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Why is dom emma so hot

Emma is ugly

I am guilty of saving this low quality CYOA.

Sub Emma by the way. Best choice hands down.

I may have found the solution to my problem...
How ridiculously unreadable is this?

The characteristics sides, left and right options have some kind of design in the background that messes with the text a little but that's the only glaring flaw to my eyes.

Any more to go with that page?

Now this is some good stuff. I had my doubts at first but you got my approval now.

It doesn't seem unreadable to me at all. What do the other pages look like?

>some kind of design in the background that messes with the text a little
Ah, that would be the black veins in the marble.
I'll see if I can fiddle that out.
>Any more to go with that page?
Not yet. The second half was originally the second page, but I decided to try combining them because the following pages were going to be a nightmare to fit everything on in a 1200x4800 format...
But now that I've increased the page sizes, that shouldn't be a problem anymore!
I may even be able to fit the whole thing into just three pages!
Yay! I'm glad you like it!
I'll try to keep up the good work!
>What do the other pages look like?
Like this.

The bottom looks like its cut off a tiny bit. Might want to increase that by a few pixels yeah? On the more important note, I feel like it's fairly readable.

Ah, okay. Good luck. I'll tell you reducing the jpg quality below 100 is terrifying from your end but as long as it is within the 90s or so people don't comment.

>Become A Guardian
I am going to protect the shit out of whoever I am guarding
>Astral Bond
When that Charge calls upon me, I am going to fuck some shit up.
>Intimidating
I want my enemies to shit their pants the minute I'm summoned.
>Ethereal
If my Charge doesn't need me to protect him, then I can exist immaterially and not interfere with things he doesn't want me to.
>Inhuman
I'm a monster.
>Wings
>Fangs
>Huge
>Muscular
>Wild
Done. I look like pic related. Now put me with the most danger-prone Charge you have. I'll tear apart whatever they tell me to.

Dull that marble texture behind all the body text a little, it doesn't contrast well with monotone text.

One more thing. Remember that Veeky Forums increases the file size of all downloaded JPGs, so download the sample you just uploaded and ensure upon reupload it remains below 8mb.

>no dom who does love me and appreciates my love
uhh...2d I guess then.

Haha, my symbiote art got in!

I'm trying to make Sea of Sand less confusing, even if only for posterity. The only things I can think of are to explicitly name the Dream of Genie species of each narrator, like the third one mentioning taking the protagonist back to 'Jann Town", but I worry that would break the tone completely. What should I do, or should I just abandon this CYOA and move onto something the thread finds potentially more enjoyable?

Hey /CYOA/ I was exposed to and have been reading through pic related lately, largely because it was posted in one of the threads a day or two ago, and I have been having trouble interpreting the awkward wording of the cost for extra worlds.

>"Extra World 2, +1 per addition world beyond the first (EX: original world free, second world is 2 points, third is 3 points etc.) Maximum of 5 points: You are a Conduit not just to one world, but to two or more, gaining all the benefits and drawbacks thereof. When connecting to an additional world, you begin with the Unwelcome GUest and Native Dnager drawbacks without gaining points for them. This perk must be bought while at a bridge leading to the world in question, which may be hard to locate without the aid of another conduit or extensive research. Bevin does not have natural bridges, but may be brought within the presence of another Conduit who is linked to their own Bevin."

So, hypothetically, if a Conduit were already linked to Earth and... say... Crystal Spire as their free realms, what would the cost be to add two new worlds (say... Void and Crucible why not?) Would that addition cost a total of 3 points, or a total of 5 points?

>user and his stando, 『A GODDAMN FLYING SHARK』

Forgot the damn pic.

Hey ZBG, just wanted to say that while sometimes you rub me the wrong way (for reasons that aren't necessarily on you) you still put out the most consistently well made content in this thread, and I thank you for making positive contributions to a general that seriously needs them. Nobody else puts out the amount of content with the level of visual design and storytelling that you do. Your work might not be my favorite, but credit where it's due, you fucking try, and that means something.

I'd like to see you branch out and try new types of CYOA, but otherwise keep doing what you're doing.

5 points, yes. 2 points to buy the first world, 3 points to buy the second, 4 points for the third, etc. It's saying that the cost to BUY increases.

Looks good. Abilities when?

The only part that confused me is who the Jann was, since the description of the Jann from the main CYOA seems to indicate that the wander could be them.

>spire, void, and crucible
Sounds interesting, where are you going with this?

(Also yeah, 5)

They could be, so long as finding Jann Eruydice doesn't ultimately satisfy them. I was trying to leave the nature of the protagonist ambiguous, which is why they start within the dream instead of entering it or exiting it like my other two protagonists.

Can someone repost the Illegal Space Empire? I didn't get to look at the final version

have an upvote

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Just use the first version.

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Hello /CYOAG/, after enjoying so many of your creations I decided to try too. This is page one of a simple cyoa. Inspired by that colonize mars one.

Like/dislike? Anything I should add or remove?

>Become a Guardian
Because then I would at least have some purpose in my god damn life
>Binding
Possession I get nervous with backseat drivers
>Aura
Intimidating Sakimi's Pyrrha is amazing though
>Manifestation
Physical
>Base Form
Masculine For the biceps
>Characteristics
Armor Style
Horns For ramming
Fangs For crunching
Claws For slashing
Extra Limbs For juggling

5 for the 4th and for everything after, right?

Hey friends, does anyone have the Kingdom Diplomacy CYOA and the last version of Solar Inheritance? Also, the last version of Stardust if you have it. (Just filling in the holes in my collection)

Posting QuietCYOA in the meantime

Yeah, the cost plateaus at 5 points.

Looks good, looking forward to completion

I enjoyed this one a lot when it came out, but you don't see it reposted anymore. Makes me wonder what will happen to all the gems that get lost to time.

What I figured, just thought I'd check.
>Sounds interesting, where are you going with this?
I was actually just naming realms at random, but now I want to make a build that uses those three.

I mean, it's natural to want OC. But amongst the WIPs and CYOAs fresh off the presses are only a tiny few of the ones from even a year ago

Will the anons of the future be able to see the CYOAs that captured my imagination for the first time? When I was young and everything was new?

you got statistics to back that up?

Maybe they've already been lost to time? Maybe every user who loved them like I did has already moved on?

Yessir. According to the annual report of the Veeky Forums CYOA Census Bureau, less than 20% of CYOAs posted in any given thread are older than a year. A tragedy is what it is.

That's been try for over 5 years.

That's the nature of content such as this. It's ephemeral. It only exists so long as there is a person who desires to share it at that given moment.

no it hasn't

When a CYOA isn't reposted, even if it sits on the hard drive of someone who enjoyed it very much, it nevertheless has disappeared from the wider collection. It ceases to be.

>Stardust
>still no Herald carriers

>desert mirage

If I could I would go with this, but I guess this is one of those things that never work out, or if it can actually work out, it will have a heavy price like destroying half the world, making the girl hate you and just turning everything into a pointless waste of time and suffering.

Will the experience of a high school student learning about CYOAs for the first time be the same? Without ever seeing the goofy Towel or Knight CYOAs? Without ever spending an hour comparing the same sets of companions that a seasoned CYOA veteran wouldn't even take a second glance at?

Doesnt look terrible I guess. Eventually you should switch to some non white background. And I'm sure you can find a picture of virus that fits. Also, it's spelled Cozy.

We're accustomed to information. It comes with age. We can't just have anything, it has to be novel and new. Just like how a film critic can poupou a film that brought a young man to tears or a practiced musician can shun a song for its simple chord progressions. It's a natural process that our minds are undergoing every second of every day, and it kind of scares me.

The worst thing that happens is that you forcibly take a ghost back into reality with you instead of letting them rest. That has implications on you personally but honestly nothing you need worry about from this perspective.

And with the final DLC of this CYOA, I leave you. Thank you very much in advance to whoever fulfills my requests. And remember friends, remember to repost your favourite old CYOAs. It's more than sharing an image for one thread. It's preserving the experience for others to share. You're keeping the candle burning, even if just for a little while longer.

Good night CYOAG

Thanks! Yes ofc there are many things I will fix when it's all written.

>And remember friends, remember to repost your favourite old CYOAs.
I'd post more of outer worlds guy's CYOAs if I didn't lose them.

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anyone have that one where you're a spy? you'd roll your mission and pick your equipment/skills, and you'd choose at the end whether you succeed or fail?

also, roll 1d50 for your waifu's hair

>tfw Endless Desert CYOA update when

Guess I'll post this for my Soul Train Ticket.

bruh how tf people in fantasy times wope their ass if they didnt have toilet paper

This one looks pretty cool but badly balanced. It costs the same to get
-A friend
-A nice family
-Being good at something
-A circumstance
-A superpower

and all of those cost a little under 1/5 of your points. while just going to the school you have to costs over 1/10th if you don't wanna go to victorian england and half that if you do

Rags.

Prove plz

Or they could just use their hands.

Not sure if I'd be a guardian or gain one so I did one for both

>Become A Guardian
>Possession
I am the peanut gallery
>Inspiring
Followers are cool
>Incorporeal
Fits with possession and being a figure of awe
>Masculine
Didn't want to switch gender or go inhuman
>Wings: I AM GRAND
>Armor: I PROTEC
>Horns: BUT I ALSO ATTAC
>Divine: AURA OF GOOD
>Unique Eyes: GLOW EYES
Looking like a Paladin out of an MMO, I have come to inspire you to YOUR GREATEST SELF

>Recieve a Guardian
>Astral Bond
TEEEEEAAAAAAAM MAAAAAAAATES
>Soothing
Honestly, better for more situations and actually fucking helping people
>Ethereal
Flex pick, this would change depending on the nature of the powers
>Feminine
Fits with Soothing and makes for a funner dynamic. Plus I ain't passing up the chance to chill with a beautiful woman 24/7
Two ways to go with the Characteristics
>Way 1: Classic Angel
>Wings
>Slender
>Divine
>Way 2: Listen I'm just building a waifu
>Fangs
>Tail (with ears)
>Divine
>Tribal
The goal is the help people out, and this setup is all about supporting others to work through their issues. Soothing helps gets people to open up and get at what's bothering them most. Hopefully the abilities have options to help support this.

I hope you don't mind that I did the "War in Heaven CYOA" from the last thread. I saw it and before I went to bed yesterday and wanted to give it a try.

Personal:
>Immortal (free)
>Physique Change (Fit etc.) (-3)

Reincarnation:
>No Background (free)

Context:
>Nobledark (+4)

Power Gain:
>The Sigil

Attributes:
>Assassin

Skills:
Combat
>Melee I, II & III (-7)
>Offhanding I, II & III (-6)
>Overdrive

Mental:
>Nullification I (-3)
>Blood Siphon (-3)
>Level Head (-2)
>Second Chance (-4)

Equipment:
>Sword Type S, Exotic Materials, Dual (-8)
>Armor Type S, Rare Metals, Coated, Reparing (-6)

Companions:
>Custom 1: Support-Magic-Type
>Custom 2: Tanky-Artisan-Type

Starting City:
>Orderward
Perks:
>Contract, Lucky, Kingsteel

Accommodations:
>Small House, Workshop District (-2)

Hidden Ability:
x10 Drive

Goals:
Kill the Archdemon

Total Stats: 5 STR, 2 DEF, 6 AGI, 4 DEX, 1 INT, 2 WIL

Me and my two new friends have our Base in Orderward and form a small adventuring party.
My newly acquired physique and ability provide for us in the long run.

I hope I didn't went too autistic on this, but it was pretty fun. It turned out to be pretty edgy, but that wasn't my intention. Just looking forward to being fast and dextrous as fuck. Pic related.

>Archetype
Mining Conglomerate
>Role
Head of the Family
>HQ
Kestrol
>Bases
Brillon, Ouleo
>Footholds
Braxaleo, Biitov
>Assets
Manufacturing
Adverts
Hiring
Small Fleet x2
New Alloy
Government Contract
Escort Contract
Bigger is Better
Uniforms
Capital Fleet
Containment
It Just Works

>Threats:
None!


Ore: 19 /17
Supplies: 8 /8
Research: 8 /8
Influence: 10 /5
Suspicion: 10 /4
Workers: 1500 /1400

Feel free to check my math

Some cultures shake hands with the right hand because the left was for wiping.

Other cultures used leaves. Others used rags similar to how people blew their noses with hankerchiefs before disposable tissues were popular.

Does the fatposter still lurk here?

IS there a CYOA yet that gives me a Daddy and he loves me and turns me into a cuteboy!?

>Sub Emma by the way.

loli emma is the only good.

No, but I'm intrigued by the concept and wish to be the Daddy of said cuteboy/gril...

Add some scenario-themed gear and/or powers. Like science shit for viruses, demonic pacts or angelic blessings and holy/unholy gear, ancient grimoires and Berserk-type shit for magic, stuff like that. Looks fantastic so far, sometimes the simpler something is the better.

As someone who partakes of single parent tales like heroine, I am also interested

So this is how you get attention these days?
Do I need to finish stuff or can I keep posting wip's for months?

>tfw cyoa has fallen into the "alpha survival game" trap

Posting a WIP is better than complaining about WIPs

So I'm actually starting to get workin' on Mechfu.

Question though. I was originally gonna design it so that you have to choose a girl, and then also choose which mech you want, but now I'm tossing around the idea of making each girl each have their own specific mech that you also have to take into consideration when picking which girl you want, sorta like Kaifu each girl's mutations were different.

The former option is better, right? Allows for more freedom instead of being torn between a girl you like and a shitty mech you don't want to use.

Can I be a dickgirl if I pick feminine?

>people are still sucking his dick this hard

At this point I'm honestly starting to think he is pulling a Tok and just removing his trip to hype himself.

I need more comfy CYOA, please I'm begging

gear and residence will be added, as for pacts and scince shits that'll probably be something for a DLC.

Here's another page in progress, Will of course add a background later and clean stuff up. Any feedback is appreciated.

Sure.
Like the descriptions say, Guardian's don't technically have genders because they're Spirits and you're free to choose how your feminity manifests.
If that means everywhere but your Celestial Guardian Cock, then good for you.
>implying I would write anything that long just to suck myself off

Is this the kind of comfy you're looking for?

your math is incorrect.

East

West

South

>Any feedback is appreciated.
Remove 3DPD and make better companions. Seriously, that shit is disgusting. You can't tell me angels and god fought a war against demons and sin that brought hell to earth while telling me my companions are a purple-haired dyke, a soccer mom, and a starving gopnik.

In a way allowing her to move on would be the better choice, but honestly if knew I could be reunited with her after death, my life would just become a crazy race for death, heaven is where she is after all, and I would like to go back to heaven as quickly as possible.

3DPD?

These are the cheapest companions. there are of course more and better ones on other pages.

>Otono Koko

Oh yes

Become a Guardian

>Binding:
Possession
>Aura:
Intimidating
>Manifestation:
Ethereal
>Base Form:
Masculine
>Characteristics:
Wings (bat-like)
Horns (ram horns at temples and 1 horn just above hairline)
Armor
Fangs
Muscular
Unique Eyes (5 eyes, red sclera, black iris)
Demonic

Going for a badass Punch McGiantFist build with a demonic aesthetic borrowed from a mix of the east and the west.
Wings are purely western style, while the horns, fangs, and eyes are a mix of both.
I guess I'll be patiently waiting for this cyoa to be finished.

>orphan with sibling for 20
>loving home with sibling for 15
hmm.

>not knowing what 3DPD means
Out. Get out newfag nigger-anus tonguing poz-swapping cockbite. You're not welcome here.

>Out. Get out newfag nigger-anus tonguing poz-swapping cockbite
>You're not welcome here.
And here I thought Veeky Forums was one of the better boards...

pee your pants.