Too much dialogue

>too much dialogue
>too quick-paced
>not enough imagery
>just trying to make this scene happen so I can move onto the next one

What problems do you run into when you write?

>Too epic
>Too good, I am just so impressed and bewildered at my staggering genius I continually have to wipe tears from my eyes, and fret them naught to hit mine leaflet
>having to use a thesaurus... to dumb down my language
>deciding which of my 7 magnum opui, I feel like working on first in the morning, which is only a problem on the rare nights when I do not write about 30 pages in my dream, which I then photographically recite into my alarm clock/tape recorder upon awakening

>not enough chit chat
>plods along for eternity
>vast paintings
>the entire story is one or two scenes

>this would work in another language
>wibble wobbling TIE fighters make me overestimate myself

I hate everything i write upon re-reads

NAMES!

I cannot write sudden actions for the life of me
It always feels so awkward to say, describe a character getting punched in the face. Feels so abrupt and poorly made a sentence.
How do you even add urgency to a sentence that boils down into "a fist flew towards user's face"
Maybe that has more to my perceived limits of written story

Have you tried a good *SCHWACK* *KABLAM* *KABLOW* *OOOF!*

You can try metaphor/simile descriptions.

A fist flew towards anons face like a hypersonic jet piloted by a kamikaze pilot who had duct taped a nuke to the nose

Too many gimmicky narratorial voices which are unsustainable over lengthy pieces and wouldn't fit well together. I think I'm getting there.

Short, strong, vigorous sentences.
"X hit user and he fell to the ground."
"X tried to hit user but he ducked."
"X hit user but he didn't flinch."

Write exactly what you want the reader to picture in his head. Don't slow it down by being descriptive. Don't break the pace by long sentences. Generally speaking, when you want the reader to think "Wow this is fast/sudden", you use less adjectives and more verbs than usual. The verbs should describe something sudden also. Flew, hit, smashed, fell, not reached, connected, slumped. They should be associated with quickness. Make the reader imagine fast and constant movement.