ITT: Judge each other's book titles.
I'll start:
To Feel The Breeze Again
ITT: Judge each other's book titles.
I'll start:
To Feel The Breeze Again
On Juniper St, Hesperia
6/10
Must Go Back
To feel the breeze from my ass again
The Path of Consumption
Resentment
seems too vague. at least the rest give me an image in my head.
HAH, GOT EEM
Branches and Leaves
3/10
7/10
9/10
5/10
8/10
Haven't decided yet but I'm thinking 'A Lonely Night's Languor'.
7/10. Seems cosy. Is that what you're going for?
xD/10
6/10. Doesn't speak to me personally but that's entirely subjective.
5/10. If I saw this my prejudgement would be 'edgy trite'.
8/10. Simplistic and sweet.
Thank brah
I like it, but would probably scare off normies.
I was going for cosy (I assume you mean cozy)
Its a tale of tumult and turmoil to get back home (and feel the breeze again)
6/10 - hated it at first, but i like it more every time i think of it. What’s it about?
“Empty boxes” - too simple, maybe?
gotta rate others to get rated.
pity rate
7/10, on a literal level, boxes are meant to hold things, so if theyre empty it has a symbolic mystery
Dreams in Black and White
Nice iambs, I like it
Bad
Invasively bad
Mediocre
Better than most ITT
5/10
3/10
4/10
7/10
2/10
6/10
6/10
5/10
This is mine, rate please.
Wise, wise human
Byzantium America
Brutal
I like Dreams in Black and White 8/10
I never noticed the iambs, completely unintentional, but thats probably why I liked it to begin with subconsciously
Is that the whole title? I dont understand
Fucking Faggots: Brown Coloured Plunderers
They are two distinct titles. If you don't get the titles that's fine.
The brain’s best magic is unintentional, baby
Go back to plebbit
These are the only two that aren't disqualified, but they're not good either
I don't have one because as you can see, they're pretty difficult
I like em both, I just didnt understand if they were one title or two.
Its easy to judge without offering anything.
Confessions of an Emotional Pervert
this
Ooggity Boogity
No you
Thank you
1. Saturnalia
2. Autumn Pastel
3. Under An Iron Sun
Remarks on Retrotemporal Efficient Causality: Hyperstition and History: A Schizoanalysis
very interesting, but once again, will for sure scare off normies.
sounds like a weird scifi fantasy thing
The Conscious Retard
An autobiography? interesting choice.
1 and 3 are good.
wtf did I just read
Thanks user, do you like the title though?
Yeah number 2 is just a thought at the moment
Good if you're not going for widespread appeal
Daughters and Sons of my Land
Its a biography I'm writing for an 83 year old nanny who spent more of her time with children of a different woman than with her own. There are some really sad themes that I'm drawing from, but I think it will have a positive ending.
I like to your first and third.
whoops meant for
Sounds interesting, id love to read it
Living men with dead souls
It should be called Daughters and Sons of my Employer.
Might work better as a single stanza rather than a title
You have lost my interest already. Juniper St. sounds generic, Hesperia sounds like an anime place. Don't introduce titles that don't work as a plot.
Hello Stephen King. Way to introduce meaningless buzzwords in your title.
Edgy
More like branch out and leave this place
>adverbs
Why should I care about a lonely night?
Trying too hard to be profound
Postmodern
Seems like mumbo-jumbo word jumble
1. Your best one. But no one is going to read a book that sounds like a rock cover.
2. Purple prose
3. More purple prose
I'm Writer
The Definite Article
funny you should suggest that because I was going to have a similar name for the second part, rather than chapter titles.
Where's your title, edgemeister?
I figured it was something along those lines. Your story is rather similar to mine.
Nothing spectacular; it's an autobiographical short-story. I had intended to vagabond across New Zealand for a few months but it was apparent that I was trying to run away from a recent problem and I had to confront it. I headed home at sunset and resolved to walk the entire night to get back home.
The title comes from a particular moment (around 1am) of respite from fatigue and blister-beaten feet, where I found a comfortable serenity sitting on the side of the road next to a gas station.
Hesperia is a shitty little town in California
It better have interesting events, otherwise youve lost my interest
It would be something like this
Title: Daughters and Sons of my Land
Part 1: Mother's last family.
Part 2: My third family.
Part 3: Years spent away
Part 4: Return to my Land
I only have the 1st and 2nd parts fleshed out, and im working on the 3rd and 4th together (these titles are ones im still debating).
The day my soul died
Put me in the screencap
Would this be a legal title?
#1 National Bestseller
too edgy
No
ok
Nothing too interesting, really. It's mostly personal musings. I'm just writing it for myself.
Thanks
man and I thought /r9k/ was depressing as shit
Orgasm Denial: a Guide in Prose
"An Evening Residue"
Alone
Onan's Palm
Is the book cutesy? If so 8/10
Hype Nation
Calm down John Green
Eyes on the other side
Sorry. I rated that one on a separate post. Thanks for the pity rate.
Fucknife
Symphony Rotations: Bleu et Seven MINOR
Immortalis
Open to suggestions, going for one word title similar to Greek epic poem
Story is essentially a mythical road trip
Odd, but the cover could be neat: FUCK in a loud font and KNIFE in a less bold font, with the shining blade eclipsing the vertical line of the K to contrast the fonts
I'm thinking Ad Gladium because the short story is about a Gladiators death in the arena, but I'm nowhere near a final name yet.
It would certainly be successful
Dilated Vagina
Wait in the Fire
A sleepless night with your mother
Your Hell Is Much Hotter
Do Not Read This Book (No Seriously, Don't)
This is a White Noise style novel on Hypebeast culture
This sounds like a late Harlem Renaissance Novel
Online horror-comedy novella about a serial rapist, loved genuinely & ironically
Collections of poetry from someone from Buffalo, New York. Will receive praise but will fall into obscurity
An obvious rip-off of Story of The Eye. Will be liked by weird twitter people.
A mid-western novel about failing marriages. Will be adapted into an indie film with a different title.
An actually touching novel through the eyes of a young child. No one will openly read because of the title.
A Young-Adult novel that is derivative of Pop Culture Nostalgia. Guaranteed financial success
Torturisto
thanks
Kalmankello - Lich Bell
Who was you?
At the Court of Cats
Summit Child
I want to go home
Is ok
Sounds YA tier
Like it
10/10 bravo
Poor attempt but trips
Forgot mine,
Drops of smoke
I likethis one. What’s it about?
That's beautiful in Finnish. Savupisarat.
It's a chase for horizon lost, on the seas of memories. Alienation and finding solace in this life of waiting.
That is really nice, the only other Finnish word I know is the one for cartwheel.
Care to explain?