>adverbs
Adverbs
Yea verily
>he doesn't like adverbs
>first person
>not using semicolon
>not using adverbs ironically
There is nothing wrong with using adverbs judiciously.
Lolly, lolly, lolly
Frantically fretting at the fantastically factitious formulation, I selectively stated secretions that argued against an adverse attitude to adverbs.
Damn, I'm watching these again after like 20 years, and honestly, they fucking sucked. I don't know how kids were expected to learn anything from these stupid songs.
Don't understand the image, but King explicitly states that he doesnt like adverbs. In his book "on Writing: A memior of the craft." King explains that they are so awful that they spawned thier own party game where you try to make funny adverbs such as
"She caught him in the act of masturbation. "Wait!" He jerked out."
Or
"It's not fair!" Tom said darkly.
>grammar
This explains why he sucks at writing.
>"She caught him in the act of masturbation. "Wait!" He jerked out."
I'm not very good at English grammar but which is the adverb here?
There is none.
okay
?????
"Jerked"
lel
Are you implying ad libs are good?
i suspect this is b8 but
there is no adverb
there is a pun on the double meaning of the world "jerked"
adverbs commonly end in -ly. examples in this case might have been
"Wait!" He jerked out passionately
"Wait!" He jerked out quickly
"Wait!" He jerked out incestuously
"Wait!" He jerked out noisily
etc etc etc
Jerked is the adverb here. It works to replace "he said." And is unnecessary. It is the same as "he shouted urgently."
JERKED IS JUST A VERB YOU INBRED HALFWIT
It doesn't technically count as an actual adverb, but the point is that "jerked out" is a bit of over sprinkling when its best to just say "he said." Jerked out and shouted sporatically are both just attempts to make sure the read knows what your character is doing and feeling, and your story should be doing that on its own.
adverbs are cool, leaning on adverbs is not
It's King throwing disgusting adverbs into the trash.
jesus fuck it's like you people have no idea what a double entendre is
just kill yourselves
Yeah, the point is that adverbs are better for double entendres and not for actually writing something serious.
He said honestly.
How the fuck do you say a line in a honest way?
" " He shouted sneerily.
simply precede your statement with "i'll be honest with you..."
Or succeed it with "to be honest"
THIS desu
Might as well get rid of adjectives while you're at it.
THIS desuly*
Try writing without adjectives, adverbs or pronouns. Bonus points if you do it well.
Keep the adverb, lose the verb desu
There is nothing wrong with using "shout".
>verbal communication