Found this story I wrote as a kid

found this story I wrote as a kid

is it Veeky Forums?

>having to warn a prophet
funny to me

Better than Tolkein.

he smashed his what WHAT DID HE SMASH?
also
>b-b-b-but sir

>no qutoations marks
>allusions to mythology
>use of the term nightfall as a clever foreshadowing of the eventual downfall of our hero

Fuck man, I will never be this Veeky Forums

>french prophet

a cute!

>autism stutters
truly he was ahead of his time

also post more OP

Damn, this is the best modern fantasy I've read in seven years, I love how the characters have recognizable traits, that's very innovative

>main characters are named simply by their profession
>prophet has a name

unironically ths is amazing

unfortunately this is all there is, I had the bad habit of giving up before ever finishing everything. I'll see if there's any others I can find

anything*

>I had the bad habit of giving up before ever finishing everything

and it was just getting good too....

I hope the next scene has the small bard standing in the corner of the bar complaining about his feet hurting.

Better than A Song of Ice and Fire.

At this point, anything is.

>giving up before finishing
truly Veeky Forums indeed

What do you say lads, should we help OP finish his story?

>removed a sword from a sheath
Nice poetic ambiguity

When I go to Chilis they serve me before I pay.

Yeah, but are the people who work at chili's innkeepers? I think not.

this is cute.
>gilgamet
>can't write properly
>already making allusions to ancient mesopotamian mythology

it's very Veeky Forums. I'm actually jelly.

Partly gives me hope to write something myself, partly crushes the same hope.
10/10 most lit thing i've ever read.

kek

unironically really good for the writing of a young child

>as they waited to be served in the in, a large warrior stormed in

You were a fucking wordsmith

He was 15 when he wrote this. I am his father. He's 25 now and his handwriting hasn't changed. He still comes in from time to time and asks me to read him "Girrguhmeth".

Yes

>my sides

Yeah well I had a space ship the size of a billion billion billion (a billion billions later) universes and it destroyed loads more universes every billionth of a second and it was one half of the shock troop empire.

But seriously that's pretty normal for a kid who's good at doing creative shit.

That is to say it's not a thing you should cringe over or whatever.

>gilgamet
>Strongest warrior in all of history
>Barks orders at people
>Doesn't like paying for stuff
>Attacks innkeepers for testing him
How can I write a character this compelling?

>tfw you and your bro would write Naruto fanfiction and draw DBZ comics with alternative super-powered pseudo homosexual men with tiger tails called Taiyans and make top trumps out of your friends

Nostalgic.

A regular George RR Martin.

just like a light novel