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It's not like it's going anywhere anyway

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>boy meets girl
>girls loathe boy
>boy cries
>boy decides to be a writer
>write a book about a boy, plot as follow:
> >boy meets girl
> >girls loathe boy
> >boy cries
> >boy decides to be a writer
> >boy fails
> >boy kills himself

> >girls loathe boy
> >boy cries
>boy kill himself

>two crooked cops drive their VW bug patrol around mid 80s provincial Mexican city, snorting coke and perpetrating a variety of petty and not so petty abuses of power.

> crossdressing pyromaniac overhears a conversation in a bar
> someone is going to burn down a building to make insurance fraud
> protagonist decides to burn it first but it's obvious it was man-made
> protagonist gets in trouble for this

I'm writing for fun, so please be gentle with your criticism.

>rise
>fall
>rise

>man with bestiality fetish makes a wish in a fountain and is transformed into a dog
>detailed descriptions of his journey through suburban neighborhoods sniffing dogs' asses and fucking bitches in heat
>eventually catches a new virus similar to HIV but only existing in dogs called DIV during an all male foursome in a dumpster
>contemplates his decision to become a dog while dying of the virus and being shamed by all of his ex-lovers as a doggyslut
>on his deathbed alone and surmises that it was all worth it to fulfill his dream
>upon dying meets God and is told that he will be reincarnated as a dog to repeat his past existence forever, and that he has been living the same existence as a dog for an infinite amount of time
>comes back to by the smell of a dog's ass with none of his memories intact

>protag collect underpants
>???
>profit

>boy likes girl
>girl hates boy
>boy weeps
>boy becomes author
>boy writes book with following plot:
>>boy likes girl
>>girl hates boy
>>boy weeps
>>boy becomes author
>>boy writes book with following plot:
>>>ad infinitum

There are 3 i've been sort of writing on/off over the years.

First:
>Guy drops out of highschool
>Tries to hide his smoking from his parents
>Goes on a road trip with his old high school friends to go clean up beaches

Second:
>Boy's parents go on an overseas holiday
>Decides to escape suburban drudgery and go explore the city each day
>Meets a girl at the train station
>They navigate this strange place
>The layout of the city changes everyday
>The pair are stalked by a man in grey overalls
>After an argument, the girl storms off
>The boy can't find her
>He teams up with a homeless skeleton to save her from the man in overalls

Third:
>Depressed, awkward university dropout becomes NEET
>Life begins to spiral out of control
>Plans a school shooting
>Someone else came to shoot up the university on the same day
>He shoots that guy down, unwittingly becomes a hero
>Utilises his newfound fame to turn his life around, get laid, get a job etc.

>boy sleepwalks into career as child actor thanks to influence of pushy, bohemian parents
>lands lead role in the next big YA movie franchise
>his character is gay
>success turn him into reluctant gay icon and role model for gay kids everywhere
>struggles to grow up in public eye
>is put under pressure by parents, agents, publicists to maintain ambiguous public persona and stay closeted about his heterosexuality

Bretty good premise, 2bh, famiglia. Almost kinda reminds me of Chuck Pahlaniuk (or however the hell you spell his last name).

Does it ever get more intense beyond just "my life sucks, I can't be who I want to be"? Like, does he go full Patrick Bateman or anything like that?

Yeah, I was thinking I could make him go off the deep end after he gets raped by Not Bryan Singer.

Don't want to tell you how to do things, and this premise has too much potential for me to steal, but have you ever thought about NOT making him go off the deep end?

Like, he just kinda-sorta accidentally/not-accidentally kills Bryan!Singer!, but since Bryan!Singer! is such a popular and beloved guy, everyone starts ripping the MC apart instead?

I don't know. Just a suggestion, I guess.

Also, do writers really steal each others work? Beside the whole "I borrowed some elements from Stephen King and Shakespeare", do writers on Veeky Forums ACTUALLY stoop down low enough to read someone else's idea on Veeky Forums and write it up and claim it as their own?

Seems pretty fucking dirty, even for an user. I mean, shit. There're just some things that are taboo, and stealing another author's work and calling it your own is one of them.

>Boy beaten by abusive dad regularly
>Because his dad would often wake him up and then beat him the boy develops negative associations with dark and bed
>boy escapes this emotional trauma by playing at the neighbourhood park with girl x and going to her house with her nice parents for dinner sometimes
>Mum and dad divorce
>Boy sleeps in same bed with mum because sleeping by self in dark is too scary
>one day mum dies of sudden unexpected death syndrome (this is a thing, en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sudden_unexpected_death_syndrome)
>boy wakes up when its bright and sunlights flowing through windows, tugs mum
>mum's a corpse
>girl x's parents adopt boy
>teenagers, girl x is under edgy phase and boy is meekly horny and crushes on her
>boy tries to talk to girl x about deep subjects in hopes she would feel something for him, he has to be subtle in case she doesnt reciprocate because itd be awkward because adoptive sister
>trying to talk about deep shit makes him into thinking more
>girl x's uncle dies, girl x is edgy and knows about boy's fear of corpses, edgy enough to suggest for him to come to the funeral and asks him to ask his adoptive parents and her parents for permission because its 'his family nao'
>at first it makes him drop his stomach but later boy always goes to girl x's relatives and parents' friends funerals, still can't overcome fear of corpses but is getting gradually better
>high school finishes, girl x goes overseas to study
>boy is obsessed with girl x and her sermons about overcoming fears, goes into medical school and becomes a mortician
>since boy is in a small town he is the town's morticians only apprentice, the towns mortician is an old guy, befriends boy and they're close and talk about deep shit and grow closer
>mortician dies, boy finally overcomes his phobia
>girl comes back to town with new boyfriend
>boy tells girl her boyfriend is psychopathic and dangerous
>she doesn't believe it
>she gets abused mentally very hard by the boyfriend and becomes a living husk
>boy feels shes losing her charm and his love for her perverts into something ambivalent but the lust is still there
>girl kills herself, boyfriend flees
>boy fucks girls corpse in the morgue while undergoing lots of emotions

t b h this is more of a fap story then a novella idea but whatever

Could be developed into a kind of "Blood Meridian", if you will.

I don't think it's ENTIRELY devoid of merit, and it's better than being just a cheap old fap story. It doesn't deserve that, user.

Maybe make it so that the girl is full of life when she's a teen, and the boy is an emotionless husk; whereas when they become adults, the boy becomes much more eccentric and alive, and the girl becomes just as much of a husk as he was from the abuse when he was a teen boy.

When she dies, he reverts back to being that emotionless, cold husk, and when he sees her body sent to him in the morgue, THAT'S when he breaks down and makes love to her in death sobbing at her feet, kissing her blue, frozen lips.

THAT'S when he finally proclaims his love for her, and THAT'S when she's finally still enough for her to hear him. Because even when people die, sometimes their hearts beat twice as strong.

Necrophilia is kind of beautiful and romantic, in a morbid, offensive kind of way. Try to play up the romanticism of it. If you're trying to hit the fap bait material, might as well strive for high-end literature in one stroke as well.

Pretty good ideas man, going to consider and incorporate them, thanks

Two and three are books I would read.

I agree with the previous commentor on your post.

Also, don't write pornographically when he has sex with the corpse. Dig into a deeper yet subtle psychologically/existential dilemma for the character. The audience must be shocked and disgusted, but they must be understanding towards the character. Something like "It's not rite, but it's also not right to punish".

It is a taboo subject and a shocking twist. If you can hide the ending until the end, the you have got something here.

I steal people's idea's out of these threads, but I use them for warm up exercises to write 3-5 page stories to get myself in the mood to write my novel

about how autofelatio solves the world's problems

>Necrophilia is kind of beautiful and romantic

>Father involved in car crash.
>Two young twin daughters are stuck in their seats in the back of the car.
>As the car is sinking into the river he realises it is impossible to save both and must choose which one will live and which one will die.
>As he dives underwater the book changes to a few years before the accident where the book becomes a roughly 600 page philosophical slog-fest.

W-what happens to his daughters?

>Tfw clutching my children to my chest right now very tightly

>Story begins with main character reminiscing his childhood 'good old days' with his best friend.
>Character building + lead up to present day.
>Main character is planning to propose to his LT girlfriend in a few days and is planning it out with his friend.
>Turns out the best friend has been planning to ruin the main character's life and proposal this entire time over a seemingly insignificant memory that was mentioned early in the book.
>Main character commits suicide.

>800 page adventure novel with themes of existentialism, relationships, philosophy etc.
>Last chapter the main character dies.
>He actually doesn't die, he wakes up in a hospital bed. The entire story was a dream he had after he suffered a serious concussion from a helmet-to-helmet tackle in football practice two weeks ago.

Mouth looks like a nintendo stylus desu

Having them be (identical?) twin girls lessens the drama if you ask me. You should make the kids as different as possible so he can't convince himself that the choice is random.

>struggling writer reflects on deteriorating health and work ethos
>overcomes writers' block by writing himself into his novel
>there's also some tragic romance
>and a subplot about hicks fucking cows for the absurdity

I wonder how much of a plagiarist/douchebag I would be if I steal the idea of a necrophile working at a morgue as in but other than that pretty much all of the other details, characters and plot points change.

Is this fair to so "inspired by" but not "stolen"?

Kek

There are LOTS of stories about necrophiliacs, and I'm sure there are LOTS of stories about necrophiliacs working in morgues, but I don't think there are very many stories about a man who works in a morgue who finally finds his deceased lover waiting for him on a hospital gurney, who is so overcome with emotion that the only way he can express his literally undying love is to make sorrowful, passionate love to her cold, preserved corpse.

...So, no. I don't think your story would be plagiarism. It could very certainly be "inspired by" said user's story, but it definitely would not be "based on" it.

Just don't mess up the ending this time, Stephen King.

You posted about 3 ages ago, hows it going?

>Man learns that his wife is having an affair
>In the ensuing fallout, she asks for a divorce and for custody over their daughter
>He sinks into a deep depression, has nothing to live for
>About to kill himself by jumping off a cliff
>Persuaded not to jump by kindly old man
>Man reveals that he is a psychiatrist with a pioneering new technology to help people like him
>The technology is a virtual reality device which allows him to completely construct the world around him, creating whatever scenarios he likes, with whatever people he likes
>At first he uses it for only positive experiences - spending time with his daughter, travelling to exotic places, sleeping with supermodels, etc
>Feels happy again at first, but realises he is getting no real fulfillment
>Begins to spend more and more time using virtual reality, doing increasingly depraved things - until he brutally murders his wife again and again
>?????????????????????

I think I have a good premise, and also have a good ending in mind, I just don't know how to fill the middle sections and keep the plot moving in an interesting way.

>a pedophile is visited by a fairy who acts as his psychologist. As she keeps him under constant watch, the two learn more about each others circumstances that lead up to their behaviour and failings. The man struggles with guilt and anxiety over his own future, whilst the fairy struggles with the ethics of doctor patient confidentiality and the concept of irredeemability.

Fucking write this user

Also being unironic when I say I would probably read this and hail it as great literature.

This actually sounds hella fucking good as a premise to a novel or a short story.

It's not a novel but a screenplay. I got the basic structure figured out, I need to write it now.
>A French muslim delinquent who grew up in a poor district becomes an islamist
>He's clearly a nihilist, he spends his time watching porn, smoking shitty weed and admiring beautiful girls he'll never get.
>Islamists contact him and convince him that he'll find salvation. Porn is slowly replaced by violent videos : beheadings, propaganda done by ISIS etc.
>He tries to build the image of a religious guy in front of his friends but he remains the same nihilist cunt in private.
>He only feels empathy when he's playing with children of his hood.
>His islamist friends plan an attack.
>He gets cold feet and escapes. He realizes that he was about to commit a horrible act.
>He's now wanted in the whole country.
>He tries to escape to Germany. A friend of his helps him.
>Tensions arise between him and his friend.
>Convinced that his friend is going to betray him, he steals his friend's money and runs away.
>His friend calls the police.
>He ends up being killed by the police as he tries to cross the German borders.

Thoughts?

This could be excellent but...
Why did you make him a crossdresser? Is it really necessary?

Not much of an arc, if I'm honest. The character doesn't strike me as interesting in any way. Just a typical loser persona bordering on edgy. Additionally, nobody gives a shit about sharing any emotion with some islamist character.

Also makes no sense that he is wanted by police and is only tracked down as he gets to the Border. Germany is a small country with one of the highest levels of surveillance in the world.

I mean if you really wanted to I couldn't really do anything to stop you but I'd really like to eventually tackle this origin plot

Good points.
Writing his personality is a real challenge, I'd like to make him relateable and portray him as a loser who pursued a terrible fate because he wasn't able to fit into the modern world. Kinda like a character from a Houellebecq novel who happens to be an islamist instead of an upper middle class guy.

You should read about Salah Abdeslam, he easily managed to escape to Belgium and was arrested more than 20 days after the Paris attacks. Also, my character is supposed to day before arriving in Germany.

On another note how do you guys characterise psychopathic (as in, the inborn 'demon-like' type of psychopath, not the 'daddy whacked me with his belt when I was three' type of psychopath) characters without coming off as really cheesy or one dimensional? I felt like Corncob's Chigurh was the most lacking character in No Country for Old Men

Mosins on Mars

>Americans and Russians join forces after the fall of the PC cultural marxism world wide, dead purple haired fat SJW's everywhere and right wing nazi groups getting shot by the police.
>Jews oying and veying without getting their money
>they all run to Israel and every nation on earth is now looking what to do next, everything is uncertain, WW3 must be diverted somehow fast
>Russo/American shaky partnership is gaining ground and support
>Chinese are the biggest rival after they took Africa and now a strange cold war is going on and nobody knows what will happen
>Things are calm but the sudden bridge connecting Alaska and Russia brings toward strange yet heartwarming relationship that excites the world
>no longer enemies, combined strength and thought bring upon creations, inventions and friendships that should have been there centuries ago
>American technological advances, combined with Russian simple solution tactics create the space race of colonizing anything and everything
>Chinese own the moon and charge everyone else to reside there and use the lunar launch sites
>Americans and Russians are first to colonize parts of Mars, with chinese not too far behind
>The tv series start with an american oxygen farmer/mechanic/applepie-patriot explaining the first shots fired on Mars, the first murders and the first battle.
>Russians have flooded Mars with old Soviet weapon stockpiles, the weapons and even the machines somehow (with primitive simple tuning) work on Mars
>american gets a mosin nagant thrown at him
>they are in some sort of a transport
>CHEEKI BREEKI
>they attack the african mercenaries from behind of their compound

I dont know, i have some ideas but i need a lot of help from /k/ and /pol/
I think id have a proper script for AMC to make a show out of it.

Just mundane acts of violence for the sake of violence. Usually done without any trace of remorse or guilt.

>Kid pulls tufts of hair from pet rabbit aunt gave him for his birthday.
>Girl is chronically replacing boyfriends with ex's and ex's with boyfriends. Revels in their pain.
>Man is asked if he feels guilty for killing wife for accidentally under cooking chicken. Says no, and tells interrogator matter-of-factly, "anyone else would have done the same exact thing", even though only a fucking psycho would agree with that statement.
>Edgy teen blackmails femanons and revels in their pain
>Edgy teen yanks out railroad spikes for fun on his off time, in the hopes that it will cause a massive train wreck and kill hundreds
>Gay trucker pulls over all manner of hitchhikers and vagabonds. Stops overnight at motel and enters hitchhiker's room, naked, lying in his guest's bed, hoping the hitchhiker will come in and "rape" him or otherwise take advantage of him while he "sleeps"
>EMT purposely works against the patient, trying to get the to die, turned on by the fact that he might get caught trying to sabotage his peer's medical efforts
>Guy only dates women that look a lot like his mother, but rejects them all for acting too much like her. When asked what the hell he wants in a woman, he admits he doesn't really quite know.
>Man owns lots of exotic and dangerous pets and plans on committing suicide one day by starving his animals for days and letting them free so they could take him and eat him alive.

Not bad, would read excerpt of.

Yeah this sounds Cormac McCarthy-tier and you should write it if you don't suck

hot af

Should have had him plan the shooting with someone else, with shooting the other man part of his master plan all along

Thanks for asking. Between postgrad and work i haven't been able to write as much as I like. I spend maybe 5 or so hours per week. Most lit mags in my country have submission deadlines coming up so I've been focusing more on my poetry. Third story has about 10k words. Second has about 30 handwritten pages.

First has about 15k words and another 15-20 handwritten pages. In 2012/2013 I wrote maybe 100 pages for it but got frustrated. The main scenes were good but there wasn't enough happening to sequence them into a cohesive story. I have more ideas now, but I really wish I didn't sperg out and destroy those 100 pages.

Are you working on anything?

Stealing all your ideas

fuck you

A second story arc with alternating chapters of dream and reality where the dream/como is what youd originally write and the other story arc is the life of the football player in the weeks leading up to the hit. Nobody will get the relationship until the last chapter

>young ne'er-do-well gets a part time job at a retirement home
>starts selling drugs to the old people, whos psychedlic drug fuelled recollections of their pasts intertwine with the main book

Ew man, stop romanticizing it. We get it, you think 100 days of sodom is the best work of art ever created, and the idea is still good for banging the dead chick... but come on... he loves her SO bad he has to fuck her cold body? Nasty man... not romantic

Wow such a big boy book with grown up themes

That's cliché in the worst way possible

...

Would probably work well for a short story

> Infinite Jest II
> set in YA dystopia
> First 2 words: we are
Cause controversy, anger Wallace estate, wear and bandanna, do Wallace impressions and pretend that's how I talk: generate sales.

That's a shit premise. VR is just like a license to do creative writing exorcises on the readers time.

> Boy gets letter to join wizard school
> decides he wants to go to regular school because he wants to make porn when he grows up
> Wizard guy tries to convince him, he says no I love porn
> 25 years later he sees wizard guy with smokin hawt daughter
> tries to say hi
> WG's like, well well, thought you were all about the porn
> Main guy's like, yeah but I am in love with your daughter now, I must cast her
> WG's like, tough luck, she does porn but only wizard porn
> Main guy's like, this is the time when you either sink or swim, tries to learn how to do wizard porn
> WG starts off hostile but warms to him, teaches him about wizard porn
> Hilarity ensues

Film's called " The Perfect Cast""

>stream-of-consciousness short story
>old woman with dementia living at a nursing home
>her daughter and two grandchildren visit her
>during the same night she comes into a moment of clarity
>noticable slow transition from borderline gibberish into cohesive thoughts
>remembers defining moments of her life
>her marriage, her dead husband, the birth of her children
>she realizes that she fears nothing more than to return to her state of gibberish
Probably abrubtly ends once she understands what has happened, no point in continuing really

She could do an an hero to stop re gibber but forget what she's doing halfway through.

BONUS ENDING

>She ends the story holding the same three items as she began with, and we realise she plans to kill herself often but always forgets what she's doing halfway through.

I thought about her attempting to kill herself by attempting to toss herself from her bed or something equally desperate. My grandmother was found on her floor with a broken hip having fallen in the middle of the night and I often wonder if she herself hadn't tried to end it the only way she could through a locked room

>i'm from redshit and I'm going through a dry spell
>greentext your plot so I can steal it and cater to the normie YA hoards
Get the fuck out

So a literary version of taylor swift.

The Idea
>Guy walks into some store in the most racist place in the USA.
He is black(it will really fuck with people's mind), somebody gives him some racist slur or some shit, and he shoots them.

>People in store also has guns, they gun him down, he gets up and kills them all, even the children.
Police arrive, they gun him down, he gets back up kills them all.

>Later he approaches the on scene TV Crew and makes an announcement on a Live Broadcast, telling everyone that anyone one insulting or attempting harm on his person will be executed.

>The reporter says something along the lines of "What gives you the right to kill people, who he thinks insulted him?"

>He shows a perfect 3d holographic image, that has strange characters/images. He then goes to explain that he has the "right" to do as he because because he is now the ruler of this solar system.

>He says the image shown is the Deed of the Solar system and he just bought it off the being we called God, then goes to list other deities that are found throughout other faiths and through the ages, explaining they are one and the same being trying different ways of rule.

>He says unlike our former creator, he likes to take a personal interest in his work.

>After other forms of law enforcement and military fail at killing him, a tremor goes through the world as they try to reassess their life and their place in it.

>Story follows the new god, has lost of heavy mysticism, magic/energy that defies the laws of physics and advance technology that we can't even comprehend, even when we are sat down and it's explained in depth.

Horror/sci fi
>near future, humanity has perfected autonomous drones and 3D printing
>send a massive force of drones and raw materials to either space or the bottom of the ocean to construct a city with zero human involvement
>lose contact with drone team, assume the mission is a failure
>five years later, receive a 'city complete, come check it out' message from the drones
>team goes to check out the city
>drones are nowhere to be found, city is all weird and crazy - stairways to nowhere, upside down rooms, etc
>no real antagonists, but the team slowly gets lost, separated, and start losing their minds

> a white male high school kid from a liberal family gets redpilled thru the Internet and joins a secret cell of right wing anti-globalist anti-SJW hackers

> he serves as the teams meme specialist

> together they uncover a government conspiracy binding together SJW leftists Islamists and international (((bankers)))

> one day, our redpill hero comes home to find his whole family has been bombed by a government drone

>a musclebound badass-seeming man in a hi tech armor Jeep tells him to get in, no time to explain

>this man is Max Dunkleheit. Former USMC combat veteran over 70 confirmed kills. Betrayed by his government, he has gone rouge. He was the one who started the secret hacker cell btw. As well as the masculine father figure our hero always dreamt of.

> the adventure begins. Will our heroes be able to save the west?

>Twitter search #depression
>copy paste to Microsoft word
>1200 pages thus far

it's like a cyberpunk lovecraft

i like it

>meme specialist

chuckled

>be me (as in: describing the story from a first person view)
>be rapper (20th century neologism, meaning rap singer, part of the hip hop culture)
>be nigga (strange case of a racial slur that is also used as an afectuous appelative between african americans)
>be rioting (during the early 21st century, throughout most of the 10s decade, racial activism saw a high rise)
>open the gram to take a fit pic (social media was an intrinsic phenomena of the cyber-society. The dawn of the Internet and the increasing connectivity of peoples at light speed generated open virtual communities focused on sharing ideas and images, but often falling into vanity echo chambers. More information on chapter three)

Please share an exerpt

>the veldt

>A red-head pays her way through medical school by getting into the world of underground bare knuckle boxing.
>Slowly becomes an alcoholic and increasingly convinced she'd the reincarnation of an Irishman from 1920s New York.

you got me, i bamboozled you all

What about, like, he keeps using it to do bad things to himself (he cucks himself, he crashes his car, he gets into debt, he develops cancer), and the psychiatrist is all "yo, wtf is he doing?"

The psychiatrist, being a psychiatrist, is too fascinated by this man's seemingly endless cycle of self-destruction. He SHOULD stop the experiment, before the MC finally snaps one day and, like, shoots up a school or something, but instead, he just keeps taking notes, because the MC is just way too interesting to kill off.

In order to get a better understanding of what the MC is going through, the psychiatrist puts the helmet on himself and tries to simulate getting caught in a train wreck. He rationalizes that it's one of the most helpless, most dangerous experiences he could witness for himself in the real world, and the absolute feeling of powerlessness would help him to sympathize with the MC a lot more.

He ends up surviving the initial train wreck, but when he is told his entire body will be paralyzed, and that he will have to move around in a scooter powered by a tiny breathing tube, a few days later, he decides to kill himself by paying a nurse to pull the plug on him.

He wakes up, terrified and trembling, convinced by just how REAL the whole experience felt to him, and he concludes that the MC is certainly past redemption if he can continue to subject himself to limitless horrors such as the one he just faced.

In the ending, the psychiatrist is sitting in his office, and the MC just walks into his room and drops the virtual reality interface on his desk and tells him that he "won't be needing this anymore".

Naturally, the psychiatrist is like "Oh shit, he's finally gonna do it. He's finally gonna murder his ex-wife, or jump off a bridge or something, I gotta see this shit for myself."

The psychiatrist follows the man around, but all he sees is...nothing. Absolutely nothing. The man buys some fruits at the grocery store. The man picks up photography as a hobby. After a few weeks of this, the psychiatrist just gives up and decides to forget about the case altogether.

But he can't.

It's just too unusual for him to let go, so he puts on the virtual reality helmet for one last time and decides to flip through all of the experiences the MC went through for himself.

He sees the man getting cheated on, he sees the man getting mugged, robbed, beaten, imprisoned, raped, beaten again; he sees him developing AIDS, cancer, and HIV, he sees the man fighting through an infection in his right lung after a bad car crash collapsed three of his ribs, he sees the man rising to fame and glory, and losing it all in one fell swoop, he sees the man dying, hundreds, and hundreds, and hundreds of times...But he never once saw the man give up on life like he had.

Pt 1

>a plane of busty teen cheerleaders crashes on the mysterious pedoph-isle

For all the pain and torture this man went through in his own, virtual reality world, he never once paid a nurse to pull his plug. He never once stuck a fork in the electric socket to wipe away his life and his crippling debt. He never once jumped off a bridge, or held his breath underwater until he couldn't breathe no more.

The man was a fighter.

Every catastrophe he's ever faced, he's finally learned to face it like a man. And what the psychiatrist finds in the last, final moments of his virtual reality world is the MC's wife, breaking up with the Main Character. For good.

And what the main character does in that one, final scenario is the most mundane, uninteresting thing the psychiatrist has ever seen in his entire life. He goes out to buy fruit. He buys a camera and takes some pictures. He finds a lovely woman at the far end of the bar, and together, at the ripe old age of 30, they get married and live happily ever after.

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Damn, son. What the fuck?

I would read that...I think.

Shut up, nerd. That's romantic as fuck, dweeb.

I like this, user.

I would read this. Actually, I'm kind of sad that I'll probably never read this.

Read Poe or watch the film Vertigo for examples. It's creepy, no doubt, but has a very poetic quality to it.

Don't give Mira Gonzalez any ideas.

It's just a healthy dose of queerantagonism.

I'm giving a detailed account of history.
Basically, I'm using these explanations
as my foundation.

>girl x is edgy
This might be an okay story, but the way you describe things makes you sound like a fucking faggot.

>young woman falls in love with a demon she worships
>the demon compels her to do good deeds in its name
>she becomes progressively more self destructive
>but she brings love and joy to everyone around her
>she sacrifices her left arm to the ocean and lies on the sand bleeding out
>the demon mends her wounds and carrier her into the black night sea
>everyone knows her but can only remember her like a dream

Charmed meets The Last Unicorn

I take that as a wonderful compliment, thank you.

Last one sounds a lot like Taxi Driver.

Jesus im cracking up in class now

I had a sci-fi idea in my head for a long time, I am just afraid it will turn into YA trash.

>Mankind almost extinct

>Ayylmaos that migrated to earth thousands of years ago now run most of the earth

>Boy's father saves a dying ayylmao that is too far away from his civilization and gets mauled by animals

>Boy grows up with recovering Ayylmao in his small human village

>Ayylmao is so different in biological structure, culture, and environment that communication is impossible, for ayylmaos do not communicate with words but through an extremely complex combination of blinking patterns and rapid changes in facial expression and patterns shapes and colors in the eyes

>Father unexpectedly dies

>Ayylamo feels duty to look after boy

>Boy grows to a man, is able to understand ayylimo more, but not fully, for it's too distant from human language to translate more than simple phrases. Instead, boy and village attempt to teach the ayylmao ancient tradition of written language, which doesn't exist in ayylimo culture.

>Ayylmao now old, with more understanding in human culture and language, explains his original quest was finding the ruins of an ancient city, in order to discover the lost origin of his species.

>Ayylmao dies of old age.

>Man being stronger and now emotionally attached to ayylmao vows his life to leave his village and search for ancient city in search of lost knowledge.

>Man finds city after many years and adventures, it happened that it was undiscovered for long because it was hidden underground

>Finds human language in city in to his surprise, city looks absolutely nothing like ayylmao cities in architecture and utilitarian design.

>Discovers Ayylmaos long ago enslaved humanity and kept them as working class slaves, left to work out their lives in underground cities, built underneath sprawling advanced alien cities.

>The original city that the ayylmao was talking about is lost to time, forest now grows over everything.
That is where I have ended up so far, I have to think of a way to wrap up everything and what is my true core meaning to all of it.

Also i plan on actually adding more characters and an actual arc etc. of course. These are just guidelines.