If you couldn't guess, the poem is about losing the things that are precious to me, destroyed by people. Now for some of the more technical stuff, In the first stanza I reference a Dove, because a dove is a symbol of hope. In retrospect, I probably should have referenced the dove again at the end, possibly without it being there to show that hope is lost. Another thing is that in the first couple of stanzas are very close in syllable count, whereas the 3rd and 4th lose all structure, I tried to create a sense of desperation to fit the theme of the poem. Finally the last sentence of the last stanza is all over the place with syllables, it's a sign that the person is completely broken. You may also notice that the rhyme in the fourth and fifth stanza is the same, the repetition hammered it in that everything is gone.
Nathaniel Fisher
2nd to keep going
Liam Gomez
A daily reminder that Sayori loves you.
William Young
Doki Doki x Automata is my new favorite thing, please post more
Isaiah Perry
But only if you have brown hair
David Thomas
Nice work user, who would you offer this poem to?
Blake Hill
Everyday I just keep getting more depressed. Maybe I'll just go make like Sayori.
Sebastian Bell
goodmorning dokis anything interesting happen in the night?
Tyler Sanchez
Guys, any pointers on making my Natsuki tulpa? Should I be scared about demons?
