CHAPTER FOURTEEN
>the air Kilometers above the streets below
Kilometres doesn't need to be capitalised.
It's also Kilometre.
>‘Live as if you’d drop dead in ten seconds.’
I'd probably just sit down if I was going to die in 10 seconds.
>I catch her directly in the knee, and the leg out from beneath her, and she falls with a look of surprise.
>and the leg out from beneath her
Also commas. I know there is some instance in which you do use a comma and 'and' together but I forget what it is.
>I run my hand over the already applied lotion
Ara ara
>"Heh"
Heh.
>60 times 5 is 280.
300. There are 300 seconds in 5 minutes.
>^!@%& @#@^ !& &@^*#%# @#@^
I have to ask now. do you make this gibberish to the length of the word? I want to start filling in the blanks.
>You will never be so rich you pay a guy to just play saxophone in a room that you might not even be anywhere near.
>No doubt, he means his wife.
NO HE MEANS YOU!
>“Actually sir, I’m afraid I don’t.”
HE WANTS YOU TO GIVE HER A GOOD HARD FUGGING!
>Line 142
Disregard that statement about the sax before.
I just remember other people are there.
>Her lips shin bright red
shin
>the most celibate of men.
Something I only learnt the other day. A vow of celibacy only pertains to marriage. A vow of chastity means no fugging.
>Vocaroo
I only got to listen to this now.
I got a hearty kek out of the image of some guy sitting in a 1990 Toyota ShitBox with a couple of pizzas on his passagner seat while he's in a rainy parking lot singing into his phone.
>and the image of a wolf comes back to me. A hunter in the dark.
They're gonna fug tonight.
> Whilst at you back, stands Mr. Death.
>Turns around
>Hiroyuki imediately punches his lights out.
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