The comic is based off of Veeky Forums culture beginning with a weak dyel who meets a professional yet spergy powerlifter with a goal to become the strongest man in the universe. Together they engage in adventures like fighting gains goblins and defeating roided enemies like scooby and rich Pannini with a barbel that Louie uses as a sort of club. (Kind of like the Veeky Forums version of flcl)
It is satire of course but is supposed to be a light hearted comedy where Veeky Forums as a whole is represented in it but with a much larger emphasis on Veeky Forums
Make sure that they have a love affair with the barbell.
Parker Roberts
A) I hate the storyline but not the concept B) Scooby would be a wise sage guiding you and Rich would be a blacksmith or butcher C) Women should only be roided cheekie-types or hightest D) Estus protein shakes E) Pls don't suck F) Pls don't try and be SiR
Nathaniel Hughes
if Eddie van Halen was a woman that'd be him, almost an uncanny resemblance
Ayden Martin
I'd read it. Spergy powerlifter should have a shrine to Rippletits in his room and always have a thermos filled with whole milk clipped onto his belt. Dyel brah should be full normie status, that'd be a fun dichotomy between full sperg and full normie.
How far are you into it?
Carson Young
This
Wyatt Wright
Idk why it won't let me post this
Henry Gutierrez
Well I haven't really revealed the story line. And it's bound to change
Also I'm taking everything you said into consideration
What is SiR?
Wyatt Hughes
Please don't, we don't need more meme shit LOL GAINZ ZYZZ XD on this board.
Christopher Gray
I've already completed ten pages which is not as much as what I'd like to have done considering the time frame. However once I get a good scanner I'll make sure to post my work to get some pointers from Veeky Forums and /ic/
Also I will most likely put your advice into consideration.
Justin Carter
If you use a post with VG and other keywords in it, it automatically comes up as spam.
Brody Taylor
>what is SIR?
Jace Scott
>What is SiR?
You are too new to be making a comic about Veeky Forums
Henry Peterson
Makes sense as he does constantly shill himself here
Let him be fat at the beginning, who once walking out of a McDonald's, falls and his triple double mccheese and squeeze it all over his Evan shirt. It causes him to rethink of his life decisions.
Let him be >18 or older >bullied on highschool >gets sudden bad memories when he's lifting, and makes him rage and lift more.
I can think of more autistic things.
Dominic Sullivan
Oh I've seen those comics everywhere I just didn't bother seeing who made them. It's kind of hipocritical in my part but yeah I like his work.
Samuel Ross
They better end up fucking each other
Parker Baker
>What is SiR? You havent been here long enough to do a Veeky Forums comic justice
Easton Brooks
Jeff Seidman leads a villain corporation of roiders and Chad's who treat people like shit, Jeff is a judge in Mr Olympia, he won 12 years in a row, Jeff is older in this. In the end the protagonist wins Mr Olympia where usually only Jeff's personal chads only win, Jeff steps down.
Kayden Sullivan
I already have the sort of work in progress plot for the first chapter
