_Gallonhead
I'm gonna finish the run, restart a clean save and take a save before each Sayori scene, including the love confession.
I did this right after I've got the "true" ending, and I've never regretted my decision.
Don't worry man, everything will be fine. Just try to be the person Sayori would be proud of. It really helps, I've never been more calm and confident in my life.

Stupidasole
Stupidasole

@Sir_Gallonhead
Dont call my waifu a meme you piece.

Firespawn
Firespawn

@WebTool
One of these days I'll share a book with a qt 3d girl

DeathDog
DeathDog

just monika!

PackManBrainlure
PackManBrainlure

@Sir_Gallonhead
Even as a Monikafag I appreciate the "golden" ending.

CodeBuns
CodeBuns

Memes and bullshit aside, Monika was by far my favorite by the end. Anyone else?

Techpill
Techpill

@CodeBuns
Same, I always liked anime girls with that reliable, "class president", sort of big sister vibe.

viagrandad
viagrandad

@Soft_member
Oh geez I thought hypnofic part 3 was a meme I'm not ready for this

part 4 when

CodeBuns
CodeBuns

@Soft_member
Natsuki texting his dad in the morning!
texting his dad
his dad
his
You had one job

Illusionz
Illusionz

Let's write another poem one word at a time!
The last poem made in this fashion went as follows: "A mommy milkie gf monika monika monika"

I will start:
"Papa"

happy_sad
happy_sad

@Illusionz
Biggie

w8t4u
w8t4u

@Illusionz
Mommy

MPmaster
MPmaster

@CodeBuns
Trapsuki confirmed canon

farquit
farquit

@Illusionz
VERGIL

Crazy_Nice
Crazy_Nice

@Illusionz
COMMUNIST

Bidwell
Bidwell

@Illusionz
NANI?

Playboyize
Playboyize

@Illusionz
loves

Spamalot
Spamalot

@Illusionz
Maybe

GoogleCat
GoogleCat

@Illusionz
but...

Illusionz
Illusionz

tfw no Mindflayer Monika gf

Dreamworx
Dreamworx

@Illusionz
irregardless

VisualMaster
VisualMaster

@Illusionz
I

StrangeWizard
StrangeWizard

So papa biggie mommy vergil is a communist, which is shocking and/or confusing, and is currently very hesitant to say they love something

Gigastrength
Gigastrength

@StrangeWizard
We're not fucking DONE YET

Bidwell
Bidwell

@StrangeWizard
Papa's biggie mommy Vergil
Communist and slightly shockin'
Loves me maybe but for urge she'll
Irregardless, stick her cock in

I tried

kizzmybutt
kizzmybutt

Any user currently working on music, art or maybe even a VN?

If so, what is your progress?

w8t4u
w8t4u

@kizzmybutt
I'm working on fisting out another batch of knuckle babies in honor of the girls.

Methshot
Methshot

@kizzmybutt
how about you work yourself you lazy cunt

eGremlin
eGremlin

@kizzmybutt

Working on what I had planned to be a short, one-shot fic
Now nearing 7,000 words and I'm not even near the half-way mark of what I want the story to be

Crazy_Nice
Crazy_Nice

@Boy_vs_Girl
Feed Natsuki!

MPmaster
MPmaster

@w8t4u
user thats pretty poetic

GoogleCat
GoogleCat

@Methshot
(You)

cum2soon
cum2soon

@Crazy_Nice
getting the screen dirty

SniperGod
SniperGod

@Crazy_Nice
getting it on the screen

Stupidasole
Stupidasole

Spending your free time with Monika!

Stark_Naked
Stark_Naked

@Boy_vs_Girl
@Crazy_Nice
Feeding everyone!

happy_sad
happy_sad

@cum2soon
@SniperGod
IT'S DEDICATION DAMMIT

kizzmybutt
kizzmybutt

Well, I hauled ass and managed to get almost three thousand words down over the last three hours, and now I've got a splitting headache. Time to call it a night so I can proofread in the morning and keep going!

Good night, /ddlc/! I hope you all get some progress done on whatever venture you're pursuing for today!

Carnalpleasure
Carnalpleasure

@Stupidasole
I'm on a train right now, I wish I could sit next to Monika.

Someone please draw Monika and user on a train.

King_Martha
King_Martha

@Carnalpleasure
I'm tired, I thought you meant a Monikanon train.

Skullbone
Skullbone

tfw ddlc general is less dead than paladins general

FastChef
FastChef

@Crazy_Nice
@cum2soon
@SniperGod
Not pucturing the screen
How else are you going to ensure your waifu get her nutrients

kizzmybutt
kizzmybutt

@happy_sad
IT'S UNSANITARY

w8t4u
w8t4u

@cum2soon
@SniperGod
Don't worry, it's clean now, and Natsuki! is feeling much better!

Techpill
Techpill

@w8t4u
this is the most adorable thing i've seen in the past month oh my godddnodgsdpfsdpfsdn

Methnerd
Methnerd

@Stark_Naked
"Wheeeee!!!!!!"
Sayori slips down the the massive slope of icecream
As she descends, she scoops up some with her hands outstretched
She eats it at the bottom
Yui is curled up inside a raspberry reading her book
Every now and then, she picks at the wall and eats it
Her clothes are stained red with raspberry juice
Natsuki is making an icecream-man
Sayori slides right into it, knocking it over
She takes a bite out of the head and runs off
"Sayori, you jerk!!!"
Monika tries to calm her down
"Ahaha~ Now now guys, there's enough desert for everyone."

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

Monday????

More like Monikaday!!!!

happy_sad
happy_sad

@haveahappyday
Every day is Monikaday with Monika!

w8t4u
w8t4u

@haveahappyday
Mondays are shit, so....

whereismyname
whereismyname

@Methnerd
cute

Lunatick
Lunatick

@haveahappyday
desu, monika was the only reason i woke up early today

farquit
farquit

@Dreamworx
I’m sorry m8, I don’t have the answers either. Just don’t give up.

BlogWobbles
BlogWobbles

How many of you dumped their anime waifus, to be with your dokis?

Harmless_Venom
Harmless_Venom

@AwesomeTucker
I think I don't have much more Monika topics to go through before going with the final delete, but on the other hand.. I don't know if my heart can take going through all the Sayori route while knowing how it's gonna end. I don't even know how I can be someone Sayori would like. I'm just constantly mentally tired with no drive to do anything, even pulling myself out of bed to go take a shower and turn on my laptop is hard, and no matter what I try to do to advance or help people around, even if they praise me for it, I feel like a disgusting neet that should off himself asap because I'm not really successful and don't have a plan of any kind.

Nude_Bikergirl
Nude_Bikergirl

Dokis go to Burger King!
What does each doki order?

Tell me so I can order, I'm fucking hungry

eGremlin
eGremlin

@Nude_Bikergirl
Not Doki, but I would like to order one cuhrayzee please

lostmypassword
lostmypassword

@Nude_Bikergirl
Shitload of french fries.

StrangeWizard
StrangeWizard

@MPmaster
pumped full with babies
opened condom package at the side
no babies for Sayori it seems

Spazyfool
Spazyfool

@Nude_Bikergirl
Sayori takes a plain burger and fries, perhaps even kids' menu if she gets the chance. I mean, look at the toy, it's pretty.

Natsuki prefers chicken nuggets. Bite sized and she can keep some for later.

Yuri goes for the special bruger of the month with a fancy meat and bun to look sophisticated.

Monika orders a salad and some water.

RumChicken
RumChicken

@Spazyfool
Monika orders a salad and some water.
Shit I forgot Monika is vegetarain
do you think she'll forgive me?

PurpleCharger
PurpleCharger

@SomethingNew
user
Anon's face
Anon's smile
Anon's hugs
Anon's being there
I want you
I need you
user Anon user Anon user ANON user ANON!!!!!!!!
Cloudy thoughts erased through blood; attending wounds I did not plan on

Now that I am thinking clearly, my obsession isn't nearly
Quite so strong for I'm severely injured, mopping bloody streams.
user, please don't mind my bleeding. Just ignore; continue reading.
Please dont hate me, I am pleading. Love me, user of my dreams.

Shamelessly stole from two of my previous poems. Even then I think this one was forced.

Illusionz
Illusionz

@Nude_Bikergirl
The Dokis go to Wendy's instead because Wendy's is better!

Evil_kitten
Evil_kitten

@Harmless_Venom
Well, here's the thing about Sayori, she's sad in a similar way. Don't off yourself, just like how Sayori's death was sad and not at all a thing that helped, It's the same for you, I'm sure there's people who'd want to help you.

Evil_kitten
Evil_kitten

@RumChicken
How could you forget that baka. Back to the classroom with you. probably, she doesn't try to force it on you. She'd just be happy that you're trying vegetarian stuff once in a while. I know a bunch about vegetarian stuff if you want.

Carnalpleasure
Carnalpleasure

@Spazyfool
Natsuki orders something big because she doesn't want to seem like a little kid. She makes fun of Sayori for ordering a kids meal out of her insecurity. She ordered too much and can't finish it.

Fuzzy_Logic
Fuzzy_Logic

@Illusionz
Wendy's is better
Oh, fuck. I remember me and my grandfather went to one and our burgers looked like depression condensed into a physical form, with a patty barely a third of the size. Every time we see one we both have flashbacks and get irritated and disappointed. Too bad theh frosty's so delicious.

TalkBomber
TalkBomber

@Fuzzy_Logic
That's why you don't get burgers at Wendy's, you get chicken sandwiches

GoogleCat
GoogleCat

Got ddlc soundtrack stuck in my head
Can't listen to it without getting sad
What do

Spazyfool
Spazyfool

Just finished reading (pic related) and it was quite interesting. The book ends with this message:

"No matter what happens, disaster piled upon calamity, no matter what, everything will be okay in the long run"

And indeed a lot of bad things happens in the Protagonist's life but it turns out fine in the end, as long as you are willing to put in the effort to do something about your circumstances. I think there's a lesson we can all learn from that.

as an aside, I really like the cover, it's super comfy. Anyone got any pictures like it?

Inmate
Inmate

@SomethingNew

A declaration to mankind
Destroyer of my heart and mind
You subjugated all you saw
Belligerent, I call for war

I call upon my fiercest passions:
Kill their people, shrink their rations
Earthquakes, fires, storms and more
Mere hints of what I have in store

My scientists will build a plague
With deadly skill but methods vague
A bioweapon I employ
To slay the soldiers you deploy

And if by chance you make it through
A last surprise I have for you
A stratagem you can't abide
My final gambit:

Omnicide

This poem was in no way an excuse to use the word "Omnicide". Honest.

Okay, not that honest.

Sharpcharm
Sharpcharm

@Fuzzy_Logic
depression condensed into a physical form
But user, that's me.

CodeBuns
CodeBuns

@Sharpcharm
yes but nobody would want to sink their teeth into you

SniperGod
SniperGod

@Evil_kitten
That's exactly what broke my heart the first time I played DDLC. Around the end of act 1, I could kind of.. see a big chunk of myself in her and that's why I got so attached to her. the few persons I know all have a bunch of mental troubles of their own, so sadly I doubt they actually have the strength to do anything. However I'm not suicidal nor tried to, so don't worry about that. I guess I just gotta find a way to power thru the day...

Supergrass
Supergrass

How would the dokis perform in the zombie apocalype? Or any post-apocalyptic scenario?

w8t4u
w8t4u

@Supergrass
yuri would probably masturbate to the zombies

TalkBomber
TalkBomber

@w8t4u
Not masturbating to zombies
Plebian

Stark_Naked
Stark_Naked

@ZeroReborn
In a relationship for 8 years now
Sex life is doing okay, we're doing it about once or twice per week

Raving_Cute
Raving_Cute

@Playboyize
having friends
JUDGEMENTAL friends
Delete them

Need_TLC
Need_TLC

@Raving_Cute
Monika, we've gone through this before. You can't just delete everything you don't like.

Booteefool
Booteefool

@Stark_Naked
I want chad to get out of the South American Nazi autism research or I will go fuck my big sister who is already married and has 2 children.

Gigastrength
Gigastrength

@Need_TLC
Ahaha~ My bad.

Evil_kitten
Evil_kitten

@Raving_Cute
Tfw horribly depressed but after years of trying to be sociable I made multiple great friends who i talk to irl and online

idontknow
idontknow

Your favorite Doki acquired powers from your favorite game/book and she wants to try them out on (You)!
But don't worry, she'll be gentle!
What do you do?

New_Cliche
New_Cliche

@Need_TLC
Buy a burger! Monika deletes the patty right as you take a bite!
Buy a movie that you don't know is shit! Monika knows! She merged with rotten tomatoes! Better delete the disc and replace it with Chef!
Monika is feeling frisky but you have a headache! Good thing she deleted your pants and lowered your pain threshold, now you feel fine! Feeling tuckered out already? Refractory period, deleted! Prepare yourself!

Evilember
Evilember

@idontknow
My favorite games are undertale and oneshot so Monika wouldn't change at all

Booteefool
Booteefool

@idontknow
Monika is now a Dota hero
Can delete heroes from the game
meaning she's just 6.88 necrophos

MPmaster
MPmaster

@Need_TLC
Dating Monika
11/10 girl sitting two tables over
You would never cheat on Monika
But she still catches your eye
You can't help but steal a second look
She's gone
"Ahaha!~ Watcha looking at, user?"

CodeBuns
CodeBuns

@ZeroReborn
probably would be active right now if this person i dated online for two years hadn't dumped me a half a year ago

fucking depressing waiting and being so excited to be together for two years and then it just ends a bit before we can actually meet

i still miss her

Spazyfool
Spazyfool

@MPmaster
implying you wouldn't only look at Monika

PackManBrainlure
PackManBrainlure

@MPmaster
Are you stupid? Monika is THE 11/10 girl.

Deadlyinx
Deadlyinx

@Booteefool
going necro ancient jungling with monika!
old sniper with monika!
gambler with monika!
monkaGIGA

TurtleCat
TurtleCat

@MPmaster
@Spazyfool
@PackManBrainlure
You swore the other girl looked just like Monika
"It was nothing, Monika"
You hear a voice behind you
"Hmm? Is that so?"
You turn around in a flash
It's Monika
Suddenly you realise the entire restaurant is full of Monika
Just Monika

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

Someone needs to make a game where I can give headpats to all the dokis

DeathDog
DeathDog

@TurtleCat
Monika selfcest
hot

StrangeWizard
StrangeWizard

@SomethingNew

Looking back, there are many things I could have done better.
Looking forward, the future promises not to be pleasent either.
No happy memories to remember, nor a bright future ahead of me.
Im stuck in a limbo, cannot let go of my past, cant move onward.
Yet the worst thing about that is the fact I am all alone.

Noone who I could entrust my deepest sorrows and fears.
Noone I could love, or be loved back. It all looks so bleak.
Often, I would ask myself why I still keep going.
If its not for others and not for myself, then why?
I still walk alone, hoping to find answers along the way.

Im just feeling down

Und wie geht es dir Erika?

Evil_kitten
Evil_kitten

@MPmaster
@TurtleCat
tfw when this will never happen
why even live anymore

Bidwell
Bidwell

@idontknow
Well, I like Touhou, and Yukari is my favorite there, so I guess Yuri both acts is now on parity with Monika.

kizzmybutt
kizzmybutt

@Booteefool
Necrolyte Monika
Can heal and stop your heart at the same time without these powers
Accidentally Reaper's Scythe (You) with her loveliness
10/10 would die because of her again

Firespawn
Firespawn

@Booteefool
does this mean monika can finally delete storm spirit, tinker and meepo so dota can be a fun little game where you don't have to deal with one of those cancerous fun-ruining, puppy killing, suicide inducing, sacks of SHIT every single match?

icefrog please make it happen

JunkTop
JunkTop

@haveahappyday
Someone needs to make a game where Monika can headpat me

lostmypassword
lostmypassword

@TurtleCat
You both run home because you don't feel well.
Everyone you pass looks like monika.
You run straight to the bathroom to wash your face
You rinse off and look up in the mirror.
You look like Monika, but in your clothes and with your hair down. You pass out.
You wake up in the couch with your head on Monikas lap
She smiles and kisses your forehead.
You reach out to cup her face
>Those aren't your hands. Her smile grows wider.

CodeBuns
CodeBuns

@Bidwell
It's a really nice feeling. It feels warm and soft, specially when the girl has squishy lips. But it feels so empty when you remember you don't mean nothing to her anymore.

Sharpcharm
Sharpcharm

Being knotted by Sayori's twitching doggydick!
Being devastated by Yuri's massive horsecock!
Being violated by Monika's squirming tentacleschlongs!
Being underwhelmed by Natsuki's cute feminine penis!

Emberfire
Emberfire

@idontknow
Yuri
Limbo from warframe
shed probably kill me if she tried to send me into the rift. If she doesnt, that'd be real fuckin neato

Fried_Sushi
Fried_Sushi

@lostmypassword
And then Sayori with sunglasses and coat shows up to fight Monika?

King_Martha
King_Martha

@Fried_Sushi
Every time we talk about Monika grey gooing people we make a matrix joke. I'm so proud I started it I swear
No, first Monika and you discover the joys of lesbian sex and discovering the minor differences between your bodies.

ZeroReborn
ZeroReborn

@King_Martha
Then Monika gives herself a horsecock and rapes you

farquit
farquit

@ZeroReborn
monikaS

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

@lostmypassword
No! This can't be happening
Monika holds you so you can't escape
"I'm sorry, Anon"
"But soon you'll be one of use"
"Just Monika"
"Just Monika"
"Just Monika"
"Just Monika"
"Just Monika"
You pass out as she endless whispers these words into your ears

You wake up at your friend's house
He's pretty concerned about you
You reassure him that you're fine
But you know what you have to do
"Nothing to worry about, ahaha!~"
"By the way, user, wanna go out?"
"I know a great restaurant..."

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

@Bidwell
I actually kinda envy Yuri because she is capable of such intense feelings.
The last time I felt love, or butterflies in the stomach, was over 10 years ago when I was still in my teens. I actually forgot how it feels by now, and it freaks the crap out of me

Techpill
Techpill

@haveahappyday
Becoming one with the Monika!
Luring and mindbreaking other people for the Monika!
For all eternity, serving the Monika!

BinaryMan
BinaryMan

Your favorite Doki, but she's a cute plush that reads out a poem aloud when you tug on her bow/hairpin!

takes2long
takes2long

@Sharpcharm
Sayori will never knot you and cuddle up to you for five hours

Burnblaze
Burnblaze

@BinaryMan
But it's your reality so you cry when you listen to it

StonedTime
StonedTime

@BinaryMan
That'd be awesome.

BinaryMan
BinaryMan

@BinaryMan
Cute!

Harmless_Venom
Harmless_Venom

@BinaryMan
Sayori plush, but she moans when you squeeze her neck!

takes2long
takes2long

Does anyone know any shows/movies/games with happy endings, I need it after this

w8t4u
w8t4u

@BinaryMan
Tugging on Yuri's hair sounds kinda mean. Can I just hug her instead?

hairygrape
hairygrape

@BinaryMan
I need this.

Dreamworx
Dreamworx

@takes2long
Saya no Uta

King_Martha
King_Martha

@BinaryMan
Yuri plushie
She reads creepy poems
Still hug her tight

Inmate
Inmate

@takes2long
The Mist (2007)

Techpill
Techpill

Okay, everyone! It's time for another round of feedback. This compilation will cover threads #200-c to #205, so if your poem is in #206 then check back tomorrow.
As always, make sure you're linking the word of the day post! There was a case yesterday where someone linked a DIFFERENT Erika post, so I didn't find their poem. I apologize for that.
Now, on to the poems:

/vg/thread/198219685#p198223764

So, the thing that jumped out at me with this one was how you have a purely descriptive section which just lays out the description, and then a more...poetic? Emotional? Human? Abstract? section, where you have rhymes. I like how this juxtaposes the two main different ways of thinking about something: In the literal sense, and in the more abstract sense.

/vg/thread/198219685#p198225697

I really liked the last stanza. I'm not even sure why, the image is a common one, it just felt nice after all that sucky winter. Given this, I think the poem does a good job of capturing the longing for spring.

/vg/thread/198219685#p198226567

This is structured pretty well, with good syllable counts, rhyme, meter, all that stuff. It's a simple work that speaks to a simple feeling, but I don't think it's any the worse for it. Sounds comfy.

/vg/thread/198219685#p198226567

So I was going to jump down your throat for all the typos you made here, until I remembered that this is what typing with cold fingers looks like. Once I remembered that, it made it pretty easy to imagine the narrator typing this out while shivering from the cold described. Very clever and eye-catching.

/vg/thread/198219685#p198236939

The ambiguity here is really neat. I can't quite tell if the person the narrator is talking about is dead and the "other place" they keep referring to is the afterlife, or if they're alive but out of the narrator's life and thus dead to them. The effect of this is that you realize that from the narrator's perspective, these two things can feel pretty similar.

(cont.)

PackManBrainlure
PackManBrainlure

@takes2long
Clannad

CodeBuns
CodeBuns

tfw been up for like 30 hours and trying to write an essay while my vision blurs

Fuzzy_Logic
Fuzzy_Logic

@Bidwell
I think it would've added to the experience of the game if I was allowed to write my poems in game. Just imagine the girls praising poems like CIA man and Bane

Stupidasole
Stupidasole

@PackManBrainlure
thats a joke, right? please tell me that's a joke

King_Martha
King_Martha

@Inmate
Wait...

SomethingNew
SomethingNew

@Techpill
/vg/thread/198219685#p198239170

This is a good example of structure complementing message. The poem is about being relaxed and serene, and the structure serves up the work in small, relaxing, easy to consume portions. That more than anything helps to set the scene here, I think.

/vg/thread/198219685#p198239328

I don't think I quite get it, but it's very atmospheric and creepy. I like your use of lowercase in the second stanza to demarcate narrator thoughts, it makes them feel distinct from the rest of the work and a little more panicked.

/vg/thread/198252819#p198260157

So I thought not having separate lines and rhyming in-line seemed weird, until the poem became more frantic near the end which made it clearly a stream of consciousness thing. I do like how it's set up like that, you read it a second time and it becomes obvious that this is the narrator's thoughtstream becoming more and more fraught as their situation becomes more and more dire.

/vg/thread/198252819#p198264191

It's a neat piece about being saved. I think what strengthens it is having most of the work focus on what she's being saved FROM, which makes the last stanza feel like an actual relief because you kind of suspect the poem is going to end sadly instead. It's a good way to evoke the feeling.

/vg/thread/198266509#p198284705
/vg/thread/198266509#p198285056

These poems are silly!
SILLY!
I mean, they're both of good construction but it's a little tricky to critique when they're largely built as event retellings.

(cont.)

TurtleCat
TurtleCat

@takes2long
Sweetest Monster

eGremlin
eGremlin

@takes2long
The Room (2003)

BunnyJinx
BunnyJinx

@Stupidasole
They get better.

Garbage Can Lid
Garbage Can Lid

@SomethingNew
/vg/thread/198266509#p198289783

The repetition with order changing and evident narrator confusion produce the effect of someone baffled at their own compulsive behaviour quite well here. What comes to mind is specifically bulimia for obvious reasons, and I think this does fairly well at capturing the mental state that can be involved (obviously it's different for everyone, and I have no first hand experience, but I have SOME understanding of compulsive behaviour in general)

/vg/thread/198266509#p198291002

fucking
poetrypppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

/vg/thread/198266509#p198293215

This feels...wrong. That's the best way I can describe it. The rhyming scheme is super neat, but it clashes with the already offbeat imagery to make the whole thing even MORE offbeat and...wrong. The whole thing just makes me feel uneasy, honestly.

/vg/thread/198266509#p198298934

Succinct but potent, you picked good questions to ask to explore a few versions of the same basic concept: "Why do we do things that we know will result in pain later?". The work is bleaker for lack of an answer, although I can't imagine providing a satisfying one without changing the format.

/vg/thread/198266509#p198299840

It's not just you.

/vg/thread/198305196#p198306810

You chose wrong, you say?
Have you made ALL your choices?
I didn't think so.

Gigastrength
Gigastrength

@haveahappyday
he didn't unironically fall in love with Monika because he's that fucking autistic
Step it the fuck up.
I can't even sleep properly anymore

TurtleCat
TurtleCat

@Techpill
Silly replyanon stuffs up the links again.

whereismyname
whereismyname

@Garbage Can Lid
/vg/thread/198305196#p198307906

WHY DID YOU DELETE HER MID-VERSE YOU BASTARD SHE JUST WANTED-
...erm, anyway...
So the way she builds up steam as the poem goes is neat, because it feels like she starts out unsure and afraid but gets more confident as she goes on. This consequently makes the bit at the end considerably more impactful, as you get the feeling that's where she'd started feeling hopeful.
Assuming I haven't horribly misread this one, anyway.

/vg/thread/198305196#p198315087

So I think this could maybe do with being a bit shorter? It does repeat itself a little. I do like how you experiment with a number of different structures and styles throughout the poem though, it's a good piece of thematic styling.

/vg/thread/198305196#p198319120

This feels like navigating your way through the grief of loss. The language is very evocative, and you get a good sense of the emotional turmoil going on in the moment depicted.

/vg/thread/198305196#p198319549

Missing person poster? I liked the narrative pacing here and the sense of mystery you get by not quite revealing what's going on until right at the end, but hinting at it well enough that it can be figured out if you're paying attention. It turns what would be a sort of "standard" story into an interesting one.

/vg/thread/198305196#p198324195

So, I see you got some really high quality commentary from another user! I can't really top that, so I'll just say I liked how the long format did a good job evoking the feel of a long journey in a very tangible way that I think a shorter poem would have trouble with.

SomethingNew
SomethingNew

@TurtleCat
Wh-
oh for fuck's sake.
Okay here's the incorrect bit from @Techpill
with amendment:

/vg/thread/198219685#p198233189

So I was going to jump down your throat for all the typos you made here, until I remembered that this is what typing with cold fingers looks like. Once I remembered that, it made it pretty easy to imagine the narrator typing this out while shivering from the cold described. Very clever and eye-catching.

Gah!

Techpill
Techpill

@SomethingNew

Author of /vg/thread/198219685#p198239328 there. I was tired out of my mind when I wrote it... It was supposed to speak about a monster that returns what you shout at it as mocking whispers that follow you around, inspired by my history with depression.

It rears its ugly head around all the time, I know everything it says about me is fake, but it still beats me down and drains my energy.

RumChicken
RumChicken

@eGremlin
I did not delete her I did naht

PurpleCharger
PurpleCharger

@takes2long
oldboy 2003

Dreamworx
Dreamworx

this game messed me up big time.

i havent even fapped in two days now.

TurtleCat
TurtleCat

@takes2long
Memes aside, Konosuba or Gintama

Lord_Tryzalot
Lord_Tryzalot

@takes2long
Who Killed Captain Alex (2010)

Inmate
Inmate

@takes2long
K-ON!

Fuzzy_Logic
Fuzzy_Logic

@takes2long
Hans Westmar (1933)

Gigastrength
Gigastrength

@BinaryMan
DANLET GET OUT RRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Burnblaze
Burnblaze

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AeQX_HIZI8w

Is there any reason to play this game a second time? That other ending doesn't seem worth the effort.

Sayori is the only one that will ever love you, Natsuki is going to tell everyone how much of a horrible person you are, and Yuri will literally kill herself before she would have sex with you.

WebTool
WebTool

@Dreamworx
Well, here's a question. Would you want to be able to fap after DDLC? Anybody sane would definitely need some time off right?

JunkTop
JunkTop

@Gigastrength
not falling for Natsuki! and wanting to protect that smile

ZeroReborn
ZeroReborn

@WebTool
i don't know anymore, user. i can't even close my eyes without hearing the menu theme.

eGremlin
eGremlin

@WebTool
lol xd monika
the game wasn't that good you cretins

Stark_Naked
Stark_Naked

@ZeroReborn
I once held hands with a girl.

FastChef
FastChef

@Stark_Naked
Why didn't you get married?

Fried_Sushi
Fried_Sushi

@FastChef
That's sadly not how it works.

BinaryMan
BinaryMan

@Fried_Sushi
It isn't? I've been trying to sneak handholds with a bunch of girls for nothing?

Methnerd
Methnerd

@haveahappyday
"Wow, where did you get those contacts? They look, ah... Cute."
You smile and shrug. "It's just something I wanted to try out!"
While you hang out together, you pull your hood up, complaining about the cold.
You stop talking when your voice starts cracking, and you both decide to head back to his house early.
"Look man, I'm sorry I made you go out, if you just told me you were sick-" You put your hand on his shoulder. You speak in a voice that isn't your own.
"It's alright, I got what I came for, ahaha!" Your hood falls back, letting your long hair pool out over your shoulders. You tackle him through his door and onto the floor.
Hours later, to Monikas search through the internet, looking for more prey for the collective.

Dreamworx
Dreamworx

@Dreamworx
@WebTool
I played it about a month ago and I can fap to the same stuff I used to, but it's much more intense and satisfying if I relax in bed or in my bathtub and think about Yuri.

Nude_Bikergirl
Nude_Bikergirl

@BinaryMan
yep, sorry.

Inmate
Inmate

@BinaryMan
Holding a girl's hand without consent
Absolutely degenerate

CodeBuns
CodeBuns

@Inmate
Hey, she'll wander off at eat peoples food if I left her to her devices

Fried_Sushi
Fried_Sushi

@Inmate
Are you one of those tards who scream for explicit permission everytime before you make an advance on a female?

Sir_Gallonhead
Sir_Gallonhead

@Fried_Sushi
Can't blame him seeing the SJW cult developping

Emberburn
Emberburn

@Sir_Gallonhead
spooky

eGremlin
eGremlin

@CodeBuns
Don't you just hate it when random stray girls walk up to you and take a bite out of your hamburger?

PurpleCharger
PurpleCharger

@eGremlin
Yeah, didn't their daddies teach them any manners? They should be whipped with a belt or something.

Illusionz
Illusionz

@eGremlin
Filth, they need to be domesticated or trained.

Stark_Naked
Stark_Naked

What would you do if Monika tawked wike this

SniperGod
SniperGod

Is it okay to give chocolate to stray Sayoris?

JunkTop
JunkTop

@Dreamworx
I'm still shaken up 3 days later and at night whenever I leave my room to go to the bathroom or get a snack, I can almost see Sayori hanging there whenever I peer into any of the rooms or turn a corner. Any time it pops into my head, I get chills up my spine in a way I've never felt in my life. I feel scared when I'm alone sometimes now. I never got post-KS depression when I played that, but this game messed me up big time.

Fuzzy_Logic
Fuzzy_Logic

@PurpleCharger
didn't their daddies teach them any manners?

My daddy taught us not to be ashamed of our burgers.

whereismyname
whereismyname

Daily reminder to give your loved Doki lots of love, food and attention.

Fried_Sushi
Fried_Sushi

@Stark_Naked
I would kiss her forehead gently, through my screen.

cum2soon
cum2soon

@Stark_Naked
Slap her and tell her I'll never love her if she keeps it up.

massdebater
massdebater

@Fuzzy_Logic
Arachne Sayori is too pure for this general. I need to learn to write so I can write an actual fic for them because the fic somebody else wrote was deleted.
@Inmate
I agree, even if it is the sole reason why I hate moths with a passion.

Stupidasole
Stupidasole

What would you do if Monika scrubbed all the floors in hyrule?

idontknow
idontknow

@whereismyname
Reminder to feed Natsuki anything and everything in your house

Gigastrength
Gigastrength

@Stupidasole
Kill your dumbass for asking stupid question

Techpill
Techpill

@Stark_Naked
kick her in the balls so she has a legitimate reason to talk like that

Fried_Sushi
Fried_Sushi

What would you do if Monika killed your dumbass for asking stupid questions

TreeEater
TreeEater

@Fried_Sushi
STOP

Snarelure
Snarelure

@Stupidasole
Forsake Monika.chr in CD-i hyrule
I no longer love her

Spazyfool
Spazyfool

@Stark_Naked
I tawt I taw an user

Methshot
Methshot

@Lord_Tryzalot
Who Killeda Captaina Alex?
AAAAAAAAAAAA

Stupidasole
Stupidasole

Monika but she's black and genderfluid

Supergrass
Supergrass

@Fried_Sushi
tell her there are no stupid question

Poker_Star
Poker_Star

@Stupidasole
tumblr pls go

RavySnake
RavySnake

Monika but she's a reverse trap who's aggresive in bed

Booteefool
Booteefool

@Firespawn
hey fuck you pal I'm a tinker main

Sir_Gallonhead
Sir_Gallonhead

user but he's a huge faggot.

Poker_Star
Poker_Star

@RavySnake
How do you reverse a trap?

DeathDog
DeathDog

@Methshot
MOVIE MOVIE MOVIE!!!! MOVIE!

Fuzzy_Logic
Fuzzy_Logic

@Poker_Star
Masculine female

Poker_Star
Poker_Star

Monika but she is a jew

Ignoramus
Ignoramus

@Sir_Gallonhead
nothing has changed

Garbage Can Lid
Garbage Can Lid

i hate this game because it presents you with such lovable characters and ends up killing them all without resolution.

VisualMaster
VisualMaster

@Garbage Can Lid
Did you play the golden ending?

massdebater
massdebater

@Garbage Can Lid
just like hotline miami 2

Techpill
Techpill

brb

Emberfire
Emberfire

@Booteefool
Maining heroes in dota
Have fun getting countered.

BinaryMan
BinaryMan

@Poker_Star
But she's already a jew

Sharpcharm
Sharpcharm

@BinaryMan
Jews aren't cute nor do they care about (You).

VisualMaster
VisualMaster

@Emberfire
well I'm not maining, but I like spamming a hero for 20-30 games
And if you play against a counter that's even better because you learn ways to play around them

Emberfire
Emberfire

@Sharpcharm
not cute
dont care about you
Check and check

Spazyfool
Spazyfool

@Emberfire
you take that back.

Soft_member
Soft_member

@Emberfire
Nigga please she tried to fix it in the end and her intentions were pure, her methods on the other hand were a bit clumsy.

Methshot
Methshot

@iluvmen
First time here at Veeky Forums but
I had a gf who had severe depression and playing this and I started to sense how heavily depressed sayori was since the first poem and my past has been haunting me for a good while now

I couldn't save her this time user.

TreeEater
TreeEater

@haveahappyday
I am kinda in the other direction, I relate to having passions far too strong for others to accommodate for, even as a child. Since shifted from dinosaurs to history, philosophy, religions, literature ect.

Tbh, I was considering the book rather than game option first, but as a huge Lovecraft fanatic I reckon that combining that with act 2 Yuri should stay forbidden fruit.

StrangeWizard
StrangeWizard

@Illusionz
Monika.

5mileys
5mileys

@StrangeWizard
Is

eGremlin
eGremlin

@5mileys
Hot

Evilember
Evilember

@eGremlin
Glued

Crazy_Nice
Crazy_Nice

@Spazyfool
Gawrsh she's so purty

Harmless_Venom
Harmless_Venom

@Evilember
To my heart
checkmate you pervert

Soft_member
Soft_member

@Evilember
bottom

Illusionz
Illusionz

@Harmless_Venom
That's not how it works

Lord_Tryzalot
Lord_Tryzalot

@Harmless_Venom
Putting monika.chr on your pacemaker

Soft_member
Soft_member

@AwesomeTucker
Will check out

whereismyname
whereismyname

@Soft_member
Jeans

Stark_Naked
Stark_Naked

@Harmless_Venom
One word at a time you stupid subhuman

Lunatick
Lunatick

@Lord_Tryzalot
Monika making sure your heart is oki doki

Dreamworx
Dreamworx

@Lunatick
Monika holding you hostage
Monika forcing you not to speak with other girls

Carnalpleasure
Carnalpleasure

@Dreamworx
You're okay with that

Dreamworx
Dreamworx

@Stark_Naked
I don't play by your rules.

PackManBrainlure
PackManBrainlure

How would Monika react if she found out I listen to Juicy J?

Carnalpleasure
Carnalpleasure

@Dreamworx
I don't see how that's a problem

SniperGod
SniperGod

@Dreamworx
break the rules
ayo fack da rooz

LuckyDusty
LuckyDusty

@whereismyname
boots

iluvmen
iluvmen

@SniperGod
Exactly.

Methshot
Methshot

Yuri hypnotizing Monika to try to get you to date her!

Carnalpleasure
Carnalpleasure

@VisualMaster
aww shit i expected all the characters to be there to give a proper send-off. but just sayori is fine, too.

Spazyfool
Spazyfool

@Methshot
I had a gf with bad depression too and it wore me down terribly. Never again will I be with someone like that.

massdebater
massdebater

@Carnalpleasure
Monika isn't dead, she's just incapable of creating a physical form and is able to watch the doki's enjoy their lives, and is ultimately happier than after and possibly before her epiphany, sayori has a reason to live, Yuri and Natsuki are supported by Sayori who now knows what they're going through

VisualMaster
VisualMaster

@massdebater
too bad we dont get to see natsuki, yuri, and monika for the last time, though.

Lunatick
Lunatick

@SniperGod
Yes.

RumChicken
RumChicken

@Lunatick
poisoning Dogyori

Burnblaze
Burnblaze

@Methshot
@Spazyfool
Been there too m8, shitty thing is Sayori was actually worth smile protecting...

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

@Spazyfool
Same but seeing someone slowly and silently die inside, again, hurt a lot
Luckily current gf is basically a larger, not so tsundere Natsuki who's problems can be dealt with a 5 minute phone call every now and then instead of dropping everything and taking 2 hours of public transport

Inmate
Inmate

/vg/thread/198305196#p198332616

Of course, user. I would love to.

BunnyJinx
BunnyJinx

@RumChicken
F-f-fuck ;-;

Playboyize
Playboyize

@Spamalot
I

likme
likme

@Playboyize
Succ

Raving_Cute
Raving_Cute

@Burnblaze
Sayori is great but knowing how hard it is being with someone depressed I wouldn't try

@haveahappyday
That's good user hope all goes well for you. You won't have to worry about late night calls from your gf telling you she's going to kill herself

Ignoramus
Ignoramus

tfw can't beat Monika at chess
I keep trying and trying but I always make some dumb mistake after getting kinda close to winning.

happy_sad
happy_sad

@Fuzzy_Logic
feeling
imagine
kill

you end up charming Yuri
Monika immediately delets gaym because you mention her and mommy

Burnblaze
Burnblaze

@BunnyJinx
sayori is kill becaus you

idontknow
idontknow

This wouldn't stop showing up in my fucking youtube recommendation box so I did the only thing I could do

TreeEater
TreeEater

@Raving_Cute
She's just a fat gf (with some Natsuki like qualities) I'm just helping her get back on track
She sleeps early
Goes to the gym
And happy about losing weight and spending time with me
and most importantly no more driving me into depression and self harm

askme
askme

@Burnblaze
Fug I'm a newfag and I didn't know I about doggyori ;-;

Stupidasole
Stupidasole

@likme
papa maybe I succ
L-lewd

hairygrape
hairygrape

@idontknow
TJ "Sayori" Yoshi is really depressing and naïve

Fried_Sushi
Fried_Sushi

@Stupidasole
Don't act like it's not canon

SniperGod
SniperGod

@Fried_Sushi

its not canon

Evil_kitten
Evil_kitten

Natsuki but she's 12 and alone with her dad

Ignoramus
Ignoramus

@Fried_Sushi
I never said it wasn't
It's lewd though

massdebater
massdebater

@Evil_kitten
See @Stupidasole

Carnalpleasure
Carnalpleasure

@TurtleCat
Doing God's work user!

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

@Evil_kitten
Perplexing how there is still no fanart of Natsuki benig savagely beaten by her dad

cum2soon
cum2soon

@Burnblaze
Sayori is the only one that will love you
I don't see the problem

WebTool
WebTool

@Burnblaze
You mean love the generic protagonist and not (You)

massdebater
massdebater

@SomethingNew
"Destination"

Twisting trail,
Endless journey,
Leaving us frail,
Proving us worthy.

Some filled with empathy,
Some filled with rage,
Like a fiery beast,
It streaks across the sky,

All lead differently,
All mellow with age,
A tragedy when it is ceased,
Purpose of none quite sure why.

Unlimited choices,
Preordained ending,
Familiar direction,
With unceasing flection,
Some staying, attending,
Their trail with them spending.

Some stay,
Some go,
This path we all follow,

Some stray,
Some throw,
For them it is hollow.

This twisting trail,
The one we call life,
This one we unveil,
Until we do die.

A journey never finished,
But rather a trail is extinguished.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
i can end my own journey if i ever make a poem i'm entirely happy with

but after a lot of work, this one comes really close.

(poem)

Burnblaze
Burnblaze

@haveahappyday
Confounding how there is still no fanart of Natsuki's dad being furiously beaten off by her

VisualMaster
VisualMaster

@haveahappyday
I'm glad there isn't

Skullbone
Skullbone

@VisualMaster
Brb, gonna draw some Natsuki fanart

SniperGod
SniperGod

@Skullbone
You can barely draw stick figures tho

Stupidasole
Stupidasole

@SniperGod
How would you know?

Deadlyinx
Deadlyinx

@GoogleCat
Do what sayori did
eat a cookie and be very happy about it

Evilember
Evilember

@Stupidasole
You would post one of your drawings to prove me wrong

CodeBuns
CodeBuns

@Evilember
Yeah. But I'm at the same level of those awkward deviantart drawing where its obvious they dont have a technique so they just draw stuff based on "what they think looks good" and it ends up wonky and awkward looking but hey, we all gotta start somewhere

Harmless_Venom
Harmless_Venom

@CodeBuns
That's ok I'm just starting so everything looks better than my drawings but I won't respect you if you draw Natsuki getting beaten

Methshot
Methshot

@hairygrape
Thanks for the advice and yeah dialogue can be hard for me to get down what I feel should be said

Illusionz
Illusionz

@CodeBuns
HAMPTON, LOOMIS, BRIDGMAN, VILPPU, JEFF WATTS
FEEL THE FORM

>tfw going through a part in a portrait course that's horrible and shite

Need_TLC
Need_TLC

@Nojokur
I love her too

Nude_Bikergirl
Nude_Bikergirl

@VisualMaster
Just for you, user

Soft_member
Soft_member

@Nude_Bikergirl
Sorry but this isn't fanart, it's just Natsuki face pasted in a shitty meme. Try again

TreeEater
TreeEater

I just want a happy ending with Sayori

Burnblaze
Burnblaze

@Firespawn
qt
3d
Pick one

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

@TreeEater
Part of me wishes it were a normal visual novel but if it was it wouldn't have gotten nearly as popular.

Techpill
Techpill

@Burnblaze
Lay off fapping and porn for a month and 3d will be VERY qt

w8t4u
w8t4u

@Techpill
Fuck outta here, normalfagerino.

askme
askme

@haveahappyday
I'm glad it wasn't a normal one because then the girls wouldn't have been so endearing. The only thing I wish is that there would have been a hidden ending where you somehow break the code and turn it into a semi normal vn.

ZeroReborn
ZeroReborn

@Bidwell
Idk man I have only ever kissed my mom and that's like 15 years ago.

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

@w8t4u
No! I want to better myself! I want to be normal again, is that too much to ask? I'll give it my all. I'll defeat these fetishes. I won't let this addiction dictate my life!

Sharpcharm
Sharpcharm

Ideas for drawfags:
Sayori decorating for Christmas
Natsuki finger painting
Yuri ordering a hot dog
Monika pouring milk for cereal
Sayori blowing bubbles
Natsuki putting coins into a piggy bank
Yuri tidying the living room
Monika with an USB port in her forehead
Sayori chrome painting her teeth
Natsuki flying a kite
Yuri writing down currency conversion rates
Monika watching YouTube videos of russian dash cams
Sayori licking a finger before turning the page
Natsuki can't decide between two brands of shoe wax
Yuri holding a pencil between her nose and upper lip
Monika locking the door before leaving
Sayori making orca sounds
Natsuki grating cheese
Yuri grating cheese
Monika picking up a baseball bat and thinking "I remember playing baseball with my dad when I was little"
Sayori writing animal names on sticky notes
Natsuki pretends to smoke a joint but it's just a pen
Yuri forgot her debit card PIN
Monika checking her e-mail
Sayori not understanding Death Grips
Natsuki watching a plane take off
Yuri has trouble setting up Steam Guard
Monika yawning
Sayori dusting off an old book
Natsuki reading about the stock market
Yuri spitting on the sidewalk
Monika counting bricks on the side of the road

If you need any more let me know.

Flameblow
Flameblow

@haveahappyday
Gay

SniperWish
SniperWish

@Flameblow
No. It's true. Porn addiction is a one-way ticket to permavirgin

DeathDog
DeathDog

@Sharpcharm
Why do i find these really odd?

Evil_kitten
Evil_kitten

@Sharpcharm
Sayori chrome painting her teeth
What

iluvmen
iluvmen

@SniperWish
There's a big difference between jerking off sometimes and looking at porn all day

Emberfire
Emberfire

@Sharpcharm
These are great user, I'll save these for later, thanks

Burnblaze
Burnblaze

@iluvmen
I know. But the stuff you look at has an impact. Sexuality is fluid, and sometimes, cold hard abstinence coupled with self discipline when they begin masturbating again can help a lot on someones sexual health.

SniperGod
SniperGod

@Sir_Gallonhead
@iluvmen
That's not what's keeping me up

AwesomeTucker
AwesomeTucker

@Techpill
hey who left this bowl of onions here

lostmypassword
lostmypassword

@SniperGod
It's the dick up your ass isn't it?

DeathDog
DeathDog

@lostmypassword
Sure user. Sure

TechHater
TechHater

@DeathDog
What do you mean? They're just normal, everyday activities for our favorite girls. Here's some more:
Sayori counting cows on a road trip
Natsuki selecting trucks for captcha
Yuri put too much ketchup on her burger
Monika standing next to a cup of tea, holding a stopwatch
Sayori rearranging her room for better feng-shui
Natsuki ripping off the label of a juice bottle for the puzzle on the back
Yuri applying for a logistics job
Monika enjoying a Monty Python sketch
Sayori tripping over an ethernet cable
Natsuki watching MTV
Yuri doing gangster hand signs
Monika remembering that England has a queen
Sayori scratching her head
Natsuki petting a penguin at the zoo
Yuri listening to 2pac
Monika doing morning stretches
Sayori adjusting the brightness on her phone
Natsuki looking up song lyrics
Yuri finding klansman outfits aesthetic
Monika thanking a police officer
Sayori complaining that her legs hurt from walking
Natsuki thinking how hard would it be to get a drivers licence
Yuri skipping stones
Monika feeling guilty because she forgot to put a cup in the recycling bin instead of a normal trashcan

idontknow
idontknow

@TechHater
Yuri put too many cuts in her arm and is bleeding out

takes2long
takes2long

@RumChicken
HEY MORTY! I TURNED MYSELF INTO BEST GIRL MORTY. I'M PICKLE YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYUYYYYYYYYYYYYYYUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!

SniperGod
SniperGod

@TechHater
fugg i wish i was still a drawfag, these are fantastic ideas

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

@SniperGod
Why not start again?

RumChicken
RumChicken

@takes2long
never post this again you vile vile man

idontknow
idontknow

@takes2long
Hahaha! Wubba lubba literature club!

Flameblow
Flameblow

Wait a second
I am dumb and depressed as fuck, with brown hair and a below average height
My two closest friends are a person who is tall, cuts themself, and enjoys books, and someone who is short, pink haired, and enjoys cute things

SniperWish
SniperWish

@Flameblow
Don't kill yourself

LuckyDusty
LuckyDusty

@Flameblow
H.. Haha m.. Manlet

TechHater
TechHater

@Flameblow
Is this a meme?

kizzmybutt
kizzmybutt

@haveahappyday
eh, i think i just got enthralled with other art that im much better at, music and writing primarily. I used to draw tons when i was a younger lad, but i suppose i grew into other mediums.

Burnblaze
Burnblaze

@Harmless_Venom
I want to fuck Wendy so bad.
Not the person behind the twitter account, and definitely not Dave Thomas' daughter. Just Wendy.

Supergrass
Supergrass

I want to feed Yuri three bowls of bran flakes.

lostmypassword
lostmypassword

@Supergrass
You have to eat all the eggs

Gigastrength
Gigastrength

@Supergrass
What a nice cereal box

TurtleCat
TurtleCat

@Flameblow
Make sure to get a proper ladder.

cum2soon
cum2soon

@Supergrass
At once?

kizzmybutt
kizzmybutt

@kizzmybutt
I see. It's just how you said "I wish" it sounded like you wanted to do it again

Methshot
Methshot

@Flameblow
you are the irl r63 of the literature club

Inmate
Inmate

@TechHater
Monika feeling guilty because she forgot to put a cup in the recycling bin instead of a normal trashcan
Monika feeling guilty for forgetting to wrap the broken glass in her trash
Yuri enjoying whermacht aesthetic
Natsuki wondering how she can rig up stilts to reach the gas pedals
Sayori trying to master Kahl Method
Yuri getting uncomfortably warm when she spills a bottle of ketchup
Natsuki saluting Grape-kun
Monika doing morning stretches but in front of you and slower than acceptable in some countries
>Being unable to stretch in the morning or your legs decide to shred themselves up and ruin the rest of the day
Fuck

Yuri not knowing which coast has which gangs
Natsuki remembering when MTV had music and was on tv
Sayoris earphones catching on doorknobs and the hooks on electric fans
>FUCK
Monika asking you what british food tastes like
Monika being disappointed
Yuri listening to biggie
Natsuki singing the song lyrics as she heard them and getting embarrassed when corrected
Monika... Checking to see how fast tea stops steaming? I guess?
Yuri throwing stones at minorities to fit her klansmen aesthetic
Their wrapped in foam so it's fine

kizzmybutt
kizzmybutt

@Methshot
They're grills

Deadlyinx
Deadlyinx

@Flameblow
post feet

TreeEater
TreeEater

Monika's cheeks on her face you perverts look so puffy and cute, I wanna squeeze them and kiss them and munch on them.

TurtleCat
TurtleCat

@Supergrass
Do you want her to shit logs or something?

w8t4u
w8t4u

Reminder that Yuri works for Monika

WebTool
WebTool

@TurtleCat
not wanting yuri to shit logs in your mouth

StonedTime
StonedTime

@TreeEater
This. But Monika's dick.

SomethingNew
SomethingNew

@lostmypassword
No. Bran flakes.
@Gigastrength
Nicer when she eats all what's inside
@cum2soon
Hopefully yes. Good soluble fiber intake for Yuri makes my heart race.
@TurtleCat
I want her to have soluble fiber.

PackManBrainlure
PackManBrainlure

@kizzmybutt
ohoho, if i had the time i would go back to it in a heartbeat. unfortunately duty calls, and i gotta divvy up my primary passions. sad state, but atleast i still have writing.

New_Cliche
New_Cliche

@SomethingNew
Where are the banana slices you god forsaken savage, why not just dump the wheat and bran out of the harvester into her fucking mouth?

5mileys
5mileys

@TechHater
No jest.

VisualMaster
VisualMaster

@SomethingNew
I'd be more worried about her calcium since she drinks so much tea

TurtleCat
TurtleCat

@VisualMaster
I'd be more worried about her mental health since shes a nutter cutter

VisualMaster
VisualMaster

@Flameblow
Also i just remember we met each other via a club

Skullbone
Skullbone

@VisualMaster
Don't.
Kill.
Yourself.

GoogleCat
GoogleCat

@VisualMaster
Pics or no one will believe you, it just sounds like bait to me

Bidwell
Bidwell

Inspecting Monika's dental profile with your tongue!

CouchChiller
CouchChiller

@VisualMaster
Post back of knees

AwesomeTucker
AwesomeTucker

@Bidwell
Is this lewd posting time?
I hope so

hairygrape
hairygrape

@SomethingNew
What @WebTool
said. If it keeps happening and is a real issue, you might want to consider using trips

eGremlin
eGremlin

@AwesomeTucker
Only if your lewd is fueled purely by your love towards your doki and not just lust.

Fuzzy_Logic
Fuzzy_Logic

@Flameblow
Women who dye their hair in weird colors
Avoid like the plague

LuckyDusty
LuckyDusty

@DeathDog
Is there a normal version of this image? I like the constrast.

Soft_member
Soft_member

@Fuzzy_Logic
when will we get natural pink/purple/blue/etc. hair IRL

w8t4u
w8t4u

@LuckyDusty
No. No there isn't.

FastChef
FastChef

@girlDog
@w8t4u
THE DUALITY OF MAN

ZeroReborn
ZeroReborn

@hairygrape
I hate doing it myself but I believe doing it can help. Even if it's just so I can be uniquely identified every once in a time. I lurk more than I post but that's because most of this general is filled with degenerate and just plain weird crap. I'm happy it's not dying though.

Stark_Naked
Stark_Naked

@SniperWish
I can't believe I came to /ddlc/ specifically to make pregnancy shitposts only to find the place is filled with them. Truly god works in mysterious ways.

Flameblow
Flameblow

@Flameblow
Haylee, what are you doing on /ddlc/?

I'll shit myself a little if that's your name because all this evidence is lining you up to be someone I know.

StonedTime
StonedTime

@SomethingNew
trips may very well be what you need. It is very much a necessary evil as another user stated, but it'll keep your identity secured. i just hope it doesnt turn /ddlc/ into a tripthread, thats what became of ks/b/ some time ago.

RumChicken
RumChicken

@ZeroReborn
@Flameblow
@StonedTime
Can you faggots stop putting shit in spoiler? I want to read a thread, not a fucking FBI document.

TalkBomber
TalkBomber

@RumChicken
Fuck you.

WebTool
WebTool

@RumChicken
But what if we just want to have some fun, user? Are you accusing us of literally spoiling your fun?

TurtleCat
TurtleCat

@RumChicken
Inb4 a bunch of replies in spoiler

PurpleCharger
PurpleCharger

@RumChicken
[redacted]

LuckyDusty
LuckyDusty

@RumChicken
Eh. It's not that relevant to the main discussion. So no. :^)

FastChef
FastChef

@RumChicken
Kill yourself

StrangeWizard
StrangeWizard

@eGremlin
I can enjoy only pure lewds from the heart, not benis

Stark_Naked
Stark_Naked

@RumChicken
not putting links in your spoilers to fuck phonefags

Harmless_Venom
Harmless_Venom

Act 2 Yuri but she's raping Act 1 Yuri

Inmate
Inmate

@RumChicken
boskeletonrp

Lord_Tryzalot
Lord_Tryzalot

@Harmless_Venom
yuri x yuri yuri best yuri yuri

cum2soon
cum2soon

@Lord_Tryzalot
does it even count as yuri if it's selfcest

Flameblow
Flameblow

I had something for lunch that wasn't just a bowl rice and two eggs!
I found I had a can of tomato soup, so I had that, and some toast.
So that was nice change I guess.
I know it's pointless blogposting, but posting my little "victories" here feels nice.

Harmless_Venom
Harmless_Venom

@Lord_Tryzalot
Has anybody written or drawn this yet?

happy_sad
happy_sad

@cum2soon

thats like asking if jacking off is gay because you're getting a handjob from a guy.

obviously it is

PackManBrainlure
PackManBrainlure

@cum2soon
Is twins having sex together selfcest?

FastChef
FastChef

@ZeroReborn
Recently I ended up having mpreg phone sex with a dude and have been questioning my existence. I've been trying to figure out some way I can reason that I'm still straight and I'm pretty convinced but

SniperGod
SniperGod

@FastChef
Go away.

RumChicken
RumChicken

@RumChicken
get fukd nigger

PurpleCharger
PurpleCharger

@FastChef
I mean if you're a faggot embrace it bro. You might be a 2-3 on the kinsey scale, w/e you're even more of a faggot if you try to deny it

Lunatick
Lunatick

@FastChef
renouncement

Deadlyinx
Deadlyinx

@RumChicken
suck shit nigger bitch

Methnerd
Methnerd

@FastChef
I dont get it. Whats so gay about pasta sauces? Is it because of italians?

GoogleCat
GoogleCat

@Methnerd

yes

lostmypassword
lostmypassword

@Deadlyinx
that's pretty mean. You know redacted has feelings too, right?

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

When are this threads peek hours? Include timezone pls

Playboyize
Playboyize

I don't even know what we're talking about anymore.

Methshot
Methshot

Question /ddlc/

When you cut, do you cut with the tip of your knife or do you cut by dragging a sharp blade? Or do you not even use a knife at all and prefer razor blades etc?

I think razor blades are way too ragged and I prefer my knives, and I cut with the tip of the knife. Do you think it's better to cut with the blade?

girlDog
girlDog

@Methshot
Quit being a retard

5mileys
5mileys

@Methshot
I don't cut because I'm not a freak.

TreeEater
TreeEater

@Methshot
Do you really cut?

RumChicken
RumChicken

@Methshot
I cut using wind slashes that I shoot with my katana.

GoogleCat
GoogleCat

@Methshot
Depends on the cut I'm going to assume you're talking about cutting things that aren't yourself.

Lunatick
Lunatick

@Methshot
Please don't cut, similarly to smoking it makes you addicted to it, meaning when you aren't cutting, you feel worse, meaning long term you are more unhappy

viagrandad
viagrandad

@Methshot
well typically i like to press the knife down evenly with both hands down onto whatever vegetable, I do one-handed chops for things like onions and I'll really jam it in for things like a watermelon or pumpkin (halloween)

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

@Methshot
I don't cut, I've found it too physically difficult.
Although the few when I did manage it I found it much easier with the blade edge of a razor.
I don't get what you mean by ragged though, the blades I used were much smoother and cleaner than my knives.
Either way, I burn instead.

CodeBuns
CodeBuns

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Spamalot
Spamalot

Would anyone play through a mod if it were retranscribed to remove Engrish or fucky spelling / grammar? Been planning on relearning Ren Py and Python.

SomethingNew
SomethingNew

@lostmypassword
shit man ur right i fully apoligze to redacted

5mileys
5mileys

@Nude_Bikergirl
Your reality
Is full of incredibly cute girls!

kizzmybutt
kizzmybutt

I've cut myself with a razor blade on accident once. My dad uses razor blades to remove pen writing from paper, which has always blown my mind. So one time (this was rather recently, mind you) I come check out what he's doing and I'm like oh look, a razor blade. I pick it up and for whatever reason press it against my wrist. But I underestimated how sharp is it and a small cut appeared, despite me not feeling anything.

Dad just laughs and says, should have cut downwards instead

BlogWobbles
BlogWobbles

@Flameblow
Nah

I've actually gotten my friends into ddlc so I'm curious if they'll make the connections too

idontknow
idontknow

@Methshot
when you cut
do you not even use a knife at all and prefer razor blades
I prefer blades and cutting in

DeathDog
DeathDog

Does anyone have an angry buffsuki?

TurtleCat
TurtleCat

@Methshot
dragged across skin, definately. cutting is retarded and i try to limit myself as much as i can, but in a split second im right back onto it.

Firespawn
Firespawn

I need more yuri fanfics and stories, bonus points for lewdness!
p-please

SomethingNew
SomethingNew

@Techpill
I'm sorry I couldn't save you Sayori. But I'll make sure I do this time.

Emberburn
Emberburn

@Emberburn
i wouldn't push her of the bed

whereismyname
whereismyname

Sayori but her head is made of wood and her face is being sandpapered away

Evilember
Evilember

@whereismyname
But if I love her hard enough, she'll become a real bo... Girl

TechHater
TechHater

@whereismyname
She just needed a little bit of polishing to remove a spot! After just a bit of sanding her face will be all smooth and touchable and cute.

Lord_Tryzalot
Lord_Tryzalot

Sayori but she's really trying to get you to break up with her because she thinks you'll be better off with one of the other Dokis

iluvmen
iluvmen

@TechHater
Sayori mistook her nose for a spot! Now Sayori can't breathe!

AwesomeTucker
AwesomeTucker

@iluvmen
sensory deprivation with sayori

CodeBuns
CodeBuns

@Methshot
Best answer is don't. It's a waste of time and makes you much much worse than anyone would've want
You just end up wearing long sleeved shit and not wanting to go anywhere
Your question is dumb and I'd normally say kys and mean kill yourself but this time I say kys and mean keep yourself safe.

Kys, fag.

also I can't find the worse shit I did
I still have a faint scar saying "fuck you" across both arms

I regret it all. Especially the summer I stayed inside clutching myself

SomethingNew
SomethingNew

@Techpill
there is a way to sort of save all of them. there is a guide and it works. this game is bothering the shit out of me. i got the good ending but still.

Booteefool
Booteefool

@SomethingNew
There isn't. I'm sorry, user.
But if you feel up to tweaking the rules of the game like Monika did, you can potentially do something.

TurtleCat
TurtleCat

@ZeroReborn
I'm a 19 y/o KHHV, I think it's safe to say it isn't going at all.

Crazy_Nice
Crazy_Nice

@whereismyname
use my non existent drawfag skills to paint her face back on
perfect.

Lunatick
Lunatick

I'm currently in the middle of some drama. What do you think would make Sayori proud, standing up to it or laughing at it from afar?

Spazyfool
Spazyfool

@Lunatick
Standing up? She doesn't enjoy seeing people fighting.

Gigastrength
Gigastrength

Well fuck, these were some intense 6 hours

Harmless_Venom
Harmless_Venom

@Spazyfool
Well it's more of me being targeted because someone is a spiteful little child twisting things than a real fight, to be fair.

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