/cyoag/ - CYOA General - Saber Edition

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Reposting the fetishbait with small adventure bits from yesterday
Feedback, corrections, furious criticism welcome as always

>'Which waifu/evil opressor would you pick?' strawpoll
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>Things I especially want to get (You)r advice on:
To people who seriously considered picking Eloise (if they exist) and Sylvia, but for some reason didn't: What did you like about Eloise/Sylvia? Who and why did you like more ? How would you like me to change her to make her your top choice?

>Things I consider changing in the 1.1 version
Sylvia: clarifying that she considers the player cute and wants to have fun with him • maybe allowing the player to look into Earth's past under certain conditions
Eloise: reword her experiments to make it clear that she considers the player more like a lovely familiar and less like a test subject • reword the last paragraph to make it clear the player will be showered with gently dominant love

>Other changes I consider
Descriptions: reducing or removing the text glow entirely

>Changes I don't consider
Rewriting the characters entirely
Serious changes to Beatrice

I'll probably repost it one more time before waiting for the weekend.

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Shit, didn't see the Tok thread.

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Is Claire the one you thought would beat everyone, or did you think it was someone else?

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Don't worry, you didn't miss anything of value.

Currently has more posters and is being used. Deal with it.

Post some wip.

>fuck a tree
>fuck a knife
>fuck a teacup
>fuck a person
Well that's an easy choice.

>Not going for the classic ceramic
You have no taste.

>fuck
Why would you purchase a fuck doll? Is that the only thing you think about?

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>you care about this, therefore it's the only thing you are about
Are you capable of functioning in the real world?

What someone posted in the last thread:

>Pick A Quiet Morning
>Choose Shelter and Comfort
>Survivalist perk +free perk Found a Friend
>The good doggo as my companion obvs.
>Zombie attractor drawback
>Goal: Find the Truth

Surviving zombie apocalpyse is damn easy, provided the cause is natural. If however the cause are the likes of black magic/necromancy or human-made biohazard mutation virus, then the survival difficulty just shot straight to the sky.

Zombie, scientifically and biologically speaking, is nothing more than walking corpse. And a corpse, if you study medical, will enter putrefaction; the breaking down of a body of a human or animal post mortem (meaning after death). Protein decompossed, the corpse shall be nothing but skeletons. This decay stage occurs between 4 to 10 days after death. The more humid the faster the process.

To survive therefore, we simply just have to WAIT on some place with zero access for these walking morons.
Even better if you live somewhere on tropical place.
Turning on the heater too would work on close place, but beware of the smell. Use gas mask or simply flumask.

Next is to find any source of information. Look for recent newspaper and browse internet. Then after the zombies are completely decomposed, find my way through the TV station. There must be something they uncovered.

Gather canned food and sport equipment that provide defense. Thick leather jackets, blue jeans, high worker boots, and full-cover motorcycle helmet.

Finally, get settled down somewhere with open field for farming and nearby lake, do whatever, and wait for the inevitable ends.

If nothing else happened, my last goal probably is to take care of my doggo's descendant.

>fuck a tree
>Well that's an easy choice.

Ceramic of course.

Unless you are an animal that will do lewd things toward this delicate beautiful work of wonderful art.

>user makes an easy choice based on his penis desires
I just like to assume the worst about people.

>Gehrman implied that the doll is ''anatomically correct''
Thank god he is stuck in that wheel chair.

How do you think he got in the wheelchair in the first place?

>Pick Occult Wizard
Perks:
>Fortune specialist
>Divination specialist
>Summoning


>Become a wandering magician who pushed the button of sanity to each 'unique' person encountered
>Observe as your new 'disciple/doll' unleashed chaos upon the cities
>Erect an apartment, twenty story tall
>Metropolitan interior design, affordable renting fee, flooding requests to stay
>Fill the place up with unsuspected applicants
>Experiment them all up and replace theor body with monotonous doll looping their action at their last moment
>Not even enough to reach Akashic record
>Brooding at the disappointing result

>become a saber- all the worlds evils
>True Name: Dietrich Von Todsbringer
>Alignment - lawful evil
Personality:
>archetype- saber alter
>traits- cruel, apathetic, honorable, resolute, conflicted

Servant Class: Avenger (saber)

Physical features:
>Male
>Horrifying, normal
>adult saber
>ahoge less

Clothing:
>medium armor
>suit&tie, casual

Servant Parameters:
>Strength A(13)
>Endurance B(7)
>Agility A(13)
>Magic C (3)
>Luck D (1)
>NP A(13)

Class Skills:
>Magic resistance B
>Presence Concealment D (4)
>Avenger EX (26)

Personal Skills:
>Battle continuation EX (25)
>Eye of The Mind (false) A (15)
>Mana Burst C (6)
>Expert Specialization E (1) (martial arts)
>Disengage D (3)

Noble Phantasms:
"Infernum in terra, all of mans evil"- EX rank reality marble (15)
grants immunity to damage and effects of inhuman origin, when activated imposes "human reality" upon those within, rendering those within mortal and sealing and powers that contradict this truth
"Frieden and Ruhe"- A rank weapon/s (10)
paired weapons:
Ruhe- not a specific weapon but rather the legacy of the firearms wielded during his life, any ranges weapon wielded by him becomes equivalent to a noble phantasm of D rank and will disrupt the magecraft of Magi
Frieden- Cursed bastard sword, the blade severs magical energy - rendering magecraft, magical enhancements and projections useless. wounds caused by this weapon heal do not heal from supernatural effects

>inb4 3edge5me

>Class
Gambler

>Specialties
Waifu
Entretainment
Acommodations

I know how this is going to end but i have to try anyways.

Earth Wizard
Geology, Magnetism, Enchanting

Someone's gotta help rebuild civilization after all this crazy shit goes down. Any Life mages want to team up and make some eco-friendly cities?

Oh user, why. If this were a lewd picture, I would be humping the fucking table. Don't show me the WIP I want the fuckning CYOA you cuck HTE CYOA

Ayyys

user had a stroke
rip 19x-2017

amazing. great job.

(beatrice best gurl)

If you defeat Gehrman, you too get s... WAIT OH SHI~~

Ye she was supposed to take first and Irma or Sylvia were expected to take second place depending on which will be more appealing to anons who can't stand being weaker than their partner

I considered picking Eloise, she was my third pick behind Claire and Irma.

Couple reasons I ended up not going with Eloise.
The whole "putting me into the bodies of animals" things feels like things could go south real quickly. What happens if I somehow get stuck in the body of one? I know it says she'll eventually stop using her experiments on me, but I'm just worried of something bad happening before I get to that point.
Now if she's teaching me to shapeshift into animals, that would be a different story, and make her much more appealing to me, but then you'd have to rewrite her quite a bit.
And like I've said before, it just seems like I have to give her total control, and while the motherly aspect is something I can get behind, I just think I'd prefer a little back and forth. With Claire it at least implies that we'd have a bit of a relationship that goes two ways.
Maybe I'd be more inclined to choose her if she had better art. It's not terrible, but that mole/beauty mark really brings it down a notch for me. And maybe if she had more milfy proportions to go with the whole mommy thing.

I don't know if any of these things are things you can fix (or want to), but I just thought I'd explain my reasoning.

Guess Tim is really poplar with all the girls.

>19x
He had a good 1800 years or so.

That'd definitely move Sylvia towards being a better choice. If I wanted to be ignored by women I'd just stay here.

kek

I'm torn between shiny metallic and lifelike synthetic

Looks real good so far!

I agree Too bad it is a dead WIP and it will never ever be completed

I'm used to it by now.

Why would anything nice ever happen?

>Maybe I'd be more inclined to choose her if she had better art. It's not terrible, but that mole/beauty mark really brings it down a notch for me. And maybe if she had more milfy proportions to go with the whole mommy thing.

I was worried Eloise's and Irma's portraits will be discouraging, as I had trouble finding good art for what I have imagined. Pic related was among the considered alternatives.

>Now if she's teaching me to shapeshift into animals, that would be a different story, and make her much more appealing to me, but then you'd have to rewrite her quite a bit.

Thought about shapeshifting but it would kind of contradict Taliana's description because it implies shapeshifting magic ("manipulating the form") is hard to do. Will have to buff it differently

>The whole "putting me into the bodies of animals" things feels like things could go south real quickly. What happens if I somehow get stuck in the body of one?

I guess stating that your soul will automatically return to your body if anything goes wrong would remove these fears. Didn't think the issue is big enough to affect people's choices.

oops i did it again

You played with my heart!

Such sweet design hot damn.

is the art a placeholder? because all the suits the companions have looks sweet while this one looks underwhelming

See, that portrait now hugely improves my chances of picking her. Probably my favorite looking girl out of any of them honestly.
It helps that I like animals too, so her havin a whole sorta zoo might be fun to hang around.
Yeah, I can see why you wouldn't want to do shapeshifting though. A failsafe on the soul thing would probably help squash my fears though. Like just stating that my soul will always return to the original body if something goes wrong.

The mobile suit is about 8-10x bigger though, allows you to fly around like a Gundam, and equip lots of heavy weapons for a short amount of time. It's one of the detachable "vehicles" you can use with the Dragoon class, and is what makes the Dragoon class unique. It's not that strong of a suit on its own (which is still highly capable in combat compared to the average soldier) but it's the only one that can pilot large vehicles.

its not about gameplay

its that the art makes it look less cool than the other options, which is probably not what you want for a gundam

I think it looks fine. I don't understand what you don't like about it.

its almost blends into the background due to being so gray/brown- while theother suits stand out and look imposing

it also doesent convey scale well

>All the people here hating on /clang/ and going Ceramic and Synthetic

>its almost blends into the background due to being so gray/brown
That doesn't sound like much of an issue with me. It's visible enough to give an idea of what to expect with the option.

>it also doesent convey scale well
It's exactly the reason why I chose the picture--because it looks bulky. It conveys scale just fine for me.

I dunno you (((SDA))) but I agree with him. It looks like a tiny toy.

Look, if you gave me a choice of waifus I might pick any one of them if I liked the girl better. All other things being equal though, I see no reason not to go synthetic

You're reply as if you don't know what /clang/ is.Or as if you didn't understand what I wrote.
What the hell DID you read?

It's not that hard to see why, really.

You haven't even seen the other modules around it, so I don't know how you're making such a judgment. The scaling is fine, especially for its section.

My point is that I would go with the wooden clockwork/shiny matallic (aka the clang options) if I had a reason to, they just aren't my first choice. I don't see that as "hating on" them.

There's only one people with strong opinion about the material. I don't think its enough for hating the other 2 options user, but rather a matter of preference.

Ceramic material signify their extremely brittleness. Wood gouges and cracks can be repaired/hidden by DIY or skilled carpenter if major cases. So is with metallic.

But with ceramic? Oh no no user, once a crack shows up then it is either broken or replaced as a whole. That's why the level of preservation and maintenance is much higher than other materials. And that's why ceramic doll have some more values than the others.

Maybe that repairing ceramic with gold thing could be used on the ceramic doll?

I just figured out how to make a tiger girl.

>it looks bulky
it really doesent, it looks small and out of focus

you are good at graphical design so you should know you dont place things on background of the same color

>its visible enough to give an idea
an option that looks like its trying to camouflage itself is bad idea

DON'T FIST THE ROBOT.

>an option that looks like its trying to camouflage itself is bad idea
What if the option was offering camouflage?
Checkmate haterz XDD

It depends I think. Porcelain doll must all be in pure white and undamaged. A 'perfection' if you will.

Kintsugi only being applied to imperfection aesthetic stuffs, mostly tea ware utensils such as chawan, bowl, plate, vase...

But rarely on human-shaped doll because as you can see.

>small and out of focus
It's directly in the center and it's small compared to what? The text?

Do you really think that shoulder-mounted weapon is a pea shooter instead of likely a 20mm cannon?

>background of the same color
First of all, blame the artist. Second, it is easy to make out the shape on first glance; you have to be blind to think that this is a "camouflage option."

>an option that looks like its trying to camouflage itself is bad idea
The giant flying robot really doesn't look like it's trying to camouflage itself.

*Screams in sullied aesthetics*

I guess it's not your fault, but I dislike every combination of lifestyle and waifu and kink. I like Taliana's lifestyle (being her demon) and I like the look and general sense of her being dominant; not into BDSM, though :(

Does anyone have the latest W.A.I.F.U. cyoa?

Shiny (Dull) Metallic is the best answer. In the line of TARKUS TARKUS TARKUS

Here you go.

Thanks!

Dorothy is a slut, them bobbies just boin-boin everywhere uncovered even in public.

Nothing wrong with that. She should be proud of her corporeal form.

Now B'Ta'Nyie, on the other hand? Don't get me wrong, I'm not one of those purityfags who insists I should be the first cultist to summon an Eldritch horror from beyond time and space. That's just pathetic. But wanting other cultists to summon her while you're already in an apocalypse? That's just sick.

The Nameless Clad in Gold looks like a man with those abs. I suppose the author did not have any images, or is the last section just HUSBANDOs-only?

>camouflage itself.
its flowery language, but options should attract the gaze- that mech doesn't, it looks like its trying to hide.

sure- that might be the artists fault but you were the one who chose the image

>small and out of focus
because the mech is coloured how it is its outline isnt very well defined, so it seems smaller than it is compared to the box size

>out of focus
once againl because of its colour and the fact that it blends in with the background (also that hexagon pattern overlay) the mech doesn't seem like much of a focal point

>but options should attract the gaze- that mech doesn't
It does, though. I'm genuinely confounded as to how you came to such a conclusion because the mech is very well contrasted against the monotone background. As I said, you have to be blind if you can't differentiate the tone of the mech and the tone of the background. It's the most contrasted part of the image; I find it very easy to pick out where the mech is in the picture.

>it blends in with the background
First thing my eyes go to is the mech. Get some glasses.

Here, I enlargened the image. Does this fix your issues?

better

>monotone background
m80 boy, im not the one who needs glasses here- the background goes from darkish brown/gray to light brown/gray

rather similar colors to the mech

I wouldn't mind a gold lined arm, or other extremity. I will admit I am shallow enough that on the face is a big no no.

If you insist, here's the first page of Food Magican 2. Yes, I am aware that the background colors are ugly.

If the background is not relatively monotone, then the mech is heavily contrasted and defined. The outline is very easy to pick out and the shading makes it stand out very well.

The hexagons make it somewhat difficult to look at.

How strong is the anti-magic from Claire?

Could I use it to negate female magic and bring down the matriarchy?

>then the mech is heavily contrasted and defined.
the lightest part of the background coincides with the lightest part of the mech, and they are of similar enough colors

naturally you can see that there IS a mech there, that isnt the issue- its that it does nothing to attract the eye. its basic art 101- dont have the subject be the same color as the background

I have two versions of the hexagon pattern overlay, one for regular images and one for characters. This is the one for characters, which is lighter; does this look better?

>the lightest part of the background coincides with the lightest part of the mech
The smallest part of the image. You literally have to be blind to not see the mech immediately. It's the first thing you notice.

this is better

Much better, it doesn't feel like you're looking through the hexagons to see the picture now.

It has nothing to do with being shallow and whatnot. A perfection and imperfection is two side of a coin, and each state is equally pertinent on difference appliances, aesthetically speaking.

I like this one better.

wait, what's food magician one?

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