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>really enjoyed Grisaia when it came out >no interest whatsoever in reading the sequels
Grayson Walker
VN's can be very soft. if it's filled with the comfy atmosphere that makes you smile, it's soft.
Dominic Rogers
I'm about to begin working on my own vn here in a little bit as a hobby during my free time and I'll most likely try gathering a few others to help. I'm still trying to figure out a plot device for the over all story that sounds good but I wanted to see what you guys would suggest for changes.
plot goes as follows
[protag insert name] is a young man who thought he had life all figured out, but soon after completing college for teaching, he one day comes home to find his wife cheating on him with his best friend. Making matters worse he had yet to attain a real job and didn't own the place, so now he was jobless, homeless and lost his wife and best friend all in one days time.
He soon after gets a call letting him know that there's a job opening as a english teacher in a nearby region. He takes up the offer and moves away from his past events, but before his first day of teaching, a succubus appears in his room warning him that he is slowly losing his mind from the recent events. He shrugs it off as some weird stress related dream and starts his first day teaching at a all girls school..
It won't be the last time that succubus visits him, but is his eyes deceiving him or is all of this really just inside of his head?
(I was first thinking of having this vn be mostly humor based in a messed up kind of way but as I thought out the plot so far it's leaning more towards some mental dark theme stuff.)
The six girls I have in mind so far haven't even been fleshed out yet aside from them being a shy, refined/rich, tomboy, tsundere, cheerful/aloof and smart girls. Possible to have the succubus girl become a route depending on how things move forward. I'm also looking to have each girl with their own main route which would be focused on vanilla stuff, while optional routes are more hardcore fetish related stuff but I'd want to make sure if a player is leading towards a optional route they'll know what to expect from it way before hand if they wish to continue it.
Henry Richardson
Wrong OP,.
Aaron Butler
DO Z O L A D
Hunter Robinson
8th for KKK kikestarter when?
Jackson Butler
What a great a- >it's a kid For Christ's sake, what a waste.
Dylan Thompson
Thread with correct OP
Luis Martinez
nah
Joseph Peterson
>tfw can't play Grisaia without feeling sleepy
Landon Gonzalez
How did the "I'm gonna write a VN without words" pasta go?
Dylan Cox
I don't rightly understand what you mean.. it's just a plot device idea that doesn't even have any of the story written yet because it isn't 100% set in stone as it stands..
Jack Garcia
Kei is best girl
Isaiah Allen
>tfw can only cum when the heroine shouts nietzsche excerpts during h-scenes now t-t-thanks masada
John Cox
So when's the release of 18+ Eden?
Benjamin Stewart
Q4 2027
Tyler Torres
Only good for bullying
Kayden Garcia
>tfw you will never play the role of Zarathustra in Mercurius's opera
Julian Wilson
Make sure to read Ayakashibito to protect /ourgirl/'s smile.
Ayden Flores
Ayakashibito is kamige.
Aiden Adams
Probably because they suck. Especially Rakuen. Is that one out yet?
Kayden Rogers
What, don't you want another 80 hours of the author self-inserting as the ultimate chad?
Carter Rivera
>write VN where you self-insert as ultimate chad >make $$$
hmm...
Nolan Morris
Is Kristoff's motivation really some dumb flowers? Is this a metaphor for something else?
Luke Jenkins
He's no ultimate chad, though, he's a neurotic pushover that puts on a strong exterior image to hide the fact that he's broken inside
Jackson White
Is moege coming back? I'll post cute Sumika then
I love Sumika!
Ayden Myers
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Carter Turner
I can't wait for the Dies irae anime now. It's gonna suck so bad.
Josiah Scott
I haven't watched anime in awhile, I hope it's alright.
Chase Myers
It will be like 12 episodes my user companion. It will be shit.
Jose Hall
Do we like Conjueror now?
Jackson Thomas
I can't wait to see the CR subs. It's going to be a trainwreck
Jackson Perry
i'm going to post on this thread
Robert Anderson
>posting in a JOP thread
Christian Smith
>more thread wars This came first, so I'm staying here
Vol 1 and 2 have been out for like 3 months already, user.
Logan Lopez
I love grape! Grape a qt and she keeps me from offing myself!
James Thompson
No it's a cash grab and all ages shit.
Ian Green
...
Ryder Torres
Where? Why has literally nobody discussed them?
Lucas Carter
where have you been? it was discussed and people repeated the same dumb memes about it non-stop.
Christian Nguyen
>all-ages >kusoge
gee boss i dunno
Juan White
Bad art, same edgy writing but without the humor, bad art, in medias res storytelling when we already had an established cast of characters in the series we're familiar with...
I bet you any money that it would have had a much better reception if they had just decided to call it something other than Grisaia. It just can't compete with its predecessors.
Charles Gutierrez
Proper non JOP thread. Thanks.
Camden Bennett
>all ages >gaysaia the poop of poopiness
Ian Hughes
nice, thx user
Evan Gutierrez
Can you fuck off with your thread wars garbage?
Easton Sullivan
It's literally the same writer with the same humor and style.
Juan Rivera
Honestly it just isn't very good not to mention overpriced if you actually buy your VNs. The president of Frontwing admitted it was a cashgrab and that is really just what it feels like. Maybe the future episodes will be better but as of right now I wouldn't recommend it to someone.
Parker Hill
It's not anywhere near as good.
Parker Wright
Post a better imouto I fucking dare you.
Christian Bell
Kasumi is super cute to be honest. She's the best childhood friend character I've read.
Is it worth re-reading Dies irae when the 18+ version comes out? I don't even know what it adds.
Jeremiah Torres
Porn and uncropped CGs so probably not worth it if you've already read it.
Jayden Gray
The Rusalka H-scenes are worth it. Not much else though
Charles Ward
Best girl
Eli Lee
Amantes amentes is the best version and even in japan it wasn't +18.
Michael Walker
ded thread, ded medium
Josiah Garcia
...
Thomas Hughes
18+ patch or not, i'd say that dies irae is a game that is heavily re-readable considering that you have zero clue what is going on for the majority of the time on your first read
Jose King
I'm going to reread Kei, Marie and Rea routes.
Owen Ortiz
>not just playing Common route and waiting for patch
Jaxon Torres
>playing common route and then forcing yourself to wait, dissolving any hype you may feel over time
I was in literally the exact same boat, but played them anyway a few weeks ago in hope of a Kazuki route. The closest thing I got was a shitty bad ending and cut H-scene, but that being said I still enjoyed the main story enough for it not to feel like a waste of my time.