Doki Doki Literature Club #26

Monika es mi esposa

I did, but we'll see how much you like it

Ella es mia puto

BR?

los dos son idiotas, monika es mia solamente

Te voy a matar

Alright, now it's fixed for sure.
100%
Please don't bully I'm dyslexic

I like this edition more

daily reminder that the dokis irl locations have been triangulated!

>Yuri is in Japan
>Monika is in Miami
>Natsuki is in Dan Diego
>Sayori is hanging in New York

they're in both threads now

Acceptable.

What does it mean?!

>Yuri is in Japan

Bullshit, she's Russian!

no she's a japanese lesbian

Is this the right thread?

And she's in love with Natsuki!
So that means she's not a lesbian.

>Music stops

Dan "5'4 and ill make you sore" Salvato programmed Natsuki to be a trap on purpose it all makes sense now!

>pastebin.com/bn3G3Ekk
"Local user passes out again"

>What does it mean?!
It means I'm moving to San Diego

ahuevo que si

Sorry, repost from last thread. I didn't even notice we reached bump limit. H-how do I share my writing.. This will be the first thing I have ever shared with anyone. It's a word document if that matters. I apologize in advanced if there are typos or anything like that. One problem I have as a writer is sometimes shifting between past and present tense. The story is meant to be in present tense, so please forgive my mistakes if I switch between the two. Please be gentle with me.

Where the FUCK is the store?

pastebin should work

throw it into a pastebin and then post it here
that's what I did
>always keepo a .txt. or .docx

fat fat fatty fat fat FAT fat

You spend time doing things your doki is interested and she wants to see what you like to do and wants to see what games you play. Would she like the last game you played?
obviously not ddlc
I think Yuri would like Bloodborne a lot

Every day until Christmas

There is nothing wrong with a fat monika, more to love!

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Monika doesnt seem like she'd like God Hand very much, but neither do I so it works i guess

wait

WWE 2K18? Nobody likes WWE games. We just play them.

It's pretty decent. The love declaration was a little soon and sudden, I mean, in game you've only spent a small amount of time with her. At this stage of the relationship it's usually more along the lines of "I really like you and I want to get to know you more", and sort of an indicator that she doesn't need to worry about scaring you off. In general I think your pacing was a little to swift.
I hope this feedback is helpful.

Ahhh.... Kos, or some say Kosm

>not liking god hand
The man with absolute no taste

tfw pastebin doesn't do italics. The text messages are supposed to be italicized.
pastebin.com/97LPswfs
I-if you guys like it, I could do some more with the other girls at some point too.

Every thread

Monika would most likely force me to create an Avatar that looks like me and a partner that looks like her in Dragon's Dogma.

I think the last game I played was Sonic CD.
Sayori would enjoy it to some degree, I think. Though, if I were to introduce her to Sonic games, I'd rather play 3&K and alternate in co-op.

>Doki Doki Literature Club

>ninja'd by 10 seconds

i like it,i just dont like it. when i play it its like when yuri cuts herself

>pastebin.com/bn3G3Ekk
it's very cute user, I'd like to see a part 2.

I agree, it was pretty swift but I wanted to keep it short
Thanks for the info m8

>Yuri is lighter than Natsuki

I wondered what kind of poem Sayori would have wrote after you told her you loved her, and she actually wrote something instead of going crazy. Here's my shitty attempt

pastebin.com/Zrgx55pc

>megaten
>monika being extra cute
You are a good lad

Can anyone spoil me on what happens in the fanmade natsuki side story?

Too much of a pussy to play it desu

>Replaying the game to see what I missed
>Sayori route
>The fucking knife driving into my chest over knowing what's going on and yet being forced to be none the wiser

I'd like it a bit more if you used "you" instead of "u." Also try not to use ">~

>Can anyone spoil me on what happens in the fanmade natsuki side story?
Have you played DDLC?
Then you've been spoiled.

Its just Natsuki's pov on the morning after your weekend with Yuri. Nothing happens that you don't already know.

you know how there's a bunch of memes about Natsuki being a trap

I was trying to emulate her text style based off her official twitter. Pastebin doesn't do italics, and they're supposed to be text messages.

I've managed to pitch Doki to a hyperfeminist I wagecuck with because halloween soon.

>Don't write out text messages in the way that text messages would be written.
Imagine being this large of a faggot.

I see. Thanks for clarifying.

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Monika would like Bomber Crew because it's a management game with everyone dying.

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Poor Sayori. I love her, but hate to see her become the Yamcha of VNs.

I actually type out my text messages unlike text messages, with proper grammar and whatnot.

You learn to grow thick skin as a Sayorifag...

I know I did

I hope you enjoyed it, user. I'm also glad to see a fellow megaten bro.

I should also clarify that the Jasmine being an aphrodisiac which I learned as I was writing is what made me push the story like that, although still rushed
It might take me a while but I'll see about it
lewder the better or no

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Make it lewder for Yurianons sake

>I type out my text messages properly.
>That means everyone does this thing!
haha holy shit user how can you even be this much of a faggot? It's obvious that you don't actually write. Not every character in fiction is going to have your and my autistic dedication to proper grammar in something as frivolous as a text.
Just look at Monika's fucking twitter, she clearly is meant to write like a stereotypical teenage girl.

Please no fighting, user's. I was just trying to emulate Monika's twitter style. Admittedly, I made user's text messages have proper grammar, because that's how I send my text messages.

make it LEWD user

Bed breaking sex with Yuri!

I don't really expect everyone to do the same though. To tell you the truth, I only skimmed the story quickly for a grammar check, so it was really my fault.

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Yuri pads her chest

Bed breaking is hot. You get a star buddy.

can anyone give me a screenshot of the scene where sayori hangs herself, i got too spooked and missed the chance

Love it. But more with just Monika. She doesn’t have enough fan artist attention

Monika es una mierda
Natsuki mejor chica

Ah, it's all cool user. It came from a place of care. Just be a little more careful next time, alright?

what a fat cow

Sure.

just making a comment on the idea since I'm writing a lewd at some point
I dunno if I can make part 2 bed breaking since Yuri is still "normal" at this point but an Act 2 story might be interesting with a concept like that

Yuri did nothing wrong, toxic love is the purest love

I'm not too into writing for Act 2 stuff. I would maybe do a Just Monika, but it's pretty much already played out by the game itself, so there's not much room for creativity there.

Natsuki es una niña pequeña, Yuri es la mejor chica, grandes pechos, gran culo.
Yuri es gruesa (lol)

Raping yuri on an alley!

RIP ;_;

For fucks sake, I wanted erections, not feelings

no

>:(

>that thigh gap
Such a waste