Thoughts on this poem I wrote?

Thoughts on this poem I wrote?

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Dupi Kaur?

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Kinda cute.

What is this?

IDK who that is. Also, nice digits.

a poem.

It's neither terrible or great.

It's quite bad. Best of luck

Dubs..easy on the poetry

What's with the recent trend of writing prose and then line breaking it and calling it poetry?

You both clearly dont get it

Burn this thread to the ground

>doesn't recognize the dub dubs

Poetry about thots has never been particularly good unfortunately. While cheesy, it's not the worst poem I've ever seen. Keep writing and improving OP.

Dub dubs, bugs, fugs.

Reads like something I wrote in high school. keep trying though.

checked

One of those is not true, and we all know which I'm talking about.

Fantastic get

dubs... easy on the dubs

dubs thread?

Yep

it is shit

Are you literally fifteen?

>This is what I think of your poem, user...
you were music
but I had my ears cut off

Checked.

>So let's begin
>again

this is more poetic than the poem itself

haha nice try, rupi