If you couldn't guess, the poem is about losing the things that are precious to me, destroyed by people. Now for some of the more technical stuff, In the first stanza I reference a Dove, because a dove is a symbol of hope. In retrospect, I probably should have referenced the dove again at the end, possibly without it being there to show that hope is lost. Another thing is that in the first couple of stanzas are very close in syllable count, whereas the 3rd and 4th lose all structure, I tried to create a sense of desperation to fit the theme of the poem. Finally the last sentence of the last stanza is all over the place with syllables, it's a sign that the person is completely broken. You may also notice that the rhyme in the fourth and fifth stanza is the same, the repetition hammered it in that everything is gone.
Nathaniel Fisher
2nd to keep going
Liam Gomez
A daily reminder that Sayori loves you.
William Young
Doki Doki x Automata is my new favorite thing, please post more
Isaiah Perry
But only if you have brown hair
David Thomas
Nice work user, who would you offer this poem to?
Blake Hill
Everyday I just keep getting more depressed. Maybe I'll just go make like Sayori.
Sebastian Bell
goodmorning dokis anything interesting happen in the night?
Tyler Sanchez
Guys, any pointers on making my Natsuki tulpa? Should I be scared about demons?
Isaiah Lopez
A lot of gayness.
Mason Wood
AI being made of the Dokis files! Tens of Thousands of years later, the Doki AI being uploaded to androids! The Doki android squad fighting machines!
Kevin Butler
End it. Let them rest.
Sebastian Evans
why would you want a girl who stabs herself in happiness?
Bentley Carter
I love your voice!
David Adams
Yuri is the superior waifu and will always be.
Jace Martin
nice because I love her all dokis are beautiful, but Yuri is the most beautiful to me
Aiden Morales
WARNING
Do not let tulpa trolls fool you. Creating a "tulpa" means you'll starve yourself and you'll keep yourself sleepless for days and it's not guaranteed you'll create that one character you want. You may create many and it most certainly go out of control. This will provoke long term damages to your identity and you'll most probably require professional help because you shattered your personal identity into pieces. For more info, search for dissociative identity disorder.
Do not shatter your identity believing in Tulpa.
Colton Bennett
check the op there's a message for you user.
Ryan Campbell
Dont do it user! If you wanna tell us, go straight ahead. Were here for you!
Isaiah Smith
Why are we still here? Just to suffer?
Hunter Taylor
Hello and welcome back to the poetry club, everyone! Today's word of the thread is "dream"! This is one I've been thinking about a lot lately since I've begun to dream again, so hopefully yo can all connect with it!
As always, please feel free to use this as your poetry prompt or inspiration if you'd like to try writing a poem! If you want, feel free to comment on other's poems as well!
Alternatives may be 'disaster', 'shatter', and 'hope'! I hope you all do your best and I can't wait to read all of your poems! Monika!
Nicholas Adams
>Katawa Shoujo General #3374
do you think this people learned?
Jeremiah Robinson
Thank you! I'm not quite sure which of the dokis would like it most, I didn't really have any of them in mind when writing it, though Yuri might like it.
Thank you! I normally have a pretty monotonous voice, but when performing I try to do my best!
Gabriel Brown
To wait for Doki Doki 2
Owen Brooks
I love you Monikanon! You make this thread worth coming to!
I'm gonna make them give back our past.
Ian Diaz
I dont find it monotonous, its pretty soothing.
David Turner
I agree completely, all the dokis are great, yuri just feels better for me.
Zachary Ramirez
sayori wasn't mentally ill
James Russell
Always. I actually committed to Natsuri on my first go through Act I, but quickly steered to Yuri during Act II and redid the game and enjoyed Yuri a LOT.
Gotta have that hidden depth and dem titties.
Sebastian Barnes
Not that you had much of a choice in Act 2
Alexander Cruz
There's only one thing good from these that I can't find on /ksg/. Poems.
Josiah Perez
Certainly she would, anyone close to you might wanna offer too?
Ryan Perry
I want to read a first-person pov fic from Yuri's perspective about her cutting herself and getting off to the pain.
Robert Johnson
>Natsuri You mean Natsuki, Sayori, or both?
Austin Scott
That is true, also silly typo with Natsuki bleh.
Owen Peterson
We all still up for that suicide pact at thread #100 then?
Ayden Taylor
Based on pure physical appearance, yeah I'd be inclined to agree that Yuri is the most beautiful. I also tend to have a weakness for busty purple-haired anime girls.
I don't even really think most here who talk about actually making tulpas are really doing it. Seems like way too much trouble to me too personally, and going crazy sure isn't worth it.
Well, it is embarrassing, but the dokis did it anyway didn't they? who knows, good things might come out of it.
Isaiah Davis
I was never into 'yanderes' before, and I still really don't care for them, but Yuri is something special and I want to protect her Natsuri sounds like an interesting girl Physically I'd be more attracted to Monika to be honest
Kevin Allen
This thread is all I had wished for But I cannot wake up, Im liking it here The dream keeps on going But its time for it its end I dont want no more Im shouting aloud Please save me my anons From this ending abyss
I hope you had a great day today so far, monikanon!
same, yuri just has the complete package, and she has a face for every need i have.
James Martin
Yeah, the dokis did it... and look what happened to them. But in all seriousness, I might share it with someone I trust as some point when I'm a little more confident.
Tyler Fisher
this game was made by a white guy right
Jacob Morgan
>mfw god disproves the existence of god
Grayson Davis
well there's no monika here to tamper with our files heh.
Cameron Smith
Does she have a complete package down there as well?
Caleb Smith
No, by a manlet also known as Danlet
Kevin Rodriguez
yes a CIS male
Jeremiah Sanchez
Are manlets white?
Zachary Russell
...
Carter Myers
Some of you guys are alright, don't come to literature club tomorrow.
Levi Rogers
>mfw the clock ticks 40 times for every time it ticks twice what the fuck was in those cupcakes?
Leo Bell
She can't keep getting away with it!
Josiah Hughes
what an edgy manlet
Logan Wood
>I was never into 'yanderes' before, and I still really don't care for them, but Yuri is something special and I want to protect her I can understand that. I don't really go for yanderes either and could count the number of I'd like on one hand, but I'd count both Yuri and Monika among them.
I'm writing some soppy bullshit regarding the MC and a New Game+ of sorts, I hope this can interest you guys.
Dominic Mitchell
>You'll never be in class the moment Natsuki and Yuri step in the clubroom with the intention to make Columbine look like a joke why live?
Aaron Miller
Feed me, anons!
Andrew Mitchell
I kind wish he had made Sayori the "crazy" one. That seems like a more unexpected twist to it, rather than her killing herself, which is instead playing on people's natural inclination towards her.
Austin Lopez
But you can put knives on the ends of guns!
Isaiah Williams
Why would Natsuki want to kill people?
Wyatt Rogers
We need the rest of the Dokis and Rhodies!
Kevin Smith
Sayori isn't real. Monika is.
Jason Evans
he kinda did though, but for little time.
Aaron Hall
>You close your eyes, ready to bite the bullet. >You hear Yuri open her bag. >She hands you a Glock and a few magazines. >Ready to teach these fuckers what real poetry's about, user?
Gavin White
Showing everyone what Daddy taught her
Cameron Moore
Should've handed her a mirror.
Ayden Murphy
To eat them.
Ethan Bailey
If Natsuki isn't given any money to buy food and food isn't kept in the house, where does she get baking materials?
Owen Lewis
Daily reminder to give your loved Doki lots of love, food and attention.
Ryder Walker
None of them are real, that's the whole point. They're just aware upon becoming the class president. Quit thinking your waifu is a special snowflake.
Jose Murphy
She asks Yuri for money occasionally
Gavin Powell
Yuris need to maintain physical contact with at least twenty knives at all times. Please take note of this picture for reference.
Evan Gonzalez
and rope
Nathaniel Phillips
She pays for it by robbing banks.
Nathan Morgan
Starving is an exaggeration don't you think?
Angel Torres
well, he's the edgy manlet who got us all here
Lincoln Collins
I thought that was a nice touch myself. When someone is upset it isn't uncommon for them to initially lash out before calming down and realizing how they really feel, which is exactly what happened with Monika.
Luke Perry
Isn’t Monika more of a yandere than Yuri? Monika messes with and murders all possible competition to be with you, Yuri just happens to be a bit emo turned up to 11 by Monika to become a masochistic bundle of crazy
Sebastian Barnes
club budget
Oliver Moore
This to be honest family. All dokis are unique in their own right.
