How to write lewd scenes without it turning into smut?

How to write lewd scenes without it turning into smut?

Sex, and not having it.
That's what you need.

All lewd scenes are smut. Don't pretend that "literary" fiction doesn't resort to vulgarity and appeal to base impulses just as much as anything else.

who is this jizz jezebel

Define lewd
Define smut
Figure it out for yourself dickhead

Use dirty metaphors


>I touched her delicate flower, and Sucked the honey, like a bee.
>she moaned at the ceiling, numb to reality, only thing on her mind was the beauty of the warm touch

Don't write sex. Everyone knows how it works and writing about it only opens your prose to ridicule.

Keep the perspective in the mind. Less description of what is physically occurring. More insight into how characters view sex. Use it to develop characters and it won't be smut.

>Everyone knows how it works
Y-yeah right

make it a rape scene

...user

Don't you watch porn?

>he thinks porn is sex
user, I-

It's one form of it at least.

Keep the piss drinking to a minimum.

why am i so attracted to women with this eye shape. it's like they're elves or something.

you go overboard with the sexuality to the point where it's actually edgy and you'll be venerated as a literary scholar a few decades down the line even though you're just an edgy smut peddler

Read this book

Philistine.

>Writing lewd scenes without turning it into smut
People that like that shit sound like the kind of fags that give cash to camwhores on twitch.

Add a comedic effect to it, explain it as a "flash-back" while the characters do something else in a point forward in time. Use metaphors or literary figures in general. Explain it through an innuendo.
Basically tell it without telling it. The most exciting and captivating sex/"lewd" scenes are the ones that let you imagine part of it.

It helps if your prose is beautiful as well.
Yes, I know
>prosefaggot

Read the Joyce fart letter and copy his style.

read Bataille

Just gloss over it, say that the characters fucked each other and tried all the positions they could think of or something. Don't go into detail as it is a waste of time. You can describe their relationship instead.

all sex scenes should lead to pregnancy. If the sex is particularly enjoyable it has to lead to twins or triplets.

Written lewd is porn just as much as recorded lewd is porn.

NIgger the only sex in that fantastic fucking book is fauckong gay ass anal sex fo rfucking nigger poofs yo ufucking wanker like fuck off

Dawg to be fiar, who wouldn't want to eat Nora's farts

Wot m8

>I stroked her silky, slender sandy, and she squee for me, like honey for bee

>Carried her into my little castle. She helped disrobe me, her knight in a three piece, as I helped her, my maiden in flannel.
>Then we foog
>next scene

You don't.

KEK

i stick my mighty pole into her sopping wet folds, thrusting in and out. She clenches her fun hole and I unleash my wee juice; it is like the waves of fukishima. She lets out a jarring squeal, like daddy had just bought her a car. I pull out, roll over, and contemplate my life

it makes me angry that girls like this exist

the problem isn't your being a 'prosefaggot'
the problem is thinking henry miller's prose is anything approaching beauty

By >implying
Showing or telling makes it smutty, but suggesting something is going in the room emitting loud R&B makes it raunchy at worst

Read The Colossus of Maroussi

for whom the bell tolls. I might not even call it lewd; its more like what i imagine 'making love' is like

I feel you mane

I usually don't fall for stupid fucking bait pics but jesus fucking christ

Why?

Strong armed Achilles fugged the long haired Hector,
Ass to groin, among the sand and slain Trojan scattered.
Deathless Zeus, in mighty mountain Olympus, said thus
"Disaster."

Something like that.