/cyoag/ - CYOA General

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What, you think he won't show up just cause he's not at the top?

Less Tok is always good. He's a disease, user.

What if I want the last one to succeed?

>Less Tok is always good.
>Les Tok is always good.
>Yes Tok is always good.
Ok, this need more Tok.

Image testing part of this to see how it displays on Veeky Forums, because it's a pain to do and I want to make sure it's worth it.

No offense to the user who stiched the four images together! You gave me the idea. I just think I can do a more readable version working from the original files.

Kamidere is fun, when it's a cute girl.
I'd help her become ass god.

Made me think of this.
youtube.com/watch?v=2e3-c_0WJgo

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I want to scribble all over this just to piss you off, but then I realized even putting in that much effort to upset you is a waste of time.

Yeah, don't waste the time and effort.

and yet you put the effort into this message...

I for one have begun to ironically worship TokHaar Gol.

He is the salvation of /cyoag/. This is because he understands humanity's future in femdom and waifu.

Who makes the best cyoa in terms of aesthetics? Can someone post examples?

femdom? Have you read any of his stuff? It's 90 rapey.

90%*

>femdom
>waifu
Not surprised you would follow Tok. You're just as degenerate as him.
These should be posted on /trash/ regardless of censorship. Lewd CYOAs have a separate thread. Stop trying to draw attention to yourself and go back to where you belong.

>He is the salvation of /cyoag/
When were you under the impression that our Lord & Savior isn't based Italics-chan.

>He does not do femdom, he does rape
pic related

>Tok is the salvation of /cyoag/. This is because he understands humanity's future in femdom and waifu.
I am the future of /cyoag/.

This

The funny thing is, he's barely posting on /trash/ right now.

good

this Enslaved is his only cyoa that's kind of okay for femdomfags

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I said 90%. that's the other 10%. Didn't say you never did it, it's just painfully obvious that that's not your focus.

SDA, probably, though sometimes I think his stuff can look a little cluttered.

So what about Super Prison, Prisoner mode?

bad

>SDA
>His

Lololol

MUW is also a good femdom CYOA.

Aesthetics in terms of the page graphics or the
'world feeling'? For the latter, I rather like Liminal Phrenic. He's probably dead now, though.

>>femdom
>>waifu
>Not surprised
You shouldn't be. Ever since slavery and rape became illegal, humanity is locked into a femdom future. Get your pussy worship skills ready.

>rapey
Ahh, sweet balance.

Because he can't namefag, user. The only reason Tok is still here is because he went full blown autistic on reddit and isn't welcome there.

Whoa, that's some heavy shit, bro. Sweet ass powers, man.
Gonna have to, like, turn you down, though.

See, I'd take, "You're the Hero," and that would probably, you know, make gnarly swell of good vibes. That's, like, the opposite of what you asked for. So I can't really help you, dude.
But seriously, man, thanks thinking of me.
It's totally cool.

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Don't know how to describe it but prisoner mode didn't feel like a femdom cyoa. It was more like humiliation/degradation cyoa

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Aethetics in terms of graphics in order to make a nice looking cyoa. Asking for a friend, of course...

SDA for graphics and Italics for world building.

old sda, new one looks plastic af

tfw I join the last one and we become gods together in addition to my gov't retirement plan

checkmate waifu cyoa

Nah. I use it to make cute submissive sluts with odd quirks that I tease them about.

Needs more modern heroes. Like a magical girl heroine, or something similar. Or a harem protagonist.

>Italics for world building
Nah I just make a list of ideas and then try to shove them into one box to make them fit. Pic semi-related.

Send help. This cyoa is fucking killing me and I underestimated the amount of work for it.

There should be a list of infamous villains and famous heroes to be prisoners/guards.

I don't actually like SDA's work. It feels too generic to me. Too expected images/plotlines/abilities.

I would vote Solar Inheritance for a good example, though the background is a little dark.

SI has a Dune feel, but a lot of different angles to approach it. Original Power Armor CYOA as well.

Okay, official one page version of Mentor/Lover/Friend/Rival 1.1

Nothing exciting or new, sorry. Just a quality of life convenience. Text is small but very readable if your screen is large enough for it to expand fully. Phone users will probably want to stick to the original images.

I'm searching for a picture-less Bionicle CYOA. None of the ones I find on reddit is that specific one.

Whatever would I do with 10.000 Skavenslaves and 100 screaming bells and Doomwheels?

Body - Futa

Sorcerer
Transform 2
Charm
Enslave
Time Stop
Erase Memory

Artifacts
Scrying Orb
Grimoire - Porn Physics

Basically use the scrying orb to check on a victim. Once the person is in a safe place, stop time and enslave. I'll have my fun, wipe memories of the occurrence, "free" them and unfreeze time. Porn physics and charm are to make time freeze sex romps more emotionally "genuine" while transformation should be self explanatory for use.

>Whatever would I do
Become the secret protagonist that unexpectedly wins in the end.

Shit. Expanding file size bug upon download. Let's try this one.

Okay, that one expands too but stays within 8MB upon download. Good enough.

All JPGs will on Veeky Forums. I don't know if it happens with other filetypes.

Yeah. Originals are PNGs but I can't get the combined PNG small enough, unfortunately.

>I want to add more to this CYOA
>I think I can add even more
>I want to DOUBLE the size of the CYOA
>Help guys I'm retarded
Some people can't be helped.

Just answer me one thing. Is it even close to release? Like are you willing to say fuck it and putting it out with less content than you originally planned to release it sooner? Cuz at this point I wouldn't mind it at all.

I love your shit, dude. iv'e always been a faggot for lore heavy works, and I love how you make the person playing feel like A chosen one, not THE chosen one. makes it feel more authentic, in a way.
Also don't needlessly rush yourself. Take your time and go about it at your own pace.

>PC is balanced
>PC is not overpowered
Is this made by a filthy console peasant? Look at this pic it is a perfect reflection of reality.

Post snek

The only thing that ruins this for me is the mary sue anti-mage black chick.

Fair point.

>Is it even close to release.
I just need to finish the remaining companions and type up the quests (events) and then make the cyoa in photoshop.

>Like are you willing to say fuck it and putting it out with less content than your originally planned to release it sooner?
I really want to make this the last update to Pokemon Personified because I don't want to do an update to Ultra Sun and Moon and want to do lots of new OC. So I'm not going to remove content.

>>PC is balanced
>>PC is not overpowered
>Is this made by a filthy console peasant? Look at this pic it is a perfect reflection of reality.
While I mostly agree, I'm not quite sure Apple Heathens ARE above Console Peasants.

While sure, the Macintosh can do somewhat more than lick the foot of DLC manufacture, users are still enslaved to Apple's whims and faux-trendiness.

Why do you consider her a mary sue? Serious question, because I don't see it myself in the description. I think you may be overestimating the power of her gauntlet. Just because it can sunder magic thrown at her, doesn't mean it can stop a rock that magic throws at her. She's also shit in combat, compared to most others.

Regardless, I hope you can just ignore her entry if it's a problem for you.

>Why do you consider her a mary sue?
Anti-magic characters usually end up that way. It tends to be silly to have a character who is simply defined as "awesome against all magic".
Consider the modern day equivalent: "anti-science character awesome against everything from hackers to nukes"

See? Pretty easily becomes edgy mary-sue.

Tok when are you going to make more lewd?

I have one question.
Will it rely on really weird game mechanics?
Because that's my biggest turn off to your CYOA's.
It's really off putting to your cyoa. If your stuff was a legeit vidya it would make sense but it's a cyoa it doesn't really make sense for it to rely so heavily on game mechanics. Unless you find a more organic way to bridge the mechanics into the lore I really can't make heads or tails of how combat in that setting works.

The text outright states that she beats every mage

I can see why he's annoyed

Holy shit I love you italics pls don't die again

Don't you fucking ask him that

Get out

>The text outright states that she beats every mage
I would prefer something like "anti-illusion character", ex. trained to see through deception and mind magic.

As opposed to doing that AND swatting fireballs out of the sky AND casually cutting druid vines, etc.

With respect to both of you, again, I think you are reading far more into the description than is actually stated by the words.

>If not caught unawares, no one can defeat her with magic directly.
Is what the words actually say. Any archmage that can't get around that is not worthy to be an archmage. Because you can either:
A. Get the hell out of there, and then surprise attack her, or more likely:
B. Defeat her with magic *in*directly.

What her gauntlet does is stop you from overpowering her with bigger spells because you are the baddestmage4ever. Use a bit of creativity. Like I said: throw a rock at her for goodness sake, if nothing else.

But I want more lewds.

It doesn't matter. In any direct duel/fight she wins. Therefore edgy ass mary sue.

I'd like to see him try his hand at a Gentle Femdom CYOA. I predict amusing results.

>because you are the baddestmage4ever
Like indicates, she's the "baddestantimage4ever".

Essentially you may wish to have more cleverness behind that power. Rather than an 'autowins X fight'.

>In any direct duel/fight she wins
In my interpretation of my world this is false statement. The tower sends teams against rogue mages because they aren't foolish enough to assume that a disjunctive gauntlet would be enough against a truly competent mage. Any mage that she can easily beat is really dumb at using magic effectively, since she can only sunder magic that actually approaches her.

If that's not enough to satisfy you, then apologies. It is what it is.

something I threw together a little while back. got a guy working on a version of decent quality

>When are you going to make more lewd?

>Enslaved is his only cyoa that's kind of okay for femdomfags
As a femdomfag, I'd say Enslaved is more than okay, although the random element for your final fate is a little annoying.

In any duel/fight vs a mage, maybe. In a fight against ANY non-mage or even most hybrid mages she loses outright.

Sadly, Pokemon Personified Plus+ will still rely on the game mechanics of Pokemon with more items, effects, expanded on things, and what not like it did before. Order & Girls Military updates will also retain weird mechanics as well, but with added benefits to the cyoa overall.

The planned and typed up cyoas coming Pokemon Personified Plus+ will not use weird game mechanics at all. No stats or anything, just a variety of selectable powers and skills that you can use. If you want to get into one my cyoas without game mechanics, I have three OC coming after Pokemon Personified called: The Magi Case with 19 specializations of magic, a restart to an abandoned cyoa titled Witches n' Inquisitions with a focus on being a military officer in fantasy 1920s, and a complete rehaul/update to Picking-A-Goddess. (I apologize about that mate).

To be fair, it's the way it was worded. Just from that passage alone people are going to assume that she beats any sorcerer, archmagus or otherwise.

Perhaps this isn't the case corresponding to your vision, but this is what the text implies.

In other words, rock paper scissors bitch.

Sounds fucking retarded. It's like Runescape but worse.

>the random element
Excuse me my child, but if you are not overkilling your submission points beyond the RNG's wildest possibility, what are you doing?

O-oh.
Well I had issues because it didn't really give any meaning to the stats. I had no idea what the numbers where based on. What kind of destructive feats the moves where capable. What native abilities a person had outside of 'moves'. Why the 4 move limit is so strictly enforced. How swapping moves worked. How special abilities worked. Are moves absolute like charms from Exalted. How weather moves affected the environment.

The issue wheren't with the mechanics exactly. But they where so abstracted from the lore and there was less than 0 effort to relate them. So it was all kinda meaningless.

Then why say she beats every mage in a fight then?

>To be fair, it's the way it was worded.
I can only disagree. It doesn't say "she can't be defeated with magic". That would be ridiculous. The word "directly" there is meaningful and important. Perhaps I'll try to work in an example of throwing a rock at her with magic into the text, though that feels a bit clumsy; I had assumed things like that would occur to people.