/cyoag/ - CYOA General

yes

we need more Tok content, but less Tok shitposting

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Are there any new Fate CYOAs coming up?

Only if someone posts good OC.

theres something of the kind by italics, and maybe some other stuff I think

(You) first.

Atomic Odyssey 1.1
I recall saying this back when I made Monster's Den for the /d/ CYOA thread: Read the descriptions. Most of them have useful information.

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As per usual, feel free to leave any feedback.

Blue and Sky. Repeat day once per, adjust to most favorable outcome. and sleep at will seems fun.

Guard Sidekick.
Peldrick Holyhammer
Dragons.

Peldrick can go fuck off and do whatever it is he does, I've got a dragon to befriend and I'm going to class change to Dragoon.

Heavy (30)
Engineer (5)
Nerve Suit (5)
Enhanced Vision, Internal Sensors, External Sensors (20)
Wifi (15)
Sentient AI (15)
Translator and Communicator (15)
Hydra Nanites (10)
Automated Cleaning and Storage (10)
Kinetic Strike (10)
Plasma Gun (20)
Temperature Resistance 2 (15+10)
Deep Sea (20)

Explorer mode.

a changelog would be nice

Gonna see how this changes my build. Any significant changes?

the greatest cyoa:

1) brownse your favorite web page www. four chans / tg / >>>/quest/ your own adventure
2) go eat a bow lof doritos and dew
c) pretend everything is okay and then go -> die
IV) shitpost furouisly!

You sucking my dick would be nice.

-Caravan Place only allows you to pick "+X" bonuses.
-Changed base PAC from 6000 to 5000
-Changed Igniter quirk costs and how they work.
-Made clarifications.

That'd be the long and the short of it.

Noxus' description has "comma" where it should have "coma".

>Changed base PAC from 6000 to 5000
Hey, this is unfair as shit for non-human and non-elves. Why did you do that?

If a race doesn't have a stat listed, do they start with 0 in that stat, or...?

>non-human
it hits humans hardest

Eh, humans were by far the most powerful race. I'm not going to really be crying for them.

Yeah but humans are REALLY good if you used all the money, which is why he nerfed it. But if you're NOT a human or elf, then you need all that cash to be competitive. So it's really unfair.

>then you need all that cash to be competitive
elves get more money- thats always the advantage they have more or less

humans use money the best, the other races have their racial stuff

I agree, but im saying it doesent hurt other races nearly as hard

>the other races have their racial stuff
Which costs money, user. By reducing how much money they have, other races can buy LESS of their racial stuff that they need to stand up to humans and elves.

>elves get more money- thats always the advantage they have more or less

Only if they pick Horizon or Europa, which come with hefty -4 penalties to a stat.

Do the 'initial' quirks count against the limit of 3?

In general, if a race doesn't have a stat listed, they simply don't have that stat or whatever that could be represented with that stat is so low you may as well consider that they don't have it.
Giving 6000 resulted in almost every build being able to purchase every stat increasing quirk, not to mention it gave Humans and Nobiliaries far too much leeway.
Dropping it to 5000 fixes that while not horribly nerfing other races. That was essentially my reasoning.
They don't. This is because a member of a race already has the first quirk unlocked. They don't have to pay for it. To leverage, it doesn't count to a human's max number of racial quirks.

If you're here, would't 'Monsterboy' option be more canonical, if you're the only one. The game mentioned that such occurrences are rare, but possible.

Man, the money in this is super tight if you're trying to buy a good weapon and a backup weapon. Some ways to earn a bit of extra cash would be nice. Maybe I should just give up on some of the quirks I'd had my eyes on.

That's a crazy idea, but we'll give it a try.

>Base Form
Mammalian - well-rounded, no glaring weaknesses.

>Special Abilities
Increased speed - I must be able to outpace my prey.
Increased strength - greater strength allows for hunting bigger game.
Enhanced senses - heightened awareness allows for more flexibility in one's approach.
Regeneration - it is prudent to have a means of recovery if you are foregoing defense.

>Drawbacks & Missions
[+2] Budget Rangers: while I am gladdened that humanity takes an interest in protecting itself, I sometimes wonder what is left that is worth preserving.
[+3] Magical girl team: I will need to take care in dealing with them. It would be wise to pawn several minions against them to gauge their capabilities.
[+4] Dark hero: something tells me it would be unwise to play to my individual strengths, and so I will have to use treachery and guile to dispose of this one.

>Boss Perks
[2] Enhanced strength - as it turns out, brute force solves mostly everything.
[2] Enhanced defense - a glass cannon may only be fired once. I must have some durability.
[2] Enhanced speed - perhaps there are only a handful of living things that I cannot catch.
[1] Enhanced regeneration - should I fall to pieces I will simply put myself together again.
[2] True fade - so long as I land the first blow, I should control the outcome of any fight.
[0] Band of mooks - we may not be long-acquainted, should I send them to test the wrong prey.

Strength: extremely high.
Speed: extremely high.
Defense: very high.

>Igniters now can actually nuke shit
Fuck now i can't decide between cute elf and angry person

>not to mention it gave Humans and Nobiliaries far too much leeway
Then give them less, everyone else needs it to be as good as those guys.

You nerfed the other races worse than humans and elves from it, their money is way tighter.

but all tok content is tok shitposting

To be fair the noxus are so fucking weird that they barely have use for money

I thought it was 4?

Not everyone is a Noxus either.

Just saying

the racial transformation starts at 4+, meaning the limit to avoid it is 3 in this version.

Elves are not actually innately more wealthy.

Be a human and do both.
I wonder if Noxus Eldritch+Consistence could be used for mini targeteted nukes? Growing a mouth before they go off and shouting to your God(s) would be a nice plus.
Hell, combine it with Expand+Android Jetpack and not only you can be the gun, you can be the motherfucking ICBM

Crimson potion best potion

Kindred and Cyborg seem like the weakest choices here.

>In general, if a race doesn't have a stat listed, they simply don't have that stat or whatever that could be represented with that stat is so low you may as well consider that they don't have it.
In terms of stat gains/losses from elsewhere, does that mean starting at 0?
If you start at 0, and pick an option that would give -2, does that mean it effectively does nothing (unless you would gain some of the same stat from elsewhere, in which case maths as usual)?
Why are some equipment restricted to non-Noxus?
How far does Noxus' Imitation go in terms of gunplay? Does it affect the above restriction at all?
Does Noxus' Consume provide any control to the other direction (i.e. safely touch stuff without causing damage)?
Since Noxus' Shapeshifting only specifies items, does that mean that appearance-wise shapeshifting is free and innate?
For the "other races' quirks" bit of Noxus' Eldritch, do you just get to use whatever you like, or would you need to pay money to unlock shit for some reason?

>Unleash your final form
>Requires microtransactions
That's retarded user.

How much do you like the tiddies, /cyoag/?

>elves.
get money through losing stats

>humans
scale with money better

the othe races were buffed by comparison

Not as much as I like asses.

>Unleash your final form
>Requires microtransactions
That gave me a chuckle.
>That's retarded user.
Indeed, but my autism demands that the author confirms it one way or another.

But humans are not elves or angry fire people...

>the othe races were buffed by comparison
>Get less money for the stats you need and for a good weapon
>Buffed

From your point of view. If you were a short-lived potato man, humans would look pretty elvish. And if you were made of ice, humans would burn the fuck out of you. Check your assumed privilege shitlord.

>mfw my shameless attempt at min/maxing and ignoring the established rules of the setting lead to these balance changes

Feelsgoodman.jpg

>by comparison
everyone was nerfed, the others were nerfed least

fucking idiot

Humans needed that money the least to be good, desu.

>Person made of ice
>Not causing coldburns to humans
That's dumb

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In the 1.0 version I overcompensated with the base money. You weren't supposed to be able to get all/most quirks in the first place. Several, sure, but not to the amount folks were getting on builds in the last few threads.
>Noxus & Stats
If a race doesn't have a stat listed, they don't have it. Period. That stat cannot increase and it cannot be reduced.
>Noxus & Equipment
Some pieces of equipment are limited to non-noxus because Noxus either don't have a way to use them or require limbs to use them. Actual limbs, not make-believe slime limbs I mean.
>Noxus & Guns
Noxus can fire guns, but the recoil and their lack of consistance would just push them away from their hands.
>Consume
Tecnically, yes.
>Shapeshifting
Within limits, but yeah.
>Eldritch
Unleashing your final form does not require microtransactions, no.

you what?

their trade is literally "dont get special abilities base, scale abilities for money"

the less cash the worse humans get compared to others

Well, here's the thing about the quirks as they are: they give humans the biggest edge over any other race because humans are allowed to take them from EVERY other race.

The problem was not the money itself, per se; rather, it was in the pricing and availability of quirks to humans. Had you said something along the lines of "humans may only take quirks from/up to x(being 1-2) race(s)" that would've resolved the problem--if that's the word--of humans racking up 12s in 4-5 stats. Even dropping the max number of quirks humans can take from any race to 2 or 3 would have done the trick.

Cutting the money by a 1,000 seems like a solution, sure, but I only dropped 3,600 on them in my build, along with 750 on extras (medkit, commset). In the first version I had enough leftover to purchase 2 gutter weapons, or 1 low-tier weapon. Now I have enough to buy a Rattlesnake or forego the weapons entirely and just borrow one from a companion. I mean, according to my stats I am the Vitruvian Man and could likely just sweet-talk my way into getting a good gun, kill someone who had one with my bare hands, or steal one without incident. Likewise, 1 of my 4 companions would surely lend me theirs since I'm likely a better shot with it anyway.

In short, the money was never the issue. The open availability of all other race quirks to humans, and humans alone, was the only balancing "issue". Lastly, handicapping 1 option does not suddenly make other options more enticing. Just something to keep in mind.

You didn't overcompensate, the balance was fine except for humans.

Nobody likes hard nerfs.

Well a healthy human body is very unflammable, so you could smother a creature made of fire pretty easily without catching fire onto your moist fleshy bits. You'd still get burned, but it's the same principle.

Perfect.

Fair enough. I'll think about that for the next update.
That one might take a bit more to come, though, but most likely before next friday. IRL stuff's going to take a large part of this week. At the end of the day, I'm only doing this in my spare time.

>Race
Human
>Hole
Caravan Place
-Pipeline, Shack Stack, and The Verge (+4 Str, +1 Com)
>Extra
PPM (250)
Magnetic Leash (500)
>Weapon
Obsidian Ultra Great Sword
>Attire
Biker Suit
>Quirks
Morphogene, Regeneration (+3 Res), Muscle Density (+3 Str)
Alien Microbe, Toned Muscles (+3 Str)
>Partners
Rosa Del monte
Gilla Kaelyn
Hector Ferrer
>Objective
Journey

Final Stats: 5 Aim, 15 Str, 5 Int, 12 Res, 6 Com, 8 Agi

Not gonna lie the changes really messed up my build and I had to drop 3 Int, 7 Agi and Atomic Beam to keep the original vision of a magnetic leashed OUGS there while only gaining 2 Res and Aim from it (used the Metro and Stillwater caravans to swap some stats). Some things that would be nice are some drawbacks to allow you trade out some stats for others or allow unique interactions like multi quirking from a nonhuman race at the cost of a hit to Int or Res. An Agi/Str attire would also be nice.

Damn did not finish posting it in the last thread
Guess i'll just restart

Wait you're the one who made that bullshit human build?

Good work user.

So does FNB V.2.0 look fine?

The races will be just flavour, each race will get it's own magic but you can pick "Other Races" and get a free magic choice.

The landforms will provide Resource Points in certain areas, with an exception of Mystical Fonts, and Arcane Stormlands.

No

Nonononono

>Other races
*Laughs in silly build*

Seems like a contradiction. Igniter cap is their number of pyro uses per day, but they are stated to be able to use abilities an unlimited number of times. So what does cap do then? Is it some other, not explicitly defined ability?

That and Noxus still need to have some defined amount of Strr, Com, Res, and Aim. Even if you keep the restrictions that they effectively can't use any item with a stat requirement other than agility, I still need to know how well my character can see, speak, and hit things.

>Race
Kindred

>Hole
Saint Pacifico

>Weapons
Blackbone & Blackwood -2500
Scrapped-Off -1000

>Attire
Leather Jacket

>Quirks
Tentacles -300
Extra Eyes -200
Elastic Body -300
Natural Oils -200
Toned Muscles -200
Sweet Smell -200

>Partners
Eileen Mossberg
Danny Fabiano
Gilla Kaelyn

>Objective
Bounties

AIM: 6
STR: 12
INT: 5
RES: 11
COM: 6
AGI: 14

The original plan was to hold the dual swords in my tentacles and charge in up close and personal with the Shit Outta Luck Rifle but that ended up way too expensive. Downgraded to the Breacher, which is still a sweet gun with my preferred combat style, then the Scrapped-Off when I decided I could take more Quirks now and upgrade my gun at some point.

Eileen might be an elven fuck but it's hard to beat her technical precision and long range fire support on the job. Plus I can't deny the allure of getting in good with the Nobiliary and she seems like a good avenue for that. Danny is kind of my idol and a big part of why I got into the bounty business to begin with. Finally, Gilla is definitely an enigma but she had a hot photo and I'm glad to have her on the team.

Kindred have the lewd options.

Tok said he was going to make an Author Servant CYOA, but he fucking LIED and/or BAILED on it. The cunt.

>If a race doesn't have a stat listed, they don't have it. Period.
They should have _something_ comparable, though, at least for stuff like Aim, Str, and Com. Otherwise you're looking at all Noxus being blind and mute, with barely enough strength to hold their solid-form bodies upright (if even that). You can still keep them unmodifiable by bonuses if you really want to, just give us a proper point of comparison.
>Some pieces of equipment are limited to non-noxus because Noxus either don't have a way to use them or require limbs to use them. Actual limbs, not make-believe slime limbs I mean.
>Noxus can fire guns, but the recoil and their lack of consistance would just push them away from their hands.
But Noxus' Imitation says they can use guns _normally_, so shouldn't that mean the limbs are proper enough?

I hope you don't plan on making elves mary sue 'best wizards' or orcs mary sue 'best fighters'

Do goblins have big tits?

Got a good sense of humor on you.

We're looking very aesthetic now. The formatting is looking swell.
>Other races
Thousands of images of races that are not human you pick one that is human.

But seriously, it's looking good and the text reads very well.

He bailed after starting to work on it due to, and I might be wrong here, being excluded from another "author" thing or something equally retarded.
Then again, that doesn't really sound right but I still bet it was over something retarded.
Someone else might be making a Fate/Author type in the near future, iirc.

>Kindred have the lewd options.
What's lewd about Kindred?

Tentacles.

being a specialist isn't mary sue user. if they're really good at one thing they're probably shit at everything else.

They can use their compress feature to fulfill degenerate unbirthing fetishists.

what you're saying is true, but you're only focusing on the semantics and not really considering why he probably hopes what he hopes, which is the fact that it doesn't make sense for an entire expansive species to have an arbitrary and narrow specialization

Got it more Tok and less Tok CYOAs!

Judging by the strength description for those that'd be a very bad idea.

Gross.

I honestly hope that you get the help that you so desperately need, and that it leads to you making more and better CYOAs (among other self-evident benefits to everyone with whom you interact).

Tentacles for obvious reasons.

Elastic Body stretches her out for massive/multiple insertions.

Sweet Smell and Natural Oils should be fucking obvious.

Toned Muscles isn't explicitly lewd but muscly girls are hot.

Uhh, someone's probably into Acid Spit. If the Kindred can control the acidity then it would be pretty fun for stripping clothes off people or something.

S T O P for the love of god

It would be worth it to deny immortality to all of humanity just for the certain knowledge that Tok is going to die some day.

Good thing about this is that I don't have any way to give immortality to humanity anyway, but Tok is still going to die regardless.

It's the little things in life I guess.

A while ago I wondered whether having Acid Spit would provide you with a certain amount of internal protection against corrosion. I still dk if that means Noxus cum is out of the picture.