what's UP MY SECOND FAVOURITE BOARD! I JUst wrote a song I want you to tell me what, I want to know what you think, you tell me (imagine it as some sort of doo-wop via surf rock, as sung by someone who has to take a pee)
It's- ah, called "Sand-Trampled Woman"; it goes like:
sand-trampled woman I love you so You are the one for me to be mine sand-trampled woman you're fine you're mine for me you're the one to find you make me forget who I am what time is it whose dog is that it's one in the morning please don't ye-eeell sand-trampled woman oh you look so mangled and gross and bloated what's that thing on your neck what does it do you look like something out of an early 80s Nurse With Wound album cover, o-oh You give me the willies, but that's why I love you have my children just please don't eat them
that's it hope you've enjoyed it!!!
Jace Perez
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Jonathan Jones
This is lyrics, not music, DUM DUM
Luis Parker
just because it's in a written format doesn't mean that it's literature.
James Foster
are we getting raided by THomas fucking Pynchon
Liam Taylor
But it is NO I'm not
Jaxson Morgan
It has elements of literature but it's not inherently literature; it's meant for a song, not to stand on it's own like a poem.
Camden Ramirez
Joyce would love it
Adam Thompson
It IS a poem, I'm just making music for it somewhere between later and never, until I do it's jsut poetreay
Andrew Morgan
11/10 please write more
Owen Long
fuck you i like it/10 with rice
Noah Williams
Intriguing. Who would you say are your main influences? also check these dubs
Joshua Roberts
Following this logic, Shakespeare's plays or Jonson's masques aren't able to stand on their own as literature.
Jonathan Allen
oh cool dude! you listen to nurse with wound? man that's a great band! Not many people know about them now! that's sick that you know that band and referenced them! keep it up dude! anyways add me on rym
Juan Williams
wow talk about butthurt
Isaac Parker
Shakespeare's plays or Jonson's masques weren't written to be ironically bad to as doo-wop sung by someone who has to take a pee!!!
Ayden Jones
Which is why they're shit
Noah Young
if Robert (((Dylan))) can win a nobel prize in literature, then OP can be poetry with all the literary merits poetry garners.
Dylan Cook
>counterhipstering so as to dissimulate his elitist hipsterism >implying NWW is obscure, even well meem'd, friend!
Ryan Clark
affected
Michael Jenkins
What, is Veeky Forums now making fucking rules about how good some verse has to be as doo-wop to decide if it's literature? Are wE FUCKING LOOKING at authorial intent?
Justin Martinez
>authorial intent? that's a spook
Connor Ward
>doo wop via surf rock wwhhhhaaat that's off the walls man that's cool you got ur own thing going, fucking 50's were tite man
>sand trampled woman i get sand, i get trampled, but SAND-TRAMPLED??? thats crazy man what does that even mean
>whose dog is that whaaaat?? a dog? where did the dog come from hahahaha
> early 80s Nurse With Wound album cover oh SHIT dude Nurse with Wound were fucking SICK, the 80's were sick af, ever heard of cosey fanni tutti?
>just please don't eat them whaaat EAT the KIDS what is she just going to pop them in the oven or what hahahahah holy shit
man this shit is fucking tite af man you got bandcamp or what?
hhahah dude brb gotta take a dump
Jaxon Cook
We get it, faggot, you've no imagination, sense of humour or awareness of literary movements and devises of the past 130 years. No need to throw a tantrum.
Aaron King
yea man dropping the kids off at the pool
Robert Richardson
>i get sand, i get trampled, but SAND-TRAMPLED??? thats crazy man what does that even mean theres a fucking picture attached man
Jaxson Edwards
>being this bitter I will pray for you, user
Elijah Jones
so this is the state of Veeky Forums huh brainlet autism and /pol/nigger delusions
Ayden Torres
And butthurt fags like u xD
Samuel Lee
>brainlet autism I bet you think Lewis Carroll is "le autismo xdd"
Adam Thomas
nah im just messing with you. your song does actually suck though
Luke Turner
>trips of truth The world of literature will never recover from that, and the Nobel will never regain any credibility.
David Scott
carroll's autism is thought provoking, brainlet autism is just that, autism and senseless bickering
that's why I specified "brainlet autism" as a negative side of the board rather than just autism like DFC's or Tao Lin's
Jackson Flores
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John Parker
most autistic thing i've ever read
Adrian Wright
pretty sure you're a butthurt /b/tard
Christian Watson
second most autistic thing i've ever read
Nicholas Morris
successful thread
Cameron Wood
>thought provoking Yeah, it provokes the thought "this is garbage"