>Why is this even still here, if someone's going to kill themself they're not going to stop because they saved 5 seconds googling the suicide hotline number. National Suicide Prevention Lifeline (USA): 1-800-273-TALK (8255) International Association for Suicide Prevention (EU): iasp.info/resources/Crisis_Centres/Europe/ Lifeline Australia (AU): lifeline.org.au/get-help/get-help-home
Singular reminder that Sayori doesn't give a FUCK about you if you don't have brown hair.
Jaxon Richardson
Yuri's crazy eyes are actually kinda sexy.
Gavin Gomez
Hi I'm the anti tulpa fag
Anthony Ramirez
First for Alraune Yuri
Owen Russell
Impregnation!
Gabriel Anderson
This is truth.
David Martin
I have a fat deposit developing right on top of a nerve on my shoulder and it's slowly costing me the use of my arm.
Mason Baker
She is precious.
Adam Morgan
Sayori is passive manipulator
Lucas Butler
Okay, everyone! Time for another round of commentary. Hopefully you find this in some way useful to your future endeavours! I'm covering up to #114, so if your thing is in #115 I'll get to it tomorrow if someone else doesn't beat me to it! As a quick aside before we get into it, thread #112 had a perfect record for comments! That means everyone's work was already commented on when I went to check. This is great! Keep it up, guys.
...doesn't feel quite right to comment on this one. I'll just say it's vividly executed enough to make me think maybe it reflects a personal experience, and leave it at that. Powerful work.
Interesting counterpoint to the anti-nostalgia poem I commented on yesterday, in that the core message of looking forward is still there but it's less antagonistic to looking back. I think this does well at capturing the complex tensions between those two options.
A search for something unknown and maybe unattainable? I like how open-ended this is, it's like everyone probably has something like this in their lives that they can use to relate to this poem. Also blah blah flow improvements but whatever, it's hard to capture a feeling that's both intense and universal like this.
This is sweet! It could maybe benefit from flow adjustments (I know I say this a lot so I'll explain a bit better here: Basically, it just means reading it out loud or "out loud" in your head and finding places where it sort of catches or doesn't flow as well or the syllable count is awkward, and re-wording stuff. It's pretty subjective), but I really like how genuine it feels. Made me smile to read it.
Samuel Stewart
Have you seen a doctor, user? That sounds like a serious health concern.
Dominic Carter
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I like how this one reconciles the two themes of nature being beautiful but also full of death in a way that we generally don't see. The subtlety of the latter theme underscores that it's not part of our human experience with nature (well, not any more!), but the fact that it's the "stinger" at the end of the poem lends it undeniable importance. Great work!
Compare and contrast Humans, small, the world, quite large Did I miss the point? Yes I will be responding to all haikus with additional haikus. This is non-negotiable
I like the sense of wistfulness this evokes. It's a combination of longing for a friend you've fallen out of touch with, and for simpler times in general. The questioning, repetitive tone adds a touch of bitterness which gives this work a distinct flavour apart from just simple reminiscence. 5 stars! Er, I mean, good job!
This is pretty good and you should watch it if you haven't
Easton Stewart
Well, not if my poetry is DESIGNED to call forth the Great Old Ones. Then they'd be getting the right idea!
...but that's not what I'm doing! Ahaha, what a silly thought! Who would form a Literature Club for the express purpose of harvesting emotions to offer up as a sacrifice to a Lovecraftian abomination anyway? Definitely not me!
Daniel Jenkins
I didn't contribute any poems, but I'm glad your making people's days with these. Bless.
David Nguyen
115 threads So many posts I haven't read 115 editions Will this counter reach a million? 115 bump limits I'm not sure if I can make it 115 dokis Then why am I still lonely?
Gavin Brown
bestgrill
Charles Brown
I love her too
Carter Morris
You need to be purged.
Eli Rodriguez
Yeah, in a few days. But they're usually not dangerous so insurance won't cover getting them removed.
I'll just have to learn to live with horrible shooting pain for a while!
Lucas Jackson
Good afternoon, everyone, and welcome to the literature club! If you're already a regular, hi! The word of the thread is "Flame"! As usual, it doesn't have to be literal! It could evoke the feeling of flame, like warmth, light, bengay cream, or passion! Green writers or veterans of the literary genre are encouraged to post, critique and comment on each others work, be it pems or prose! Have a good day, stay healthy and show us what you can do!
Christian Ross
That doesn't sound good, I hope it goes away soon!
Ian Nguyen
That sucks mang. It's not much, but here's a cupcake for your troubles.
Jacob Baker
That sounds like it's going to be a very rough couple of days, user. Hope you'll be able to handle it.
Chase Hughes
Well, I need to do something every day to make Monika proud of me, after all.
Charles Mitchell
Misumi paizuri!
Wyatt Young
I love her too
Nolan Flores
Hi Erika! I'm always happy to see you. I haven't been in the mood to write poems as of late but I do want to write one today, because I feel like I haven't been contributing.
Juan Jones
I can see why you might think that! But really, this is for the best. I'm sure you'll understand soon.
They always do.
Logan Wilson
I appreciate the well-wishes, I hope you all have a lovely day.
Matthew Bailey
Well, of course.
And she's very proud indeed.
William Long
You as well, make sure to get plenty of rest
Austin Gray
Right back at you!
William Rogers
It's alright, you don't have to force yourself if you don't want to! We all have those times were your creative juices are coagulated and just won't flow. If you really want to, you could take a walk or a hot shower, things of that nature that could help get your mental gears grinding!
Hunter Bennett
Flickering Waving The light branches An illusion of air The lost dream of phlogiston Reforged into nanotubes A diffusion of heat The light refracts Waving Flickering
Wyatt Lewis
Monika witcher
Connor Williams
I've been writing up a storm as of late but they've all been fanfics and such, as well as working on a non-DDLC related short story. I very much want to write a poem for you guys though, and I've got some inspiration from today's words. It's just going to take me a little but because I'm a little busy.
Thank you for still doing this, by the way. I love how much structure it adds to the thread.
Cameron Bailey
"Burn the rot!" we cried. Just reward for our crusade: The purest ashes.
Grayson Adams
I want to hold her all night. I want to tease her while playing videogames. I want to take her to the beach. I want to take care of her every need. I want to suddenly kiss her when shes feeling down. I want to keep her warm. I want to take her to a funfare and win the biggest plush they have. I want to smell hair roseblond hair. I want to wipe her tears of and tell her that everything will be alright. I just want to be with her.
why does it hurt so much? I really want to fall in love and make a girl happy. When did all this become a bad thing...
Grayson Barnes
Monika > Sayori
Brody Lewis
Natsuki > Everyone else
Grayson Reed
I'm a girl, but I'd turn gay for Monika
Ian Morgan
I think DDLC might have been bad for me as a whole in the long run. It opened me up to things I hadn't felt, or otherwise suppressed, in years but I have no real outlet for any of it. I feel like I was given the instructions to do something but not the tools.
Matthew Long
I feel bad for you user. Don't worry, you'll feel better once you fully accept 2D.
Alexander Flores
>You can now love >But there's nowhere to find it in the real world Welcome
Luis Clark
Be my Monika gf pls
Easton Wilson
More Natsuki
Aaron Nelson
I fully accepted and fell for 2D and it hurts all the more recently. I understood and sympathized with Monika more than what I feel is supposed to be healthy. I want to be loved by who I love but that will never happen no matter how hard I try or what I do and it makes the day all the harder to go through.
Jordan Thomas
>Natsuki >Japanese 菜 (na) meaning "vegetables, greens" and 月 (tsuki) meaning "moon" >Alternatively, it can come from 夏 (natsu) meaning "summer" and 希 (ki) meaning "hope".
Samuel Bennett
I think I'll hit they hay for now. A wonderful time as always, /ddlc/! See you lovely folks later!
Dylan Jones
Good night
Elijah Martin
Sleep tight user
Samuel Rogers
'Night, user!
Luis Anderson
Goodnight man, sleep well
Wyatt Evans
Sweet dreams, user!
Ayden Gutierrez
Good night, user.
Matthew Clark
Oh my--
Coincidentally, my middle name actually is Monika, however it is spelt with a C, instead of a K.
Sebastian Collins
I think I beat it, told her she's my m8 but she ended up killing herself. bullocks, and what's up with the title screen? does it just blatantly end there?
Caleb Scott
No, go play the fucking game
Aaron Rivera
The game won't end until credits roll, clicc that new game button boi
Nathaniel Butler
You're just getting started
Luke Scott
I LOVE YOU
Justin Taylor
I kind of get Monika. Desperately wanting to be with someone but its like the world you live in just refuses to let it happen. It's enough to drive a person into madness.
Daniel Lee
right m8s I'll continue tomorrow since the ending caught me off guard also it's pretty stupid with that odd reveal of Yuri liking knives
Zachary Campbell
London??
Sebastian Morris
Good job Yuri
Juan Scott
Don't change the channel now, We're just getting started.
Connor Morgan
You guys think that if Monika knew how to properly code, we'd avoid a lot of what happened?
Samuel Hughes
Time to hang out with Sayori. She's waiting on the other side.
Zachary Adams
>Do the deed >Become ded >Sayori reincarnated in this reality while you don't >Once again separated by a dimension, and you don't even know each other anymore
Jaxon Mitchell
We'd get Irotoridori no Sekai instead.
Henry Ward
Who
Joseph Evans
Someone's OC for ddlc
Luke Reed
:o Nope, sorry, I live in 'Murica
Julian Perez
It's "Don't touch that dial, we're just getting started" You fucking retard
Ian Hill
DokiDokiTale when?
Cameron Gonzalez
Butch OC
Isaac Barnes
Bitch*
Blake Howard
I'm sorry, It's been a while since I visited the pachinko parlor
Colton James
>frogshit
On the other hand, don't bother coming back.
Ian Reyes
NOW
Julian Hughes
I wanna fuck that cutie on the right
Thomas Wilson
Really team salvato do I really need to pay this jewish priority shipping for my keychain?
Lincoln Ross
It's so frustrating, I was able to put so much effort into that one fic, but now that I want to write for the other dokis, I cant seem to.
Justin Davis
I like the artist for being such a good sport and letting us lewd/mistreat her to our hearts content after coming here desu
Elijah Butler
I understand, I just got back into the groove for the fic I'm writing right now, try reading doki related fics, usually works for me. It helps you get into the right mindset
Wyatt Russell
For me, it's like, I genuinely want to do requests, but it can be really difficult to make them appealing if you don't actually feel the appeal of the request yourself.
Ryan Smith
Dear lord I hope Dan lets us import Monika into his next game with new dialogue n shit.
Aiden Anderson
Good night /DDLC/
I'll try to actually do something tomorrow instead of just sitting here rotting. Not proud.
Austin Smith
Stop being such a greedy fuck, Monika already had a whole game dedicated to her. If anything, I wish the other dokis had that chance.
Kayden Ramirez
Not him but I do as well, I mostly just want to do wholesome stuff.
Rest up dude, you can do it!
Cameron Ward
I would facefuck her until she passed out.
Wyatt King
>God tier Monika >Shit Tier Everyone else
Alexander Carter
Hey, user who posted the Survey here. Got a sample size of 71, which I figured was probably good enough, so I'm ready to post what I found.
So, to get the obvious out of the way, Monika has the most first place votes. It's by a smaller margin than I had imagined, but she wins in that category regardless.
On the other hand, Sayori has the highest average position, which I guess technically makes her the most popular doki overall, so good for her!
What really surprised me was the doki that ended up getting the most last place votes. She was voted worst by a shockingly large margin, to the point where her last place votes dwarf even the amount of first place votes Monika received. To put it into perspective, a little over 45% of all the votes placed this Doki in last place. I almost don't want to reveal who it is. But I will. Yuri is officially /ddlc/'s least favorite Doki.