I don't think sad can accurately describe this, it feels more... Tired, with a bitter desperation hounding it? I can feel the rough winds of inevitability lapping at my heels just reading this deeply. Interesting.
Admittedly I'm not as big a fan of haiku as the other monikanon, but I still like this! Feels familiar.
Another lovely one! A tragic keepsake from the ravages of time, eh? Pretty intriguing it was, reading this.
Well, this one is bittersweet, and took to a direction I wasn't expecting, and then did it once more with gusto! It's like a tragic love story, searching for a place of comfort in a harsh world, and feeling you don't deserve it?
Beautiful. And you will find that jewel.
This is, as other anons pointed out, structured and written amazingly! I know I have nothing new to add, but I feel like saying it anyway!
Ooh, traditional format? You spoil us, Germanon? Or is it Africanon?
I like this, somber, but also hopeful and optimistic.
And don't worry about your handwriting, compared to yours I might as well be writing in "Parkinsons Hieroglyphics", ahaha...
Oh jeez, I just looked at the bottom of the thread. Welp, no reason to be sad at two people living up to their promises!
Thanks for the concern, user! To be quite honest, the biggest load of real life stuff I'm dealing with is an absence of stuff to deal with, especially compared to some other people who need a hand on their shoulders!
Heh, I was just a bit peckish and that woke me up, honest! Although it is 4:447 now, so I wonder...
It's alright user! I dealt with one of my few irl friends rambling about linux and tshells before I fell asleep earlier, and at least you're speaking a language I understand, even though a cs degree should let me, ahaha.