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Fried_Sushi
Fried_Sushi

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I live in good ol Cali. Weathers great as long as it's not currently a drought. Cost of living is ridic tho. I was like MN.... lands pretty cheap and there are jobs there.... but nah. Cold n shit and things fell apart with a long distance thing with a person from there and I got a job here so all motivation to move there kinda fell through.

viagrandad
viagrandad

@Fried_Sushi
Ugh. Good job, user. We could have just let this fall off the board and make another not tainted by Tok.

RumChicken
RumChicken

@viagrandad
What, you think he won't show up just cause he's not at the top?

Illusionz
Illusionz

@RumChicken
Less Tok is always good. He's a disease, user.

takes2long
takes2long

@LuckyDusty
What if I want the last one to succeed?

Snarelure
Snarelure

@Illusionz
Less Tok is always good.
Les Tok is always good.
Yes Tok is always good.
Ok, this need more Tok.

Flameblow
Flameblow

Image testing part of this to see how it displays on Veeky Forums, because it's a pain to do and I want to make sure it's worth it.

No offense to the user who stiched the four images together! You gave me the idea. I just think I can do a more readable version working from the original files.

ZeroReborn
ZeroReborn

@takes2long
Kamidere is fun, when it's a cute girl.
I'd help her become ass god.

@Illusionz
Made me think of this.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2e3-c_0WJgo

massdebater
massdebater

@VisualMaster
I want to scribble all over this just to piss you off, but then I realized even putting in that much effort to upset you is a waste of time.

PackManBrainlure
PackManBrainlure

@massdebater
Yeah, don't waste the time and effort.

Skullbone
Skullbone

@massdebater
and yet you put the effort into this message...

CouchChiller
CouchChiller

@kizzmybutt
@viagrandad
@Illusionz
I for one have begun to ironically worship TokHaar Gol.

He is the salvation of /cyoag/. This is because he understands humanity's future in femdom and waifu.

TechHater
TechHater

Who makes the best cyoa in terms of aesthetics? Can someone post examples?

Stupidasole
Stupidasole

@CouchChiller
femdom? Have you read any of his stuff? It's 90 rapey.

Lunatick
Lunatick

@Stupidasole
90%*

farquit
farquit

@CouchChiller
femdom
waifu
Not surprised you would follow Tok. You're just as degenerate as him.
@eGremlin
@Fried_Sushi
@King_Martha
@Inmate
@Firespawn
@ZeroReborn
These should be posted on /trash/ regardless of censorship. Lewd CYOAs have a separate thread. Stop trying to draw attention to yourself and go back to where you belong.

5mileys
5mileys

@CouchChiller
He is the salvation of /cyoag/
When were you under the impression that our Lord & Savior isn't based Italics-chan.

lostmypassword
lostmypassword

@Stupidasole
He does not do femdom, he does rape
pic related

@CouchChiller
Tok is the salvation of /cyoag/. This is because he understands humanity's future in femdom and waifu.
I am the future of /cyoag/.

@massdebater
This @Skullbone

kizzmybutt
kizzmybutt

@farquit
The funny thing is, he's barely posting on /trash/ right now.

Burnblaze
Burnblaze

@TechHater
good

@CouchChiller
this@Stupidasole
Enslaved is his only cyoa that's kind of okay for femdomfags

Emberfire
Emberfire

@lostmypassword
I said 90%. that's the other 10%. Didn't say you never did it, it's just painfully obvious that that's not your focus.

BlogWobbles
BlogWobbles

@TechHater
SDA, probably, though sometimes I think his stuff can look a little cluttered.

eGremlin
eGremlin

@Emberburn

@Emberfire
So what about Super Prison, Prisoner mode? @eGremlin

BinaryMan
BinaryMan

@Burnblaze
@TechHater
bad

FastChef
FastChef

@BlogWobbles
SDA
His

Lololol

MPmaster
MPmaster

@Emberfire
@Burnblaze
@Stupidasole
MUW is also a good femdom CYOA.

girlDog
girlDog

@TechHater
Aesthetics in terms of the page graphics or the
'world feeling'? For the latter, I rather like Liminal Phrenic. He's probably dead now, though.

@farquit
femdom
waifu
Not surprised
You shouldn't be. Ever since slavery and rape became illegal, humanity is locked into a femdom future. Get your pussy worship skills ready.

@Stupidasole
rapey
Ahh, sweet balance.

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

@kizzmybutt
Because he can't namefag, user. The only reason Tok is still here is because he went full blown autistic on reddit and isn't welcome there.

5mileys
5mileys

@kizzmybutt
Whoa, that's some heavy shit, bro. Sweet ass powers, man.
Gonna have to, like, turn you down, though.

See, I'd take, "You're the Hero," and that would probably, you know, make gnarly swell of good vibes. That's, like, the opposite of what you asked for. So I can't really help you, dude.
But seriously, man, thanks thinking of me.
It's totally cool.

RavySnake
RavySnake

@BinaryMan
@TechHater
good

@eGremlin
Don't know how to describe it but prisoner mode didn't feel like a femdom cyoa. It was more like humiliation/degradation cyoa

BunnyJinx
BunnyJinx

@girlDog
Aethetics in terms of graphics in order to make a nice looking cyoa. Asking for a friend, of course...

Supergrass
Supergrass

@TechHater
SDA for graphics and Italics for world building.

5mileys
5mileys

@Supergrass
old sda, new one looks plastic af

Burnblaze
Burnblaze

@LuckyDusty
tfw I join the last one and we become gods together in addition to my gov't retirement plan

checkmate waifu cyoa

DeathDog
DeathDog

@MPmaster
Nah. I use it to make cute submissive sluts with odd quirks that I tease them about.

Fuzzy_Logic
Fuzzy_Logic

@VisualMaster
Needs more modern heroes. Like a magical girl heroine, or something similar. Or a harem protagonist.

Illusionz
Illusionz

@Supergrass
Italics for world building
Nah I just make a list of ideas and then try to shove them into one box to make them fit. Pic semi-related.

Send help. This cyoa is fucking killing me and I underestimated the amount of work for it.

King_Martha
King_Martha

@Inmate
There should be a list of infamous villains and famous heroes to be prisoners/guards.

girlDog
girlDog

@Supergrass
@5mileys
I don't actually like SDA's work. It feels too generic to me. Too expected images/plotlines/abilities.

I would vote Solar Inheritance for a good example, though the background is a little dark.

SI has a Dune feel, but a lot of different angles to approach it. Original Power Armor CYOA as well.

Snarelure
Snarelure

Okay, official one page version of Mentor/Lover/Friend/Rival 1.1

Nothing exciting or new, sorry. Just a quality of life convenience. Text is small but very readable if your screen is large enough for it to expand fully. Phone users will probably want to stick to the original images.

Need_TLC
Need_TLC

I'm searching for a picture-less Bionicle CYOA. None of the ones I find on reddit is that specific one.

Raving_Cute
Raving_Cute

@Snarelure
Whatever would I do with 10.000 Skavenslaves and 100 screaming bells and Doomwheels?

Sir_Gallonhead
Sir_Gallonhead

@Firespawn
Body - Futa

Sorcerer
Transform 2
Charm
Enslave
Time Stop
Erase Memory

Artifacts
Scrying Orb
Grimoire - Porn Physics

Basically use the scrying orb to check on a victim. Once the person is in a safe place, stop time and enslave. I'll have my fun, wipe memories of the occurrence, "free" them and unfreeze time. Porn physics and charm are to make time freeze sex romps more emotionally "genuine" while transformation should be self explanatory for use.

girlDog
girlDog

@Raving_Cute
Whatever would I do
Become the secret protagonist that unexpectedly wins in the end.

BinaryMan
BinaryMan

@Snarelure
Shit. Expanding file size bug upon download. Let's try this one.

Stupidasole
Stupidasole

@BinaryMan
Okay, that one expands too but stays within 8MB upon download. Good enough.

Lord_Tryzalot
Lord_Tryzalot

@Stupidasole
All JPGs will on Veeky Forums. I don't know if it happens with other filetypes.

happy_sad
happy_sad

@Lord_Tryzalot
Yeah. Originals are PNGs but I can't get the combined PNG small enough, unfortunately.

WebTool
WebTool

@Illusionz
I want to add more to this CYOA
I think I can add even more
I want to DOUBLE the size of the CYOA
Help guys I'm retarded
Some people can't be helped.

BlogWobbles
BlogWobbles

@Illusionz
Just answer me one thing. Is it even close to release? Like are you willing to say fuck it and putting it out with less content than you originally planned to release it sooner? Cuz at this point I wouldn't mind it at all.

kizzmybutt
kizzmybutt

@Illusionz
I love your shit, dude. iv'e always been a faggot for lore heavy works, and I love how you make the person playing feel like A chosen one, not THE chosen one. makes it feel more authentic, in a way.
Also don't needlessly rush yourself. Take your time and go about it at your own pace.

PackManBrainlure
PackManBrainlure

@WebTool
PC is balanced
PC is not overpowered
Is this made by a filthy console peasant? Look at this pic it is a perfect reflection of reality.

SniperGod
SniperGod

Post snek

BlogWobbles
BlogWobbles

@BinaryMan
The only thing that ruins this for me is the mary sue anti-mage black chick.

VisualMaster
VisualMaster

@WebTool
Fair point.

@BlogWobbles
Is it even close to release.
I just need to finish the remaining companions and type up the quests (events) and then make the cyoa in photoshop.

Like are you willing to say fuck it and putting it out with less content than your originally planned to release it sooner?
I really want to make this the last update to Pokemon Personified because I don't want to do an update to Ultra Sun and Moon and want to do lots of new OC. So I'm not going to remove content.

iluvmen
iluvmen

@PackManBrainlure
PC is balanced
PC is not overpowered
Is this made by a filthy console peasant? Look at this pic it is a perfect reflection of reality.
While I mostly agree, I'm not quite sure Apple Heathens ARE above Console Peasants.

While sure, the Macintosh can do somewhat more than lick the foot of DLC manufacture, users are still enslaved to Apple's whims and faux-trendiness.

Techpill
Techpill

@BlogWobbles
Why do you consider her a mary sue? Serious question, because I don't see it myself in the description. I think you may be overestimating the power of her gauntlet. Just because it can sunder magic thrown at her, doesn't mean it can stop a rock that magic throws at her. She's also shit in combat, compared to most others.

Regardless, I hope you can just ignore her entry if it's a problem for you.

FastChef
FastChef

@Techpill
Why do you consider her a mary sue?
Anti-magic characters usually end up that way. It tends to be silly to have a character who is simply defined as "awesome against all magic".
Consider the modern day equivalent: "anti-science character awesome against everything from hackers to nukes"

See? Pretty easily becomes edgy mary-sue.

StrangeWizard
StrangeWizard

Tok when are you going to make more lewd?

Nude_Bikergirl
Nude_Bikergirl

@Illusionz
I have one question.
Will it rely on really weird game mechanics?
Because that's my biggest turn off to your CYOA's.
It's really off putting to your cyoa. If your stuff was a legeit vidya it would make sense but it's a cyoa it doesn't really make sense for it to rely so heavily on game mechanics. Unless you find a more organic way to bridge the mechanics into the lore I really can't make heads or tails of how combat in that setting works.

Harmless_Venom
Harmless_Venom

@Techpill
The text outright states that she beats every mage

I can see why he's annoyed

Spamalot
Spamalot

@Illusionz
Holy shit I love you italics pls don't die again

askme
askme

@StrangeWizard
Don't you fucking ask him that

Get out

TechHater
TechHater

@FastChef
@Harmless_Venom
The text outright states that she beats every mage
I would prefer something like "anti-illusion character", ex. trained to see through deception and mind magic.

As opposed to doing that AND swatting fireballs out of the sky AND casually cutting druid vines, etc.

eGremlin
eGremlin

@FastChef
@Harmless_Venom
With respect to both of you, again, I think you are reading far more into the description than is actually stated by the words.

If not caught unawares, no one can defeat her with magic directly.
Is what the words actually say. Any archmage that can't get around that is not worthy to be an archmage. Because you can either:
A. Get the hell out of there, and then surprise attack her, or more likely:
B. Defeat her with magic *in*directly.

What her gauntlet does is stop you from overpowering her with bigger spells because you are the baddestmage4ever. Use a bit of creativity. Like I said: throw a rock at her for goodness sake, if nothing else.

Fuzzy_Logic
Fuzzy_Logic

@askme
But I want more lewds.

Lunatick
Lunatick

@eGremlin
It doesn't matter. In any direct duel/fight she wins. Therefore edgy ass mary sue.

Inmate
Inmate

@StrangeWizard
@askme
I'd like to see him try his hand at a Gentle Femdom CYOA. I predict amusing results.

@eGremlin
because you are the baddestmage4ever
Like @Lunatick
indicates, she's the "baddestantimage4ever".

Essentially you may wish to have more cleverness behind that power. Rather than an 'autowins X fight'.

likme
likme

@Lunatick
In any direct duel/fight she wins
In my interpretation of my world this is false statement. The tower sends teams against rogue mages because they aren't foolish enough to assume that a disjunctive gauntlet would be enough against a truly competent mage. Any mage that she can easily beat is really dumb at using magic effectively, since she can only sunder magic that actually approaches her.

If that's not enough to satisfy you, then apologies. It is what it is.

SniperGod
SniperGod

something I threw together a little while back. got a guy working on a version of decent quality

TurtleCat
TurtleCat

@StrangeWizard
When are you going to make more lewd?

PurpleCharger
PurpleCharger

@Burnblaze
Enslaved is his only cyoa that's kind of okay for femdomfags
As a femdomfag, I'd say Enslaved is more than okay, although the random element for your final fate is a little annoying.

Fuzzy_Logic
Fuzzy_Logic

@Lunatick
In any duel/fight vs a mage, maybe. In a fight against ANY non-mage or even most hybrid mages she loses outright.

Stupidasole
Stupidasole

@Nude_Bikergirl
Sadly, Pokemon Personified Plus+ will still rely on the game mechanics of Pokemon with more items, effects, expanded on things, and what not like it did before. Order & Girls Military updates will also retain weird mechanics as well, but with added benefits to the cyoa overall.

The planned and typed up cyoas coming Pokemon Personified Plus+ will not use weird game mechanics at all. No stats or anything, just a variety of selectable powers and skills that you can use. If you want to get into one my cyoas without game mechanics, I have three OC coming after Pokemon Personified called: The Magi Case with 19 specializations of magic, a restart to an abandoned cyoa titled Witches n' Inquisitions with a focus on being a military officer in fantasy 1920s, and a complete rehaul/update to Picking-A-Goddess. (I apologize about that mate).

Fried_Sushi
Fried_Sushi

@likme
To be fair, it's the way it was worded. Just from that passage alone people are going to assume that she beats any sorcerer, archmagus or otherwise.

Perhaps this isn't the case corresponding to your vision, but this is what the text implies.

Garbage Can Lid
Garbage Can Lid

@Fuzzy_Logic
In other words, rock paper scissors bitch.

Boy_vs_Girl
Boy_vs_Girl

@Fuzzy_Logic
@Garbage Can Lid

Sounds fucking retarded. It's like Runescape but worse.

Techpill
Techpill

@PurpleCharger
the random element
Excuse me my child, but if you are not overkilling your submission points beyond the RNG's wildest possibility, what are you doing?

Evilember
Evilember

@Stupidasole
O-oh.
Well I had issues because it didn't really give any meaning to the stats. I had no idea what the numbers where based on. What kind of destructive feats the moves where capable. What native abilities a person had outside of 'moves'. Why the 4 move limit is so strictly enforced. How swapping moves worked. How special abilities worked. Are moves absolute like charms from Exalted. How weather moves affected the environment.

The issue wheren't with the mechanics exactly. But they where so abstracted from the lore and there was less than 0 effort to relate them. So it was all kinda meaningless.

WebTool
WebTool

@likme
Then why say she beats every mage in a fight then?

eGremlin
eGremlin

@Fried_Sushi
To be fair, it's the way it was worded.
I can only disagree. It doesn't say "she can't be defeated with magic". That would be ridiculous. The word "directly" there is meaningful and important. Perhaps I'll try to work in an example of throwing a rock at her with magic into the text, though that feels a bit clumsy; I had assumed things like that would occur to people.

AwesomeTucker
AwesomeTucker

@WebTool
Then why say she beats every mage in a fight then?
It *does not say that*.

Lunatick
Lunatick

@AwesomeTucker
Autists intentionally misinterpreting obvious passages so that they can feel attacked and insecure is the most treasured and important of /cyoag/ traditions. Don't try to take it away from them, doing so will only make them happier.

Sir_Gallonhead
Sir_Gallonhead

With arguments like these where someone just does not want to read what is actually written in the cyoa, what percent is bait and what percent is legitimate stubbornness?

Soft_member
Soft_member

@Fried_Sushi
@WebTool
@Lunatick
If I replace
If not caught unawares, no one can defeat her with magic directly.
With
If not caught unawares, no one can defeat her with magic directly (though indirectly…).
Does that make the meaning more transparent?

Playboyize
Playboyize

@Soft_member
It would certainly beat the backhanded implication, yes.

Emberburn
Emberburn

@Garbage Can Lid
@Boy_vs_Girl
@eGremlin
@AwesomeTucker
Essentially, it says "If not caught unawares, no one can defeat her with magic directly."
Which implies that if she's aware of it, no one can use magic to directly cause her defeat. Which is a little silly.

If you're saying that you can use magic on something else, like a rock, then crush her, I would imagine she's rather useless: ex. the Earthcaller could just fissure her into the ground.

@Soft_member
Does that make the meaning more transparent?
The idea that there exists an inviolable and absolute defense against all magic is what makes it a mary-sue. Not whether magic can be used 'indirectly', which is as well vague.

SniperGod
SniperGod

@Inmate
I'd like to see him try his hand at a Gentle Femdom CYOA.
Gentle Femdom CYOA.
Gentle Femdom
There should be nothing gentle about femdom! If I make a femdom CYOA it will be hardcore femdom!

@Boy_vs_Girl
Sounds fucking retarded. It's like Runescape but worse.
RuneScape is perfection.

RavySnake
RavySnake

@Sir_Gallonhead
Gee, I think some people just want to pick fights for their own amusement at times.

LuckyDusty
LuckyDusty

@Techpill
Just because I'm a sub doesn't mean I have no limits.

RumChicken
RumChicken

@Soft_member
How about
No magic can defeat her directly (though indirect methods and sneak attacks work far better)...

Spamalot
Spamalot

@SniperGod
There should be nothing gentle about femdom! If I make a femdom CYOA it will be hardcore femdom!
I take it that you're admitting defeat then, Mr. Gol?

You CAN'T make a supple and sweet seductress? A fierce yet flowered fem-dominant?

girlDog
girlDog

@Emberburn
If you're saying that you can use magic on something else
I'm saying exactly that. If you pick up a rock and throw it at her, the rock has momentum. The momentum is not magic. She could not stop it with her gauntlet. If she couldn't dodge, she would be crushed. So, like I said: a clever mage could defeat her.

Far from useless, though, her most potent use is actually out of combat, getting through wards and such.

She stops magic *weaves*, she doesn't have an invioable protection against being defeated with magic. That's what "directly" means in context, though if you have a better way of making that clear through wording, I'm honestly open to it.

SomethingNew
SomethingNew

@Sir_Gallonhead
We have at least one or two posters who have admitted to instigating stuff just like this when they're bored and lonely. And I'm sure theres a couple of regular old autists too. So it's probably 50/50.

I think I'm about done with these threads. They make me unhappy.

cum2soon
cum2soon

This is a top-tier CYOA, don't know why nobody posts it.

Bidwell
Bidwell

@Evilember
I see and understand your points. I did try to keep to the original formula of Pokemon while being kind of liberal with it (i.e 4 move limit, special abilities, stats and what the numbers were based on). That was kind of an error and I have made some efforts in the update to explain the reason behind the existence of moves and abilities in the lore. First Kind faction explains it.

What kind of destructive feats the moves where capable.
How weather moves affected the environment.
Moves can vary and can be repetitive depending on which one you pick. I think this part should be left up to your/other readers imagination more than anything else since its your adventure.

Inmate
Inmate

@RumChicken
Hm. Something like that could work, I'll see if I can fit it into the text.

TalkBomber
TalkBomber

@SniperGod
There should be nothing gentle about femdom!
Nonsense. Gentle femdom is the transcendent fetish.

If I make a femdom CYOA it will be hardcore femdom!
Disproven by one of your own CYOAs. Enslaved can easily be gentle femdom, depending on what choices you make. All you have to do is take an affectionate mistress and predicaments that are just sexual instead of abusive or painful.

StonedTime
StonedTime

@cum2soon
Because dad beans are OP ;_;

TechHater
TechHater

@cum2soon
Because it's too small.

StrangeWizard
StrangeWizard

@MPmaster
Rolling up a random waifu

Compensation
Wealth. The obvious choice.

Appearance
1

Quirks
Milking, Super Tight, Twin Sister.

Sister A
NEET, Idiot Savant, Hungry
She's a neckbeard, kill me please

Sister B
Cynical Asshole, Self Harm, Cuckquean.
At least we know how Sister A got involved.

Lets be honest with each other though, it could'a been a whole lot worse

New_Cliche
New_Cliche

@BinaryMan
Why is Elf (Male) the prettiest fucking waifu?

Spazyfool
Spazyfool

@girlDog
making that clear through wording, I'm honestly open to it
My preference for anti-magic is usually in terms of 'arcane knowledge': like she's trained in spotting the mathematical resonances and geometries in magic so that she can with effort undo them. Perhaps with a variety of tools, like the gauntlet.

So, instead of essentially being able to wave the gauntlet and break a spell or undo a ward (as the text implies), she must spend some time figuring out what's going on and 'picking the lock'.

This way, it's more obviously a battle of wits between her and a mage. In a way, she's a mage herself, just a slower and more technical one.

Need_TLC
Need_TLC

@cum2soon
I don't need dad beans, because I will never, ever talk to that man about anime. The fucking looser watches harem shit.

takes2long
takes2long

@Spamalot
You CAN'T make a supple and sweet seductress?
I could make a sweet and gentle and yet dominant woman. But creating a character like that would be a waste of fucking space. It's like a pizza guy could easily bake a pineapple pizza of the highest quality, but why would he? Pineapple pizzas are fucking gross and nobody wants them. Gentle femdom waifus are the pine apple pizza of waifus, they are an abomination and I would put them all to the blade if I could. Ridding them from this world would be a favor for all humankind. Woman should be nasty, perverted and mentally unstable, not sweet and gentle.

Methnerd
Methnerd

@Bidwell
Well that's pleasent news then! PP+ I'm eagerly looking forward too. As well as your future works.

But I have one desperate plea. At the very least include a gauge of what the numbers represent for each stat at the very least. If you already did then that's great.

Burnblaze
Burnblaze

@LuckyDusty
limits
@TalkBomber
an affectionate mistress
I'm pretty sure the only correct solution to that CYOA is to take the Empress and waifu her by sucking down her love juices all day.

Firespawn
Firespawn

@New_Cliche
Because trap option, obviously.
@Spazyfool
The change you're proposing would make her a pretty shit option compared to just another mage who knows some counter-magic, honestly. The gauntlet is literally the only thing she has going for her. It's easy to kill her. Easier than most.

What I meant was, if you had an idea for the *wording* that would make it clear that her gauntlet sunders magic, not gives her an absolute protection against anything caused by magic.

DeathDog
DeathDog

@takes2long
The captcha is, "HOTEL PLEASE."

eGremlin
eGremlin

/tg/thread/54837420#p54844239
Heh thought you deserved it.

BunnyJinx
BunnyJinx

@takes2long
Woman should be nasty, perverted and mentally unstable, not sweet and gentle.
Well now Mr. Gol, if you were actually up to this challenge, you'd make them all of those things at once.

But ahh well, I suppose we'll just write off Gentle Femdom as something you are simply incapable of doing well~

Supergrass
Supergrass

@Spazyfool
I should also add that I disagree that the text implies it's just "wave a gauntlet", since it says it takes years of training.

To clarify my other objection, though, suppose it takes time for her to use the gauntlet. Then, she suddenly is completely useless in combat. I mean, completely. One good offensive spell and she's done, because she doesn't have time to "unravel" it through investigation, or whatever.

Raving_Cute
Raving_Cute

@Firespawn
This is easy. Just write something similar to what @RumChicken
proposed. It's a mere passage. Up to you though.

Techpill
Techpill

@Raving_Cute
@Spazyfool
@RumChicken
Siga’s disjunctive gauntlet, an extremely complex artifice that can take years to make and years to master, allows her to sunder active magics, and dispel those that come near her. Clever mages can get around this by using magic to affect her indirectly.
Better?

BlogWobbles
BlogWobbles

@Supergrass
since it says it takes years of training
Which she has already done, and can now wave her gauntlet at literally anything magical.
suppose it takes time for her to use the gauntlet. Then, she suddenly is completely useless in combat.
Not at all. It makes her less of a mary-sue to have to take precautions. My statement was more about a set of tools, rather than just the one gauntlet. Like she has a crystal to see through illusions, an atheme to cut away curses, a mirror to reflect thaumaturgy, etc.

Essentially, make it seem like her anti-magic is a work of intellect, rather than a for-granted 'sundering'.

DeathDog
DeathDog

@Techpill
Yeah, that's pretty conclusive. Worded it better than I would have thought.

Ignoramus
Ignoramus

@Techpill
I was considering posting, "All mages are clever, now she's shit," along with a smug anime girl, or some sort of other trollish image, but I'm too tired to be a dick today.

Crazy_Nice
Crazy_Nice

@BlogWobbles
Like she has a crystal to see through illusions, an atheme to cut away curses, a mirror to reflect thaumaturgy, etc.
Ok, *this* is a cool idea. The first suggestion that's actually made me want to change her. I'm still unconvinced that her current power is actually unbalanced, but I'll consider changing it, because this suggestion is more *interesting*.

Burnblaze
Burnblaze

@DeathDog
Really?

ZeroReborn
ZeroReborn

@Spamalot
Hold the phone, comrade. Is that... Haman Karn?

eGremlin
eGremlin

@DeathDog

GOD HATES HAWAIIAN PIZZA

FastChef
FastChef

@Crazy_Nice
unconvinced that her current power is actually unbalanced
In my view, it's not about balance, so much as interest.
Depending on the CYOA player's imagination, she will either be crap that gets taken down by a lightspeed rock, or the ultimate in 'teleports behind you'.

But therein is the problem, the description creates those two extremes of imagining. She's either holding up her hand and blocking 1700 nukes, or she's tripping on a tremor.

In my view, she'd be extremely fast and clever, able to switch implements on the fly and gain vantage points, but still she must discern a plan and a path to her target, and prepare the right tools for the job.

Reminds me a bit of Dutch from Killjoys, in character design.

Spamalot
Spamalot

@Burnblaze
Really.

@eGremlin
Who the hell is Hawaiian Pizza?

ZeroReborn
ZeroReborn

@FastChef
Siga is an expert in anti-magic techniques, employing a variety of tools such as illusion-piercing crystal lenses, spell-reflective glass and numerous counter-curse charms. Most distinctive is her gauntlet, a complex artifice which allows her to physically manipulate the runic underlay of active magics, given time, in order to disjoin them. She is quick, clever and focused, trained in a variety of infiltration techniques, and skilled with the use of short blades.

Definitely sounds more *interesting*, but on the surface that makes her seem even more Mary Sue-ish, does it not?

Dreamworx
Dreamworx

@ZeroReborn
Maybe somewhat, but my reaction is something like: Okay, so she's great at undoing/destroying/getting around magic. But all the cool stuff you can do with it, utility, layers of complex effects built up on it, etc are beyond her.

Just being able to break it, to make it not work, seems less, well... I wouldn't chose to be her, if that makes sense.

I'd rather be the one that could do all the complex cool magics, building up layers of abstract metaphysical machinery. Even if there existed someone that wouldn't find it too difficult to rip it apart, I'd rather not be the one that could do that but totally unable to have created it in the first place.

So on those grounds, I wouldn't think of her as excessively sue-ish.

(Now if she was, in addition to that, a high powered mage herself or something, _then_ I'd be crying Sue.)

Garbage Can Lid
Garbage Can Lid

@ZeroReborn
but on the surface that makes her seem even more Mary Sue-ish
You can write the description to be less laundry-listed to avoid that.

Basically, I tend to consider that it is impossible to be trained to fight all magic simultaneously: it's far too diverse a subject.
But you can be extremely good at researching the target, infiltrating, and quick-wittedness.

A cursory list of tools and their specific application, ex. not just a 'spell reflective' glass but one to counter a specific kind of magic in that world.

Specificity is key. So I'd say if you use the gauntlet, perhaps make it something like 'enables her to touch certain flows of mana, manually misdirecting them'.
Then the player can imagine possible dangers, like trying to touch 'fire mana'. And she could have a cooling charm for just that event.

Misdirecting mana toward her allies might be very helpful in a group, as well.

happy_sad
happy_sad

@ZeroReborn
Nope. From "Gauntlet to fuck up everything magical, lol" to "expert at fucking up magic" is a big improvement.

Harmless_Venom
Harmless_Venom

I'm remembering a CYOA from a few days ago called "Wilds," I think. It was arabesque +elves and a whole grip of pages. Is anyone able to help me?

5mileys
5mileys

@Dreamworx
I wouldn't chose to be her
And there in lies the primary issue. Will *anyone* choose her if I make this change? I think only one person did with the original, out of several dozen builds I saw. Now, some of that may be down to user not liking black girls, but I'm concerned I'm making her shit.

Carnalpleasure
Carnalpleasure

@5mileys
dont listen to autists

never

TechHater
TechHater

@5mileys
I couldn't choose her because she's associated with The Tower. My plans were highly illegal.

JunkTop
JunkTop

@Garbage Can Lid
Specificity is key
Runs into the problem of descriptive length. The example description I put up is almost too long. It's longer than descriptions of abilities for any other character. So, I'm not going to get into spelling out details of every item she might have; that will be left to imagination.

whereismyname
whereismyname

@Garbage Can Lid
I like this. She's no longer a universal sue.

Illusionz
Illusionz

@SniperGod
Scrungo beepis
mage snek
ragtime snek
smol man
snek on fire

with our powers combined I am sure we can help snek on fire with his peculiar predicament

Lunatick
Lunatick

@Carnalpleasure
dont listen to autists
I don't listen to autistic suggestions. I'm not immune to good suggestions, though, and the "bunch of tools" is without a doubt more narratively interesting than "single disjunctive gauntlet"

Techpill
Techpill

@5mileys
some of that may be down to user not liking black girls
Heh, I doubt that is the explicit reason. Many Veeky Forums goers just don't like the anti-mage archetype on its own.
But if people didn't pick her in the original version, then there's not much to lose with changing her.

but I'm concerned I'm making her shit
Remember though, in a CYOA, how 'good' or 'bad' a character is will be up to how the player imagines it.
Language is so variable, that any description can be reinterpreted.

Like @happy_sad
, just having it more diverse than "one gauntlet breaks all" is a big improvement on interest level.

@JunkTop
details of every item
Of course. Just a few specific examples. I meant specificity as in contrast to simply 'spell reflecting'.
It would be something like 'telepathy reflecting', so you could imagine a mind mage getting overloaded by his own psychic scream.

@TechHater
she's associated with The Tower
Also a note. Companions associated with strict legal systems do usually get chosen less. This isn't much of a problem though, it offers build diversity.

At the end of the day though, remember that Veeky Forums will usually find magic more interesting than nonmagic, due to the reality bending possibilities.

JunkTop
JunkTop

@Techpill
ok, consider me convinced. I'll be making some change to her along these lines. It really is much more compelling I must admit. Tomorrow, though.

hairygrape
hairygrape

@JunkTop
Pleased to be of service.

I also considered the possibility, if you wanted to expand the CYOA, with offering different paths for each character. Like Paragon/Renegade from Mass Effect. How their journey with you changes them.

But it is up to you!

Emberfire
Emberfire

@5mileys
Oh, I mean even without the change. I was arguing against all those calling Sue. Entirely up to you as far as whether to make the change. Her skills would potentially be useful in the party, but yeah.

CodeBuns
CodeBuns

@hairygrape
expand the CYOA
working on quest DLC as an addendum, and way to flesh out the world; attached image related.

I don't have plans on going back to add anything to every character. Mainly because while ultimately I'm proud of the finished product, doing 43 characters required every ounce of my willpower.

Stark_Naked
Stark_Naked

@girlDog
was there a second part to this?

Evilember
Evilember

@Stark_Naked
There was not. There were however ones very similar that he made, like the Talisman Shop.
The Stones choice one also had a second element as well.
My complaint with his authorship on multipart ones though was that it was a bit pretentious: "You chose poorly! Haha!"

@CodeBuns
quest DLC
Quests are interesting as a backdrop, though I find in many CYOAs they are underappreciated relative to 'future building' options.

StrangeWizard
StrangeWizard

@hairygrape
where is this image from?

Nude_Bikergirl
Nude_Bikergirl

@Evilember
'future building' options
The Quests were going to include things like founding an academy, winning land for a fief of land that sort of thing. Is that what you mean by 'future building'?

viagrandad
viagrandad

@Harmless_Venom
I think the full title is "The Wilds Outside". I don't have it, but you can probably find it with Google or in the archive in the OP.

Methshot
Methshot

@takes2long
hates pineapple pizza trash
hates gentle femdom waifu trash
refuses to abandon his principles
Why is Tok literally the greatest thing in /cyoag/?

TreeEater
TreeEater

@viagrandad
1/6

Evilember
Evilember

@TreeEater
2/6

CouchChiller
CouchChiller

@Evilember
3/6

GoogleCat
GoogleCat

@Harmless_Venom
@CouchChiller
4/6

Dreamworx
Dreamworx

@GoogleCat
5/6

Evil_kitten
Evil_kitten

@Dreamworx
6/6, there you go user

@Emberfire
Thinking about it more, I think people might find her more appealing as the expert, rather than being reliant on a super item. It's easier to imagine yourself learning useful tricks from her, if nothing else.

Poker_Star
Poker_Star

@StrangeWizard
where is this image from?
Himegoto, Juukyuusai no Seifuku, I believe.

@Nude_Bikergirl
Is that what you mean by 'future building'?
Partly. I've observed multi-year quests to be more favored, rather. As in: "You do X year one, and get Y, moving on to Z year two."

It's essentially just a way to make the choice of quests more interesting. Otherwise I tend to see stuff like "I do everything" or "I pick the hardest" or "off to the harem", you know?

Battlemage by SDA had something similar, but the results were rather generic. (More points.)
There was another one that had you growing up in an academy with your childhood friends, and so on.

That's partly what I meant by 'Mass Effect' style before, not to be forward about it: The childhood friends CYOA had it so that if you picked certain quest options, the companion would "give into darkness and become a tsundere", or related. It was perhaps a shorter end line, basically.

Nude_Bikergirl
Nude_Bikergirl

@Poker_Star
The limiting mechanic I had intended to use had been time. Narrative threads is the theme, and the quests aren't things that you just decide to do, but things that happen to you (anon is choosing the narrative ahead of time, but in "story" the quests happen gradually).

So, each quest has an amount of time (months, years) which is the amount of time that must pass since the last quest until that quest can be triggered.

Still fleshing it out fully, though.

Booteefool
Booteefool

@Methshot
refuses to abandon his principles

didn't he leave forever to go to reddit then came back a week later

also I know its you tok, please stop. You and SDA make these threads so much worse than they need to be.

RumChicken
RumChicken

@Nude_Bikergirl
Narrative threads is the theme
Indeed, they are an excellent inspiration for 'how that was accomplished with this group' builds.

each quest has an amount of time
Still fleshing it out fully, though.
Essentially, I was considering that possibility that each quest could change depending on the order you encountered them, or even the general skills you took along.

It is of course more work to do varied paths like that, so don't take any of my recommendations as pressure to fulfill them.

It's a balance: Offering more choices gives more inspiration to buildmakers, but potentially less narrative freedom if they feel they must adhere to the presented choices.

hairygrape
hairygrape

@RumChicken
out for the night, but let me say you've got some great insights.

Firespawn
Firespawn

@haveahappyday
how the hell did he autism so hard reddit abandoned him?

GoogleCat
GoogleCat

@hairygrape
out for the night, but let me say you've got some great insights.
Goodnight Mr. Acheld. Thank you for the kind words.

New_Cliche
New_Cliche

@kizzmybutt
The Mastermind
Goblin

@Skullbone
Soul Shards (-1)
Powers
Sex Appeal (-2)
Style (-1)
Dream Manipulation (-2)
Shapeshifting (-2)
Illusion (-2)
Divination (-1)

@CouchChiller
Elven Ranger (-2)

@whereismyname
Pervert (+2)
Skimpy Outfit (+1)
Edge of Madness
My extra points go to:
The Needle (-1)
Treasure Chest (-1)
Flash (-1)

@VisualMaster
Lissandra Alden

Stupidasole
Stupidasole

@Booteefool
Look user, you don't have to be Tok to know that he's the greatest namefag Veeky Forums has had since Wayne hung up his mantle. It's just logic, really.

But seriously, I'm not actually Tok

5mileys
5mileys

@Stupidasole
I would say I have stayed in /cyoag/ for quite some time, yet I don't remember any "Wayne", who was he and from when?

TechHater
TechHater

Sub optimal Risk of Rain build

Class: Vanguard
Specialty: repair arms+armor

Not a fan of magic, therefore not interested in godhand or occultism. Reclaimer looks interesting, but not really interested in the hit in combat ability.

Dungeon: The Lair
Source of the title of the build. Would go with the sewer but I don't want to die of dick rot and permanently lose my sense of smell; similarly, catacombs would be disgusting and the fires of hell are too dangerous. This way I get wide open spaces and something that resembles nature.

Yeah, Reclaimer is basically purpose built for this place. But as I said, I'm not really interested in being a support character in combat. And I think being able to fix up the armor of dead parties we find, or parlay with live parties willing to negociate who need their armor fixed, will go part of the way toward recouping the loss. Fixed up armor can either go on my party members and thus their old duds can be sold, or it can be sold directly for a lot more than it would have gotten in beat to hell and back state.

Companions
Ra'Kot
Yeah buddy, I know I'm supposed to take you into the sewers. But in a tossup between yandere water mage and stick-up-ass paladinette who should be in the catacombs or the fire death area and you, I'll take you for my party healing. Not in the least because you also seem like a pretty fun guy, know how to make the most out of dungeon living and will probably be a big hit when trying to negociate with any non-standard adventuring parties we come across.

Yukiko Kanna
Because I'm going to need AoE/crowd control to deal with pack hunters properly, having not specialized in it myself, and I'll take you over the self obsessed earth bender or the aformentioned mermaid. Particularly because you can hit with all the elements. Food won't be a problem because we can eat most of the things we kill. I will be a terrible influence upon you.

1/2

Spazyfool
Spazyfool

@TechHater
Argyle Demallion
Lily Archstar is a no brainer for this area, but me and my dick aren't getting within 100 miles of that kind of crazy. you're next in line and beat out Hammerstein because you have a worthwhile personality and won't follow me around like a lost puppy all the time. You will also help with negociating with other parties when we run into them, and hopefully Ra'Kot can help you to get used to dungeon life as much as he'll help me.
Ultimately I can see it going something like this - between them, Yukiko and Ra'Kot will keep most beasties disoriented and steadily taking damage - spinning on the spot trying to figure out what's hitting them. Yukiko annihilates swarms and in the event of sizable pack hunters I am then free, as the party's main tank and secondary damage output, to take a horde fight as more of a series of one on one and one on two engagements I can fairly quickly win - while staying roughly between them and the aformentioned casters/hurlers. When it comes to a single big foe, all Ra'Kot and I have to do is keep him facing us and avoid dying while Argyle circles around to reap that delicious unguarded backmeat, because it is very very difficult to keep your guard up in two directions at once for most creatures.

Argyle will in general serve as the DPS, a wild card of a highly mobile harassing force capable of minor AOE on his own and slashing from unexpected directions while foes are focused on trying to beat their way through my guard.

TalkBomber
TalkBomber

@TreeEater
Thank you so so so much

TurtleCat
TurtleCat

@Booteefool
At least with SDA you get the feeling his smugness is slightly justified.
This guy just churns out matte purple frankensteins. It's amazing how much dicksucking goes on with anyone shameless enough to shitpost a whole bunch.

Techpill
Techpill

@lostmypassword
Alystin Abaeir (-4)
Mistress' Bedroom (-6 sub)
Slave Rations (-2 sub)
Nude (-2 sub)
Yandere (-2 sub)

@Emberburn

Safeword (-3 Freedom)
Be the girl (+1)
Aphrodisiac (+1)
Trigger word upgraded (+3)
Bondage (+1 sub)
Milking (+1)
Demonic device upgrade (+4 sub)
Butt Plugged (+2)
Favorite toy upgrade (+4 sub)
Sexual Harassment (+1)
Light Predicament: Bondage (+1 Freedom)
Dark Elf Maid (+1)

Submission pts: 21
Freedom pts: 4

@eGremlin
Be loyal to mistress: Rolled 20, 20 + 21 = 41
3 - 41 = -38

WebTool
WebTool

@TechHater
@Spazyfool
Good job user, I liked this read a lot. Hope your dungeoneering career is a profitable one

DeathDog
DeathDog

Life just isn't going that great.

BunnyJinx
BunnyJinx

What's everyone's favorite school-based CYOA?

Booteefool
Booteefool

Hey guys, what's your favorite CYOA of mine?

Lord_Tryzalot
Lord_Tryzalot

@BunnyJinx
monster high is decent IMO and so is this one.

Inmate
Inmate

@Booteefool
That one with the sluts.

TreeEater
TreeEater

@LuckyDusty
The last girl would the objectively the best, if she wasn't in her 30's. Christmas Cake is shit tier.

Snarelure
Snarelure

@BunnyJinx
Hero Academy, or the Quiet one

Skullbone
Skullbone

Does this author still make cyoas?

VisualMaster
VisualMaster

Hey there folks, just here to remind you that when you see people joking around with namefags and being an eager beaver fan, it's just them samefagging to try to make themselves more popular. Half the time when someone replies to insult them, it's still samefagging! Negative attention, positiveat attention; as long as their names are being said, it doesn't matter to them. Don't fall for tricks and start replying too, that's what they want you to do. Have a nice day.

Evil_kitten
Evil_kitten

@Lord_Tryzalot
Thanks!

CodeBuns
CodeBuns

Authors: How do you get inspired?
Currently I'm listening to some smooth tunes and it helps

Booteefool
Booteefool

@CodeBuns
I think they way I like to find things to write about is do nothing until the stupidest thing enters your head, then write it down and mix it with the next stupid thing till you get a horror story or a masterpiece, but then I'm an idiot so don't mind me

Evil_kitten
Evil_kitten

@Booteefool
Lol, what have you made?

askme
askme

@CodeBuns
I usually do cocaine

likme
likme

@Evil_kitten
nothing yet, remember what I said horror or master piece. guess what they have all been?

hint: its horrors that should not be seen

hairygrape
hairygrape

@VisualMaster
samefagging to make themselves look good
sucking a namefag's dick for no reason
I don't know which makes me more sick.

@CodeBuns
How do you get inspired?
For me, music that fits the tone of the thing I want to make. I don't make CYOA's, but I do make other shit and I listen to a lot of music when I work.

Methnerd
Methnerd

@hairygrape
What other shit do you make?

Emberfire
Emberfire

@Methnerd
I write, I'm shit so I just make it for myself.

Spazyfool
Spazyfool

@TreeEater
Gentle Femdom is shit
Christmas Cake is shit

user, correct your ways and live a proper life.

lostmypassword
lostmypassword

@CodeBuns
How do you get inspired.
I reread tragedies because I have a tragedyboner.

Snarelure
Snarelure

Does anyone have the cyoa that was choose your nightmare featuring a mafia bird person, a evil baby, and a cleaner that cleans with blood?

girlDog
girlDog

@CodeBuns
I talk to other people, if I can. Usually most of my ideas come from hearing people talk about what they want, and me thinking about how that would work as a cyoa, and sometimes I get pulled in, and sometimes I don't. Otherwise, just discussing the ideas and where I'm stuck at in general will usually get my brain pulling up ideas for how to go about it.

The main problem however, is that it isn't really an instant process, sometimes I get an idea quickly, othertimes I gotta mumble about it for an hour or two. Only a few people I feel comfortable ranting to about cyoas for that long, and they aren't available as often as I'd like.

PurpleCharger
PurpleCharger

@lostmypassword
@Techpill
Alystin Abaeir
What is this shit? Affection?! Affection is earned!

The proper method:
The Empress: Shudriira Vrinn (0) Zero points!

Sleeping: Mistress' Bedroom (-6) Where else?
Eating: Mistress' Food (+3) This is happenning anyway, she's the Empress.
Clothes: The Finest Clothes (-6) What else?

Boons:
Blessing (-3) Neccessary.
Immortality (-4) Proper.
Yandere (-2) Fitting.

Betray Your Own Race! (+2) Doing them a favor really. They'll be MY subjects soon enough.
(Notice I'm avoiding a safeword. I doubt the Empress would be amenable.)

(-16) thus far, pretty good.

Predicaments:
This is where we avoid mindbreak while wifing her!

Favorite Toy Upgrade (+4) Going to hide behind her all day.
Bondage Upgrade (+3) Going to fucking happen anyway.
Succubus Upgrade (+3) Honestly this is weekly entertainment.
Public Address Upgrade (+2) Combined with the Succubus for extra effect!

It takes 40 Blue to guarantee the proper effect, we're at 30 already. (With -4 remaining.)

Liquid Production Upgrade (+3) 'Regular milking' won't be a problem.
Mistress Nectar Upgrade (+4) A very helpful hydration boon!
Eldrich Throne Upgrade (+3) More hydration!

34 Blue with (+6) which now all go to lovely gifts for the Empress!

At 40 Blue, we of course choose to Stay Loyal, and get a new Elf Empire plus Waifu!
(The roll doesn't matter, and I don't even want the Courtesan Training.)

viagrandad
viagrandad

@Stupidasole
But seriously, I'm not actually Tok
That's something that cumstain would say.

iluvmen
iluvmen

@Booteefool
The first The End. Like, the one which had 3 options. You picked 'I Quit'.
It was a good time.

PackManBrainlure
PackManBrainlure

@RavySnake
Instant Dark Portal
Technomancy Hacking
Undying Vitality
True Time Stop.

Infiltrators
Juggernauts
Death Walkers
Hunters
Stalkers

Stealth up to a base using time-stops and cover, sneak through the walls when doors open for an instant, hacking cameras and security cams to cover my approach.

Appear without much warning and throw open the portals at night after taking out the power system and shutting as many lights down as possible. Death Walkers, Hunters and Stalkers make quick work in the initial wave while Infiltrators catch emergency response unawares. Valkyries clean up.

Anti-Outpost assault in a single entity. Take out communications, break sieges, destroy peripheral settlements in a single night.

King_Martha
King_Martha

@Lord_Tryzalot
Eventide Academy CYOA:
House:
House Obcultus
Classes:
Master Summoning
Master Alchemy
Master Transmutation
Master Transfiguration
Master Worldwalking
Master Arcane Study
Master Metamagic
Club:
None

Methshot
Methshot

@CodeBuns
Have an annoying nagging friend who asks you about your CYOA every fucking day, so you clench your teeth and soldier on regardless of whether you're inspired or not, because you want to show him that you're making progress for him to shut up

Bidwell
Bidwell

@PackManBrainlure
Anti-Outpost assault in a single entity. Take out communications, break sieges, destroy peripheral settlements in a single night.
Might lieutenants be more helpful for that than infiltrators? Rapid strategic response to changing circumstances for the fast units.

Valkyries clean up.
But user, you do not seem to have those!

FastChef
FastChef

@eGremlin
Random Rolled Mistress (13)
Miz'Ri Telenna

Sleeping Quarters
Mistress' Bedroom

Food
Mistress Food

Clothes
Fine Clothes

Boons
Courtesan Training
Blessing
Romantic Gift (x6)

Predicaments
Favorite Toy (Upgraded)
Whipping
Sharing is Caring (Upgraded)
Nizana
Nightmares
Harassment
Bondage (Upgraded)
Face Sitting
Nectar
Milking (Upgraded)

With a roll of 2 at the end it rounds out to an even -30 fate points. Only have to deal with a bit of objectively miserable bullshit to get it.

Stupidasole
Stupidasole

@Bidwell
Whoops, Meant to drop Juggernauts in place of them when I ran out of room for Infiltrators. Wanted some kind of anti-air if it came up.

Lieutenants provide intel that I'll be able to provide for myself once I'm linked into the security systems. I only need to blind them long enough to take out the observation teams and core command crew. After that I'm free to use them with impunity and set ambushes based on what their records have on their contingency plans and security feeds.

whereismyname
whereismyname

@Inmate
A Yaoi one might be cool to read as well.
Only seeing waifu's after a while gets boring.

Harmless_Venom
Harmless_Venom

@cum2soon
Dad Beans for sure.

girlDog
girlDog

@Snarelure
Tartarus
Knowledge primary
Commerce secondary
Resurrection
Gospel
Martyr
Vision

I am the god of technology. Because of the commerce secondary, my followers will not only use their knowledge to invent, but also market their own inventions, spreading them to the world. My powers are focused on opening a channel between the living and the dead, to ensure that the knowledge of life's work is not lost in death, but instead continued and built upon.

This plan will likely to lead to total annihilation, but thanks to Martyr when the other God's followers are using my own tech to wipe everyone out, I will be getting stronger instead of weaker. When it's all said and done, I can resurrect my followers with that power and rekindle civilization under my supreme rule, my followers the sole inheritors of technology in the post-apocalypse.

w8t4u
w8t4u

@SniperGod
I don't know, but Night Children/Stalker is the choice of patricians.

SniperGod
SniperGod

@Stupidasole
Lieutenants provide intel that I'll be able to provide for myself once I'm linked into the security systems.
Only concern is you'll be the only one with strategic intelligence in the field, compared to the filthy humans which can have more 'teamwork'.

The hack might not last long enough, and they could be able to shut down cameras themselves.

That CYOA I kind of feel like the Lieutenant/Training combo is near-mandatory for victory. Otherwise you're doing the thinking for the whole army with no brain upgrades.

Carnalpleasure
Carnalpleasure

@whereismyname
Go hog wild mah nigga. Make to your heart's content.

StrangeWizard
StrangeWizard

@kizzmybutt
nemesis CYOA version 2.0
Tok more than redeemed himself for the drama he caused. All I can say is thanks.

lostmypassword
lostmypassword

@SniperGod

Oh my. This is a nice CYOA.

Bonvina, Threesa, and Jingle. I'll take the vision helm and we will face the skeleton king.

I can't tell if he's kinda the bored necromancer or a malevolent one. We can talk him down if he just wants friends.

I always take sight/vision items to prevent ambushes.

As for the waifus? This CYOA has pretty high tier ones. The golem and minotaur are my favorites. Though there are plenty of good ones.

A few spelling errors; check for those, also kinda cliche names. Though it could be humor.

Good work!

BinaryMan
BinaryMan

@SniperGod
Huh. Nearly missed this. Looks real good user.

hairygrape
hairygrape

@girlDog
Is Satan winning the apocalypse or does someone have a plan to beat this?

DeathDog
DeathDog

@kizzmybutt
Since Transcendent Being makes you lose your original race, does that mean you lose all the pros and cons related to your original race if you pick this Combo Effect? Asking due to Tok's answer in a previous thread relating to combo effects /tg/thread/54837420#p54840293

FastChef
FastChef

@Skullbone
@SniperGod
This is a great cyoa

takes2long
takes2long

@SniperGod
got a guy working on a version of decent quality
But it's already quality.

Skullbone
Skullbone

@Snarelure
Realm
Otherworld
Domain
Primary Trickster God
Secondary God of nature
Miracles
Destiny
Vision
Trinity
Intervention

I don't have any interest in getting the first place or whatever in this pantheon, i just want to fuck around with people and other gods for fun. I might ask some of worshippers help with my antics from time to time, in reward i will help them to enjoy life to the fullest. No evil shit though, that is just not my thing.

farquit
farquit

@Skullbone
I may not have anything against you, specifically. The trouble is my plan @girlDog
can't really be stopped once it's set in motion, even by me.

Methshot
Methshot

@farquit
That is a shame. Oh well, maybe some of my people get lucky enough to survive.

Illusionz
Illusionz

@SniperGod
La Chupacabra the Satyre wrestler
Resha the wild Gnome
Croppa the kobold mage

Grimgrope the Pervy Wizard

Armour of the Immortals

fukin nice CYOA

Raving_Cute
Raving_Cute

@kizzmybutt
Can someone post the goblin king cyoa with david bowie please.

Snarelure
Snarelure

@kizzmybutt
Help user study cyoa!

Anon's got resits in 10 days. He still has work to do for 3 classes. Should user:

A: Dedicate 2-3 days to every class focusing solely on one class at the time

B: Spend each day studying a portion of each class in order to slowly tackle the classes simultaneously over 10 days

C: play cyoas and shitpost on /cyoag/ until 6 hours before their first resit

???

StrangeWizard
StrangeWizard

@Snarelure
C looks like the best option you should consider it.

New_Cliche
New_Cliche

@Snarelure
C. It's not the best choice, but it's what user will end up doing anyway (with occasional bits of B). Why kid himself.

Sharpcharm
Sharpcharm

Fresh OC.
Uncensored version can be found here: /trash/thread/11000659#p11000740

Sir_Gallonhead
Sir_Gallonhead

@Sharpcharm
Safe consensual sex behind closed doors, with the lights on and with the person you love
SWF
MOOOOOOOOOOODS

girlDog
girlDog

@Sharpcharm
This is just weird to me. It seems to assume that I'm exactly the kind of person I, and probably a lot of the posters here, am not. Maybe not quite the level of an actual pick up artist, but at least capable of similar things.

WebTool
WebTool

@Booteefool
The End.
Now please off yourself.

New_Cliche
New_Cliche

@WebTool
Suck my ass

Lunatick
Lunatick

@Booteefool
I'm going to go with Messed Up Waifu because it hits so many of my big fetishes HARD. Just to name a few, Twins, Sensitive, Let Go, Milk Lover, and maybe snug fit, and of course the be the girl mode option to go with it.

askme
askme

@New_Cliche
I'm pretty sure with the amount of self-fellatio that you do in these threads as well as in /trash/ that you likely dabbled in sucking in your ass for the extra stimulation.

TurtleCat
TurtleCat

@Sir_Gallonhead
even mentioning it
this is a blue board!

Need_TLC
Need_TLC

@girlDog
I think is just operating in porn logic, you know, try getting a pizza and ending in a threesome somehow, regardless of your situation, skills or even intentions

Nude_Bikergirl
Nude_Bikergirl

@DeathDog
Yes you lose all the pros and cons of a race once you become a transcendent being. But hell, Transcendant Being is probably the most overpowered combo effect.

Gigastrength
Gigastrength

@Illusionz
I like the way you build characters and consistent universes, but the game part is always somewhat broken or unbalanced.
I mean it's kinda fun making OP builds, but it kinda comes down to nothing when you're against literal deities.

DeathDog
DeathDog

@CodeBuns
Authors: How do you get inspired?
Dreams, porn.
That's pretty much it.

Nude_Bikergirl
Nude_Bikergirl

@TreeEater
The last girl would the objectively the best, if she wasn't in her 30's. Christmas Cake is shit tier.
I disagree, the best girl is undoubtedly the Genetic and Biochemistry girl. Also why don't they have names? Like why would the person who wrote this not name their characters?

MPmaster
MPmaster

@girlDog
Assume it's like all the waifu cyoas where everyone wants to suck your dick for no given reason?

girlDog
girlDog

@CodeBuns
Music, porn, video lectures on related subjects.

@askme
I put Ritalin in my coffee.

SniperGod
SniperGod

@CodeBuns
Authors: How do you get inspired?
Watch porn, daydream, watch movies, play games and listen to ASMR, its the shit, it makes you relaxed and horny at the same time. Like I watched the newest Alien: Covenant and that was all the inspiration I needed to write Infected. Alien: Covenant is one hell of a sexy movie btw.

RavySnake
RavySnake

@Lord_Tryzalot
I really enjoy Strife's works

Harmless_Venom
Harmless_Venom

@GoogleCat
What the fuck are the coins for,or are they just arbitrary

Deadlyinx
Deadlyinx

@Raving_Cute
What is this thing

eGremlin
eGremlin

@Harmless_Venom
Coins are usually traded in exchange of goods and services.

Stark_Naked
Stark_Naked

I have a HUGE crush on Tok

There I said it

King_Martha
King_Martha

@Nude_Bikergirl
This isn't me.

takes2long
takes2long

@King_Martha
Nope, this isn't me.

Bidwell
Bidwell

@SniperGod
Well clearly we can't listen to you, or we'll end up with rocks up our butts.

Wait... I'm already doing those.
And there are already rocks up my butt!
Oh no! I was retarded in the first place!

Poker_Star
Poker_Star

@Bidwell
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jYmn3Gwn3oI

FastChef
FastChef

@takes2long
Fuck off

TreeEater
TreeEater

@FastChef
@King_Martha
At least try to imitate my splendor when you disguise yourself as me. I will prove that I am the real Tok and you are just a cheap knockoff. Mor'ath from @VisualMaster
is actually a named after my Forgeworld Magma Dragon:
https://poseidoniii.deviantart.com/art/Mor-ath-the-Magma-Dragon-638092038

Firespawn
Firespawn

@TreeEater
You would like to be me, would me?

massdebater
massdebater

This is the true spirit and beauty of anonymity. You can read the CYOAs and watch people squabble. Dinner and a show.

Playboyize
Playboyize

@eGremlin
It was actually him
N-nani the fuck?!

I-it's not like I-I wanted to make you my spokesperson o-or anything!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ppOu3ogzL-M

Methnerd
Methnerd

@massdebater
It is quite nice.

TalkBomber
TalkBomber

@Playboyize
How do you coke up with waifu ideas? I ask you this because I know you've made CYOAs exclusively for waifus.

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

@TalkBomber
I ask you this because I know you've made CYOAs exclusively for waifus.
CYOAs for waifus
for waifus

@Playboyize
WHERE ARE THEY!?
WHERE DID YOU SEND THOSE CYOAS?!
WHERE ARE THE WAIFUS!?

Playboyize
Playboyize

@haveahappyday
The waifus where inside you the whole time.

Methnerd
Methnerd

@BinaryMan
New and (improved?) Siga Catun, based on feedback. Input welcome.

TechHater
TechHater

@Illusionz
@lostmypassword
@BinaryMan

thanks, all! I'm also tinkering with an inkling sniper and a leprechaun necromancer as "bonus DLC characters" to tack on

and yea, went pretty generic with the names on purpose. Partly in humor, and partly so people could easily remember them. Haunch real on the nose compared to Jimbarex. That and most CYOA's don't even name the allies

Bovina and Threesa definitely seem to be popular picks. Chupacabra's also decently common. Asskicker and the genie ring are popular, with some leanings towards the ambiguous chosen one ring

Skeleton King's shown up a few times too, I always imagined he sat up in his tower not doing shit, decided he was bored, and thought conquering the world would spice things up. He'd be equally happy if he conquered everything as he would if you had a giant epic fight with him and his army. Beat him, kill him or convince him otherwise, I think he'd lose with a smile and give you a humble "You got me... nice job"

I'm sure it'll all come up in the extensive lore book I'll absolutely create some day

Lord_Tryzalot
Lord_Tryzalot

@Methnerd
That's some spy shit. I like it.
Still ain't gonna choose her, though.
2tower4me, which is a problem you can't solve because it isn't really a problem.

King_Martha
King_Martha

@Methnerd
I want to destroy her and her order.

Emberburn
Emberburn

@TalkBomber
How do you coke up with waifu ideas?
I don't know what this means.

I like to base characters off of personalities and then flesh them out... and uh, that's pretty much it. Pretty straight forward. Except I don't like to stop at the things that make them a character in a CYOA; I like to think of their trivia: what do they like, what do they do for a living, how do they act towards others and whatnot. Even very mundane trivia like "she jogs every morning" gives a bit of character. I think if you add these little blips in,

And part of that fleshing out is fleshing out the setting. Make an appropriate setting to make it feel like they're really a part of the setting, and that they interact or even make impacts to it. I find this is a big failure with a lot of waifu CYOAs; most of the time you're just assumed to be in a modern setting and that doesn't leave much to the imagination (at least in my eyes; whenever it's in a modern setting I just imagine myself and then I feel detached from the thing).

Sometimes I base a character off of a music album or sound to give them a tone, but I usually only do that for characters who are deliberately more fleshed out than others, like narrators or characters in stories.

Garbage Can Lid
Garbage Can Lid

@Methnerd
The tower: No fun allowed
Anyways i would say that siga has improved quite a bit and now i would pick her as rival.

BinaryMan
BinaryMan

wake up
no waifu oc posted anywhere

King_Martha
King_Martha

@BinaryMan
Wtf my frog picture got corrupted. How did it happen? it used to look differently

Spamalot
Spamalot

tfw no good sci-fi CYOA out for a long long long old time.

I just want a variety of overlord but in space.

Evil_kitten
Evil_kitten

@BinaryMan
@Snarelure
The font is too small in this version. not good.

@Methnerd
I like that the hair problem was adressed, i hate when girls have braids like that, but with the new description i can pretend it's just one of her styles and usually she would wear her normal hair.

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

Is fnding pictures and getting inspired by them before writing concepts a bad practice

5mileys
5mileys

@Spamalot
I just want to be a space tramp trader with a busted old freighter that's barely held together by it's plucky crew of misfits.

SniperGod
SniperGod

@5mileys
Spess refuge update never, user.

RumChicken
RumChicken

@haveahappyday
If it works for you, I wouldn't call it a bad practice.

girlDog
girlDog

@Lord_Tryzalot
@Garbage Can Lid
@King_Martha
But will you defy the tower, or the tower you? Find out next time! thanks for the feedback

@Evil_kitten
font too small
It's an alternate version; not intended to be the new primary version. Some people like the one image versions with tiny font to four images.
hair problem
That's an older change, from since first non-beta, I think? But, I'm glad the description works for you.

StonedTime
StonedTime

@girlDog
But will you defy the tower, or the tower you?

Stupidasole
Stupidasole

@haveahappyday
Is finding pictures and getting inspired by them before writing concepts a bad practice?
Nope, the process of creating a CYOA is not important. The final result is all that matters and how you came to that result is unimportant. In fact that is how I make 60% of my options or more and thet is why all of my pictures are extremely well matched to the option that the picture represents.

Bidwell
Bidwell

@haveahappyday
Definitely not. That's exactly how I did Mentor/Lover/Friend/Whatever. And am doing its DLC for the most part.

Other times you start with the concepts.

I think if you're describing something physical, like a location, object or person, then starting from images can be a fantastic technique.

Stupidasole
Stupidasole

So how the Chariot CYOA would be? Are you a king who constantly rides his chariot into battle or a designatedchariot rider in the army or what?

farquit
farquit

@girlDog
A question. From ''purge the heretics'' to ''they are alright'' how reasonable is the tower?

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

@girlDog
You're right, acheld. I should prepare contingencies against Tower capture or assassination. I think I will add a feature to my artificial bodies, upon severance from the Life/Mind magic network, they initiate an alchemical process converts all NaCl and KCl in the body to solid sodium and potassium, while expelling chlorine gas.
I may have to increase salt levels to make this useful, though.
Perhaps a supersaturated brine organ could serve multiple purposes, while increasing the yield on the self destruct protocol?

All that said, I'd rather just continue my research in peace. I'm gross, not outright evil.

Flameblow
Flameblow

@Stupidasole
But creation effects the final result.
@Bidwell
Thanks, I know this is solid advice since it comes from someone who made an good CYOA.

Dreamworx
Dreamworx

@SniperGod
Feels bad, man.

Lord_Tryzalot
Lord_Tryzalot

@Flameblow
But creation effects the final result.
You can use different methods of creation to achieve the same result.

happy_sad
happy_sad

@farquit
I view them as noble in intention, with some bad apples.

Their purview is to protect non-magical people from abuse by magic users. So they'll go after, for example, necromancers who are fueling their power with a pile of corpses. It's not a "anyone not trained by the tower is not permitted to practice magic" kind of thing.

They are definitely opposed to the use of Void Magic which in their (mostly correct) view, does not end well. And they would not be okay with Buluk's biomantical alchemy, but honestly almost no one would be due to (partially founded) fears of the dangers of messing with life itself.

Additionally, that kind of set-up inevitably leads to at least some overzealous individuals, who will overstep the bounds of their purview for what they believe are good ends.

Sharpcharm
Sharpcharm

@Lord_Tryzalot
Just because you can doesn't mean you will.

Supergrass
Supergrass

@haveahappyday
No. All forms of creation come from some level of external inspiration weather it is known or otherwise. Even in the process of creating we are influenced by what we see or experience during the process, weather we know it or not. No matter the source of inspiration, it's what you do with said inspiration that determines weather or not your creation will be good or bad.

Harmless_Venom
Harmless_Venom

@kizzmybutt
The Shadow
Human (+1 shard, -1 dignity)

Death Options
Banished (-1)

Fair's fair. There should be some consequences for fucking up, and some reward for beating me. I'm a nemesis, not a cunt.

Powers
Realm Knowledge (-1)
Waifu Catcher (-2)
Monstrify (-3)
Shapeshifting (-2)
Regeneration (-2)

Artifacts
The Needle (-1)

Companions
Amazon Warrior (-2)
Hexmage (-2)
Apprentice (-4)

Drawbacks
A Fair Warning (+2)
Adventurer (+1)
Signature (+1)

Quests
Mai Waifu
The Sword

Rival
Sylvanus (fucking hippy)

Steal waifus, turn them into monster girls, and then slay them - all with a Wile E. Coyote-esque fair warning. Mite b fun.

Methshot
Methshot

@happy_sad
(partially founded) fears of the dangers of messing with life itself.
There is definitely a reason why I'm going to avoid creating a mindless proto-organism specifically to create as much life-force as possible so we can fuel Ilhas' magic with little moral concern.

I am entirely certain that something like that would end badly.
Not that it isn't tempting.
It would be funny if we accidently gave it a soul, and made slime girls.

Methnerd
Methnerd

@Harmless_Venom
I'm a nemesis, not a cunt
Dude, I think you might want to re-read the opening paragraph. This CYOA is all about being a cunt.

DeathDog
DeathDog

@Supergrass
How's the whether over there?

Ignoramus
Ignoramus

@DeathDog
gerate!

iluvmen
iluvmen

@Methnerd
But it's about being a fun cunt, not a total dick of a cunt.

Carnalpleasure
Carnalpleasure

@Emberburn
I find this is a big failure with a lot of waifu CYOAs; most of the time you're just assumed to be in a modern setting and that doesn't leave much to the imagination
cyoas without setting a literally worthless.

lostmypassword
lostmypassword

@haveahappyday
I'd rather just continue my research in peace
The tower is unlikely to target you unless you are either making a show of yourself doing "bad" things, or are causing harm to the peasantry. They don't have the resources to constantly be sniffing out magical researchers.
@Flameblow
np, good luck
@Methshot
Buluk + Mithrodae + Ilhas could probably manage it, given sufficient time, resources and research.

Emberfire
Emberfire

@Carnalpleasure
Does it need to be a physical setting? Where exactly mine takes place is vague, but I've established worldbuilding in terms or where powers come from, why you get to make the choices you make.

StrangeWizard
StrangeWizard

@Spamalot
We're all waiting for you to make it.
@SniperGod
The author already said he's never updating it and has said anyone else is more than welcome to do so.

Spamalot
Spamalot

Jesus, I just got done with the 4th row of body part options in my CYOA, and I have at least 3 more to go. Someone please kill me and end my suffering.

happy_sad
happy_sad

@girlDog
Is it bbecause you're playing you and not a character? Because there's no option to change your body or personality?
Shame you didn't enjoy the CYOA.

Inmate
Inmate

@Spamalot
WTF are you making?

Gigastrength
Gigastrength

@kizzmybutt
@VisualMaster
Class: The Supreme Sorcerer
Race: Human (+1 Shard)
Total shards: 17

Death option: Invulnerability (9)
Powers:
Holy Magic (Free)
Nullification (1)
Divine Essence (-1)
Regeneration (-3)
Counterspell (-5)
Shapeshifting (-7)
Artifacts:
Legendary Weapon (-8) [Oversized broadsword, Holy elemental]
Legendary Armor (-9)
Companions:
None

Drawbacks:
A Fair Warning (-7)
Double Trouble (-5)
Unexpected Enemies (-3) [Bound Daemon, Pet Dragon]
Adventurer (-2)
Signature (-1) [Holy sigil]
Deadly Defeat (0)
Quests:
You're the Hero!
The Sword

Combo effects:
Transcendent Being [+Final Form, +Unbendable Time]
Spell Destroyer

Rivals:
Tz'arkan (primary)
Serana Deathbringer (secondary)

Pure Deus Vult. A point heavy build, but I like how it came together. While The Badass looked appealing, the slow movement seemed too much of a hindrance, and Supreme Sorcerer allowed me to get Holy Magic to heal innocents and smite demons even harder. Transcendent Being ought to give me physical stats comparable or even surpassing The Badass anyway. Regeneration and Legendary Armor are there as safety measure for when my invulnerability is down during full moon. Spell Destroyer deals with any self-buffs, escape options or summons my opponents might have, and Shapeshifting can get me wings for flight in case Final Form does not innately give flight. Shifting some extra limbs on never hurts either, or I could pull my head into my torso to dodge a decaptitation. As for the Deadly Defeat drawback, if I die once with Invulnerablity I am dead permanently anyway.

Tz'arkan and Serana go really well together lore-wise, and the Bound Daemon and Pet Dragon won't feel out of place with them either. The quests fit Tz'arkan perfectly too. If I manage to defeat them I will be going down the rest of the list of evil aligned rivals, and some of the neutral aligned ones. I cannot bring myself to fight any of the good aligned ones.

JunkTop
JunkTop

@Inmate
A "Be the monster" CYOA. After body parts I have to do powers/perks, super perks and drawbacks.

Evil_kitten
Evil_kitten

@Spamalot
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D2CRtES2K3E&t=13

TreeEater
TreeEater

@kizzmybutt
get awesome powers
pick myself as a rival
ignore PvP

Sharpcharm
Sharpcharm

@Evil_kitten
Thank you, user, I needed that.

RavySnake
RavySnake

@TreeEater
Yeah, just kill or cuck yourself senpai

Lord_Tryzalot
Lord_Tryzalot

@happy_sad
Ah! So they are more Anti-magic Paladins instead of Anti-magic Inquisition i like that. They sound like an interesting bunch.

farquit
farquit

I've had a sudden craving of MTG related CYOAs, anything like that here?

idontknow
idontknow

@TreeEater
Make a character for Rival CYOA
Choose someone else's Rival CYOA character as your rival
RIVAL RECURSION

Flameblow
Flameblow

@farquit
Beyond some older CYOAs having the option to become a Planeswalker? Not that I recall, no.

MPmaster
MPmaster

@Emberfire
The question I ask myself for setting in general (I write fiction but don't make CYOA so take it for what its worth) is 'will the reader have unanswered questions that create issues for their understanding of the plot'.

That is to say, if you've given people what they need to know to get them in the right headspace, leaving some gaps for them to fill in with their own ideas can be great imo.

RumChicken
RumChicken

@girlDog

You're gonna make me write another build for this aren't you. I think I've done 3 or 4 by now. IT just super-replayable.

StonedTime
StonedTime

@Flameblow
well, fuck.

happy_sad
happy_sad

I'm really excited for the CYOA I'm making, and at the same time worried that people will not like it or find it boring

SniperWish
SniperWish

@StonedTime
Why don't you try your hand at making one?

Dreamworx
Dreamworx

@happy_sad
Come on user shake those doubts away, they are only a burden.

5mileys
5mileys

@SniperWish
Takes too much time and I don't consider my self that creative, also my understanding of MTG lore is mostly superficial.

hairygrape
hairygrape

@happy_sad
What @Dreamworx
said. Also @Evil_kitten
.

Deadlyinx
Deadlyinx

@happy_sad
Hey! Me too.
Imma do it anyways, though.

Methnerd
Methnerd

@Bidwell
Now give tips on writing please

whereismyname
whereismyname

@happy_sad
There's probably a lot of that going around. I want to tell you to be positive but that'd make me a massive hypocrite, so instead I'll truthfully say I'm looking forward to whatever it is.

MPmaster
MPmaster

@5mileys
There is only one thing i know about MTG lore and that is that Urza ruined Serra's realm and that pisses me off.

askme
askme

@whereismyname
How can you be looking forward to it if you don't know what it is

Emberfire
Emberfire

@askme
Because I like OC, and if you're excited about it there must be something worth being excited about.

TechHater
TechHater

@happy_sad
Sound like an ignorant bunch of fools primarily fueled by their own fear and a malign view of how the world should work.

Boy_vs_Girl
Boy_vs_Girl

@TechHater
They sound like nice guys, i mean who else is going to kill that pyromancer faggot that is burning villages for no reason?

MPmaster
MPmaster

@Spamalot
I have a similar concept
My body part selection section will be around 8 pages long

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

@Boy_vs_Girl
They sound like the kind of guys that'd get triggered at any new expression or study of magic or at the idea of a wizard accruing political power.

viagrandad
viagrandad

@haveahappyday
I doubt that everyone in the tower is a magic hating faggot.

Deadlyinx
Deadlyinx

@Spamalot
fuck you i want mecha and i'm gonna make mecha

Flameblow
Flameblow

What would people want from a World of Darkness CYOA?

girlDog
girlDog

@RumChicken
You're gonna make me write another build for this aren't you
It's my second favorite thing to make you do! glad you enjoy it

@Methnerd
uh... I'm sorry, I don't know what to say. Take a creative writing class? I don't have any special tips or methods I follow for writing. Other than, I suppose, for writing a person imagine them deeper than what you write. Your writing about them should give hints as to who they are, not tell the reader absolutely everything that *you* know about them.

@TechHater
@Boy_vs_Girl
@haveahappyday
@viagrandad
Ultimately, both of you have elements of truth in your statements.

farquit
farquit

@lostmypassword
The tower is unlikely to target you unless
Sweet. My plan was to mostly keep to myself, Buluk style.

Buluk + Mithrodae + Ilhas could probably manage it, given sufficient time, resources and research.
I went with Evet instead of Mithrodae, just to keep the theme of forbidden science. Mithrodae is definitely science and sufficient patience required to take her time, but Evet has resources and forbiddeness.

Redar is tagging along in the fourth slot, as a slightly more distant friend than Ilhas. A mental command network for your artificial life is just too useful to pass up, and the kid seems like he'd be fun to have around.

Who knows? Group composition and dynamics might change over time, like if we go on an adventure or something.

lostmypassword
lostmypassword

I was looking for character art for a CYOA and I found an artist who has the named Stephanie Brown. That's pretty neat.

Playboyize
Playboyize

@Emberfire
No. It only needs a setting. Worldbuilding means it has a setting.

Snarelure
Snarelure

@Flameblow
Vampires.

Lord_Tryzalot
Lord_Tryzalot

@askme
We have a slew of sycophants here so desperate for content they will give heartless words of "encouragements" without even knowing or caring about what you're making.

WebTool
WebTool

@Lord_Tryzalot
If I could string sentences together as well as you do, I'd never have cause for concern. Everyone would love my CYOAs.

Boy_vs_Girl
Boy_vs_Girl

@Flameblow
Kuei-jin

FastChef
FastChef

@Flameblow
Telling me what World of Darkness is.
Writting it so I don't need to know what World of Darkness is.
user says it's about vampires so give me a bitchin' /ss/ vampire waifu.

Ignoramus
Ignoramus

@Sharpcharm
Looks good, but it could use some older women as choices for people to meet.

idontknow
idontknow

@Flameblow
Werewolves.

likme
likme

The crunch of the stale popcorn goes well with the firmness of the cold, leftover burger patty, and the salty butter really brings out the flavor.

Burnblaze
Burnblaze

@Ignoramus
user I'm not updating it.

Firespawn
Firespawn

@likme
Whoops, wrong thread.

GoogleCat
GoogleCat

@Flameblow
Changelings but not fucked up by default.

PackManBrainlure
PackManBrainlure

@Flameblow
cute traps and girls with the option to be a cute trap or girl

Need_TLC
Need_TLC

@Flameblow
Old or new world of darkness?

Raving_Cute
Raving_Cute

@PackManBrainlure
This. This is the right answer.

Evilember
Evilember

Reposting one of my favorite 1 pagers

DeathDog
DeathDog

@Evilember
Same

ZeroReborn
ZeroReborn

@Evilember

Base form: Avian(good stats, plus who doesn't want to fly)
Special Abilities:
Enhanced Senses
Cameoflauge
Increased Attack
Enhanced Speed
Missions:
Dark Hero
Magical Girls
Budget Rangers

Boss Perks:
Enhanced Strength
Enhanced Defense
Enhanced Speed
Enhanced Regeneration
Bio-Missiles
Electric Discharge

Okay, I'll play this one as genuinely loyal to the organization

Power Rangers: These pricks will be easy to kill, NBD

Dark Hero: He looks pretty tough, so I'll need to devise a strategy. I'll spy on him from high in the skies(I'm a bird and I have super senses), waiting until he takes that armor off. he has to remove eventually if only to take a shower or something. Then I'll swoop in and steal the armor. He should be a lot weaker without it and probably beatable.

Magical Girls: Here I'm going to have some fun. Instead of beating them outright, I'll pretend to be conflicted about working for the evil org and considering leaving. I'll work as an informant, alerting them to evil plots that are actually the work of rival organizations. After every foe they defeat I'll reward them with something, too, slowly giving them a more mercenary attitude.

The magical girls are all worried about their personal lives so naturally I'm gonna fuck that up. Using my connections with the evil org I'll break up all of their families. So, one girl's father gets fired and becomes an alcoholic, one girl's older sister gets addicted to drugs, and the leader's mother has an affair leading to an ugly divorce. They'll come to rely on me more and more not just as an informat but a friend. From that point their corruption is all but inevitable. Let it also be known that I'll marry the leader girl and we'll breed a race of superior beings together.

StrangeWizard
StrangeWizard

@Flameblow
Mummies, I liked the one where u start as a max leveled mummy and then slowly waste away and become less powerful as time goes on.

Fried_Sushi
Fried_Sushi

@DeathDog
I'd sell your kidneys for being able to write that good.

w8t4u
w8t4u

@Fried_Sushi
I know! Every time I go to write and think I'm doing good, I look at this one and I'm reminded I'm nowhere close to good.

TreeEater
TreeEater

@StrangeWizard
Power decay
shit taste m8

Burnblaze
Burnblaze

@King_Martha
Furries need to remember we have a thread on /trash/ where you're more welcome.

BlogWobbles
BlogWobbles

@King_Martha
To be fair, user, werewolves do have an intermediate form between battle form and human form.

WoD have five forms total, human, said form, battle form, a form that's basically a warg, and straight up wolf.

PurpleCharger
PurpleCharger

@FastChef
@idontknow
@PackManBrainlure
waifus
Maybe this was a mistake...

@Need_TLC
You tell me what interests you, though I'm way more familiar with the old World of Darkness. I started playing old WoD in first edition days - I've only dabbled with nWoD/CoD.

Ignoramus
Ignoramus

@PurpleCharger
oWoD is better in general.

Spazyfool
Spazyfool

@Booteefool
Mindslaver, but you haven't heard it from me.

Raving_Cute
Raving_Cute

@Sharpcharm
By plane
Monster resort
Go to the pool
Share your room
Kelly (Lamia)
Maria (Drider)
Anya (Slimegirl)
Competitive swimming
Volleyball
Ballroom dance
Wet T-shirt competition
>Safe consensual sex behind closed doors with the lights on and with the person you love (every single night I'm not doing something else)
Kelly's probably my favorite of the 3 girls, but the best way this ends is with a harem.

takes2long
takes2long

@PurpleCharger
Maybe this was a mistake...
Did you actually expect something else?

Bidwell
Bidwell

@PurpleCharger
@Ignoramus
I agree that oWoD lore is better, even if Genius: the Transgression wasn't built in it.

RavySnake
RavySnake

@PurpleCharger
I would suggest you follow pic related and let people make their own damn friends.

Raving_Cute
Raving_Cute

@DeathDog
Anna is impossible. There are no asian women taller than me!

Harmless_Venom
Harmless_Venom

@RavySnake
There are no true friends in the WoD universe.

Techpill
Techpill

@Harmless_Venom
Blood bonding is good enough though, right?

Firespawn
Firespawn

@Techpill
Spoken like a true neophyte.

SniperGod
SniperGod

@TreeEater
Powerdecay is shit taste
Have you ever reached max level on any pen and paper RPG? All of the pen and papper adventures I have been on you never get to that level and it was a fun and refreshing experience to start at max level and then lose levels. Also Mummies are without a doubt the most badass type of undead.

New_Cliche
New_Cliche

@SniperGod
Bitch please reaching the top is something something has to earn. And i could had reached lvl 20 if one faggot didn't decided to ''lol i am going to join the bad guys for no reason'' and ended in party wipe.

5mileys
5mileys

@Harmless_Venom
@Techpill
The Divine Machine is good enough.

DeathDog
DeathDog

@SniperGod
I started a Pathfinder game at level 23. It's delightfully broken.
Our rogue kicked a man so hard in his testicles, that the man would have died slowly from his organs being punctured by the shrapnel of his exploded pelvis, had he not crushed his skull on the stone ceiling twenty feet above where he was standing.

Playboyize
Playboyize

check out what WoD is
find a cool game about vampires and shit
made in 2004
still costs fucking 20 euroes
DOOM made last year cost fucking thirty. What is this bullshit?

Stupidasole
Stupidasole

@LuckyDusty
OC?

King_Martha
King_Martha

@Playboyize
Masquerade is still pretty good, though.

BlogWobbles
BlogWobbles

@King_Martha
But why does it cost twice what Fallout New Vegas costs?

StonedTime
StonedTime

@Playboyize
It's just that awesome.

eGremlin
eGremlin

@Playboyize
@King_Martha
@BlogWobbles
It's a cult classic. Thus it retains its price.

Unlike many modern games, it does not rely on graphics, but on writing.

You would rather have this than No Man's Sky, almost assuredly. I hear displaying it can get you women.

cum2soon
cum2soon

How do I write in an entertaining and not generically boring way? Imrpove the vocab?

Emberburn
Emberburn

@cum2soon
Don't write laundry lists or be pretentious.

Try to imagine a personality you would enjoy hearing from or reading.

Flameblow
Flameblow

@StonedTime
I fucking loved the malks in that game. Hilariously retarded fever dreams, mixed with riddle-ish prophetic hints that where actually useful.
It was fun and entertaining.

VisualMaster
VisualMaster

@eGremlin
It had so many great characters - compare VtM NPCs with, say, Andromeda...

Spazyfool
Spazyfool

@VisualMaster
It's already loading...

Dreamworx
Dreamworx

@LuckyDusty
Never seen this one before. Build might have to wait until next thread

farquit
farquit

@Emberburn
Thank you this helps!

takes2long
takes2long

@StonedTime
Okay I'm sold.
@eGremlin
I survived New Vegas and all the times I had Cazadors and Geckos get stuck in rocks, all the times where the game would never stop loading after booting up the game. I can survive shoddy graphics if the writing and quests and plot is good.
@VisualMaster
I don't know who the third from the left is but I want her.

askme
askme

@VisualMaster
with, say, Andromeda
That game doesn't exist.

Apparently, in the future, no one knows how solar panels work, so the mission ran out of power and aborted.

@Spazyfool
I hope game makers get past this stage of mediocre copy-pasting.

Methnerd
Methnerd

@LuckyDusty
Is this OC?

CodeBuns
CodeBuns

@Spazyfool
@VisualMaster
I'm buying it now.
If I like it, which games in the series should I look to next?
The Steam page said to download an unofficial patch that fixes stuff. Should I download the patch that only fixes bugs or the one that adds content?

Fuzzy_Logic
Fuzzy_Logic

@LuckyDusty
Do spells like Suspend Biology and Body Enhancement last indefinitely? No expiration time is given. Or will that require Repeating Magic?

New_Cliche
New_Cliche

@Flameblow
1. Play the game as any clan other than Malks
2. Play the game as a Malk
3. Shit bricks

Raving_Cute
Raving_Cute

@CodeBuns
Pirate it, the people who make money off of you buying it are the people that killed the studio who made it.

viagrandad
viagrandad

@VisualMaster
I still enjoyed Andromeda despite its many many flaws.

Vetra is also my favorite Mass effect girl

Techpill
Techpill

@CodeBuns
which games in the series should I look to next?
Lucid Dreaming and Pen and Paper, both by related studios.

StonedTime
StonedTime

@viagrandad
Vetra is also my favorite Mass effect girl
Since it's not possible for a human being to like Garrus 0.5, would you care to tell us what variety of sloth demon you are?

BlogWobbles
BlogWobbles

@StonedTime
Since it's not possible for a human being to like Garrus 0.5
But she's not Garrus? Garrus was a cop who turned into a vigilante. Vetra is more of a Rogue who's very protective of her sister.

I just like that I can romance a qt Turian girl and hold hands with her

FastChef
FastChef

@Skullbone
@SniperGod
I want the qt leviathan spawn but I am mind numbingly afraid of the ocean's depths and whats in it. I don't know if I'd be able to do it.

JunkTop
JunkTop

@takes2long
I don't know who the third from the left is but I want her.
Jeanette, the poster girl of the game.

GoogleCat
GoogleCat

@Raving_Cute
Sorry mate, already bought it like a goodboy.
@New_Cliche
Damn. She's the one I wanted to waifu and you're saying I should join a different faction first?
@Techpill
Thanks!

Fried_Sushi
Fried_Sushi

@Stupidasole
@Methnerd
I think so, it was posted on a different site a while back. I haven't seen it anywhere else.

@Fuzzy_Logic
Yeah, they are permanent even without repeating magic. Repeating magic is only required to make abilities with finite durations permanent.

Inmate
Inmate

@Techpill
Lucid Dreaming
I'm not exactly sure how to find that game.
Pen and Paper
There's a game called "Knights of Pen and Paper". Is that what you meant?
@JunkTop
Yeah... I plan to waifu her hard.

SniperGod
SniperGod

@GoogleCat
She's the one I wanted to waifu
@Inmate
I plan to waifu her hard.
You poor, naive fools... You'll get eaten alive.

SniperWish
SniperWish

@Inmate
I'm not exactly sure how to find that game.
@GoogleCat
Thanks!
That was a joke. The studio was strangled to death by the Illuminati. There are no more games like it.

Except of course, in your dreams.

FastChef
FastChef

@askme
I hope game makers get past this stage of mediocre copy-pasting.

Why? Don't you want to pre-order yet another CoD, so you can get access to it two months ahead of everyone else because the game was done being "worked on" a year ago?
It has those zombies again!

@viagrandad
Trying to complete 100% of the quests available in a single playthrough was like trying to chew and swallow broken glass.
In the end, there where five quests that I couldn't complete because they broke, and the save I tried to load was overwritten by autosaves that saved while loading saves that saved both before and after fucking cut scenes. Holy shit, I can not even describe how terrible that experience was.

Vetra was alright, though. A little bland, but what was there was fun. The rest of the crew can get thrown into a volcano by a retarded asari.

Fried_Sushi
Fried_Sushi

@viagrandad
Okay thanks. No reason to read it.

Lord_Tryzalot
Lord_Tryzalot

@Snarelure
Not a very powerful god if you only have 4 powers

kizzmybutt
kizzmybutt

@FastChef
being "worked on" a year ago
As I know how these things work, "in development for five years" means "we salaried ourselves and masturbated to cuckold porn for five years".

I'm honestly beginning to suspect a nefarious conspiracy to reduce the quality of entertainment.

BinaryMan
BinaryMan

@SniperGod
You keep saying such things but the more you post the more certain I am in my decision.
She looks cute, adorably emo/goth/in a schoolgirl outfit and the big breasts and cleavage aren't hurting either.
@SniperWish
Darn.
@FastChef
I never even got to those robot worms because I said fuck it to playing side missions. i wanted it to end. The last mission didn't even feel like the last mission. I ended the game by pressing a button, after having done the same thing three times prior.
Then we won, some guy we hate because he was mean to the other aliens (and we for some reason allied with the other aliens) lost and then we were happy.
That fucking movie night scene took me forty minutes to do. Forty minutes spent in loading screens, going back and forth between three different locations and talking to each of your crewmembers.

JunkTop
JunkTop

@FastChef
you don't have to pick the ocean nigthmare if you want the leviathan spawn. this is a later edition where the author changed it so you don't have to take a specific nightmare if you want a specific waifu, but for some reason everyone who plays it still thinks that's how it works. you can take ANY nightmare and ANY waifu you want. it's just that some waifus are better suited to different nightmares.

Lunatick
Lunatick

@farquit
theres a lewd cyoa thread? well u learn something new everyday

cum2soon
cum2soon

@Lunatick
That guy's retarded anyway, lewd and such has been standard in these threads since birth, him trying to exile it makes him a foreign cancer.

idontknow
idontknow

@Lunatick
theres a lewd cyoa thread?
Text lewds can go here, like Lavender.

The /trash/ thread is for explicit image CYOAs of any variety, since /d/ mods are on some kind of psychotropic substance.

kizzmybutt
kizzmybutt

@BinaryMan
She looks cute, adorably emo/goth/in a schoolgirl outfit and the big breasts and cleavage aren't hurting either.
Did you forget the Golden Rule, man?
Don't stick it in the crazy!

PurpleCharger
PurpleCharger

@kizzmybutt
The Golden Rule
I thought that was "It's not gay when it's in a threeway".
Look man, goth + big boobs + thigh high socks hits me in all the right places.

Raving_Cute
Raving_Cute

@PurpleCharger
goth + big boobs + thigh high socks
What happened to goths, anyway?

They seem to have all become basic bitch communists.

massdebater
massdebater

@Raving_Cute
Goth sub-culture died, they and punk and all their styles got taken over by SJWs getting triggered at everything and making people disgusted at them. No more is it about being edgy and subversive, it's about destroying everything you think disagrees with you to create an absolutely safe space and then force that mindset on everyone else.

Methnerd
Methnerd

@Raving_Cute
They grew up and the new ones turned out to be faggots. The current choices in counter-culture are 'true' communism or alt-right.

Are you looking forward to the 2030s.

Emberfire
Emberfire

if someone could write a CYOA idea with bonuses and everything would someone help make the actual CYOA
if I make a good enough one I mean

LuckyDusty
LuckyDusty

@PurpleCharger
You want to waifu someone based purely on their looks?
That's not how this works!

Dreamworx
Dreamworx

@LuckyDusty
She'll be an...entertaining choice of waifu for a VtMB-virgin user.

Garbage Can Lid
Garbage Can Lid

@massdebater
to create an absolutely safe space
I'm not sure that's possible. Why can't SJWs at least try out gentle femdom? Why do they have to be communists? It's so unfortunate.

@Methnerd
Are you looking forward to the 2030s.
I'm waiting for the actually competent matriarchy subculture, ACM for short, preferably with big tits, curves, and Victorian dark panache.

askme
askme

@BinaryMan
The best thing about Andromeda was getting a screenshot that perfectly captured how the whole ordeal felt.

That, and making multiple max damage one shot pistols with vintage heat sinks, then switching between them instead of reloading. Made me feel like a space pirate using space flintlocks.
Now I want to make a space pirate CYOA, but I need to finish what I've got on my plate before I go for seconds.

Techpill
Techpill

@Raving_Cute
the era of vampire fanfics is over

Flameblow
Flameblow

@VisualMaster
This could count as a waifu CYOA on its own.

Jeanette.

Raving_Cute
Raving_Cute

@Methnerd
Are you looking forward to the 2030s.
If it means more girls like Stocking I know I'm ready for those times.
@LuckyDusty
purely based off looks
There's usually a distinct personality type that goes with said look. I'm into that, too.

VtM:B has a max resolution of 1280x1024 or some shit
Oh boy how time has changed in the last 13 years.
@askme
I downloaded the phone app and did strike missions. I had a level 4 Black Widow after a few hours of playing and never upgraded it.

iluvmen
iluvmen

@Flameblow
Yukie.

Playboyize
Playboyize

@iluvmen
Option 2.

Emberburn
Emberburn

@Raving_Cute
distinct personality type
Oh boy, if you only knew...

TurtleCat
TurtleCat

@Raving_Cute
downloaded the phone app
Indulging in the more elaborate methods of intellectual suicide I see.

There's usually a distinct personality type that goes with said look.
Not anymore. Now they want to tell you about saving Japanese fish and African koalas from capitalism.

Used to be you could find an engaging little sadist or at least a demure fan of Baudelaire.

Raving_Cute
Raving_Cute

@iluvmen
Option 2
Holy shit. I actually laughed out loud at that.
Fuck me, that was good.

Crazy_Nice
Crazy_Nice

@Emberburn
Oh boy, if you only knew...
He'll enjoy her. Every part.

viagrandad
viagrandad

@iluvmen
option 2
Thank you, thread, for telling me about this game.
Only problem I'm having is the stupid test put me in the gross vampire faction.
@Emberburn
@Crazy_Nice
w-what.

Methnerd
Methnerd

@viagrandad
w-what.
She has just the personality type you're interested in, don't worry.

Good business acumen too. The ideal wife for an up-and-coming Tremere, to be sure.

Emberburn
Emberburn

@Raving_Cute
@viagrandad
Chinatown is the weakest part of the game, apart from the frontal assault you do near the end of the game. This is a scene from Chinatown. The game is just that good.

And why do you stick with the Nosferatu? You could just change it.

CouchChiller
CouchChiller

@Methnerd
Oh no.
Have I made a mistake?
@Emberburn
I clicked cancel and I'm making a character where I skipped the test. You guys told me not to pick the ones that hear voices.

Spazyfool
Spazyfool

@viagrandad
@CouchChiller
Nosferatu aren't a good choice for a first playthrough as you miss out on a lot and I think Malks are the only other one with obfuscation.

Toreador are a good choice for a first run. Lots of social options and celerity makes gunfights much easier. Be sure to make a build with combat options as there are parts where it's unavoidable.

Dreamworx
Dreamworx

@CouchChiller
Nosferatu is the funniest clan ... but not suitable for the first playthrough.

By the way, you will ask a woman on a beach about a thing you need to keep in mind when all is said and done. Listen to her.

haveahappyday
haveahappyday

@CouchChiller
@Dreamworx
Malkaian, not Nosferatu, sorry.

takes2long
takes2long

@CouchChiller
You guys told me not to pick the ones that hear voices.
They're good for a second playthrough, Nosferatu a third.

Have I made a mistake?
Not at all.

@Spazyfool
Toreador are a good choice
Tremere is the only answer, mortal filth.

Methshot
Methshot

@FastChef
I dunno, I liked Drack and Jaal quite a bit too.

Emberburn
Emberburn

@CouchChiller
I did Malks on my first playthrough. It was the best thing ever, but I regret starting there. I have to second the recommendation to start as a sane vampire.

SniperGod
SniperGod

@viagrandad
gross vampire faction.
Hey, Imalia is like the second hottest girl in the game.
That said, do NOT play Nosferatu in your first playthrough, gameplay is dramatically different, you have to hide all the time and interacting with people is hard.
Choose anyone except Nosferatus and Malks (take Malk on second playthrough, you'll enjoy it more).

@viagrandad
w-what.
Nothing, nothing! Enjoy your wonderful waifu!

Spazyfool
Spazyfool

@Methshot
That's fair. Grampa krogan was a bro, and electric bubblegum cobra with flipperbaby hands did get more effort than the rest of the crew, what with being the flagship for that abortion of a race.

farquit
farquit

@Spazyfool
what with being the flagship for that abortion of a race.
I'm still not sure why they believed having just two humanoid races at all, in a new galaxy, was a good plan.

SJW interns milking the franchise. Deplorable.

Carnalpleasure
Carnalpleasure

@farquit
To be fair, it's just a single star cluster, who's garbage plot had ancient ay lmaos fucking around in it.
Still stupid, tho.

TechHater
TechHater

@Spazyfool
@Dreamworx
I'm joining the Toreador because I'm a pleb that likes charisma builds.
get combat
Cool, I'll pop a point in guns and switch to celerity.
@Dreamworx
Alright thank you. And thank you for not spoiling anything!
@Emberburn
Good to know.
@SniperGod
Jesus that did me a frighten.

AwesomeTucker
AwesomeTucker

@Carnalpleasure
To be fair, it's just a single star cluster
That only makes it worse.

You talk up the game as in a new galaxy, and then it has boring fish people and bioborg with literal deus ex machina.

One might expect the setting of a different galaxy to be imagined as more exotic, even if in only one cluster.

Harmless_Venom
Harmless_Venom

@farquit
just two humanoid races
Should I tell him?

Evil_kitten
Evil_kitten

@TechHater
If you want charisma builds, Ventrue is the way to go. And guns do very little against supernatural enemies. Keep a shotgun on hand (it will help you a LOT against a certain cult) and some other stuff, but you're generally better off with close combat.

SomethingNew
SomethingNew

@Harmless_Venom
Should I tell him?
Him here: please do. Did I forget someone?

Was it 'the creators', do they count?

Playboyize
Playboyize

@SomethingNew
No no. It was more (spoilers) How you make it sound like there's two races when the Kett are really the weird cat-race with a healthy injection of Papa Archon's DNA.
I was pissed when I realized the Archon's plan is basically what the Reaper's did: Take a race, make them your thralls.

TurtleCat
TurtleCat

@Evil_kitten
Thank you!
My reaction time is shit so I usually prefer snipers but if I must.
Swapping to Ventrue and finally completing the character creation.

JunkTop
JunkTop

@AwesomeTucker
I agree that it made it worse.
Having the same generic, poorly executed animals on Arizona planet, Brazil planet, Arctic Planet, and Dune planet was probably one of the things really took me out of the experience.

@Harmless_Venom
That there's really only one? I think he knows, considering he called the Kett ",bioborg."

New_Cliche
New_Cliche

@Playboyize
Well I consider the Kett and the blueguys to be the main features of the game. One dimensional villains and rebels.

There's also the crypto-Christian stuff with Suvi and 'the creators'. You know, for a communist development studio, they sure do love their religion.

Crazy_Nice
Crazy_Nice

@TurtleCat
If you level your Dominate discipline as a Ventrue, you can use it on other people during dialogue. But Ventrue are probably the squishiest of all clans, so be careful.

w8t4u
w8t4u

@TurtleCat
game crashes right when I finish
Thanks...

Playboyize
Playboyize

New Bread /tg/thread/54859316#p54859316

Methshot
Methshot

@Crazy_Nice
Tremere are squishiest and Ventrue have fortitude.

Emberburn
Emberburn

@JunkTop
the same generic, poorly executed animals
I actually forgot about that.

They copy-pasted everything, across the whole game.

The worst was the paid shills streaming it on Twitch trying to justify it. And acting like they weren't compensated by the ad revenue. The fucks.

That's one reason we keep getting crap out of studios.

PurpleCharger
PurpleCharger

@Methshot
Yeah, you're right. But Tremere offset it with extreme offensive capabilities, once they reach the top of Thaumaturgy.

Supergrass
Supergrass

@PurpleCharger
once they reach the top of Thaumaturgy
Mmmm, yessss...

TreeEater
TreeEater

@LuckyDusty
@Playboyize
@CouchChiller
@Stark_Naked
What the fuck is up with the images used? There is every subject and form possible crammed in there. Anime art, anime screenshots, hand-drawn, traditional, vector, game icon, effect, photography, ability icon, hentai, western, IS THAT A FUCKING ADVERTISEMENT?

Fuzzy_Logic
Fuzzy_Logic

@Emberburn
I'm just glad I didn't have to pay for it. Just took it off a dumb-ass friend that bought it, then immediately hated himself after starting it up.
Poor stupid bastard. At least he didn't go full drone, and recognizes that it is bad.

Deadlyinx
Deadlyinx

@Fuzzy_Logic
At least he didn't go full drone, and recognizes that it is bad.
Always good to see. I don't buy at all these days.

It has to have good gameplay after watching it X amount of time. And fucking nothing does now.

At least there's Dwarf Fortress.

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