/vn/ - Kimochi ii Edition

Visual Novel General #1489

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This general is for the discussion of English-translated Japanese visual novels.
All posting of untranslated visual novels belongs on E-celeb shitposting is not allowed.
Kindly use spoiler tags appropriately when discussing plot spoilers to facilitate smooth discussion.

>that anime tier shading
>that bloom to hide the lack of detail

^_^

Neither of those are true though. Here's something that looks like anime screencap with actual bloom
*blocks your path*

Will he ever learn how faces work?

Is Eden of Grisaia as healing as the Labyrinth after stories? I've got the warm fuzzies after finishing Amane's.

Right after he learns the size of people's foreheads.

Is this: the worst post in /vn/ history?

How is this vn?

>d-d-dies irae art is good now that its translated i swear

It's fun

Kei best girl

Kei is still my favorite of the four heroines.

You mean worst girl. Her entire romance with Ren is pure autism and projection that amounts to literally nothing. Best girl is Beatrice.

My loli

>the beginning of kei route

wow, its only up from here right?

Best taste anons

What chapter does this happen again? I can't remember this line even though I just finished her route.

The romance was sudden and forced, but Kei is still really cute and bullyable.

Also her chuuni chant is one of the best.

why is kasumi so popular what the fuck

i didn't want to believe that more people liked the violent, loud and obnoxious archetype on top of being combined with fucking osananajimi of all things. what a disgusting combination

Her romance was forced quick but she is a really great girl.

it's in the common route, near or at the part where ren is first learning how to materialise his ahnerwhatever, i think. i'm reading the rea route and it was there too

don't forget her gross irrelevance

I like childhood friends myself, but Kasumi just felt like an inferior Sumika done wrong. It doesn't help that her route is the weakest one and she's irrelevant.

Kasumi a gud girl she dindu nuffin

Muramasa is getting announced soon! ;_;

Ren x Rusalka > Lotus x Rusalka

Ah, the Ahnenerbe infodump, huh? Thanks.

Kasumi was good outside her route but like said she is a discount version of Sumika
she also can't alter dimensions

I love Sumika!

she did wrong by being worst girl and a shit

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>originally only Kasumi and Marie had routes.

Like I care. She's very cute and bullyable.
Kei is best girl.

That should have been the definitive edition

is there anything relevant to the story exclusive to the kasumi route or can i safely skip it?

Kei:
The goddess Izanami, her light forever extinguished
Sleeps her final rest beneath Mt. Hiba amidst Izumo and Hoki, neighbor-lands standing vigil
On its burial grounds Lord Izanagi stood,
His ten-grasp steel drawn,
As Kagu-tsuchi’s head fell to dust beneath the kinslayer’s blade

Anyone she's faces:
*teleports behind u*
>heh nothing personnel, child

>when this sick bad ending just keeps dragging on
End it already. There's no point in dragging things on any further if she's dead.

There's actually a lot of relevant information in Kasumi's route, so you shouldn't skip it.

I want that tiny little midget to bully me on the staircase.

Right? I felt so bad reading Kira Kira.

>not in german for the ultimate chuuni

Die dahingeschiedene Izanami wurde auf dem Berg Hiba
an der Grenze zu den Landern Izumo und Hahaki zu Grabe getragen.
Bei dieser Begebenheit zog Izanagi sein Schwert,
das er mit sich fuhrte und die Lange von zehn nebeneinander gelegten
Fausten besas, und enthauptete ihr Kind, Kagutsuchi.

Beri'ah

Man sollte nach den Gesetzen der Gotter leben.

Never skip anything.

oh no don't remind me

it only got worse as it went on

>Fausten besas
>Fausten
>Faust
LOOK! user'S POST IS KAMIGE!

It's not even a slow burn, everyone I cared about is dying rapidly in quick succession.

I LIKE LOLIS!

Woah
A layer not even I knew existed

I loved it because character development.
But I hated it.

Are you some sort of faggot, son?

Ooyari is such a shitty artist.

/vn/'s shitposting about having to read Faust really came in handy when Ren's chant starts quoting from Faust's Prologue in Heaven.

>not posting best . loli

LOOK GUISE I KNOW WHERE THIS IS FROM!!!!!!!11111111111 *clicks 1 time and then that work is not referenced again
w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-worth it

I read Faust a few years ago, but I decided to read Faust again a few months ago.
The prologue was really enjoyable because of it tbqh famalam.
Haven't gotten that far into Dies irae yet though, so I haven't seen that many allusions yet.

uh you ok user?
you;re scaring me

Is she /ourgirl/?

...

There is a superior disgust reaction face for Fata.

>everyone dies
>Normal End
Haha what the fuck...

I'm not sure I'm enjoying this melancholy.

>end of kei's route
>Mercurius and Reinhart bant
>Both of them opposite plan on what to do with Ren
>Music change

FUCK that was hype as shit. Please tell me the other 2 routes will be this hype and crazy.
Everything is beyond my expectation so far

Kasumi's route?

Root double

Apparently so. Thats what everyone says.
I just finished as well and can't wait either.
Kei's route was great.

>not sure what to play now
>want to put off Dies Irae until the uncut version is released

Manager I fixed the team for you.

Aimee did literally nothing wrong.

>sacking /ourguys/

>outsiders wont understand the memes of the 300 or so people who regularly post here

feels fucking good, i love all of you guys

>muh dies irae
no, fuck you

>300
~150

Cartagra or Kara no Shoujo?

Both but Kara no Shoujo is better.

Reinhard is the only man who can lead /vn/ to victory.

>Runa doesn't even know where her vagina is

Is there any girl more pure?

I'm just curious if I need to play Cartagra first for any references they might slip in since they're the same Dev and VNDB says they "share characters"

That's not pure. Its retardation.

And retardation is not cute. Grown girls acting like 5 year olds is not cute or attractive.

...

Kara no Shoujo does reference cartagra and the protagonist and hero of cartagra are side characters.

But you don't need to have read it to read Kara no Shoujo.

Its like Sengoku Rance - Rance VI to be honest.

I vote for Rommel

He definitely needs to read Cartagra before KnS2 though.

KnS2 is definitely better having read Cartagra.

did a pure girl leave you cause you were no good to cause you to be so upset user?

Not after Yuuma's done with her

>being ESL

Trust me you're going to love the other routes, I felt the same way at the end of Kei and this game just keeps on hyping me even more, I can see why people love it so much.

im ESL but i have my pure waifu and you dont jajajaja

I'm surprised Ren wasn't more mindfucked after realizing that he was Mercurius's pawn. If I were him I'd probably be freaking out. I guess he had a hunch though.

>being a spic, or even worse, BR

Who are you quoting?

Wow, what a party pooper, Ren.

I've read this thread before.

DUDE
FOREKNOWLEDGE

how much does a voice actor get paid for a VN

is it by line or is there a predetermined amount

...

Foreknowledge is my foreplay.

Is there some kind of rule that states that at least half of the female dies characters must have an ahoge?

Hello faggots

Just finished Kei's route. Holy hell that was a wild fucking ride. Let get this straight Kai revived in the last moment because Kasumi become Babylon right? And with the new line up of LDO the cycle will repeat again

Ain't this the right way to go about with quotation lines?

"This is a quotation," he said, while shitposting on reddit.

or is it as so?

"This is a quotation," he said while shitposting on reddit.

Cause I'm pretty sure the former is the right way to do it, although I've been having a conflict of opinion in my mind with the way I've been editing things for awhile now with a script that makes me wonder if I'm in the wrong or not.

For example, these are two lines:

This is the memorable place where I fucked both of them for the first time, after all. This’ll serve as the perfect place for them to begin their new life with me.

I mumbled to myself while sitting on top of Mifuyu’s desk.

Now, to me, it would look sort of like so together:

"This is the memorable place where I fucked both of them for the first time, after all. This’ll serve as the perfect place for them to begin their new life with me," I mumbled to myself while sitting on top of Cow’s desk.

Which looks incorrect, it should look like so:

"This is the memorable place where I fucked both of them for the first time, after all. This’ll serve as the perfect place for them to begin their new life with me," I mumbled to myself, while sitting on top of Cow’s desk.

So, when the second line reads as:

I mumbled to myself while sitting on top of Cow’s desk.

Shouldn't that be corrected as:

I mumbled to myself, while sitting on top of Cow’s desk.

Right?

I'd go with "I mumbled to myself while sitting on top of Cow’s desk," sans comma. The general rule is that you put a comma before while if it's meant to contrast, and you don't put a comma before while if it's meant to be "at the same time." So you wouldn't put a comma there in this case.

In your first, hypothetical example, the comma after said is used to pause and clarify after a nonessential clause, simply because having no comma after said reads strangely. It's a different case.

*pause and clarify before a nonessential clause

>When you post in the middle of dead hours on a weekday in /vn/ in your attempt to ask for critique on your grammar.