Alright, I have to ask because this is bugging the hell out of me...

Alright, I have to ask because this is bugging the hell out of me. Would this be considered a good story from a literary standpoint?

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>asian cartoons

no

Well ya gotta read it. It should evoke some emotion from you.

no, it's just edgy.

but i jerked off to it

I thought it was a bit sensationalist, but coming from a white pervert like Shindol the whole Japanese line that drug WILL fuck up your life really gets flipped on its head.

Made me feel like shit though.

Your link is broken. I'm only getting a picture of a panda.

>£~

I can't jack it to Shindol. The art is god tier but the stories JUST
If you're b8ing, then knock it off.
If you're serious, then

No, but this is true literature
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Was it rape?

Which rape? There were lots.

Oh yeah you're right. I'm at the part where she's snorting coke for the first time, no spoilerinos plz.

It's not too late to turn back, user.

Of course no. Shit just happens abruptly so you can cry/fap.

oh you

That just looks like normal porn. I fyou want interesting ero mangas, check out Shintaro Kago's work

>guro
I'll give him a try anyway, though; he looks interesting. As long as we're throwing out suggestions, there's Gomennasai,Quzilax and Himeno Mian.

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>Veeky Forumsizens are just a bunch of /d/eviants.
Yeah, makes sense.

No, it's not literature. It's pulp

>RIS OP's pic (my sadpanda extension stopped working and I can't be assed to fix it)
>go to collection of Shindol doujins
>learn he's the artist of that super fucked-up Yotsuba doujin I heard about

I don't care if she's older in it, making Yotssuba into a mindbroken cockslave is not cool.

y bump this thread faggot

This and aku no hana are the only Veeky Forums approved manga

Shindol's stories are fucking edgy garbage. He uses shock value to stand out and has said this himself.

Ask yourself: does melodrama make for good storytelling? Because that's what this is.

trash and garbage

>tfw my favorite hentai manga is Virgin Night
>it's about happy affectionate couples having happy affectionate sex in the midst of solving their hangups

I am a goddamn softy.

>everyone is out for blood when it comes to their porno
>cheating, blackmail, noncon all popular genres these days
>if you just like two people who are in a regular affectionate relationship you're a vanillafag who needs to grow a spine

I take back what I said about melodrama. People eat that shit up.

The best hentai is the stuff that could pass for non-h aside from the fucking.

>look up doujins for a series or character I'm into
>results are full of half-woman half-jello mutants making retarded faces while being raped or near-raped by some skeevy fucker

Being into women enjoying sex, overtly or shyly, with men they knew beforehand is suffering. Is everyone into rape, or is that just a weird thing among doujin artists?

The japanese have an obsession with purity, and loss of purity/degredation is a popular subversion of that obsession.
The series in the OP is a great example of it. The girl starts out as a cute, clueless virgin. Over the course of the story, she loses more and more of that purity until the end where she might as well be a different person. The image of the two versions of herself in the broken mirror sums it up: she has been transformed from a cute schoolgirl into a completely baseless crack whore.

More often though you just see loss of purity by girls getting raped or being forced to do something they otherwise wouldn't, oh and of course they loved it because women are all baseless sluts deep down.

>American porn is musclemen going "oh yeah fuck that pussy hard"
>Japanese porn is skeevy men raping pure virgin waifus

Horseshoe theory is as true of porn taste as it is of politics, you go so vanilla and non-edgy that you end up with the foreverally delitized freaks.

I've read doujin's with arguably equally bad endings, but this one felt so much worse. Like watching someone jump out of a tall burning building only to fall and splatter on the asphalt. And the ending is just...fuck. All of that work for what? Nothing. The boyfriend probably finds a new girl to trick, the parents forget she exists, her friends didn't even recognize her and played a hand in her death. Baby's dead too.

Literally the only redeeming thing about this story was the art.

Danke Dankei Revolution is literally the best douijin of the millennium.

>foreverally delitized
I can't believe I immediately knew what you were talking about, but I did, and you're right.

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ShindoL is an American expat so yeah I guess that makes sense

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yes.

There is things worse than anything ShindoL have draw out there, i dont get why everyone acts so shocked with this.