CYOA Thread

Adventurer
Ampharos
Houndoom
Shiftry
Ally: Rocket Grunt
Rival: Lass

I like how you mixed the fetishy choices with the non-fetishy choices desu. I had a hard time picking between Gardevior and Shiftry. Kind of leaning towards the former because long walks on the beach and 1:1 discussion make me uncomfortable.

>/qst/
>author-driven writing taking suggestions from the audience.

>CYOA
>Audience-driven writing taking direction from an author.

>Adventurer!
>Absol, Froslass, Crobat
>Ally: Ibuki
>Rival: Red

I like this CYOA. Thankfully there isn't much room for the Nuzlocke fags to ruin it.

NEED MORE MUSCLE WIZARDRY

Why are all the best girls dragons?

>Adventurer
>Beedrill
>Flygon
>Dragonite
>Red ally
>Ibuki rival
Filling the pokedex and aiming for champion with red sounds fun. Plus with beedrills description how could I not take her to become champion?

Dragons are simply superior.

>dragon are simply superior
>get rekt by fairies

>dragons are so superior they need to force in a new type a decade in just to deal with how amazing they are.

>You'll have you age reverted to thirteen - sorry, but it would be super creepy to have an adult go on an adventure with kids
>And before you ask, yes, they are all at or above the age of consent.
What.

>Secret police
>Gengar
>Mightyena
>Salamance
>rocket grunt ally
>Eureka ally
Somebody's gotta keep these streets safe.

Filthy fairy propaganda, everyone knows dragons are unbeatable!

>Worship
>Region: Pit of Silence + Savage Savannah's Affinity
>Techniques: Herculean Strength, Conditioning, Dancer's Strut, Dynamic Entry, Thrust, Butterfly, Gatling, Guillotine, Tempered Heel, Tyrant's Heel, Esoteric Grace, Conjuration Cadence, Immaculate Voice, Avatar of Adonis, Conjuration Poise, Euclidean Reach, Universal Body Language, Emperor's Cadence
>Legacy: Mountain
>Title: Lazarus
>Familiar: Neckbeard Grizzly
>Challenge: Conquer the Future

>token eldritch wizard

Adventurer
Houndoom - The confident one.
Dragonair - The one who needs confidence.
Gengar - The one that lightens the mood when the others are too serious.
Lass - Ally. Bringing some healing items in a pinch is incredibly useful.
Ibuki - Rival. She seems like she'd be the greatest challenge while also being friendly. She'll gloat, but she still helps you get to the pokecenter and everything.

Only complaint is that I'm not sure how Red helps as an Ally.

Interestingly enough, there's no universal natural law making the age of consent 16 or 18, so the easy explanation would be that 13 is the age of consent here.

>choosing Secret Police
>wanting to slowly turn into a carbon copy of Officer Jenny

>13 is the age of consent here.
Even the most lax countries mention the age of consent is at least 14 years.
What kind of shit is this

>Lifting her tail in front of you.
Scandalous.

Japan's is 13 on a federal level. Same for Spain until a few years ago.

Besides, it's a CYOA. the legal system could literally be anything.

I think Spain's age of consent was 13 until recently.

>dragons lift their tails as a sign of anger or aggression
>humans interpret it as extremely flirtatious
>humans think teasing dragons turns them on
>dragons just think humans are assholes

Yeah, Yuki? Well, why don't you just go cry to Megu-nee about it?

You took it in the boring direction.

Japan's "federal" age of consent is in fact 13, but every single prefecture has it jacked up higher than that.
So effectively it really isn't. If you go there an hit on school girls your gaijin ass is getting deported. So don't do that.

That's not the point, dear user. Nobody here is planning a sex tourism trip, just pointing out to this user that there are and were places where it was 13 in response to his disbelief.

Does anyone know what this is all about? Google was being less than helpful.

If I had to guess, user is making a CYOA and asked us if we're interested so they could know if they should continue working on it.

Even without the age of consent thing, lots of the pokemon girls look like they're mid to late teenagers at least. Just made me question the whole "kids can't adventure with adults" line is all.

>Italics hinted at girls military yesterday or the day before.
>Still no army of zombie cuties to conquer the world with.

>he thinks the pokemon metagame revolves around dragons and not steel types

Didn't they nerf those a little too?

Steel mops the floor with the new type, Fairy.

What said.

Rapture Academy was an old Veeky Forums effort to make an EroRPG. I'm working on a CYOA vaguely based on the setting and was checking for interest/looking for critique on my first CYOA. (I've fixed the aspect ratio thing on images, for the people who pointed that out.)

is their age ever stated?
Your last quote says THEY are all legal, not that you (thirteen years old) are.

>I'm working on a CYOA vaguely based on the setting and was checking for interest/looking for critique on my first CYOA.
Sounds interesting enough. Any inkling of an ETA (feel free to be as vague as you like, something like "days", "weeks", or "months" is informative enough)?

Serena's Ally description states that you're legal.

Well it looks like a really cool idea so far. I'm really interested in seeing the boys dorms, what the actual hell is going on, and why the girls all hate each other (like in real life)

Maybe a week or two, unless people want me to do the post one page at a time as its done thing.

One more row of allies/rivals would help round out those choices a bit. It wears a bit thin if you take the extra rival/ally.

Also, time to make some money!

Team Rocket
Chandelure, Crobat, Houndoom, Mawile
A somewhat balanced team while still mostly keeping to the criminal team standard typing. Including obligatory bat Pokemon,

Rivals: Red, (the proper rival, really) Serena (Why yes, I am a monster) Blue (May as well do this right with a full set of trainer rivals)

Ally: The thing is, the rocket grunt sounds like she'd be totally inept as an ally if you're actually ON team rocket. So other than that Ibuki is the only one that might somewhat fit.

Team Rocket itself was never all that threatening, but if it if ever wound up like one of the later variants with actual "end the world" plans or something I'd punch out the boss myself. (Like it's ever that hard to do in the games) As for criminal stuff, I actually wouldn't want to hurt anyone (much) but I will totally pull the heist of the century at the casino.

Take this to /qst/ you guys got your own board for a reason.

And it begins.

Begins nothing. He's been doing it since the day the board was made.

See the following:

Japan consent laws are weird. At age 13 you're allowed to do things like grope and shit, but full-on snoo snoo is a nono until they're older.

>ftw want to get drunk again and make cyoa
I always knew I'd end up with an addiction: I never knew it would be caused by making pictures for the internet.

Did the mind control cyoa got an update or something? Last time I checked he wanted to impliment a new mechanic or something.

Adventurer. Why should I tie myself down to some organization? Let's live a little.

Dragonite. She's got the same kind of attitude and wanderlust I do.

Gengar. I like that kind of fun-loving, playful attitude.

Shiftry. It's good to have someone to remind me to take it easy.

Ally: Serena. A girl after my own heart.

Rival: Lass. Who'd turn down the fetish bait rival?

I feel like this could use a better balance of Pokemon, but it's definitely a fun one. Thanks for making it!

Amy, Bonding Band Soulbloom amulet

She sounds like a buff which, and buffing your partner should be stronger than other things I think. So she'll just buff me and I'll beat the crap out of things.

>At age 13 you're allowed to do things like grope and shit
If you mean that in the sense that breasts finally start growing up during 13 years then sure.

Report and ignore. He's just doing it for the Yous

So that wip image was something of your design that you're working on?

MCCYOA has been dead for months and months, AFAIK.

Does anyone have the Crown Quest CYOA?

Yeah. I'm open to suggestions for improvement, but I'm not all that great with photoshop.

Giovanni did nothing wrong.

Can someone at least post the most recent version?

this is so hard for me to choose!

Anybody who picks other option than Skala, Piet and the Dispersion Chalk is a soulless monster.

>Pick Skala even tough I probably won't like her
>This make her magic weak
>Apply dispersion chalk to make it even worse
>Fail Piet's revival, another soul mate could have done better

>BUT HEY, I DIDN'T IGNORE SKALA'S PLEADING, I'M SUCH A GOOD GUY.

Adventurer
Ampharos
Garchomp
Chandelure

Allies:
Haruka
Blue
Rivals:
Rocket grunt
Lass

Dispersion chalk won't make Skala's magic weaker UNTIL you form the second bond.

You can just take Skala and let her do whatever. It's not necessary to bond to Piet, she can find someone on her own.

>Faction
Adventurer

>Pokemon
Ampharos
Gardevoir
Meowth

>Ally
Blue

>Rival
Lass

>Double /ss/ action. One is sweet and motherly. The other is cool and dominant.
>And a cute loli catgirl to go on top of it all
>And I can shower them in gifts from Blue to show them how much I appreciate them, while also sexing Blue
>And then there's some horny girl following me around begging me to fight her so she can lose and I can make her pay in "other ways".

Pic related.

Or, you can save Piet without retcon-ing her bond. Just save the dude from getting hit by a bus.

How would that even work?
She already has a soul bond. I figured the way to revive her was to go back in time and stop her soul bond from getting hit by a bus.

Unless taking them back involves going back so far you replace her original soul bond, but I don't know if that'd even work.

He's already dead by the time you get that option (meet Skala).

Travel with Skala back to past and get second bond with unbonded Piet?

Nevermind I understand what you were trying to say now. Send Skala back in time, she goes to find the bond-mate and makes him watch before crossing the street. How else would she have saved Piet, anyway?

By preventing her from finding a bond.

Amy
Malevolent Staff
Spirit Potion

I get superhuman abilities and a source of spells of my very own? Score! The spirit potion is just some form of added insurance.

Adventurer
Beedrill
Gardevoir
Salamence
Ally: Ibuki
Rival: Lass

Beedrill a best, already one of my favorite pokemon before that absolutely perfect description. Gardevoir was, well, hard to pass up. I had a really tough time deciding my third slot, though. Absol, Gengar, Crobat, and Houndoom were all very close in the running but Salamence was too good and would probably be good friends with/ a good mentor for Beedrill.

I actually don't know who Ibuki is from the games/show but she sound cool. And picking Lass as the rival is maybe a bit too easy mode but come on. Sounds cute.

Ahh, okay that's really cool then. I misunderstood your first post and thought that the wip pic was some old pic from yester year that never got finished and you were wondering if anyone would want something similar done.

I think it looks really cool so far, I know we haven't seen much but from what we have it looks like there are quite a few different ways to go about doing things. I'm also excited by how many different houses there are and that's only on the girls side of things.

It's a little hard to give suggestions at this time though with as little as we know about it currently. The one thing I can say though is that I hope the character creation portion of it is quite large and detailed to go along with the amount of detail you have in just this houses portion.

Veeky Forums sure likes their Gardevoirs.

Would you add an option for people who prefer fighting bare handed instead of hiding behind girlfriends?

And who would you be fighting, other people's girlfriends? You asshole.

I want to fight the assholes that would force their their girlfriends to fight all their battles for them.

Fuck, man you got like a third of my favourite pokemon in there and I can only choose three.
Oh the humanity!

I'm mostly just sad there's no galvantula to cuddle with.

Ampharos is my favorite on the list right now, with Garchomp being the best for battle.

>forcing
>implying they don't want to fight
>implying they don't get off to it
>implying your most important duty as a Pokemon trainer isn't giving them an outlet afterwards

I'd love to see a tough Tyranitar gal myself.

That's a lot of implications user.

>Humanoid so nothing too weird.
>Empath whose pokedex entries go into how much they care about their trainers, how they know all their feelings and desires, and how their own happiness and mood are tied inextricably to their trainer's.
>Also said to be incredibly loyal, to the point where they'd lay down their life for their trainer without hesitation.
It's not hard to see the appeal of Sirknight.

>No Ditto
Sadness.

Are you actually incapable of associating a relationship to a girlfriend beyond fucking and being lewd?

Hate to tell you, but it's more fun to imagine that kind of thing that it is 'talk about her day then do the dishes'.

No. Why, are you?

Secret Police! Time to protect everyone's smiles!

Pokemon: Chandelure, Gardevoir, Shiftry
Shiftry covers the team's weakness against Ghost-type moves, while Chandelure and Gardevoir can pull out moves that are at least normal-effective against the things Shiftry is weak to.

Allies: Eureka, Team Rocket Grunt
Keeping my team in tip-top shape is important in tracking down Team Rocket's activities. Having a mole on the inside is even more so.

Extra Rival: Lass
Extra Ally: Ibuki
So I can have a heavy strike force ready for assaults on defended Team Rocket positions.

>his idea of a healthy relationship is whatever anime and sitcoms tells him what it should be.

I'm not the projecting here.

Aren't you, user? Because it sounds like pretty classic projection. If you hear someone talking about sexy fun with their partners and think "you must only value them for sex!", that says a lot more about you than it does me.

Because pokemans are subhuman hunmanoids and are not considered adults?

Looks interesting, please finish it.