Didn't really give a whole lot of attention to it. I don't think you're a very good writer. You should focus more on drawing because you're much better at it. Here are some comments, mostly technical. All of them are on the jpg poems because I enjoyed the pictures.
>who said what to who
No, I'm pretty sure "who said what to whom." That line is the reason why English needs declension, unless you're speaking of a person named "who." Then it should be "Who."
>a thorn halo, given to you
Pointless caesura that puts a senseless pause between the subject and verb.
>sacrifice sequences sacremental
Baby's first thesaurus word salad. You're not the Pearl poet. You're not writing real alliterative verse. Stop trying to.
>Runneth
Remember when I said you aren't the Pearl Poet? You aren't Shakespeare, either.
Try to be consistent with your usage of punctuation throughout an entire poem, or at least deliberate. Modern and non-pretentious translations of the bible translate that line "my cup overflows" anyway, so it's senseless to be archaic sounding for a false rhyme.
Why do you arbitrarily capitalize words at the beginning of lines? I get that you have some kind of issue with end-stopped lines, but it looks incredibly lazy.
>When it's difficult going to bed
I'm pretty sure that this says something different from what you meant.
Once again, I think that you need to learn how caesuras work. 4th and final lines.
>I am compelled to write these poems
>as though they are not my own
yeah, I wouldn't want to credit these to myself either.
Just cringe and stupid. Probably your best one so far.
Anyway, I don't want to write about more of your poems. In general, my comments are for you to study poetry a little more. Learn more about prosody. Write poems in strict forms as exercises (this is how you get good at writing poems). Maybe try being more creative and less boring and moody.