/cyoag/ - CYOA General: The Day the World Flipped Out

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Can you bang the maid?

considering the erotica and erotic order options, I'm pretty sure that's a yes.

If she consents I think so. She doesn't HAVE to consent though.

I'm reasonably sure the CYOA was actually creating something more than just builds (shocking I know) and at one point we were actually discussing series arcs and possible episode structure. We could always try that again?

I've been trying to compile the entirety of what we posted three threads ago, to little success, because I also have a final session to run for a campaign soon.

Nice. I'm in trouble.
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You named your maid Trouble?

Damn... i feel like i have not participated enough.

I need the images for the guides from both magical girl CYOAs gonna use em for this advanced magical girl thing

>advanced magical girl thing
Wait what?

Pfff. you can always contribute!

Dumping the base now. Someone else can handle the Dark Magical Girls.

Let's see... I know Season 1 was going to be the standard-issue magical girl fare of saving people, fighting monsters and such, while Season 2 was going to scale back the stakes, but make things personal by focusing on the series Dark Magical Girl... I'd like to propose a slight change though; the first season shouldn't conclude with THE big bad; merely its herald. That way we have something to end with after the other arcs have concluded; something to hit for the big finale of the series.

Is this one of them?

I wanna make a version 3 where you have become a powerful magical girl after many adventures

I have it open in another tab. I'll get it when you're done with yours.

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Pretty sure he meant the ones by Beri and Imaginos.

Also pretty sure he wanted the pictures of the narrators, rather than the CYOAs themselves.

Oh yeah it kinda irked me to start with the big bad, it makes the rest of the seasons kinda... Low on the powerlevel.

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Reposting OC from last thread.

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Thank you user, i forgot to save this piece of art.

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Ok, slightly before you were done... Woops.

Wait a second, that's just an old version of the MGCYOA that's floating around as a thread! Man, I can't imagine being that old.

Great Negative Space Monster seems just that, a space monster. Outta nowhere. Like, you know, the Fire Dragon from Fire Emblem: Blazing Blade. Or maybe we just happened to kill a lot of super-strong evil things, so we ended up attracting its attention. And then the attention of everyone else in this world, because we happened to kill a lot of super-strong evil things.

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>so we ended up attracting its attention. And then the attention of everyone else in this world, because we happened to kill a lot of super-strong evil things.
The fact that i have the Idol S rite does not help either...

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Oh don't worry, a flower can be plenty tough.

youtu.be/OmzaOpZLl3g?t=5m10s

Even then, the various floral structures, pollens and poisons a flower could generate would make the flower compensate for the lower defense with greater offense.

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Is Priscilla packing heat?

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You don't like puffy vulvas?

I have S rank agility and the ability to spam teleport on top of that. The combination of the two should make me ridiculously fast. Also with C rank luna I'm nearly invisible. With teleport I'll be changing directions erratically while they chase after me. They'll have to do a 360 and find which direction the invisible bullet flew off in each time I teleport. It should be pretty challenging.

It's not as if I have no offensive abilities at all though. I would just prefer to try to escape first, since this build is about living a comfy live and avoiding fights. In the worst case scenario, if I'm forced to fight, I could use blood magic and command my enemy to kill themselves.

It's not just a negative SPACE monster. It's a NEGATIVE space monster; the very incarnation of Bad Things; the source of monsters; the kicker of puppies and ruiner of picnics! Monsters (not Kaiju perhaps, but smaller ones) are the direct result of it drawing closer to Earth. Beating its herald buys the planet time, but what we thought was IT, turned out to just be its lackey or offspring. That particular revelation makes a great threat for the final season. "Hey, remember that big thing from Season 1? The thing which posed the biggest single direct threat to the party out of everything that's come since? Yeah, that was the CHILD. Now the parent's rocking up.

thanks but not sure I can use these I wanna use the narrators and put them together on two sides of a broken heart as for this you can choose corruption or not on one page since this is more of summarizing then getting to the new stuff

Hey, not your fault. Someone was bound to notice us and our powers. And now we pay the price... or do we?

What's this one, the GREATER Negative Space Monster? Easy, we'll take it down, after Ms. Excalibur, One-Shot Magician, and Big Girl (For You) sacrifice their lives.

Hmm. A dark magical girl with maxed out Deviance, thematic outfit, young body and ampule along with magical boost should be able to corrupt most magical girls.
270% power corruption effect that is then boosted into a supercharged strike via Ampole.

I'm sorry, I don't have them. The only thing I can suggest is to try finding the tags to each individual element you see on the image you want, then searching on the boorus.

No one is going to sacrifice itself!

Ehh... The big sacrifice feels kind of cheap in what will be the final season of the series. S1 already is going to end with Ms. Excalibur appearing to sacrifice herself, only to show up again part-way through S2. I think the series really needs to end on a high note, regardless of the trials and sacrifices made to get there.

Much as I want to include everyone who's made a character with the CYOA, that's kind of impractical for a coherent series. Ideally, we're looking at 3-4 main girls, with one or maaaybe two dark girls, at least one of which joins the main group at the end of Season 2.

I like them, but it kind of looks like balls. The full image is more clear.

You don't like balls?

>Teachers
The Caller (+1 to Wild Lore, Alchemy, and Lore of Water)
Nyxeris (+1 to Shadowcraft, Charisma, and Lore of the Abyss)

>Skills (20)
Arcana III (14)
Alchemy II (12)
Shadowcraft II (10)
Crafting II (7)
Charisma II (5)
Combat Skill II (2)
Investigation I (1)
Tradecraft I (0)
Wild Lore I (free)

>Magic (20)
Lore of Water V + Arcana Bonus (6)
Lore of the Abyss III (1)
Lore of Fire I (0)

I'm still not clear on when you get the Arcana perks, but I'm working under the assumption that it's only for maxed out Lores.

>Items (10,000, 10% off for Tradecraft, Half off Silver and Bronze Gear for Crafting)
Armor- Living Metal Symbiote (3,250)
Melee Weapons- Earthforged Weapons (3,115)
Ranged Weapons- Artificer Bow (1,765) Alchemical Bombs (1,607.5)
Miscellaneous Items- Specialized Tools (1,247.5) Books (977.5) Potions (910) Traveling Supplies (887.5)
Rights and Properties- Academic Pass (797.5) Safehouse (347.5)
Vessel- Gypsy Wagon (167.5)
Mounts- Horse x2 (77.5)
Hirelings- Skilled Worker x1 (68.5) Thug x1 (64)
Pet- Cat (59.5)
Guess I'll grab two sets of Fancy Clothing with the Spare Change (14.5)

Rights and Properties, Vessels, Mounts, Hirelings, and Pets I did not subject to the 50% off Tradecraft, even though they still have the Bronze-Gold ranking. They're not Gear, so it doesn't make sense to use the discount.

>Companions
Cinaed, Halfbreed Madwoman
Sahn Long, Monk Dropout
Uharen the Just, Unwilling Hero
Lara Dresten, Escaped Concubine
Grimauldus, Illusionist Drug Dealer

A group of unwilling heroes masquerading as wandering performers, getting dragged into mysterious, quests, and brewing some damned good beer!

So... who are going to be the lucky ones?

Who doesn't like balls? Frigid lesbos maybe, but they don't matter.

>the CYOA isn't about fighting other magic girls
...but there are dark magic girls to worry about!

see:

That'll be true. I'd probably want something like, Iunno, Gunbuster or EVA levels of wack endings, over that. We'll see, though. We'll see how well we can get through this ordeal.

Gonna have to catch me first, goth! Nyeh.

>EVA ending
Magical girls and a huge white person ripping itself apart for no reason and everyone turned in to orange juice don't mix.

Could the author for this answer a quick question for me? I was wondering if anyone can learn magic or if it has to be mentioned in the bio of the race for them to be able to.

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I said it'd be preferable to "character sacrifice", not that it would be a good idea. I'll leave it to that user, however.

Oh, it might be nice if someone in the pit of despair pulled themselves together to save their friends by finally using that hybrid suit to switch Undermine to Inseparable, linking to this eldritch being, and pumping all the pure energy she's just been putting aside right up it's ass.
Though that might just feel a little gimmicky.

Yeah... Excalibur was enough, killing characters here and there makes death kinda cheap.

You must be feeling better to be posting this again.

That's the real question now, isn't it? To fill the archetypes, we need one leader, one smart one, one strong one and one caring one... But there's SIX sources of power... Multiple girls with the same source needs to be avoided, or we'd have redundancy... Or on the other hand, two for instance could be willpower, while one is benevolence and another hope or joy or something, so long as their characters mesh well together...

Overall though, I think the season structure goes like...
>S1: Gathering the team, beating monsters, saving people, standard magical girl stuff ending with a big fight with the herald.
>S2: The Dark Magical Girl arc, fighting the dark mirror to the heroes, ending with a big showdown and purifying the/one of the dark girls
>S3: Utopius arc. In the absence of big threats, the girls turn their attention to more 'domestic' things, like the army of high-tech mercenaries. Start examining the responsibility they hold as protectors of earth and questioning if their actions are truly moral when they're protecting from INTERNAL threats. Ends with returning the company to the control of its now-purified director
>Breather arc involving fighting kaiju for a return to light-hearted, high-action battles. Basically filler
>S4: Governments take real notice of the girls after Utopius and start trying to act against them, capture and control them, or replicate their powers. Ends with the destruction of the corrupt secret service branch and a wider acceptance of the girls
>S5: The finale. The big one. The Negative Space Monster is coming and things get steadily more dire. Everything has to come together at the last to save the entire world.

The latter; that's one of the balancing mechanics of the choices. For example, if trolls could learn magic they would be way too awesome of choice. It's also what makes liches tempting in spite of their abysmal quality of life: they are the only things on here with unrestricted magic access.

Phoenix or Wendigo is the way to go for me.

Although I would prefer to not look like that particular Wendigo.

I think we're pretty agreed that Ms. Excalibur (mine - her name is actually Magical Guardian Kimi-chan) is in then? Leader or just the group's strong girl/lancer?

>Multiple girls with the same source needs to be avoided, or we'd have redundancy
And thus the Cute well shows it's superiority once again!

So far there have been takers for every option except werebeast, which is great. I'm not surprised to see that one passed on, but user asked for it, so...

Where does muh dark knight fit in?

We still set on her being the face of the dark magical girls?

Did user make any more of this
>pic related

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If S2 does not end with dark knight/skitter getting pile-hugged i am going to be very upset.

One more question, how does all the magical girls being anons real life fit in?

You'd think S2 would end with the purified magical girl doing a big gesture like baking everyone a massive cake to share with her new friends, everyone saying she didn't need to overdo it, and her saying she wants to make a good impression on "her' new team with a pleasant but confident smile. Cut to current leader's shocked expression, followed by everyone else's "eeeeeehhhh!?", pan up to sky, roll credits.

Plenty of points left to get high speed and intellect to make a plan to get you.

>Changes
Basic Beauty Package (1)
Divine the Secrets (7)
Silvered Tongue (9)
Rendable Flesh (13)
Grace and Poise (14)

>Price
Two Free (12)
Delve Too Deep (5)
Word Triggers- Insomniac (3)
Discomfort in Comfort (0)

Post the connected CYOA.

Miss Dark Knight needs to be one of the dark girls, certainly, but whether she is one that joins the group or continues to be a lone wolf (antagonism optional) is up to you, I'd say.

We including ripoff-Skitter? If so then yes, she needs hug-piling and a possible re-alignment of her powers... Ideally the dark girl team should have a mastermind, a powerhouse and one that turns good... Though possibly the one that turns good could be one of the other two; I just want to avoid over-lap once she joins the main girls. Also, it NEEDS to be kept ambiguous which one will turn good; the audience will be expecting at least one, but the least we need to do is keep them guessing which it is.

I don't have it, sorry.

No.

I dunno if we are including ripoff skitter but i don't remember other dark magical girls, so this one came up to my head.

Thank God.

As the Astra/ K A B O O M guy from last thread, I'd most likely be some minor comic relief or side character, because having a wide-angle orbital bombardment specialist in the Main Crew seems a little silly.

>not basking in the glory of Saber
Disgusting

Here ya go

And the box (despite my continued thinking it was a mistake, I should have connected it to the dog one...)

One of my favorites

Oh, you're still alive?

Why to the dog one?

Speaking of the dog one...

Wendigo should say "Secrete", not "Excrete". Excrete refers to waste, so unless he shits from his claws you shouldn't be using that word.

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And the box

Not really. Lost job, had to move in with family, been dealing with illness, ran out of money, etc. I'm mostly dead these days.

Cause I like the dog one, but it doesn't get a lot of attention.

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My vision is that Dark Knight ends up not really liking what has changed since becoming a dark magical girl, and semi-willingly submits herself to purification to return to normal.

Outwardly, not much changes, although she agrees to only conquer kingdoms doing "bad" things. In reality, when she returns, her well becomes joy and her rites refocus a little more into magical enhancements, and season by season she hangs out with the main crew more, embarrassed at first, but becoming a little more at ease by the end of the fourth season. Still largely doing things on her own, but more willing to join the group from time to time.

Don't you fucking DARE die on us!

We may need some new ones, some with IMPACT!

Duly noted. So far though, I think the only confirmed ones are
>Magical Guardian Kimi-chan (Ms. Excalibur)
>Dark Magical Knight
With a tentative Totally-Not-Skitter

Hmm... Good question. Any suggestions? I'd say leave it in, with some being more comfortable as girls and some not, but everyone eventually trending towards staying as girls. But that of course, comes with a whole bundle of other problems and questions we may not want to answer, so perhaps have them all start as girls? I genuinely don't know...

Dark Knight's tendency to conquer 'evil kingdoms' could actually be what sparks S4's big plot, with governments worried the magical girls are over-stepping their bounds and even those within the group going, "Are we sure this is the right thing to do?"

>Lost job, had to move in with family, been dealing with illness, ran out of money, etc. I'm mostly dead these days.
Hey! Me too.

"excrete" refers to expelling a lot of byproduct. You can excrete sweat, for example. But you're correct that secrete would have been a better word to use there.

Synthetic Augmentation says "Your flesh will become more accepting of implants and augmentation", and "Adding augmentations will be easy and your body will shift them so that they will never cause you problems". Does that have any effect on the follow-up Fleshweaver visit, either in terms of powers, costs, or payment effects?