Resume Critique General

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>thinking about changing university activities to university positions
>no one verifies extracurriculars right?

bretty good, I always kek when I see microsoft on resumes

Looks fine, pretty standard engineer's resume with plenty of projects and shit. I would imagine it will land you a few offers

Microsoft Project and Sharepoint should make me stand out a bit since those are actually non-student tools

I feel like it's nothing amazing and may need some extra work or a new format to make it stand out.

Maybe for my internship I can be more descriptive since that's the best thing on it.

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>objective
Get rid of that shit, we know you're looking for a job

>Microsoft
Get rid of the boring ones, and order that list by how impressive and relevant they are

And fucking left or right justify those dates, don't just leave them hanging in the middle holy shit

>Maybe for my internship I can be more descriptive since that's the best thing on it.
I would agree there, you touch on some stuff that sounds potentially very interesting, maybe expand those bullet points and cut back on the Projects a bit. When you talk about working with a team, companies love that kind of shit, try to make it clear that you are good at communicating with both technical and non-technical colleagues.

why does nobody want to hire me :(

im OP. desu i think your template is kinda meh. it is minimalist but still a little colorful sure but not that good

I would try to separate your research from your professional experience (i assume those are internships at the top 2)

And those bottom 3 sound like clubs/university organizations?

might be a good idea to remove the math tutor or maybe even the bottom 3 and just expand on your internships/research

Thanks for the feedback, just realized that its a little bit outdated. Have the tutor position already removed. Bottom 2 are university clubs (makes more sense without the title blurred out).

My formatting is mostly based around being able to squeeze everything into one page, the solution would be to have multiple pages, but I hear thats a big no-no. Combining everything into experience gives me more space.

I would actually like to hear more about your opinion of the formatting. my (biased) opinion tells me that its fine. Anything in particular that makes a bad impression on you?