Warmasters Triumvirate is an attempt at creation yet another 40k AU. The Primarchs have changed, and instead of appointing a single Warmaster upon returning to Terra, the Emperor leaves the Great Crusade in the care of three of his sons. This eventually culminates in a civil war between Loyalists, Chaos Traitors and Seperatists...
Previous Thread: Things to work on: >Begin work on the Auxiliaries of all the Factions >Fill up the three factions as evenly as possible >Continue fluffing out the legions we already have >Decide on who the three Warmasters are >Make sure the Chaos Gods are properly represented
I don't see yours in the catalogue, did you delete it?
Wyatt Davis
Doing it now
Josiah Powell
I'm out for the night, keep the thread alive.
Thomas Ramirez
I was actually about to retire myself, as it is just past 1 here
Chase Smith
At work until late tonight but carrying on from last thread I think we should work on how well the primarchs know each other and interact. It can really help to shape the story.
Caleb Price
So, I think we should turn our attention towards the two undecided legions: >Pillars of Balance Monastic warrior monks of the Shaolin and Buddhist varieties that specialize in close quarters combat and psychic warfare. For whatever reason, their hyperlink on the sheet has been replaced by the Forge Lords. >Steel Souls Fusion of psykers and cybernetics, arguably the most psychic legion. Both the primarch and the legion have an expensive background in the legion's hyperlinked document.
The Traitor Legions are full and there is one space for Loyalists and another for Separatists. Any opinions on how those two should be allocated?
Hunter Phillips
I'd say the steel souls would most likely go separatist, due to their use of tech, as that seems to be the way the separatists are avoiding being "Chaos But-". As in they innovate rather than look to the warp for power.
Kayden Wood
Restored the hyperlink of the Pillars of Balance.
Benjamin Diaz
I agree with you there. In my mind, it has always been Imperial Loyalists, Chaos Traitors and Heretech Seperatists.
Oh shit, he's back! Guess we're doing the Loyalist Noise Marines after all!
Kevin Mitchell
Now, the question I'm wondering is should we also have a human auxiliary regement paired with each legion? Sort of how the Death's Heads would mesh perfectly with the Death Korps of Krieg in the actual cannon.
Carter Jones
It's also really good! I will be the first to tell you that we thoughts you had completely disappeared, so we scrapped the Disciples off of the list, with great sadness. But since you've come back, with well written origin and all, we'll gladly bring you back into the fold!
Jayden Allen
Not really how it works in canon HH.
Andrew Adams
Oh no I'm well aware. I'm just wondering if perhaps we'd like to do something of the sort. Seeing as we're splitting the imperium in half it wouldn't be impossible to see the legions training Auxiliary regiments in order to bolster their tactics and firepower.
Zachary Edwards
I don't like that idea, as there would be far more than just twenty variations and some of the legions put more emphasis on working with humans than others, such as the Sentinels and Sons of Sovereignty.
I think it's best that focus is placed on the legions and establishing how the Horus Heresy unfolds this time around, before we start creating more and more factions.
Carter Ramirez
No worries. Just shooting ideas to keep the thread alive
Angel Bailey
Do the auxiliaries have to be Guard, or can they be Sororitas or Skitarii or something like that?
Michael Nelson
I woukdn't say no outright, but I suppose it would depend on how close the parent legion or chapter would be to the mechanics for that? In the Separatist I wouldn't be surprised to see a lot more cooperation, but in the traditional imperium? I wouldn't have high hopes.
Justin Green
It's not nessecary to directly link Guard Regiments to Legions. Personally, I wouldn't be particularly interested in writing one, but if you, or anyone else, is, feel free to.
Once I get to my desk I'll look at the Legion line-up and we'll see if we're good on that front. I also agree with , we need to get those factions filled so we can determine the course of events during the Heresy.
The Sororitas don't exist yet, the closest thing is the Sisters of Silence. The Sororitas don't work without their faith based powers, so the Emperor needs to be interred first.
Charles Campbell
Alright, so are there any other requirements for auxiliaries?
Levi Rivera
Well, that's the thing. When I say auxiliary I mean any imperium-based force that isn't one of core legions (which currently we're trying to finish shaping) so they don't have to be aligned with any particular legion, just so long as they aren't space marines. If that makes sense.
Landon Moore
Also, I want to reply to from the duplicate thread. Copying it here so that it doesn't get lost when archiving:
--------------- I want to rework some of the stuff I have for the Death's Heads, as I feel like those things are a little bland atm. The specific things I'm looking at are: >Changing their homeworld (I want to keep the vibe of Calgoa, but the name doesn't fit their theme), giving them somewhere proper to recruit from en masse >Changing up Einchurt's role on their homeworld prior to the coming of the Imperium >Fleshing out their relations with the other Legiones and other branches of the Imperium Also I'm thinking of writefagging a bit. For that, however, we need to decide a bit more on the events of the Heresy (at least the early ones), such things as: >Ullanor or similar massive triumph? Where is it, against who, by who? >Is there an Istvaan-esque event (III and V)? Who is involved on both sides? Where does it take place? >At what point do the Separatists decide to secede? What causes them to congeal together? ---------------
>Changing the homeworld Seems like a good decision. This might be one of those cases where giving the world an obviously German name might be fitting.
>Eichurt's role Another good decision. Him not really doing much on his homeworld kind of bothered me.
>Fleshing out relations That's something we should all be doing, but it becomes much easier once all the origins are in.
As for the other points, plotting out the basic events of the Heresy is something we should all be trying to do together. The best way to do that seems to be: >Filling in the legions >Filling in the factions >Appointing leaders of those factions >Placing the events we need in a believable timeline.
Kayden Clark
Also, SepMech, you suggested the Sanguine Shield, and that's fine, but there's a Veeky Forums made chapter with that name already:
I agree. The Pillars of Balance also seem like a better fit for the Loyalist forces.
The Pillars going Loyalist might actually be interested, because it would mean that the Primarch that, most likely, write the Lectitio Divinitatus-like document stays loyal and might actually be able to lead the Ecclesiarchy-like organisation. Would that make the Imperium more of less religious?
Thomas Lee
Fuck's sake. I seem to have completely lost the ability to spell words properly.
Gabriel Rodriguez
I feel like an Ullanor-esque event is still a good idea, and in this AU maybe all three Warmasters were there?
Also, I'm honoured that Je'She was voted Warmaster. I am working on a lot more fluff, so don't worry about him or his legion being bland
Tyler Kelly
I'm sure you'll do a fine job.
I'd like for someone to update the legion line-up chart. That way, we can really hit the color schemes out of the park.
Nicholas Anderson
So, I played around a bit and changed the silver/gunmetal to gunmetalgrey/darksteel. Also I was intrigued by the dark red so i added it. and a poncho^^. i think every brother should have one.
Forgive my awful photoshopskills. the poncho is supposed to be dark red as well^^
Landon Baker
Did you photoshop the poncho on there yourself? Cuz that's actually pretty good!
The gunmetal grey looks really good, but I'm not fond of the dark red on them. The scarves draw way more attention to themselves if they're a brighter color. look at pic related.
Jose Foster
I wish I could, but it was just a poncho cut from another figure.
Concerning the colors, I am not a big fan of brighter ones.
Thomas Nelson
The dark red on the armor looks fine, I'd just try to make the poncho a brighter color. That should be perfectly doable in photoshop, isn't it?
Hudson Lewis
Uhm... I was not really able to^^ I can cut things apart and reorganize them, but changing colors, or the tone....
Oliver Perry
I haven't used photoshop in years, but changing colors is one of it's primary features from what I remember...
Jeremiah Barnes
Legion Symbol^^
Lincoln White
I don't know how without ruining the poncho.
James Brown
Crossed bolters, instant classic. What do the markings represent?
Jackson Perez
Roman 3. But can also mean 3 persons (or people of the 3rd legion) and it can also stand for smoke^^
Dylan Thomas
In the previous thread it was mentioned Primarch relations/rivalries was a dangerous business in AUs. May I ask why that is?
Lucas Green
From my personal experiences, it shouldn't be much of a problem at all. It can just be a kind of hassle to set up, but working one out for the Great Crusade era should be doable.
David Diaz
Symphonious Disciples user here, I'm glad to hear it.
Jason Morales
Accidentally quoted this post, sorry for any confusion. Are we going to be going with the Imperial Guard this time around, or a different organization entirely?
Evan Ross
One thing I realized later on, is that the Primarch being called Yochin and he planet being called Yozhin might get slightly confusing.
I'm pretty sure we're going for the Imperial Guard. With different Primarchs the Imperium is going to develop differently though, which means the regiments will likely be different. I mean, now that there's no Primarch to make it a legion homeworld, a Macraggan guard regiment could be interesting?
Julian Stewart
oh hey, someone actually replied to my post from the dupe thread, was afraid I'd have to repost. Renaming Calgoa should be easy, but I'm not sure what Einchurt's role on it should be. I'm unsure if I should just stick to the classic "warlord/king/tyrant" shtick, or try to come up with something unique
Noah Thompson
I think that depends on the direction you're looking to go with the homeworld. You could go for the LITERALLY HITLER angle and have a world where humans and xenos live together relative peacefully, which would be disgusting to Einchurt. Then he gets into power democratically, after which he starts wars everywhere with the intention of killing all xenos.
Tyler King
>The Traitor Legions are full and there is one space for Loyalists and another for Separatists. Any opinions on how those two should be allocated? They shouldn't be.
Landon Cruz
What do you mean? You think they shouldn't be forced into a set position, or do you think they shouldn't join any faction?
Blake Parker
We currently have few pysker primarchs are we going to work out each of their relative power levels. Don't want to write any ridiculous level power
Ryan Ramirez
Good idea. Primarch should pretty much be the baseline of how powerful a Primarch psyker can be.
I remember back during IA when people were legitimately discussing if a Primarch's psychic power should be '1.5x Magnus'.
Logan Morris
"Rulers come and rulers go. When a tyrant gets overthrown, the revolutionary is bound to become a tyrant himself. On my homeworld reigned kings. They fell to my hand, and I took their place as tyrant. Now, as the gilded Emperor of Terra rules over my brothers, we shall be the architects of his fall. But I stand ready to bring the next reign, and bloody it shall be."
>Zelbezis Dyestes, announces to the Iron Guard Legion soon before the War of Secession
Jeremiah Martin
No primarch should be more powerful than magnus
Michael Cooper
Guess we should figure out some Seperatist imagery at some point too...
Ayden Robinson
I'll find a better name then, haha
Jose Howard
FUCK, why have I completely lost the ability to form sentences properly.
Yes, that's what I wanted to say. Magnus should be the max, especially if the Primarch has other significant skills and abilities.
Wyatt Murphy
Max in psy power or generally max?
Brody Hughes
If somebody fools the position, great. If they don't, oh well, we have a lost Legion.
And if they want to be traitors, let them be traitors.
Adam Cruz
>fools Fills
Jaxon Harris
Max in terms of Psionic powers.
The only Primarch I've seen that was intented to be an even greater Psyker than Magnus and wasn't an asspull was IA's Anshul. However, he was pretty much completely useless in any other form of combat, being a worse fighter than even Lorgar. His powers were also slightly different from Magnus, focusing more on teleportation and telepathy.
As I've said multiple times, I completely reject the idea of lost legions. Even then, it won't be an issue getting these two legions into either of the factions, since they're both willing to have their legion fill either of the slots.
William Reed
Hmm...Would The Tide Breakers work for a legion name? Just spitballing new names at the moment.
John Gray
I've said in Lambach's description that he is a moderately powerful pskyer but would get bested easily by the more complete psykers amongst the primarchs. So he's most likely more powerful than Pacha but weaker than Eien.
Nolan Sanders
Ocean World Marines? I think it could work
Lincoln Lopez
I think it's alright.
Connor Peterson
Good name, though I expect them to have some ocean theme going on. Do make sure you don't make your primarch not!Aquaman.
This coming from a guy that unironically likes Aquaman
Daniel Baker
I can work that, I never really said what sort of world Altair was. Plus given their tactics and plans it makes sense. I'll just wait for one last vote before I lock it in. If anyone wants to give suggestions feel free.
Nolan Wright
Tide Breakers sounds great.
Jason Wilson
How about the aquamarines?
Nathan Wright
...I can't tell if it's supposed to be a pun or serious. And that worries me.
Isaac Walker
I once unironically named a chapter three Supermarines because it was a pun off the WW2 aircraft manufacturer. There's a Canon chapter named for it's color.
Thomas Gomez
If you actually call your legion the aquamarines I will hang myself.
Camden Mitchell
I suggest you call them Aquamarines
Aaron Johnson
Yes, I will TOTALLY do that. The colors will be orange, green and gold.
Cameron Rivera
Yup. Aquamarines is the name you should go for^^
Ethan Foster
What have I done?
Grayson Perez
They should be aquamarine.
Nathaniel Taylor
Seriously though, Tide Breakers sounds great.
Robert Fisher
Already changed.
Parker Cox
Back from work, decided to throw together a few drafts for the Sons of Sovereignty. It's hard to find good vector art for crowns and swords.
How's this as a base though?
Julian Perry
Won't be very active tonight, got D&D
Carson Taylor
It looks gold. But remember that sisters are usually connected with the fleur. Not that somebody thinks this is a female marine Legion.
Anthony Martin
So, sort of touching on the relationships of the Primarchs i've noticed that I am in a prime position to be a separatist. Because after reading through it, the Tide Breakers, Forge Lords and Titan Marchers all seem to have similar enough backstories that the differences in their development are enough that they'd be close brothers and the breaking would be heartbreaking for the three of them. However i'll leave that up to them.
However I would ask this: Sarco, would you want Mot to be the Mentor to Octavius because that's what I kinda see.
Samuel Campbell
Mentor how? I'm not against it but Mot might require convincing.
Kayden White
More that Octavius sort of inherits a legion and isn't used to the massive scale of galactic warfare and so for a "brief" period of time his legion is in support of the Forge Lords.
Josiah Reyes
I like the idea. What kind of campaigns would they go on in this time?
Speaking of the Forge Lords, what stuff do I need to work on the most for them?
Samuel Murphy
I haven't really thought that far ahead, it really depends on how we make the opponents of the imperium really.
Levi Wood
>More that Octavius sort of inherits a legion and isn't used to the massive scale of galactic warfare Isn't that every primarch?
Christopher Adams
I suck at (digital) drawing, but here's a design for the Loxodontii emblem
Gavin Anderson
I mean more in the sense that Mot has been in command longer and so for a short time Mot attempts to bring Octavius more over to his sort of mentality in warfare in life rather than his own moderate views.
Grayson Gutierrez
Are the Sisters of Battle and even the Ecclesiarchy likely the develop in the same fashion though?
The two primary super-religious Legions and Primarchs are loyalist (or at least, one is loyalist and the other's likely to become loyalist) and are likely to define the evolution of religion in a post-Heresy Imperium. So I doubt it's likely to be end up as Fleur de Lys totting hyper Catholicism.
Hudson Cruz
>Are the Sisters of Battle and even the Ecclesiarchy likely the develop in the same fashion though Nope. Not gonna stop me from having SoBs though.
No Maria Vespa though.
Luke Roberts
>The super-religious chapter is the loyalist Noise Marines.
I'm picturing Sisters of Battle as ridiculous glamorous rock queens, with ranks such as Harpy, Siren, Harridan and Virago.
Joseph Gonzalez
Even if they won't show up in our universe.the connection will always be made if somebody looks at our project.forthe same reason we don't use canon chapters colors/emblems etc.
But as stated before:I like the emblem just remember my words if somebody asks if your legion consists of women^^
Dominic Allen
I'll just be over here, trying to make an Imperial Guard regiment that's pretty much the Sisters of Battle.
Josiah Hall
A chaos version "Brides of Khorne" would be neat
Jace Morales
Khorne's bride is war, and his children are death and carnage.
John Thomas
Woah, Requiem sure got ridiculous after I stopped reading it.
Joseph Flores
and his parents in law are "Shouting" and "A Severe Lack of Diplomatic Solutions to Interpersonal Conflicts"