Jumpchain CYOA Thread #2107: Walk Like An Edition

Jumpers, why haven't you companioned Season 10 Big Brother winner, Dan Gheesling, and imported him as a Cryptid in Generic Creepypasta?

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It's short, but it's not terrible. The items list is missing Glamdring and Orcrist, it'd be nice to see those in there given that sting is as well.

One of each.

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Fluffy dragon waifu.

What sort of military power does a jumper need to free humanity from the filthy Xenos in Xenogenesis?

what jump?

Reposting with a few fixes, a better explanation of challenges, and more links in the notes.

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>May old JRPGs reign eternal.
Fan translations are love, fan translations are life. Tales of Phantasia was hi-larious.

>you need to resolve every single grudge in the Book of Grudges, all the while more grudges are added every day.

>even Thorgrim looks disturbed

Wait, what? This has the One Ring purchaseble in full for 300cp?

Not a /just/ a Ring of Power to grant invisibility, but the full One Ring package that accepts you as its master after the jump... for 300cp, with a possible discount to pay even less.

The same price as a dungeon with a dozen cells, or a lake village. I just... what?

I can swap the enhanced senses for beauty, but the reason I had beauty as the 100 cp was because all elves are beautiful whereas the enhanced agility was something I saw only the elven warriors having. As for the wizard staff, there isn't really a good origin for it, so I might put it under an undiscounted General section.

>As for the wizard staff, there isn't really a good origin for it
What about "Istari" or "Wizard"?

To be fair, it requires the One Ring of Sauron drawback to be taken for no points. It's effectively 600 points or 450 with a discount

On the flip side of things, all elves are innately immortal unless they deliberately choose mortality anyway so it seems redundant as a capstone. Just something to think about.

>The Legend of the mightiest Dawi since Grimnir himself.
>And the reason for such a legend?
>They resolved every single grudge ever.
>Every.
>Single.
>Grudge.
>Ever.
>Going so far as to resurrect ancient evils just so that they could pay retribution against them.
>The Old Ones themselves were forced back into the realm when an old grumbling had been discovered from their time.
>I shall reiterate, they forced the Old Ones themselves back just to resolve a grumble from a minor Dawi that was made millennia ago.
>Apparently they hadn't been given their full Beer ration.

Bilbo had the thing for 81 years, and was mostly fine. Aside the unwillingness to let it go. That drawback is... just a mite overpriced.

Sorry, I meant that there was no good origin in the existing document. I decided not to add the Wizard origin because I thought it was a little unbalanced for the other origins. Maybe I could make it a non-free origin?

Let's see, who does that include...

>All Dark Elves
>All Undead
>All Greenskins
>All Skaven

H'oooh boy.

What the hell happens to the Dwarves if they discover they have no grudges anymore?

>Chaos
>Humans
>All Elves in general
>Nature itself? Probably.

Don't forget other dwarves. Nobody hates a dwarf like a dwarf.

This is pretty neato, actually. Not likely to get on the drive, but is this gonna be put somewhere else? It'd be a shame to see it just disappear.

They hold a grudge against the very fact they have no more grudges.

They make a grudge against the one who removed all the grudges. Either that or they just drink beer for the rest of time.

What is the point of failing the jump if you end a jump as a wraith? If we have a way to get a new body it's not a problem at all but if we don't removes one of the major benefits of the ring, entirely based on our possession or lack of OOC abilities/resources.

Would also suggest easing up on the drawback and lowering it's value to better reflect what actually happened with the ring. Possibly with an increase to the price of the ring to account for this.

Dwarf Hell.

Oh, I know that not many people are clamoring for this jump, but I figured I'd ask again, now that I've started working on it proper.

Is there anything in particular anybody wants to see in Mars of Destruction?

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Did you see ?

That is very true, but Gandalf wouldn't even touch it for fear of what it would do to him. I think Frodo on his quest is a better example of what the ring can do to someone when it sets its mind to it, even a hobbit who is naturally resistant to its influence.

Not the destruction of Mars, I like that planet.

Why not both at same time?

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Can you think of any good ways to do an Undead Automaton besides that someone tried to upload their mind into a computer without realizing that's not how it works, and as a result just created a copy of themself while they died, or without making your body out of the iron from your enemy's blood? Thanks in advance.

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No pedobait, lolicon, or child fucking this time.

Yes. I've seen some shit looking for porn.

>being this new
fluffy tail is kitsune

Nah, I'm pretty sure Mars is the one doing most of the destroying

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Whoops. Didn't mean to link.

Endless Legend has the Broken Lords race, basically what you're asking for. Given how advanced Dust is it'll probably work out how you want it too.

Well, I'm saving it if nothing else. But HybridAnon said before that he might start up a drive to collect these kind of adventure documents if there was an interest and desire.

Gotta love having blood pressure as high as a fire hose.

>They make a grudge against the one who removed all the grudges

>the final Grudge is all of dwarfdom. Every dwarf. Every dwarf ever. Rising up against the Grudge-Clearer.

That's a good idea. I'll specify the dwarf weapon perk to include Glamdring, Orcrist, or another blade of similar renown.

Yeah, but this is still many decades before Sauron rises again in Mordor, it has no motivation to do anything other than corrupt it's current bearer just like Gollum and Bilbo.

And Gollum is the penultimate example of what happens to those who remain under its influence when Sauron isn't looking for it yet.

>gif

Damn, I laughed to that. I'm a terrible person.

>Is there anything in particular anybody wants to see in Mars of Destruction?

Waifus.

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Ah. I should've clarified. I meant thematically.

>pic
Reminds me of youtube.com/watch?v=lJiMlgvygvc

Personally, even with the drawback which doesn't seem as bad as either of the other +300 drawbacks, I think it's too cheap compared to the other items.

On the flipside, the Dungeon seems underwhelming to the other 300cp items.

I'd suggest replacing the Drop-In capstone item with a lesser Ring of Power, just granting the invisibility seen in the Hobbit itself.

And move the actual One Ring to something like 600cp, undiscounted. With the drawback.

Because honestly? It's the One Fucking Ring, the most important object in the entirety of Middle Earth. Still would buy it at that price. My preciousss.

Waifu squad? Perk to have more blood then should be possible, and to choose whether it shoots out like a geyser?

Yeah, people freaked out at that head explosion when we watched Glory in class.

Make an automaton out of bone, possibly bind a dead soul to that?

They throw a big party with all the beer. Then they add grudges against the people who trashed their dining hall and drank all their beer. Then they go to kick their ass, and once that's resolved, they throw another party. Repeat. This sounds like a pointless and ultimately damaging gesture, but getting caught in this endless loop is actually what Dwarves consider to be a utopia, known as, "Derwischterberfagchten", aka, "The Time When We Go Drinkin' And Fightan'". It is the equivilant of a golden era.

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In my defense, Needless is only guilty of two of those three things.

Although no worries, this thing may be about a single bland boy surrounded by teenage girls with neon-colored hair in skin-tight jumpsuits, but there couldn't be less testosterone if it starred the cast of Sesame Street.

I couldn't think of any better pop-culture references on short notice.

>implying Cookie Monster isn't the pinnacle of testosterone and manliness.

youtube.com/watch?v=I5e6ftNpGsU

That makes sense. I've added a General section for items where the ring is 600cp undiscounted. Also, the dungeon's real ability is that it can contain anyone. If you defeat a god, the dungeon will hold them.

A thought regarding becoming a human demense via the infernals jump scenarios: can I then manufacture a suit of power armor which functions as a 5 Dot Manse of sorts when I wear it, harnessing my own geomantic potential?

In Date A Live can I have my Spirit Power be a copy of one of the Spirits from the spin offs?

...Huh. That sounds awesome, so I'm going to say yes. Yes, you can.

Just be aware that you'll have to pioneer the field of wearable manse-armors used to cap humanoid demesnes yourself.

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I will rise to this challenge

Oh, nice. Missed last thread, thanks for reposting. Okay, going to need to read it more in-depth to give commentary, but just off the bat from a first skim: I am so happy that you made a bunch of perks about Chrono Cross's weird ideas and implementation for characters. That's one of the best bits of Chrono Cross, even if (like most people) I hated about twenty of them.

So if you power copied Saitama...

Also, what would the likely result of giving him an anti-boredom perk be?

That Adorjan demesne we become... Are we counted as being an uncapped demesne?
If so, can we invite some Raksha to set up a Freehold?

Corsets. Because I always found it funny that the weird power suit has a waist so thin that it needs to corset the pilot to wear it. They actually show it, too, that's not just me inferring what would be logical.

>inviting the fair folk to colonize you for power
Jeez it's getting pretty Luna in here

You're not restricted to being an adorjan demense, per last thread's word of mardukth - he confirmed that if you have your own third circle demons and are willing to piss EVERYONE off, you can use one of your own 3CDs to become a you-demense.

That being said, the concept of becoming a freehold is utterly terrifying.

You mean Rinne, Rio or Mayuri?

Well, no. Since they aren't really spirits in the true sense of the word. If they become actual spirits at some point I suppose you could, at that point.

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Alright then, sounds good. And fair enough on the dungeon.

I'd personally have the Erebor Treasure Room just replenish itself every jump, but that's a minor gripe. The jump as a whole is pretty good.

Excellent. Godspeed, user.

Yes... Though, again, they're prooobably going to run into issues of space if they want to build a Freehold on top of you (assuming you're human-size or so).

Indeed.

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Yo...what rank of demesne do you start out as anyway? Can you improve it by, I dunno, raising your Essence?

Thank you, and I think you're right about the treasure room replenishing every jump. It makes more sense than spawning new treasure each day.

Holy shit that's good. I may have to shift some stuff around, but I may actually include something like that.

I did also happen to include a perk that lets your organs condense like sponges.

Would you be willing to compromise and have it replenish monthly to annually? Some jumps are longer than others.

Nice.

>You're not restricted to being an adorjan demense
Yeah, but I'm planning on taking Addie the completely normal human with a white-jade smile as a companion/familiar.
>issues of space
Then they'll just have to write it in short stories!
In all seriousness, I'd imagine that the very act of being a walking Freehold might prompt some retaliation... Of course, they can't even use the Realm Defense Grid, since the Empress is currently occupied.

I have no intention of trying to get it on the Veeky Forums drive. Once I make a couple more, I might make my own, but I'm not really happy with the level of content. I'd like to include more challenges, encounter tables, and adventure prompts for people to use.
Of course, if other people want to make something similar for their own combinations, or even for canon settings, I'd host those on the drive as well.

Pic related is going to be my next attempt. Sword and Sorcery + Dark Sun.
I really wish we had an Elric, Conan, or other S&S jumps.

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How about every ten years? That keeps with the spirit while making sure you don't run out if you spend a thousand years in a jump.

Not ideal, but I won't bitch about it. Thanks.

I like it.

Ricrod, did you ever finish the "I Saved Too Many Heroines And Caused The Apocalypse" jump? I can't find it on the drive.

N/A, you're tapping into an Elemental Pole. Like the demesnes that would be found close to or on the existing Elemental Poles.

...Which functionally just means a "6"-dot demesne in terms of the essence you regain from it. Though I suppose such manse-armor mentioned above would have a lot of points to power the "manse" with.

And no, you can't really improve it. Mostly because it doesn't really have anywhere to grow to.

Oh, yeah. Being a walking freehold is going to be a cause for alarm for anyone who recognizes you to be that.

Though, at that point, there would also be a new Elemental Pole. So you might get shifted down in priority a bit.

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>Though, at that point, there would also be a new Elemental Pole. So you might get shifted down in priority a bit.
Especially since it's an Elemental Pole of Adorjan. If there's one Yozi you don't want to become a fundamental aspect of reality it's...well, any of them, it's any of them. But Adorjan would be especially bad. Gonna be a lot of panic over that.

What's a freehold?

Huh. Yeah. I posted and everything. There was even a little shitposting about the omniscient magic.
No one took "Careless Whisper", that made me sad.

Anyway, here it is?

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So, Raksha and Creation don't really get along - Eventually, Creation will calcify the chaos stories. Raksha can, however, set up outposts inside Creation by building on an uncapped demesne - These are the Freeholds.

>No one took "Careless Whisper", that made me sad.
Guilty feet have got no rhythm, and we're all guilty here.

True, true.

It's a Raksha/Fae court, which is usually set up in the Wyld, but can also be created on top of Demesne (though there they have some size-restrictions, even if the demesne isn't a person).

Basically, they act like the Wyld in most respects, and could be a sanctuary/outpost for Fae and their minions in Creation. At the most basic level.

They can also add more to it by imbuing one of the Fae's graces into it (forming metaphorical structures like a Fountainhead, Throne Room, or Stronghold), which give the rulers of the Freehold further powers over the territory inside, beyond what they have over normal Wyld.

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>No one took "Careless Whisper", that made me sad.
Oh, I took it. Just didn't post a build.

By how much does the Ring enhance the Jumper's power, post-Jump?

Could you re-upload it to the drive then? It seems to have disappeared completely.

By a factor of 2 Gigahobbitses

Too early to slot it into my current chain but have a build I'd probably use when I get to it.

Jump ?
Origin: Outsider
Race: Human
Age: 18
Location: Earth-Japan

Drawbacks
Mine & Mine Alone
Banjo Curse

Perks
Never Made Sense
Fake Heroism
Averting Apocalypse
Careless Whisper
Royalty's Pride
Omniscient Magic

Gear
Hero's sword

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