I wrote my girlfriend a poem today <3

I like qt sentences in prose but never had an appreciation for poetry.

The fanbase is shit too with their berets and ashtray-scented turtlenecks.

Maybe I just never read the right stuff?

that's cute. i felt a cuddle by a kitten.

just saying, read some poem before writing one.

>Her love similarly so

This is probably your worst line. Improve the diction here and make it sound, you know, poetic.

Your commitment to duality is cute at first, but quickly becomes repetitive and boring. Make your poem stand on its own merits and not on a gimic

Did she like it?

Please actually read poetry before you try to write it.

she did, yes.

kys

I wrote my gf a poem too. I'm not going to show it to her because I'm too spooked.

You are the best thing to happen to me
Oh my God
did I just say that?
And I meant it when I said it.
Take a step back
I felt it when I said it
But do I mean it?
Do I mean it now?
I’m hesitant to feel it now
But I felt it when I said it
The word is our origin
What I wrote was not a reflection of my essence
What I wrote became what I am as I wrote it
Uncertain of interior meaning
All there is is the word
all the fleeting voices are unified
fragmented but linked together by the word
the word speaks, not me
Did I mean it?
I don’t know.
But I said it.
I wrote it.
It became me and me it.

there's no such thing as a long distance relationship

What do you mean?

Holy shit wtf
(You)

Hey Tao

>it doesn't even rhyme

ill yourself you fucking retarded sack of shit

i bet you also like "abstract art"