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Bird is the word.

Can I post a cyoa that isn't about birds?

Calm down user. We haven't even seen the best bird CYOA yet.

okay, but, hear me out here user, what if it's OC?

You can post non-birds in bird edition.

>You can post non-birds in bird edition.
But it isn't bird edition, it's bird addition?

Yeah, how many birds do we need?

Oh for fuck's sake...

We need more birds.

Mebbe you can make a Bird Subtraction thread next time eh?

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Blacks are low tier and therefore it gives you 10 bonus points if you pick it.
Just like blind, fat or bald.

>this is OC btw

I would absolutely love to read your builds, and how you think your themes work together (for instance, you think picking the Home + Nature might makes you the 'God of picnics'), and who would pray to you and all that stuffs.

But if you don't feel like posting that's cool too, you don't have to. I'm just saying I'd love to read it.

Wow user, you sure put a lot of words in here, didn't you.

>Aetherial

>Fertility
>Wisdom

>Hunting
>Cunning
>Creativity
>Health

Terrestrial

The Moon
Creativity
Beauty
Crafts
Justice
Health

Prince Of The Moon & Stars; probably going to play the role Aphrodite and other gods such as her played in my pantheon.

>the moon
>many of your followers will be sailors
Will this effect be enhanced if you are also the god of love and justice?

THE WALL is now a God.

Ascension: Aetherial
Major Themes: Order, Defense
Minor Themes: Crafts, Health, Justice

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Ur-matek, Master of the Soulfire Forge, Lord of the Eternal Balance, Gleamer of Truths, Smith of the Gods, and Patron of Homosexuality

>Celestial God

>Death
>The Sun
>Wisdom
>Order

>Crafts
>Marriage

I am the Master of the Soulfire Forge (the Sun), where all souls come to pass and in its heat a new life for them is forged.

I am the Lord of Eternal Balance, for all souls have their place in the hierarchy of life and to rise or fall is a boon seldom bestowed.

I am the Gleamer of Truths, he who knows speaks to souls of men, learns from them, teaches them and judges them.

I am the Smith of the Gods, and rarely I whisper truths of the Crafts to a soul who is soon to be reborn and thus I spread knowledge of my arts.

I am the Patron of Homosexuality, for I bless those who relinquish their right to bear children and choose to form unions that bring no new souls unto this world which diminishes my ever increasing workload.

Now worship me so the souls of the departed may return unto the world.

Ascension: Terrestrial
Themes:
Entertainment
Debauchery
Creativity
Crafts
Beauty
Health

God of Porn.
One and done, motherfuckers.

Aetherial

The Sun
Wisdom

Beauty
Health
Creativity

The god of body and mind. You will never lose either as long as he favors you, even in your old age.

Aetherial

>Major themes
Death, Magic

>Minor themes
Prophecy, Seasons, Justice

I am the god of Entropy, patiently waiting as seasons pass, and the one who will welcome you in the afterlife. I will be the caretaker of the dead, for all will be mine in the End, I just need is to wait, even other gods. Time is inconsequential to me.

>Ascension
Aetherial

>Major Themes
Fertility
Love

>Minor Themes
Health
Beauty
Debauchery

Body is your temple and you must not keep it to yourself.

Aetherial.
Death+Defense
Justice+Crafts+Season (Winter)
Having the god of Death also be the god of Justice and craftsmanship is a interesting combination. I was tempted to make a comfy god of death but... It'd have been weird

Hm. I wanted a form that allowed me to walk among the world but a lot of the themes I wanted to embody are unfortunately Major. For the good of my people I will take up permanent residence in the Godly plane as a Celestial.

This might break your idea for how the theme system should work but I like it a lot when CYOAs offer you some flexibility in what sort of things you're allowed to pick so it feels a bit less constrained. Something like forgoing two Minor themes for one Major would be neat.

Odot, the Celestial god of Productivity, Civilization, and Warmth

>Major Themes
The Sun
Agriculture
Order
Fertility

>Minor Themes
Crafts
The Home

I really like this and even have a few more ideas to build small but synergistic pantheon but I won't be too greedy.

>Angry Pete
Wasn't that the bird that shagged the back of that BBC nature narrator's head?

>Terrestrial
I want to avoid living in a godly plane only, and with the ability to create an avatar might really upset some people. Like they might take it personal if you don't grant them their prayers or ignore them.

>No major themes, but damn that defense picture though. So good.

>The Moon, Hunting, Prophecy, Cunning, Health, Justice

Nothing more than an organization which is a catalyst to the reformation of decadent civilizations around the globe. Working in the shadows to bring justice to the guilty and the corrupt. The initiated will be trained under a mysterious man undefeated in combat and guided by a mystic woman with who's prophecies lead to revelations.

Aetherial
Death
Nature

Hunting
Health
Justice
God of THE CIRCLE OF LIFE

>Celestial

>Sun
>Order
>Wisdom
>Death

>Moon
>Justice

I'll be The All-Seeing Eye, The Lawgiver, The Keeper of Truth, The Judge of the Dead and the King of the Sky, distant, impassionate, but fair, unbiased and all-encompassing. I will bring balance to the world and the deeds of it's inhabitants, giving good laws to the living and giving their due to the dead, punishing wicked and avenging wronged. Powerful and powerless, kings and paupers, all will be equal in my eyes with only their deeds and intentions, hidden or open, speakingfor them. All will be equal, and no one will be overlooked. Big or small, important or meaningless, no one will be ignored, no one will be forgotten.


No "Time" theme. I am dissapont.

>still no cuckqueen cyoa

Should I just make it myself?

This is really good. Nice job, say do you think you could add companions? Like other gods so you can have a full pantheon?

We ARE the Pantheon.

yes

please!

cuckquean*

I mean this more as a humorous coincidence than anything approaching a political statement but I realized that a hammer and sickle would be an appropriate symbol for Odot. Also did decide to go ahead and build Odot's wife. I envision the two of them at the head of a small and comfy pantheon who are more interested in supporting and building up humanity than bickering and hoarding their own power.

Selecyne, the Celestial goddess Nation, Family, and Walls

>Major Themes
Love
Wisdom
Defense
Order

>Minor Themes
Marriage
Crafts: Walls

The emphasis on walls has a dual purpose. She will not only oversee the construction of great defensive projects like the Theodosian Walls but also strengthen construction on a smaller scale. Walls are one of the most fundamental aspects of good architecture and Selecyne will ensure that our citizens' homes and businesses stand strong and last for lifetimes.

Hang on, Aetherials only get three minor themes. I'm gonna take out that Cunning.

I'll be Celestial
I'll be the god of Fertility so that my people can be more youthful, and they can have more children which means a more powerful nation.
I'll also pick love so that we have a nice defensive bonus for our city, and so there are less single moms.
Death is a necessity and no one picked it I don't think. I want my people to have an afterlife, everyone deserves one. Good people go to heaven, bad people go to hell.
And I'll pick the sun for my last major theme. It's a good general perk for my people it goes well with fertility and it's benefits for old age, and less sickness.
Minor themes will be
The moon so I can have control of both celestial objects in the sky. Both the sun and moon are under my domain.
And hunting will be my second that will go nice with the moon, and maybe death.

>Celestial
>Major themes: Agriculture, Wisdom, Order, Defense
>Minor themes: Justice, Trade

Witness the God of Civilization. I've always loved this concept, but I never really see it. The city itself is a temple, and every village, farm, and trade outpost is a shrine.

Yes. It's a kakapo, the cutest damn species of parrot there ever was.

The only question is if I should be a goddess or a god. I mean the perks of love and fertility seem more feminine, Death in greek mythology was ruled by a man Hades, the sun was Apollo also a man.
However the moon and hunting were controlled by Artemis a woman. So should I gender switch myself or not?

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>Aetherial
>3 Major theme>
>picks 4
Que?
Yes? No? It's mainly just to say who would likely pray to you. I mean, sailors need light at night. It makes sense.
Or are you asking if picking god of Love+Moon means sailors will be gay? I don't know what you're going for here.
Will you tell people you're a God or not?
That is a neat take on Death. But what Season are you the God of?
I think it could be cool. Death can be a bro.
Any particular craft you want to specialize in?
I considered doing just that, with the points. But Terrestrials won't get Major themes, that goes against the entire point.
>Defense picture
A God working as a vigilante? Nice!
Dude, I could have added fifty more themes and you'd find something that wasn't in it.
God of both Sun AND Moon? Damn dude.
I do love Justice + Death, and Order is a nice thing to add to anything, really.

>Will you tell people you're a God or not?

Do I need to do that to get worshiped/powers/benefits to the people?

>a goddess or a god
Why not both.png

In case you care, the reason most solar gods are male is because stability and dependability were seen as male traits. Lunar gods were mostly female because women were considered to be more unstable (and emotional).

The reason Death is often male as well is because most religions see Death as a divine administrator, who govers the world of the dead, and they didn't a woman would be capable of that.

I can't see any reason to base your gender off of one pantheon of gods. I can see why fertility and love are commonly associated with a more feminine side but fuck it, I made a male god of fertility above.

You could also question why you need to be at all human, and therefore gendered, at all in the first place, especially if you're a Celestial god. Not all spirituality and worship necessitates antrhopomorphization.

> Terrestrial God
> Hunting
> The Moon
> Seasons [Winter]
> Cunning
> Creativity
> Health

In the north, where the earth, land and ice dwell perpetual I stay.
I am the hunter, the cold beast.
I taught men to wrap their hides with beast skins, to make arrow tips of bone.
I watched from afar, as men grew, fled to the summer lands, and were struck down by snow.
I am still watching, amidst the frozen pines.
No friend to gods am I, for I am one with the world, not ruling it.
Step lightly in this dominion, for the forests and the cold, they hunger,

It's a Sailor Moon reference. Before she beats down on a bad guy, she likes to announce that she fights for love and justice.

Aetherial
Magic, Wisdom

Prophecy, Creativity, Crafts

Generic NEEEEERD God.

>But Terrestrials won't get Major themes, that goes against the entire point.
Ahh okay, gotcha. I definitely was wanting to sneak just one Major onto a Terrestial god. It does seem a little bit lacking that you can't have a Terrestial god of war. I was thinking something like a champion of the people who leads their armies and slays mortal men by the bushel.

this thread needs more cyoas

You are supposed to form the pantheon.
You're also the first God. If I added a "companion" who was god of X and Y, would you pick X and Y? It would also force you to either be the Godking, or not allow you to be the Godking
>This is really good
Maybe you could post a build to prove it? I am a whore, user. Saying "it's nice" doesn't mean as much as a meaty build, with plenty of fluff...
yep. Well, I imagined a "single player mode", where the recruiter makes/finds people who pick other themes, to fill out the pantheon, and the "multi player mode", where anons form a pantheon.
I like it when people actually talk to each other, and respond to their builds.
I was hoping maybe to motivate that.
ignore my other post then. Gladly you caught it!
But no fluff?
You don't have to form a pantheon with anons though. I'd love to see that, but I won't hold my breath.

>God of both Sun AND Moon? Damn dude.

It was a)to complete the Sky theme, if there was a Stars theme I would consider it too, b) because of the descirpiton Moon seemed like the "Underdog" theme. So I took it with that in mind - I'm the god of both big and grand as well as small and overlooked things. It's aspect of illuminating the dark can be also seen metaphorically - it lights the way for those who are lost, guiding them even if they strayed off the path.


As for the Time - colour me bitter, but it's more important and more represented in actual mythologies concept than Flowers, yet you included that.

Sniper Ryan literally has no counter.

The Kingmaker

Celestial God
Major Themes:
Fertility/Magic/Wisdom/Order

Minor Themes:
Prophecy/Crafts

I bare a hefty burden, it is through my divine will that royal bloodlines are established and it is by my visions that guides my chosen mortals to greatness. I am the builder of civilizations and the ordainer of kings and emperors.

>meep meep mcgee

Meep Meep McGee and Drew Bleu have a good shot at it depending on the size of the arena. Angry Pete can do it if Bleed is a ranged attack.

But yeah, Sniper Ryan's ROF is just too high.

>But what Season are you the God of?

All of them and none of them. I will rule four short periods when one season changes into another, to symbolize passing time and inevitable aging of the Universe.

>It was a)to complete the Sky theme, if there was a Stars theme I would consider it too, b) because of the descirpiton Moon seemed like the "Underdog" theme. So I took it with that in mind - I'm the god of both big and grand as well as small and overlooked things. It's aspect of illuminating the dark can be also seen metaphorically - it lights the way for those who are lost, guiding them even if they strayed off the path.

Forgot the third reason - to complete the "all-seeing, all-encompassing theme". As a fair judge, I don't take one side into account, I look at all sides, face, heel, and inbetween.

no? You could easily pretend to be a super cool dude who totally definitely isn't a god or anything.
I'm only asking if you plan to or not.
Also the whole "lunar cycle" and menstrual cycle going together and that stuffs.
Oh. Sorry then.
>trying to sneak in a Major
exactly. That's why I didn't include it, but I planned to. And yes, I wanted some kind of Minor theme that corresponding to war, and I'm cheesed off I couldn't come up with one.
I was thinking you could maybe fluff it out to where Hunting and Justice gives you great combat abilities?
Should've maybe mentioned something like "You can pay two Minor themes for God of Offense/Defense" or something.
>Space
>Comparable with something as small as flowers
Man, if the Sun is a Major theme, Space would have to be Super Ultra Mega theme, and you could ONLY pick that.
Also I totally want to be the God of Flowers so I am not removing that.
>God of both big and grand, and small and overlooked
I like it, user. I like it a lot.
That's pretty cool for a "leader of the pantheon" kind of build. I'd worship you.
that's definitely outside what I planned for, but that's really cool.

Well, damn. There's not a lot of interesting themes, so I guess Terrestrial's a no-go

So, fellow gods, who's up for some jolly cooperation?

I'm , and I want this guy on my side.

>Man, if the Sun is a Major theme, Space would have to be Super Ultra Mega theme, and you could ONLY pick that.

Greeks had Thunder beat Time, so it's not too major.

I don't understand, are you the cucked girl, the girl doing the cucking or the guy being cucked away in this scenario?

Because I'd like extensive options for all 3. A list of sempais to be noticed by, a list of childhood threads to be cheated out of their marriage, a list of skanky whores out to steal yo man

Case in point.

>Male
>Human
>Rogue

>Stamina (3)
>Speed (6)
>Vitality (9)

>Beauty (12)
>Charm (15)
>Gift of tongues (18)
>Sociable (21)

>Quick Learner (25)

>Lucky (29)
>Adventurer's Kit (30)

>Irritating Rival Princess (25)

>Fate

>Thunder beat Time

REEEEEEEEEEE

In all seriousness, Zeus is overrated. His best feat is barely stuffing a monster who ripped out his sinews in their first battle under a mountain without fully killing it.

Meanwhile Heracles kills snake giants the gods couldn't kill by themselves and briefly holds up the sky/cosmos depending on who you ask.

Demigods OP, nerf when

Zeus is going to literally fuck you up, burn some entrails to him while you can

Always love OC.

>Aetherial
I'd like to be more involved with my followers, and also lead more directly, Plus I feel like being able to physically manifest is just too human, even if I'm a god.
>Magic and Wisdom
What can I say, I like magic, and what better way to give your followers a good start then to introduce something totally supernatural to them?
>Prophecy
Again, helping out my belivers, and myself as well, by allowing myself the ability to change fate itself. I feel like this one is pretty OP frankly.
>Home
To add a good solid sense of unity to my people, and it sounds like a very wholesome aspect.
>Beauty
Again, a nice, general sort of aspect. It's so general an improvement on humanity, and having everyone look nice on top of it?

THE WALL is now a minotaur.

Class: -5 Warrior
Race: -5 Minotaur
Physical:
-6 Might
-3 Stamina
-6 Vitality
-6 Toughness
Mental:
-4 Willpower
Misc.:
-1 Bag of Coin
-1 Adventurer's Kit
Companions:
-3 The Affectionate Lamia
-2 The War Hound
Disadvantages:
+5 Danger Bait
+6 Demon Marked
+4 Infamous
+5 Irritating Rival Princess
Setting: -3 Low Fantasy

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How would you go about making a cyoa where user is an imprisoned/ newborn evil? Imagine something small and weak from the depths of hell that needs to make its way up.

I really don't know whether to go Celestial or Aetherial. I want more major themes, but being stuck in Heaven?
Kinda sucks.
>Celestial
I tried making my build with only two major themes, but it doesn't work... At the same time, I need three minor themes...
Also I'm totally grabbing the change gender option. It'll make way more sense with my themes.

>Death
>Love
>Agriculture
>The Sun

>Flowers
>The Home

I am Life, and I am Death. I give meaning to your existence, a reason to open your eyes in the morning and endure the heat of the day.
Pray to me, and I guarantee you a rich life, one you will hate to say farewell to for when we meet in person.
But Death is not the end. Far from it. Take my hand.

I was going for a Waifu Goddess, but I kinda screwed up by adding Death?
I'm correcting it by making a special Heaven for those who were married in one of my churches, where the weather is always perfect for picnics half the year, and perfect for drinking hot cocoa and eating freshly baked buns in front of the fireplace the other half
I'm kinda cheating by saying Love and The Home kinda-sorta includes Marriage.
I know, I'm bad...

Yeah, I can fluff that.
My game plan is to lead a city of hardass monster slayers. Hunting's piece in this is obvious. Wisom will lead my people to learn everything they can about the beings they battle, while creativity will enhance their ability to use this knowledge. Health will keep them in top condition, so they can fight whenever they are needed. Fertility? I got a pregnancy fetish.

Guy making his first CYOA here, just done the first section. How reasonable do these options sound (point values will probably change)?

Rolled 2 (1d4)

>Male
>Warrior
>Kobold(Cutebold)

>Strength
>Stamina
>Vitality
>Toughness

>Pleasing Voice

>Willpower

>Bombastic Brawler
>The Exiled Sorcereress

>Danger Bait
>Irritating Rival Princess

>Fate

A Kobold and his two friends, the only people that take him seriously (sometimes), continuously walking into traps and danger
What's the worst that can happen

>no suicide option
>no glorious death in combat option
>no slipped on the banana option

Come on, user, were you even listening to what people suggested to you?

They look fine so far, but we need to see what there is to buy and the prices before we can give you good answers.

The murder could be a glorious death in combat. But yeah I like suicide, and the banana thing, it sounds funny.

I'm >A God working as a vigilante? Nice!
That was my idea, just make an organization rather than a cult or religion. If they believe in their leader, it is somewhat the same as believing in a god. Only I am pretending to be an all-powerful and well trained man, providing training (through my minor themes) to my initiates.

You want me on my side? I'm trying to keep religion out of this. The guilty must pay because of their wrongdoings, not because a god told them they were wrong. Changing civilizations and even destroying them down if their corruption is seeded too deeply.

Still having you on my side as an ally wouldn't be too wrong. However, no official affiliations can be permitted.

I never knew how much I wanted this into now.

>Male
>Human
>Wizard (19)
>Vitality x2 (13)
>Knowledgeable (9)
>Quick learner (5)
>Bag of coin (4)
>Adventurer's Kit (3)
>High Fantasy (0)

An average wizard who is healthy and a quick learner with a lot of knowledge, ready for adventure.
I will become the best wizard there ever was.

Let's see... How about the terrestrial god of law enforcement?
>>Terrestrial
>Moon
>Hunting
>Cunning
>Justice
>Home
>Health
That's all I can really come to mind with. Should I swap one for another?

Hey. Uhm, what's your opinion on, uh... you know, like romance?
I mean I'm asking for a friend! Because, because obivously you're only a lowly "terrestrial" and I'm a mighty "celestial", so I could never be the Love God of your Home!
Like, we couldn't even meet so it's dumb and silly anyway but you may as well answer the question, right?

I'm going to sit in a corner and sulk, probably until the Recruiter comes by all
>yo gurl, I get your depressed and shit that you can't be his little housewifeslut, but you kinda have to do your job or I'm kicking you back to Earth

Time to join in.

Robin God of Tipping the Scales

>Aetherial
>Wisdom, Offense
>Cunning, Creativity, Flowers

Tactics can be underhanded, so long as they are also creative and cunning as well.

Also, god of flowers because Fire Emblem.

Posting my favorite, haven't seen this in ages

Come back when you're an aetherial lover who drops by once in a while to make love and then disappears before returning with a child.

Or something like that.

Literally posted last thread: Also yours is an older version.

It's posted literally every other thread.

oooh, that's cool! Kinda a different feel than the Vigilante Terrestrial. You are Judge Dredd, he is batman kinda?
I definitely don't think you should remove the Home - it's what you're fighting for, right? Peace, the people you love?

Would it be possible to see in a future version something that's halfway between aetherial and terrestrial? The change in points seem more dramatic a change between those two than it does aetherial and celestial, and I'm wondering if aetherials are like celestials with one foot in the terrestrial, could there be some sort of terrestrial with a foot in the celestial tier that could be squeezed in there?

hit by a train/car/stampede

Should be a god type that's even more terrestrial than the Terrestrials.

Demigods?