I’ve been writing this for nine years. Please tell me what you think. wattpad.com
My novel
Camden Cook
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Caleb Gray
This is legitimately one of the most difficult things I have ever read
It's like a courtroom transcript crossed with a fucking screenplay
Leo Powell
Is this meant to be like My Immortal
Henry Bell
I don’t know what My Immortal is sorry. Also my story isn’t 100% done.
Joshua Diaz
>maybe it's a genuine work
>maybe I can be helpful by giving feedback
Nope it's a fucking autist who spent hours on a semi-elaborate joke everyone's going to forget in 2 days.
Why even read the shit you faggots post
Seriously
Eli Perry
>anime girl on the cover
thanks for the warning, OP. I'd be pretty upset if I spent any amount of time reading a retarded lit-RPG quipathon, or whatever the fuck this is.
Lincoln Cox
For real OP, is this story a joke or are you being serious and this is actually what you believe to be good writing?
Evan Jackson
>wattpad.com
Not for me. I get scare easily and this book sounds to scaring.
Robert Carter
Not for me. I get scare easily and this book sounds to scaring.
Gabriel Martin
kek
Brayden Walker
Could be a post-modern masterpiece
Nathaniel Taylor
i read the first line and already know i hate it.
Anthony Morris
Why are 'year' and 'alarm' capitalized lol
Juan Thompson
Makes me long for oily smarts
Isaac Ramirez
Is this supposed to be like Waiting for Godot? I can see it.
Aiden Perry
Pynchon wrote an LN.
Nolan Morgan
I doubt this is really OP's novel. Surely he wouldn't so stupid.
Thomas Robinson
oh wow op this actuilley really good
Jordan Long
this but unironically
Hunter Rodriguez
I'm dead. I'm so fucking done.
Connor Baker
If you guys seen school live. It’s the same feeling. It’s not what it seems to be. Also this not the final version of the story. This going to be a manga or a anime if this blows up.
Liam Hernandez
Really really good, getting a major Hrabal vibe from this
Carter Carter
I don’t know what Hrabal is sorry. Tho thank you tho. Please share whit others that would like this. Thank you! I’ve been working on this for 9 years now.
Jack Rodriguez
I must forgot to edited right. XD
Justin Bailey
Thank you!
Luke Collins
Did you get the part where it just gave you the middle finger? XD
Wyatt Sullivan
Your english is broken af, but other than that the story is alright
Mason Butler
I’m dyslexic. In the final version of it will be fix.
Robert Martin
what is your first language?
Bentley Adams
English. I’ve been having trouble spelling all my life. With beening dyslexic. My school thought I couldn’t handle much. They the refuse to teach me normal classes till my senior year.