Ok guys there is this girl i realy like and im trying to write a poem someone help me

ok guys there is this girl i realy like and im trying to write a poem someone help me

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I remember the day we met
but how could i forget
there you sat across from me
oh how my heart would beat
and as the days would pass by
my feelings for you would intensify
i can no longer contain my love for you
just seeing you smile would help me get thtough

thats all i got i know its crap help me plz

Don't write her a poem. Literally just talk. You'll be fine.

If it's clear she's not interested in you after that, move on.

Bad idea.

wouldnt girls like that knid of thing

i remember the day we met
it wasn't my eyes that were wet
there you sat across from me
'oh my dick' i would bleat
i edged as the days went by
so that my cumshot would intensify
i can no longer contain my load for you
just seeing your face covered gets me through

If you intend on giving her the poem as a token of your affection consider
a) not doing that, you fucking retard
or
b) Doing it and then swiftly killing yourself.

If you intend to sublimate your desire, passion and grief into creative pursuits then go for it. Study poetry, put it into practice, post in critique threads. Git gud.

go back to /B/

You can always quote a real poem.

Instead of writing a poem, just talk to her and tell her you are interested.

this, but say it with your dick

Do these things instead of what you're talking about doing.

It's cheesy as fuck.

I was just improving on

it would be nice if you pu that talent to good use and help me write a serious poem

Okay OP, here's my suggestion.

1. Tell a friend to get a camera.
2. Print this out (whitmanarchive.org/published/LG/1856/poems/13)
3. Walk up to her and recite the poem on one knee
4. Post the video here so we can critique your reading skills

help improve my poem and ill post a pic of her

>(whitmanarchive.org/published/LG/1
well i was on the debate team so my speaking skills are good

That's always good.

no no no no

the poem must be your own and beautiful and ask/tell/invite her to suck your dick

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Coexistence correlation and biblical value
Ubiquitous favorable locations
Negative trends
Transcendental outcome

It won't work. Poems are for girls you're already dating, not one you want to.

>literally trying to write a poem to impress a girl
>tfw Veeky Forumsizens are this gay

Lord fucking Xenu, you need some help. We'll go /adv/ style and give you some dating advice, son.

Step 1: Don't make poems. That's fucking gay, m8. Just keep the poems to yourself.
Step 2: If you can't help making poems, don't make it as gay as the first draft you made there. It was repulsively gay.
Step 3: Talk. Just fucking talk to her. Tell some good jokes, make her laugh, buy her a drink. Easy, no?
Step 4: Stop being gay and stop asking Veeky Forums about romance. These heathens worship emotional trauma and tragedy, not Nicholas Sparks bullshit.

if you give a poem to a girl you like she's going to think youre an autistic beta male

just fucking talk to her and get coffee or something

write her a poem after you've dated for a year (or don't if youre not somewhat familiar with poetry because it will prob be bad)

Love love me do
You know I love you
I always be true
So please, please, please
Love me do

Google this
It'll be on warosu
I've only told Veeky Forums
About my crush on you

itt: virgins

>virgins

OP is the only virgin here, m8.

>Veeky Forums

>mfw remembering I did this when I was 17
>when the time came to recite it to her I was too nervous
>got oneitis anyway

Yeah OP you should not write a poem.

I remember the day we met
indeed, how could I forget
oh how my heart would beat
as I thought upon your feet
my boner would intensify
as my lusty eyes did pry
I can no longer contain my "love" for you
so I'll rub one out this night to get through

top kek. this is gold

Let us live, my femanon, and let us love,
and let us judge all the rumors of the old men
to be worth just one penny!
The suns are able to fall and rise:
When that brief light has fallen for us,
we must sleep a never ending night.
Give me a thousand kisses, then another hundred,
then another thousand, then a second hundred,
then yet another thousand more, then another hundred.
Then, when we have made many thousands,
we will mix them all up so that we don't know,
and so that no one can be jealous of us when he finds out
how many kisses we have shared.

Fuck a poem write her a novella.

The "kisses" part was cringe-worthy, user. Thy hath failed thine trips!

It's classical literature

fuck that, write her a 1,500 page postmodern doorstopper

Cringe, nonetheless.

Write prose instead OP

Post a pic. What does she look like?

>impressing a modern woman, let alone girl, with poetry
I'm sorry my man but that just isn't happening. She'll tell her friends about you, her friends will say you're weird or creepy, she will believe her friends because shes probably socially influenced like most modern women then bam, you're that weirdo who wrote her poetry instead of being a man and just asking her out.

...

>Thy hath failed thine trips!

Shittiest attempt at EMO I've ever seen

shit, meant EME

How does one mistype "E" to "O"?

shit thread, where the gets at

True. Listen to him OP. Most girls (at the stage of liking someone) won't really appreciate it. And might find it kind of weird or cringy.

It was made in latin originally