You seem to be spiraling down into madness... And quite quickly
Landon Harris
These are just gradually getting worse... Are you okay user?
Ayden Carter
Nice Mikan you got there champ.
Jaxson Wright
didn't think I'd have to check em so early
Kayden Harris
Would Mikan like to cuddle?
Grayson Harris
mikan is not for bullying
mikan would love to cuddle, it makes her feel loved
Wyatt Phillips
Souda!!
Justin Scott
Then I want to cuddle with Mikan! How good is she at cuddling?
Cooper Brown
MONACA!
Wyatt Peterson
between you and me, it's like cuddling an angel.
Logan Garcia
She can't stand up.
Connor Brown
You don't need to stand to be best.
Brody Morales
not with that attitude
Noah Parker
>All this Mikan love Disgusting. Let the vomit bag alone or else you'll catch the ugly disease True see Johnny Joestar
Ryder Price
Better than catchin' the flat chest disease...
>Ibuki grabbin' Mahiru's boob Oh...
Elijah Hall
...
Easton Miller
>Johnny >Best Pick 1 He's still my 2nd fav though fampai
James Powell
Damn you already countered my argument. how i'm supposed to continue now?
Previous thread had worse.
Dylan Richardson
Is she OK with me resting my head on her chest? Does Hiyoko like to cuddle?
Carson Morales
she'd prefer it that way
Nicholas Richardson
Don't worry, Monaca believe in you~!
Johnny was pretty great, but I haven't seen a Joestar I hated.
Jaxon Hill
>Does Hiyoko like to cuddle? She would probably pretend as if she hated it and every so often would "try" to free herself, but deep inside she would absolutely love it.
Ayden Campbell
And the sad part is that seeing Junko in that stupid cheetah jacket...with her boobs...and her ass....made me totally think with my dick. After I beat the first DR game, I almost waifu'd Junko because I thought she was cute and I enjoyed the thrill of her pure insanity but then playing SDR2 and falling in love with Komaeda, those feelings were obviously a lot stronger. But then, learning about his history with her, suddenly I hated Junko and felt intensely jealous...Another Episode didn't help that. And it's not so much pure jealousy, there's a lot of pity mixed in there, too, because Komaeda doesn't mean anything to her and he seems to think he holds some special place within her rankings. TL;DR Despair as deep as my love for Komaeda.
M-My service...? No need for that! Mikan and Chiaki are two best girls in the second game imo
Aiden Phillips
>monaca posting disgusting, frankly
strongly agree
Brody Butler
That's a shame.
Jayden Cooper
...
Luke Scott
Is she OK with me falling asleep on her while cuddling? Would she try to tease you about it?
Tyler Hughes
I want to kiri her giri
Blake Bell
she'll hold you close and probably fall asleep with you, and if she wakes up first she'll happily wait until you wake up too
Juan Parker
So does anyone have the Dead or Lie single release?
But it's mine so I don't give a fuck what you think of it. At least I'm not ramming it down peoples throats(not to imply you are). I... I can't even...
Logan Martinez
It is! Not like I have done that much for them, but... I love 'em too!
>Genocide Oh boi, you better do it!
We should do some Spartan-style selection and get rid of the useless ones
Chase Peterson
Would Kyoko like to cuddle? I know she likes to hide her emotions, but even then she seems emotionally inept
Xavier Scott
you stand up to the bullies, that's good enough for us
David Cook
...Terrible. All these secondaries. If they don't want to take the time to play the games and enjoy the story before jumping straight into the anime, they shouldn't bother at all.
Tokoposter, here is your critique for the thing! It got kinda long, oops. pastebin.com/GtSpTM6Z
Mason Phillips
Would Mikan be OK with me kissing/hugging her during class?
Hunter Johnson
>White knight are a good addition to humanity More like a cancer
Ryan Thomas
Out of curiosity have you actually played the games with JPN voices? The English VA doesn't even upupupu, which is practically Monokuma's catchphrase.
Adam Taylor
This might affect how that being judges you.
Jose Thomas
Oh man I dunno what to say... LOVE Y'ALL!
Ian Rivera
How is the fanbase on the anime? Love it or hate it? Frankly I really liked it, but I feel like it's for people who actually PLAYED THE GAME.
I haven't seen the latest anime.
Nathan Moore
That I have. And as I said, that Japanese voice is good, but I prefer the English one. Maybe I'm biased because I played the dub first, but that is just my opinion.
Austin Morgan
I hope that being likes it. Who doesn't like some good ol' Genocider action?
William Bennett
You mean the DR1 anime? I stopped after 3 episodes. The game isn't suitable for anime.
I agree. A big shame the Japanese VA has dementia, though. I really miss Monokuma in the anime. Last appearance was in episode 4.
Jose Sanders
It could do with being like 25 episodes. It does feel rushed but it's more like Danganronpa with the social stuff cut.
Easton Nelson
First anime is rough as hell. The latest anime are going STRONG.
Nathan Johnson
>taking the ramblings of weeaboos on a forum dedicated to mongolian basket weaving seriously apex kek
Jayden Long
>Now, this critcism is meant entirely with good intentions, and because I'm someone that's bad at being mean, anyway, I feel like I'm being too harsh here so please tell me if I am and I apologize in advance.
Jesus Christ, it sounds like you are ready to cry here. Dood I asked for criticism, I am used to getting slapped in the face all the time. Don't worry about hurting my fee fee's, I know how the growing process works.
The 0 formatting options paste-bin has pisses me off, I actually have the italics in my Microsoft doc. Here is the other feedback I got from filthmonger.
>Try to cut back on using commas; semi colons are great for lists and extra details, like so. >Don't use pronouns for every action; instead of "She threw the scissors at him", use "he felt the sharp pain of scissors entering flesh" >Proof-read like crazy >But yeah. Last point I'll give you is to only descrbie important objects and people. Anything else should be sued to build atmosphere
I actually want to include the sprite portraits into my thing so people can get a better visual. If I had the skills I would like to make it a picture book, words on the left pictures on the right.
Benjamin Ross
Remember when this was a thing?
Jeremiah Garcia
Not so much ready to cry, but! I understand that feelings /can/ be delicate when it comes to any sort of creative endeavor. In my early days I got a lot of flaming from people and it made me too shy to post my stuff for a good three or four years and so I wouldn't ever want to do that to another person.
Filth-kun's advice is good, too! Proof-reading is always important, but remember to let it simmer for at least half a day or until you've had sleep as your mind can pick out more to fix when it's had time away from it.
Including sprite portraits is actually possible on AO3 since they have image and HTML support! It allegedly doesn't take too long to get your invite now after you sign up, but I've got a couple extra laying around if you ever want to toss me a throwaway email. AO3 is far superior to FFN and I recommend it if you plan on publishing anything.
Jeremiah Martin
I dont think I was here for that. But kek
Henry Price
Remember when people talked about Chisa being a potential love interest for Makoto?
Juan James
I already made an account ahead of time. EgohaAhoge
Kayden Fisher
How come there are no government officials as characters at least in the future arc? Its just members of the past members of HPA that are now FF and their henchmen. You'd expect military action at least
Ayden Thomas
Everyone was hyped about the charts.
Nicholas Hernandez
>Intro to future arc Holy shit why is this track so good?
Christian Ross
I personally think Togami will use Komaru's eggs, his sperm and implant them into Toko so he can stay as far away from her womb as physically possible. And then get the maids to raise the kid.
I think about weird things sometimes.
Ethan Rogers
Why does everyone seem to think Izuru would have any interest in a) Mikan and b) creating an heir for Junko when it's made clear that he hated her for using him? I don't get it Can someone explain Or is it just projecting
Xavier Richardson
>komaru will never sit on my face
Ian Baker
I don't know why anyone thinks Izuru would do anything other than just create chaos because he's >bored
Anthony Cox
...
Juan Cook
Thats kinda mean, i feel like Togami will change a bit once he finds out about sex. I was not sure either, some people just wanted to see Izuru fathering Junko's child, Ultimate despair and Hope
Brayden Richardson
Let's try something a little different this time. This is Dog Eat Dog: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dog_Eat_Dog_(game_show) Our players are Naegi and Nagito for their SHSL Luck, Celestia for her gambling prowess, Akane for her athleticism, Chiaki because it's kind of like a real life video game? And Junko because she needs to be there.
Charles Robinson
Like I said, weird. You're saying he just needs to get laid?
Jacob Jenkins
Oh, wait, maybe it's just one of those theories made popular by a hentai doujin
I personally can't see Izuru romantically or sexually interested in anyone, and even if he were, he wouldn't ever do anything for Junko's benefit.
James Sanchez
Naegi is up first.
Jordan Rodriguez
This sounds interesting.
Adam Johnson
Naegi dies first
Gavin Cooper
>That Kaiba kids needs to get laid
Its a joke from Yugioh abridged.
Leo Perez
Didn't Izuru fugg Junko's corpse?
Akane got this
Adrian Campbell
What an astute prediction
Juan Sullivan
Super High School Level Bottle Opener
Wyatt Sanchez
Someone did, but... It was never explicitly stated that it was him and due to his attitude towards her in Another Episode and Chapter 0 we have no reason to believe that was him
Leo Gonzalez
Togami pretty much is Kaiba isn't he?
Hudson Baker
If Izuru put his hair in twintails would he look like that Nico girl from Love Live or what