Ok, I got this Idea in my head hope you guys like it. Planet named in honour of Malcador. Beeing lost from the records due to the constant fuckups and managed to avoid Ecclesiarchy and pretty much follow the orginal Ideas of Big E. Got a Manufactor that can produce and repair the Malcador Heavy Tank and its devirats and its the standart Tank of the PDF and it runs as fast as it was intended. Since none of their space travelers returned (nobody remebered the place so the ship where shot down) they gived up building void ships and just have some deviarts from voidships to defend the system. After some fighting they decided to build a democratic system to rule the planet/system. Now in the wake of the Big Blue beeing awake again they get rediscovered. By whom and what will happen? I hope you guys are with me in the brainstorming.
W40K Planet/PDF Idea Thread
Alpha legion runs the planet in conjunction with the grey knights. Everybody is a space marine or a clone.
As opposed to alpherius, everyone is named malcador.
That sounds a bit too Mary Sue for me?
No it isn't. Its perfectly within your tastes, you absolutely love it. In fact you're thinking of a porno for it right now.
Contrary to this false accusation, Op loves the idea of the grey knights being subverted by the alpha legion, and the exquisite porno is being translated the world over, but the world is located in the sigma obscurous, not the halo stars as this user claimed.
Nah, just clones and Space Marines sound a wee bit boring. I though of that people on the planet as practicly, sane people (compared to the rest of the Imperium). Like some gal in a tank tellling the first Ecclesiarchy Priest landing there: "The Imperator a god....Thats, thats, Heresy."
I specifically remember you mentioning it was a dead world OP. Filled with hermetically sealed hive cities.
Op's farming planet sounds cozy.
OP thinks green and silver is the best color combination and has just started painting all his models that
Also the planets standard is a green rope split in three at one end
Maybe you shold take less of that chaos pill you haven been talking? Since you read things I didn't wrote or even thought.
Nonsense you filthy heretic! The Alpha Legion is the most loyal legion of the Imperium in its war against the false Emperor! Why else would we be working with the grey knights in their noble pursuits? The knights of the inquisition trust Alpha Legion Astartes above all others! Just because you said those things doesn't mean they're not true OP.
That seems kinda random op, why would your planets sacred number be 20?
They have a cult around hydras which are considered noble animals and bred on their planet? whatever works for you i guess
Dude the planet doesn't have visitors. Well besides raiders but they get shot down.
That's weird op I specifically remember you being proud of how your planet is a trusted outpost of the inquisition, working with the grey knights every chance they get to root out heretics. Don't try to pretend you said things when you clearly didn t say them, we all know you said yourself how all of that is true and you lied, so we trust you and know it's cannon
>arrive on planet malcador
>meet with planetary governor Alpharius Malcador and his daughter Alpharius Malcador
>grey knights are marching everywhere so there's no need for alarm
>the people here really seem to like hydras
>keep shouting "hail Emperor"
>hang my soul on the soul rack before walking into the banquet hall
>after a toast to the Emperor in the green silver and blue room, I return to find some scaly wag has stolen my soul
>check imperial id
>my name is Alpharius Malcador
As I said that sounds boring to me. You should realy upgrade your fantasy.
I don't know why you want to talk about things that bore you OP. The farmer's daughter being a heretic for shouting nonsense about chaos space Marines infiltrating the upper echelons of Malcadorian society seemed like a great plot point.
Malcador being a pure world in the gothic sector full of Imperial devotees sounded like a great idea.
hmmm wouldn t it be really hard to write using just the letter "A"?1 I mean I know it's sf but still
S you're saying that ALL the citizens of your planet get inducted into the Grey Knights. They must be real elites and supremely devoted to the emperor!
Never loose faith AM, I mean OP, your plan to not betray the imperium is perfectly soundly not going to work
There are no such things as chaos space marines, OP said so
You guys realy don't get what I am writing, right?
Of course we do Autistic Malcador.
This account is a lie, I actually find it really interesting.
Yes of course my liege, twas only a jest.
Would we lie to you op?
You said yourself you don t trust us at all more than anybody else if we were to talk to you, but since we don t exist we can only say we think your plan to enforce a strict theocracy is great. Hail the emperor!
Great cult idea op!
Scandalous! It's sexually stimulating!
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Well that teaches me something about sharing my ideas with tg....
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>implying they're your ideas anymore
WE ARE THE HAMMER DOMINATUS
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"you guys"
hey don t lump us all together op we're individuals ok
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You didn't have an idea, you had half of an idea.
Well you guys accept people highjacking names....
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don t be silly there are no such things as ideas
Just cause I'm dumping some stuff doesn't mean you can steal my name and accuse me of stealing your name.
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Aaaaaaand I'm done, I can't remember why I started.
Since nobody else seems to be serious be interrest about follow this thing in a serious fashion, I will do this myself I will not roll anything or use creation tables but write it myself. Until someone serious turns up that wants to write with me. Please ignore the person highjacking my name, I hope you can see the differnece in our writing styles.
It's not your name, anymore than user is mine, if you want a name I suggest you go find another website to engage in delightful and enlightening conversations with.
Ok, the planet over the centuries they managed to keep it moderatily climated regulation it via the usual method of planting the right plants and controling the wildlife.
Seriously? What do you get out of trying to derail my thread? You're not even taking it in a coherent direction or anything, you're honestly the worst trolls.
So if any serious people actually do turn up, I was thinking something in the vein of a noblewright Imperium, with inspirations (in the way of doctrins) from Tau and Ultramarines. I'm thinking whether It'd be best to have contact made with the imperium again via some sort of maybe ecclisiarchy convoy (so as to highlight their atheism) or maybe some sort of ultramarines escort (that won t go directly to war over it)
If you hae any useful input please reply to this thread and ignore the trolls stealing my name
It isn't realy nice to use the name someone choose to use to make his post and disturbe his posting with it. My post is not about delighful and enlightening conversations but about seriously getting a idea worked out that I decided to share with you guys. I also could keep it for myself and forget about it in some day but I though this would be something tg could have fun with.
I supose its you hydra guy, I think you should do something better with your life.
Seriously get off my thread you're really annoying at this point
kek dude there's at least 3 alpha legion guys
Yes, your style is filled with typos and frequent run-on sentences. You're a really shitty writer if you can't think of a glorious campaign around an Alpha-Legion planet OP. Not to mention they've practically infiltrated a major imperial organization. The party's objective going from investigate and resupply, to finding heresy amoung the inquisition. Throw in a random eldar invasion or two with some suspect activities, get thrown off by a tyranid fleet from inquiry into imperial records through the astropathy, then when it looks like you're about to uncover the traitor legion ruling the planet, you have all the evidence you have against them dismissed with some convenient circumstance, as the party gets labled Exterminautus Traitorus by the conveniently named planetary governor.
Then their objective would be to recover the truth about the infiltration going on, and call for backup, or allow the Tyranids to invade the planet so you can call for exterminautus. One half of the party would be members of the Alpha Legion, and would try to prevent an exterminautus at all costs, after which killing the other members of the party so as not to arouse suspicion.
Well further on this is neither a quest nor a campain thread. This treadt is about creading this Planet/PDF. Further on the Minotaur Artillery Tank is the Standart Arty piece.
I dunno that he's running a campaign I think he just wants to fluff a planet but his idea is shitty cause it's just straight up reasonable imperium
The flaws make something way more interesting than the strenghts, otherwise you end up with star trek but without the exploration and interesting adventures. Basically DS9 but a whole planet eww
Mech. Infantry with the Dracosan Armoured Transport as transport vehicle.
The idea is to create some culture clashes between the current imperium and the one like Big E intended it.
Op is a shitty writer and came to Veeky Forums to have us write his shitty planet and "expand" his fantasy with a staple, humble little dustball.
Aye a writer without training stays a shitty writer.
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Basic military training for every able citizen over 19, with the posibbility on making it a full time job.
Basic training consists of every soldier beeing trained enough to lead a squad in case shit went south. Special roles training for those who showed promising talents.
A little world about the Imperial Truth. The Planet was cut off before the Temple of the Savior Emperor became state relgion. The Planet still holds true to the Imperial Truth. over the past 10 Millennial or so they even converted the local tech priesthood of it. So they is common knoledge of the warp and so on but is beeing handeled with a lot of common sense and without religious maddness.
lol have you seen the current state of 40k
They innovate again, and establish hospitals for soldiers rather than blamming them.
Since they actualy had enough time to poduce the transports all infantry is mechanised and is using Las-Carabiner as standart weapon. Long-Las are given out as DM Weapon and support troops like medics are only carring the Laspistols. The professional soldiers are sometimes using more dangerous eqipement like the Plasma Gun. The service soldiers are told to stick to their nades and rockets as they are less dangrous.
What they where lacking was a self propelered anti-air platform. They had no possibility to produce the chimera chassis and such their gun and rocked anti - air batteries where either mounted on heavy trucks or beeing puled medium ones. This was patrtial resloved by giving the infantry portable missle lauchers and putting an high emphasis on anti air tactics in training but the real frontline work had to be done by the professional in their fighter crafts.
The one the socity held in the highest regards where the people who convoyed their knolege to others like drill seargents, teachers and kindergarten personell.
We are all Autistic Malcador
So to clarify, the planet is named Malcador, manufactures fully functional, top tier Malcador tanks. It was recently rediscovered by the IoM since the Regent returned.
The Alpha Legion has infiltrated the planet, all citizens and servants are named Malcador. The primary weapon of the PDF is the Malcador, a variant of the lasgun. The drink of Malcador is the Malcador, a beverage made of a bunch of different liquors which are all named Malcador.
The main cities on Malcador are Malcador, Malcador, Malcador, Malcador and Malcador spread across the continents Malcador, Malcador and Malcador.
That Malcador?
You're goddamn right!
And apparently they're all full-on Imperial Truth, and when Regiments from Malcador encounter the rest of the Imperium, they'll be in for a hard time.
Sounds perfectly Malcador to me. I can't Malcador why anyone would have a Malcador over this Malcador.
So are they all fedora-tippers who relentlessly mock anyone who worships the God-Emperor?