Love Can Bloom, Continued

First off, basic legal etceteras.
Image from 1d4chan, the Veeky Forums wiki, attributed under a Creative Commons Non-Commercial Attribution license.

Greetings, people of Veeky Forums. In the interest of, at the least, extending the unfinished piece of legendary Veeky Forums 'writefaggotry' (that is to say, a bundle of sticks with books in it) known as Love Can Bloom, I have taken upon myself, with encouraging lack of opposition from the Emperor, the task of continuing the story.

I decided that the people of Veeky Forums deserved a suitable end for the story, preferably one which
-Explains Retribution,
-Beats C.S. Goto in the face with a multilaser, and
-Fits with the supposed, unavailable original ending mentioned on 1d4chan.

If you have not read the first ten chapters (the original story, to the best of most people's knowledge), then go read it on the wiki, and may the God-Emperor have mercy on your soul.

In the interest of not spamming a wall of text, and based on my perusal of the rules of Veeky Forums concerning external links, I have decided a far better endeavor would be to instead link a Google document (in no way advertising, well, anything) containing the story. If you have any comments or suggestions, feel free to let me know.

May the Emperor forgive us all.

Chapter 11:
docs.google.com/document/d/1a0_foUVGZSd7Ueh4oIHWLJOSimWUJ05ur5njVcIhTN8/edit?usp=sharing

Other urls found in this thread:

docs.google.com/document/d/1_2P3b-s_rH212hXUCW_RSIHEZ0dHgNd8iAvwB9G0ugo/edit?usp=sharing
docs.google.com/document/d/1FoMmYSFi5RAdetQSbsvOAzPQ9l0D10eYa4DtqMiOMw4/edit?usp=sharing
docs.google.com/document/d/1VORxXo7urBgjyLy2zxhIWaHymoMODt7QX1JJGZAqvfw/edit?usp=sharing
docs.google.com/document/d/1d3tXxCzJYut6-DCt6Htsr1c0aUmWFpRJ5T86M4quaiA/edit?usp=sharing
youtube.com/watch?v=pywjdJ7P-7o
docs.google.com/document/d/1zA9NPzDxkYp5Bov-1BGEgSGq1mvNiXI3fA7g2Q-3Ook/edit?usp=sharing
docs.google.com/document/d/1AleViCnEp_Eize5fnepCAog6PJz3z_LvzUpseIaAKOc/edit?usp=sharing
twitter.com/SFWRedditVideos

Some have questioned whether Retribution or Love Can Bloom is canon. I say, "Why cannot both be canon?"

...Probably because of NERD RAAAAAAGE.

Chapter 12:
docs.google.com/document/d/1_2P3b-s_rH212hXUCW_RSIHEZ0dHgNd8iAvwB9G0ugo/edit?usp=sharing

what is this?

Seconded,the hell is happening?

Actually I would a smut fic of Leo and Anna (from the macharius series).

So far so good.

Well it's certainly better than other attempts.
If you can please continue?

Are you seriously not familiar with Love Can Bloom?

Not everyone here will knows Veeky Forums mythos user.
Sometimes new people will come here.

It begins....again.

I know what LCB is.

doing good OP

I'm starting to fear op went to sleep

op ded?

OP is kill ;_;
We took too long to notice him.

pls no

;_;

Live dammit live!

I waited years for a proper conclusion for this story and you will not take it from me!

OP? OP! OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOP!

>mfw Macha is back in DoW 3

Hopefully someone murdered Op for his despicable attempts at bringing this cancer back.

>NEEEEERD RAAAAAGE

>OP? OP! OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOP!
*zzzzzz*

[okay well fine Lofn can be canon k]
Chapter 13:
docs.google.com/document/d/1FoMmYSFi5RAdetQSbsvOAzPQ9l0D10eYa4DtqMiOMw4/edit?usp=sharing

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

I'm with you here.

WRYYYYYY?

Also, fine, I messed up the name before.

Stop writting dumbcuck.

It's back!

So as we're obviously unfamiliar and not being sarcastic, what is this?

>[okay well fine Lofn can be canon k]

The fuck you talking Lofn existence is basically set in stone!

I... I mean... um...

[okay yes Lofn is completely and totally canon in Love Can Bloom, and there is nothing at all contrary to this, regardless of the Inquisition's claims]

I was being sarcastic.

*sigh*
Love Can Bloom is a famous piece of writing from Veeky Forums, based off of a comic showing a Vindicare assassin, tasked with killing the escaping Farseer Taldeer from Dawn of War: Dark Crusade.

Basically, to summarize:
-Insanely trained and brainwashed assassin tasked with obliterating someone's head falls in love with her
-Incredibly powerful psychic space elf falls in love with assassin
-Inquisitor is a jerk [HERESY! *BLAM*]

If you just do a Google search on 'Love Can Bloom', you can find and read it on 1d4chan, the Veeky Forums wiki.

Good shit op, you are doing what others could only dream about.

"I want to protect that smile."

bump

Bumpitty bump

Interlude: An Inquisitorial report on the Dark Crusade
docs.google.com/document/d/1VORxXo7urBgjyLy2zxhIWaHymoMODt7QX1JJGZAqvfw/edit?usp=sharing

Gewdo

this is pretty neat.

If you want an added bonus, read it in the voice of the Dark Crusade narrator.

Wait...

Someone is going to make a Love Can Bloom mod for Dawn of War, isn't he?

>It would consisted of long escort missions.

I don't know about this.

Never underestimate the people of the Internet.

'Tis a silly place.

Remember that it goes both way.

Nobody asked for this.

Are you or are you not Bloomwriter? Pretty sure the last time I heard, Bloomwriter wanted to rewrite the whole thing, but he also has some severe self-confidence issues which led to his disappearance in the first place.

Some people did

Go to bed, Jensen.

No, I am not the original author. Frankly, his original vision of it (and, indeed, writing) is likely far better than mine.

Although, actually, it would be really, really nice if he did come back and finish it. I do not believe that I quite do the story justice.

Don't doubt yourself!
The people here are like D.Eldar they feed on your fears.

>May the Emperor forgive us all
He is fine with this as long it ends with Eldar dying for space STD

Isn't it the Chaos Gods that feed on emotion?

...And would fear be Tzeentch or Slaanesh?

Then again, the Internet pretty much is the warp.

Dark Spear also like to snack on people's fears, it delays Slaanesh from eating their souls.

Okay, I admit it, that snowmarine is kinda cute

Lutherniel does top cute.

*Eldar

WRYYYYYYYY?

Wryyyy.

Chapter 14: docs.google.com/document/d/1d3tXxCzJYut6-DCt6Htsr1c0aUmWFpRJ5T86M4quaiA/edit?usp=sharing

"Next up, on Love Can Bloom! Peter Jackson and Matthew Ward team up to butcher the most famous piece of writing from Veeky Forums to make three, two hour long movies!"

Coming soon to a Veeky Forums near you: The conclusion to Love Can Bloom?

No matter what /v/ says, Bioshock Infinite proved that escort missions CAN be fun

After years it's finally coming this story will have it's conclusion, beautiful
Can you do it in a RTS though?
I sincerely invite people to try (no sarcasm)

Are you from China? Don't you know what Google is?

>After years it's finally coming this story will have it's conclusion, beautiful
Of course, the majority of fa/tg/uys (or something like that) must approve of it if it is to be canon - right?

You just need to talk about with the guys in 1d4chan and they will surely approve, I think they are the ones that want most for this story to end.

I know about this story since 2009, I just meant to say that new people come here sometimes.

Why hasn't GW made Love Can Bloom canon yet?

They certainly toyed with it
>That fucking codex

...

I remember seeing this guy working on this a day or two ago. He's doing a lot better job than the last guy, so I think we should support him.

True.

>better job than the last guy
Stop saying shit like that. Bloomwriter is a visionary.

No not bloomwriter, there was another one he tried but his writing skills weren't so good.

Oh. Well, carry on then.

Would tapered let Luigi have sex with her while she was pregnant? seeing as eldar births are so rare she probably would be terrified to do anything.

*Taldeer
Fuck you autocorrect!

There was another guy who tried - I can't remember his name, but he wasn't especially good at English and most people didn't enjoy his work.

I was in the thread where he started - I would've tried myself, but I convinced myself other responsibilities kept me too busy.

>Luigi
kek

I dunno. Maybe foreplay? Their relationship always seemed more romantic than sexual.

>implying her hormones wouldn't at ties make her want to jump LIIVI

>tapered
>Luigi

You might be into something here, but should be work of more depraved minds.

Eldar births are only rare because they don't have enough soulstones to protect more offspring, not because they are challenging or biologically hazardous.

You see, this is why I suspect that the vast majority of attempts to expand on Love Can Bloom don't work out.

The smut or the line of thought of leaving things for others to do?

there is some decent fapfics but there certainly could be more pics

Because people want to make things, but then either bang their heads on old Veeky Forums fancanon or actual 40k canon?

Interesting since we are on the topic (I imagine this was already asked) would lofn needs a soulstone?

Not if she has faith in our Immortal Emperor.

>The smut

Mostly because of how disturbing their story ideas are.

I don't know of anything that explains it in existing LCB canon, but I imagine, as Lofn is half Eldar, Slaanesh would not get her soul when she dies. Of course, we don't really know what all happens to human souls when they die, so a spirit stone might be important in any case.

Her father would probably take care of that part although I think Taldeer would really like for her to pray for her dead pantheon.

I imagine she would need one, since she seems to take after her Eldar half more, and apparently later becomes a Farseer.

Though I imagine a Vindicare would either miraculously manage to get a soulstone from the Eye of Terror itself, or manage to sneak one from the Eldar coming back to their craftworlds after a soulstone-grabbing expedition. He might even be able to diplomacy with Taldeer's help, especially since she seems to have lost her soulstone in this canon.

I'm not writing shit, but for simplicity, I'd say she should die like a human, but while alive have the full range of eldar emotion-psychology. Thus, if she starts catering to the darker half of her psyche, then Slaanesh will begin to nibble a la Dark Eldar.

If the Thirst begins to take her, then death would be a mercy. Perfectly grimderp.

>praying to dead gods

Shiggy diggy

This could be a interesting sequel
>"LIIVI I'M PREGGERS LET'S GO TO THE EYE OF TERROR TO GET A SOULSTONE SO OUR BABY SOUL DOESN'T BECOMES DEMON FOOD"

I can sees it

>LIIVI mistakes her reasons for wanting a soulstone entirely
>thinks it's another one of those cravings

Also, is it alright if my headcanon is that LIIVI was the Vinidicare shot in Winter Assault during one of the cutscenes, and was patched up by still has memories and emotional attachments to Taldeer, who he would've seen at the Eldar camp?

I don't see why not.

Well, you must understand, one of the (original, mind) bases (spoiler alert) in Love Can Bloom is that defective Vindicare assassins were being produced. I would (personally) argue that it somewhat detracts from the story for him to have seen her before. However, it is not inconsistent with the canon, and you can think whatever you want.

...Unless the Emprah disagrees with you.

>...Unless the Emprah disagrees with you.
>consorting with xenos

The Emperor's blessing was removed from LIVII a long time ago.

Nice trips. I just figured that it was a good way to explain why he hesitated on shooting Taldeer in the beginning - I never knew about the idea they were being made defective, so I tried to figure out why LIIVI would become defective.

>I just figured that it was a good way to explain why he hesitated on shooting Taldeer in the beginning

Well, of course, the best explanation is that Eldrad was trolling her, just as planned.

youtube.com/watch?v=pywjdJ7P-7o
WRYYYYYYYYYYYY

There remains but one part in the story; it doesn't quite end here.

On a side note, I think that LIIVI is probably actually the son of Sly Marbo. Much stranger things have happened.

Also, even when Eldrad is only vaguely alluded to, he's being a troll. What a Richard (that is to say, a 'Dick').

Chapter 15 - Conclusion:
docs.google.com/document/d/1zA9NPzDxkYp5Bov-1BGEgSGq1mvNiXI3fA7g2Q-3Ook/edit?usp=sharing

Hey it's this thread, I remember I tried and failed[spoiler/] to bring a ending to this story. Hopefully you'll do better than I did. Good luck

Awesome! Midnight for NA is really not the best time to post this however.

I figured that doing so (just before I went to sleep) would increase the chances of the thread not having died in my sleep.

On a 'side' note,
The epilogue to Love Can Bloom; now with 90% more Lofn.
docs.google.com/document/d/1AleViCnEp_Eize5fnepCAog6PJz3z_LvzUpseIaAKOc/edit?usp=sharing

May the Emperor grant this his blessing.