>-I really should have turned the edge all the way up and changed the background colour to black and the font styles to SQUIDWARD or whatever fucking font(s) that metal bands use.- Oooooof
Connor Long
I don't understand?
Austin Thompson
You come off as if you're trying to mimic a person who writes for Vice or something.
Aiden Ortiz
is this good or bad
Joseph Hughes
Its bad you fucking dunce
Noah Turner
wow, that's rude man.
Levi Richardson
This whole "I'm a snarky young journalist and I try to wise crack even when no joke is called for or available" thing got boring eight years ago. Sorry we're hurting your feelings but you need to worry about writing with depth, clarity, and flourish before you start contributing to endlessly insipid snark of modern journalism
Grayson Howard
lol wut
John Jackson
actually man, i think the exact opposite of what you've said is what i'm going for. no need to think i've got hurt feelys tho
John Allen
I'm sorry, did you come here to get opinions on your work or to get your fucking back patted? Not only do you write like a seventeen-year-old, you act like one too. Sit up straight, write a good article before you start throwing in jokes, stop relying on "fuck"s and "shit"s to trick your reader into thinking you have anything captivating to say at all.
Joseph Green
no tricks man, i enjoy the informal writing style. I'm not discrediting your opinion, i'm just not sure why you think I should be mad about it?
Levi Long
I feel like it is a decent article and I do value your input on a few subjects, but my use of swears isn't to trick, it's because I enjoy that speech pattern; something that could be seen as if you were talking to me directly.
Julian Baker
my objective here is to find what is liked and not liked by multiple people. if everyone else shared the same opinions than I can look to adjust.
Ryder Kelly
I’ll also add that it’s fucking embarrassing. Write with restrained style not like an ape.
Ian Thompson
ape smash. also, i understand this is a try hard board, i'll leave hahahaha
Oliver Torres
It's awful. You must not be from this board, or you're a skilled baiter, either way this was entertaining
Jackson Walker
You should try next time you write and maybe it won't be juvenile garbage