/ddlc/ - Doki Doki Literature Club! #147

I want Mon-ika to tell me that while she bounces in my lap

A daily reminder that Sayori loves you.

I love her too, with all my heart.

You get to the part where you read about what Natsuki and Yuri have to say about hobbies.

New writefag here leaving my first Yuri fic for (You)

pastebin.com/dLkBnLUv

Criticism and advice appreciated

I like that you included the recommended listening, it adds to the mood.
The only thing that i find quite jarring was just after Yuri wakes ups from stabbing you, i know that she is supposed to be calm but that was too much... at least for me.

Same way anybody else plays a VN based around dating/cute girls(which is most of them). Part of it is playing it out of sight of others, in my opinion. Another part of it is pretending that you're reading a book(which you are, essentially), and putting yourself in that mindset, if possible.

Stop being ironic weeb normalfag scum.

>being this mundane

Fair enough, I just thought of Yuri just calming herself to try and concentrate on getting user help before actually doing so

Im also glad that the music choices helped.

>Monika's thighs wobble as she rides you, hands intertwined against your neck.
>"Mmph..."
>She wears her usual skintight thigh-highs, which straddle your body. Her teeth bite down on her lip as she moans, and her head rests on your shoulder.
>"Monika... you're amazing."
>"D-dummy... mmph... it's Mo-ni-ka, n-not... agn... Mon-ika!" She speaks through incessant moaning.
>That makes you go insane. You speed up and her nails dig into your back, legs tightening around your body. Your eyes meet, and you begin a passionate kiss as you orgasm, releasing your full repository of murky snow-colored zygote fertilization liquid with slime-like consistency into her.

Slotting floppies with Yuri!
Riding into battle in an Alouette III with Yuri!
Interrogating villagers with Yuri!
Painting your rifles and equipment with Yuri!

>using Monika as a fuck hole and forgetting her name
>she tries to be as passionate as possible
Hot as fuck.

>You can talk to your doki online, and they will not ignore you so long as you are decent to them, but you can never meet them.
>You can bang a phantom version of your Doki, do whatever lewd acts you want and the sensation will be genuine, but they will never talk to you.
pick one

First option. There are never more than enough lewds I can jack off to of Yuri

>>You can talk to your doki online, and they will not ignore you so long as you are decent to them, but you can never meet them.
I fear physical contact anyway.

how 2 take MC route

waiting to reply because I dont want to be gay.

but first option, physical contact is nice but not being able to speak to one another really drains and depresses the mood.

You're really good at that. Do you have any fics?

Sayori's troubles are now over. Try not to be too jealous.
I'm really feeling it.

>I'm really feeling it.
TAKYOOOOOOOOOON

Hey, I legitimately enjoyed DDLC and Katawa Shoujo. I guess technically the ways I laid out aren't exactly the way I see playing visual novels, but they're something.

You probably already read them, not trying to suck my own dick but here: reflectionnovels.blogspot.com/p/blog-page.html

>Your doki becomes real and is madly in love with you
>But you have to suck and fuck 3 dudes for it to happen

Temporary homo for everlasting love?

Misumi paizuri!

>Monika taking you shopping so she can buy some ribbons and skirts as well as some legwear
>Casually talking about stuff while coming back to your flat
>Monika disappearing into the bathroom where she's trying out thing she bought while you carry on with your usual stuff
>You worry about her not coming out so you knock on the door
>You hear her responding: "In here, mi amor."
>You walk in and see her in her new undergarments and striped kneehighs
>She asks you if it makes her look sexy to you
>She starts to feel you up, kissing your neck gently, then looking at your eyes with fiery passion
>You kiss her first, she repricociates, you kiss slowly, but they become more intense
>You french her, and she starts gripping you intently, then stares at your eyes saying "I really missed it, user. I missed this fervor."
Moar?

I'm pretty sure Yurifriends would rather take the 3 dudes forever.

Absolutely yes. I just want to be loved so much. It really fucking hurts.
I'd do anything.

Tie the chord, kick the chair and you're dead YUH

HELL YEAH FUCK YEAH I FEEL LIKE KILLING IT

I numb my mouth, either get very drunk and/or take a memory loss drug, and then maybe we're good to go.

Nope! I played this game 2 days ago. Thanks for the content.

Here's a Monika

What's up, Reflection? You ever critique other peoples fics on the pastebin?

>Not taking the opportunity to call her you precious little chatelaine
Maudit calisse, these people

Im not gay, but IRL dokis are IRL dokis

First option
I like having some feedback

Why would I have a problem with that? If anything it's a bonus.
The pain of loneliness is too much to bear for me, anyway.

Arachne Sayori watches user play Resident Evil 4!
She makes him help the dog even though he was going to anyway!
Maybe Yuri would like the merchant!
It's kind of nice until the las plagas parasites show up!
Humanoids exploding and growing all kinds of grotesque appendages! Human hostile hybrids being trounced without a second thought!
user mows them down! He's amazing at this game!
The machinations in Arachne Sayori's head stir for the worse!
She needs to know what a flash grenade is and that regular people don't carry flash grenades around!
user tells her these are more like tentacle monsters! He points out how fluffy they aren't!
She's partially relieved and reacts surprisingly well to things like Verdugo and Iron Maidens!
For good measure he decides not to show her the final boss!
Maybe she'd like Resident Evil 5 more!

Are they cute dudes?

For in that sleep of death what dreams may come

When we hang out at this mortal literature club

begone thot

What a fucking copout.
You're not gay but you're a faggot.

Monika becomes an ooze!

Got the gist of this spoiled for me / saw some scenes that I shouldn't have before playing. Should I still give it a go?

I could say no and say they're big fat ugly hentai dudes but that'd be too mean. So yes they are kinda cute.

It was more or less the same for me, still worth it just for the overall experience + memes

Yes
I got spoiled of this game days before I decided to play it but I still got chills up my spine on certain scenes

Also the true ending alone is worth it desu

An obscene sight
To the sky grows
Nothing but white
Nothing but lust
The God cracks
Lust for death
The God cries
Lust for battle
The God implores
Lust for life
The God cracks
Divinity scattered
The white remains.

Yes.
A lot of the disturbing moments rewuire the tension in your mnd of how and WHEN things go wrong, and that alone makes up for any spoiled moments.
I played it spoiled and it was fine. Just do it alone and in the dark.

It's short and free. Sure the less you know going in the better but oh well.

Trips don't lie. Monika = 000ze

Yuri is Krauser my man

>You'll wiil never play with Monika's big butt
my.mixtape.moe/rselrl.webm

>you have to eat broccoli to get dessert

Honestly, if you're so insecure in your sexuality that you'd say no to the perfect waifu, you don't deserve her.

Alright then yes, honestly if they have nice dicks I'd not care so much about their looks anyway.

You catch on quick. As expected. After all you and I both know which act this Yuri comes from.

L + R

Win-win scenario for me. Obviously I'll do it.

Fuck, I'd buy a Monika daki and official Monika sex toy like that. I'm losing my humanity.

Do not test my dedication to Yuri

This user speaks truth. If you aren't willing to take a dick for your waifu then you are swine and most certainly ain't my nigga.

Any greentexts you guys want me to write? I'm SO FUCKING BORED dude

A lot of people on this website have really fragile sexualities.

cuddling Yuri

How the Dokis all break the news that they're pregnant to you!
Please make them happy!

Sayori fucking with MC

Monika butt stuff!

Sayori x user during childhood, Elementary/Middle School days

Monika getting drunk off your cum.

>tfw no yuri trap gf

Sayori gets captured by demons so you buddy up with the Doomslayer to rip and tear your way through hell, Dante's Inferno style but with more guns and ultraviolence

Just finished the Doom 2016 Campaign on Ultranightmare mode so I've got RIP AND TEAR on the mind

A comfy evening drinking tea and watching stevemre with the dokis

The Dokis learning about /ddlc/ existence

This seems familiar. I want to believe.

Maybe how the Dokis other than Monika would handle her power

Oh you mean like earlier when people were objecting to getting lovingly pegged by their Doki because "durr my butt is gay you can't touch it"

It's a shame really.

Rhodesians never die

I'm sorry

Monika in the 80s Miami.

I love her too.

I can't tell if my depression is back or if I'm just dehydrated.

...

Did you say Monika daki?
Ahaha! Here, have one! It's the least I can give to you, user. Gosh, I miss you!

...

>tumblr face
Ehhhh

>Yuri walks into the room. She's wearing that same creamy-white sweater, and her face is flushed.
>"Hey... A-user."
>"Hi, Yuri."
>You began dating a week ago. She's certainly only grown more twitchy - more stuttering, hand-fiddling and sighs.
>"Could I ask you a question?"
>"Sure."
>"I-I, uh... could I... sit down next to you?"
>Her glance turns away - it's so obvious she wants to cuddle up. Yuri's fingers bend white with tension and she stares towards the empty wall.
>"Sure. Come over."
>"R-really?"
>"Yeah."
>Yuri turns around and walks over, puts her hands up to her chest, then sits down. The fan sends cool waves of air, flickering her hair like she stands outside in a summer breeze.
>"Yeah... uh, could you get closer?"
>"S-sure..."
>She scoots over, inch by inch, until your bodies touch. Your heart is beating incredibly fast, even if every pause takes minutes. Eventually, you touch your hand onto her shoulder. Yuri gasps.
>You place it around her, like in an awkward hug, encouraging her forward. She resists at first, but soon complies as her head goes to rest on your shoulder.
>"A-user..."
>"Yes, Yuri?"
>"This is lovely..." Her eyes shut.
>You smile, and tilt your head so it rests on top of hers. Purple strands of hair scratch your ears, and a soft sigh escapes your lips.
>"Yuri..." you say.
>"Yes?"
>"I really do love you."
I'll probably do next.

How often is too often to repost a greentext you wrote?

Natsuki dominatrix/femdom with the MC

Not enough

So you won't mind if I repost my greentext about catching Sayori masturbating?

>full repository of murky snow-colored zygote fertilization liquid with slime-like consistency