Metamorphosis: Matt, a 15 year old high school freshman, comes home one night and catches his mother being attacked by an assailant. Completely froze up in fear, he watches his mother get stabbed to death by he assailant. His sister arrives and kills the assailant. At the hospital, the doctor tells him that their mother is dead but he also informs matt that they have technology that can bring his mother back to life, however it isn't covered by insurance. Out of desperation, Matt decides to enter "The games" which is an annual battle royale where competitors must fight to death in order to win the grand prize of a large sum of money and fame.
Kill room: Derrick spends most of his time using a chat room called ChatT where users are able to create accounts and talk with another on the chat room. Over the course of being on the chatroom he has made a lot of friends and enemies. One morning while he's walking to school, he gets abducted by a criminal who knocks him out with chloroform on a rag. He wakes up and finds himself stuck in a building with 12 ChatT users. The kidnapper instructs them that they must kill off someone every hour or they will all be killed.
The dupe and the devil: Rochelle, an esteemed royal knight is given the task of escorting a prisoner to the capital to face an execution.
Black company: Cynthia,a hot headed demon gets beaten to the pulp by the leader of black company: a mercenary group that kills demons in exchange for money. Instead of killing her, the leader takes an interest in cynthia and tells her he will spare her life as long as she swears allegiance to him.
1 and 2 are kys tier 3 is not a plot but at least has the potential to become one 4 is high school tier again although it vaguely appeals to my guilty pleasures
All in all, none of these are plots; they are just scenarios from where your plot would start. 2 is pretty much Cube the movie by the way.
Michael Anderson
Getting a headstart on NaNoWriMo this year huh?
Nolan Gray
Thank you! What the hell is that? No i plan on making these into a comic
Nolan Scott
Should've said it's for a comic, 3 works better as a novel I imagine. I'll read a comic of 4 if you're good at drawing a hot semen demon.
Cooper Flores
Even as comics these ideas are bottom of the barrel trash my dude. What comics do you actually like?
Cooper Gomez
Thanks A lot: berserk, AOT, death note, bleach, naruto, etcetc
can you explain why it's trash?
Jacob Evans
They're all pretty derivative.
Robert Flores
aren't all stories derivative?
Juan Turner
These aren't plots. You're just telling us what happens in chapter one of the story, not what happens throughout the whole thing. How is anyone supposed to come to any conclusion if the most important information is missing
Ayden Miller
>Kill room
Title sold me on this one
Dominic Perez
Can you guys give me an example of a plot you find interesting that's similar to the ones I came up with? Also explain why you find it interesting thanks
Eli Allen
I remember when trolling was an art and people respected the craft
Sebastian Ward
The third, if well written !
Lucas Cruz
All but the third are cringe tier.
In the third one it would be interesting to see the relationship develop between the knight and the prisoner, since they're so different, and from completely different social spheres.
They could even build up some sort of friendship, a macabre juxtaposition of the knight marching the prisoner to his death.
Cameron Ross
Stop watching so much fucking anime and maybe you'll come up with something good.
Gabriel Peterson
the sad thing is that he's taking his creative process directly from manga, even in a meta sense - in Bakuman., mangaka Ohba and Obata relate a fictionalized version of their experiences starting out as manga artists, and the way you pitch a young adult manga is literally "make some bullshit up for the first chapter that sounds neat and wing it from there"
Nathan Hughes
is that you ongo gablogian?
Jaxon Thomas
All of them are riddled with clichés. Try again, senpai.
Michael Nguyen
No. Some stories make enough variations culled from authorial experience that they are raised above schlock. OP's plots are the equivalent of amateur American high school anime drawings.
