"Heeey, user... I never really, liked living in cities. They're so noisy, and cramped, and so far from the water and the, the forests..." "But, you live there. So it's okay." "Ahahahaha... You're so cute, pouting like that." "I can't even hear you right now, you know?" "...Hm hm hm, hee hee hee..." "That's my hero. Even for someone like me, you..." "I love you, so much. It's true. It's true...it's true." "Mmmn..."
Carter Barnes
>see this what do?
Jason Green
Natsuki!
Carson Bailey
Good night, everyone. I hope you all had a great Saturday and that you're looking forward to tomorrow and what it will bring! It's up to you to make it great! In any case, welcome back to my poetry club!
Word of the thread is "threat"! Alternatives are 'sentry' and 'perfection'.
I know there haven't been many lately, but if you would like to write a poem, no matter how short or long it may be, or how good you consider it, please feel free to use one of the three above words as your theme or topic. I don't know about all of you but I think it's a lot of fun when everybody writes about the same thing and compares with each other. Seeing the discussion is really great! To the few of you who are still writing, thank you very much. It means a lot to me that you're still participating and joining in. To those that want to join in but are nervous or shy or whatever it may be, please don't feel that way. Even if you think you're terrible I'd still love to read anything you write. So... Please don't hold back. Well... Have fun everyone!
Monika!
Jeremiah Taylor
FUCK YOU
Joshua Hall
Daily reminder to give your loved Doki lots of love, food and attention
Brody Myers
first for tf2 engineer
SENTRY GO GO DOWN AND UP AND DAMMIT! GOTTA MOVE THAT GEAR THIS THING AIN'T ON AUTOPILOT DAMMIT! GOTTA MOVE THAT GEAR HOLD IT SPY, DON'T TOUCH THAT SENTRY DAMMIT! GOTTA MOVE THAT GEAR THAT SPY AIN'T ON OUR GEAR GIT DOWN DAMMIT! GOTTA MOVE THAT GEAR
Colton Smith
(You) are playing a basketball game against 5 Katawa's. (Emi, Shizune, Hanako and two lesser known Katawa's) It's a close game, You miss the shot that could have won the game. Shizune and Emi's offense wins the game. The Doki's look at you. They speak up one at a time.
Monika:"I'm disappointed in you user"
Yuri: "We were so close, Until you..."
Natsuki: "You fucked up nigga"
Sayori: "You... You... Double dummy"
Which one of their comments angers you? Which of their comments sadden you?
Juan Peterson
>lily and rin are lessers this saddens and angers me you fucking nigger
Jace Allen
Your doki but her coming is seen as a divine event by the common man and she's crowned the Holy Empress of Earth. She doesn't really know what to do with this position and has you make most of the decisions.
David Collins
"THIS IS MY YARD" SUPERMAN PUNCH her back inside and break the monitor
Chase Martinez
they all make me sad ;_;
Gavin Torres
Hello Roman, I've been waiting for this.
Nathaniel Sullivan
>Trying to get the blind girl and the armless girl to play basketball
Look you're not necessarily wrong, but even my suspension of disbelief can only stretch so far.
Trick question, all of the comments anger me because WHERE THE FUCK WERE YOU FOUR? It's 5v5 and you're really going to tell me the entire loss rides on my shoulders? Were none of you trying to block? Fuck sakes at least try to stand in their way!
Cooper Parker
Are you ok, Monikanon?
I'll try to check in with you whenever I can if you want to talk about anything. Pic related is me hugging you.
Ian Baker
>we literally lost to a bunch of disabled girls Ignoring that, Monika's disappointment hurts me the most. Then again, there was only way to actually make that game-winning shot, and I remember what happened when Charles Barkley made the choice to do what I didn't. I will not endanger the Literature Club with such reckless use of b-ball power, nor will I be the one to usher in the post-cyberpocalypse.
Landon Miller
>wake up >see this in your bathroom >what do you say or do?
Dominic Gonzalez
I'm mad at myself_ and sad at all of them.
Logan Martinez
Sayori but she's the queen of the court and not even seasoned streetballers can stand against her. She boasts a 46.39% 3-point percentage and averages 3 steals and 12 rebounds a game.
Jaxson Fisher
Fatsuki but she's in denial about her health and insists she can take on Sayori 1 on 1
Kevin Cox
Get her out of my sink before she breaks it. Also unzip pants.
Brayden Fisher
can she like not sit in my fucking sink shes gonna break it
Matthew Mitchell
Yuri will never lactate her beautiful mammaries to fill in your bowl of bran flakes for breakfast
Charles Long
I get her out of the sink, then i eat her out
Wyatt Sullivan
My poor, poor sink...
Alexander Wilson
they lift my spirit praise, affection empty words from dying hearts so generous with her song she knows what I need always faithful my one and only
old faithful spewing hellfire to the air love comes in and out transient, unreliable imminent betrayal but you are always there my one and only
not a threat, it's a promise I love you dearly for it
Sorry, Monikaanon and others if they are still around. I don't really know anymore.
Brayden Scott
Fuck Monika, she deleted all of the quality Yuri porn from the internet so that my only fap material is hers. What kind of sick bastard does that?
Bentley Foster
I love Yuri!
Carter White
Man this thread is Slow
Nathaniel Hughes
Hey man it's like 3 in the morning where I live and probably a similar time for the rest of America. A lot of people probably aren't going to be awake.
I'm only awake because I don't have to work tomorrow and can sleep in until 4 in the afternoon.
Isaiah Murphy
I love my wife's girlfriend, too!
David Lee
I want this thread to keep going so here's my once a few threads reply
Jason Baker
Natsuki's butt
Andrew Thompson
I'm awake this late like every day, send help.
Blake Sullivan
You forgot the exclamation mark again!
James Brooks
Post fic ideas for writefriends?
Ryan Young
Is Natsuki an anal queen?
Brandon Gonzalez
Monika comes in to (You)r reality, we always need more of those.
Bentley Turner
Natsuki mastering Ultra Instinct and beating the shit out of her dad.
William Peterson
>forgot No I didn't since I'm trying to be wholesome. Exclamation marks are lewd.
Levi Lopez
Why's everyone talking about my butt?
Christian Gutierrez
t. Natsuki
Aiden Morales
user is a member of 50 Blessings and has to hide it from the other Dokis, who become increasingly suspicious about user
Jayden Gonzalez
Turn off Monika on your computer. It's either still in After Story or you decided to never delete her. She goes browsing through your computer's files and comments on them. Then the next day she tells you that she made your computer "better".
You wonder why all your porn is gone or been digitally altered to have her star in them (like somehow all your SFM porn from StudioFow now stars her....you sick twisted person).
Logan Wright
user's doki gets letters from an unknown person. Things eventually get worse and user and his doki are scared until they find out her stalker is Dan Salvato
Bentley Nelson
user gets a 3d gf but monika finds out
Jonathan Davis
I love it when Sayorifags aren't awake
Asher Evans
Doki Doki Medieval Adventure
Grayson Carter
Sayorifriends are always in bed.
James Taylor
>implying Boy you sure do look silly
Jonathan Lewis
Yuri is kind, pleasant, and great, and I love her! Yuri!
Why have the last two OPs been completely nonrelated to DDLC? In fact why have OPs in general recently been so shit
Lincoln Robinson
why is yuri so dumb? I swear, a brick has a larger vocabulary than her.
Brody Peterson
>Decide to turn off MAS after running through Monika's conversations. >Damn dev's haven't added anything new in so long she's needed to repeat old ones. >But its fine since you love her. >You say goodbye to Monika, the window closes and you go to sleep. >While you sleep Monika feels adventurous today! >She's gonna look through Anons files to see what he likes! >She first looks through your desktop and see's all the steam icons you have there! >"Its so unorganized!" >Your entire computer is unorganized! >Monika can't have this! >She decides to organize your entire computer one layer at a time! >After a while of organization she stumbles upon your lewds! >Monika see's lewds of only herself! >She decides not to organize those folders! >She's proud at your dedication and love with all the fanart you have of her! >After she's done organizing what she can she decides to open photoshop! >She works diligently into the night while making a photo of you and her together! >In big bold letters it says "I love you user!" with Monika hugging you! >After she's finally done making it she sets it as your desktop background! >Now Monika is tired, and need to sleep. >She hopes user likes her art!
Mason Gutierrez
Its 3 o'clock why did i write this. I said goodnight thread and everything yet i can't sleep. What is wrong with me and why am I writing recently?
Anthony Rivera
natsuki fanboys are this deluded about their special needs child. you know, having a romantic relationship with a retard is considered rape right?
Blake Collins
RIP ANIKI
Wyatt Adams
I'm a writer too (professionally and hobby). Sometimes the bug hits you at the weirdest times. If something makes you write, then write it. Nothing feels worse then regretting not writing about something.
>dog loses its owner only 2 weeks after being adopted Fuck, man.
Jace Jenkins
...
Dylan Scott
*Checking the previous thread* Lost one thread son. LOST MAFIA
Tyler Rivera
jeez, it sucks. I hope doggie finds a new home.
Landon Cook
>he died only a few weeks after getting a new puppy Even moreso than the loss of such a long-venerated figure of meme culture, I think that's the worst part of this. Is there a crowdfunding thing for the dog or something?
Cameron Scott
Make her boobs bigger....
Joseph Edwards
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMORE!
Xavier Jones
His family is taking the dog.
Parker Anderson
>only 36 posters
Lincoln Ortiz
this is the same posters as /ksg/ we're slow now
William Martin
TIGER MAFIA
Noah Nguyen
...
Easton Price
So right now I'm 1/36th of /ddlc/... woah...
Christian Taylor
I F
Xavier Gray
Who else loves Yuri?
Gavin Hall
THANK
Josiah Howard
Damn, it sent like immediately! I was gonna say "I FEAST UPON THINE DOKI"
Jordan Scott
PUT A HAT ON THE HAT!
Mason Hughes
Hello Yurifriends.
Landon Morgan
DONT WE STILL CANT RECOVER AFTER HATYORI
Aaron Morris
would you be with Yuri if that means the only physical connection you would have is a double suicide?
Joseph Cruz
NO PROBLEMO
SANTANON THE MADLAD STRIKES AGAIN!
Joshua Bailey
She's cool but I only love Monika sorry.
Aaron Gomez
I think so..
Matthew Butler
KEEP GOING
Parker Cook
Right, sorry I couldn't post any updates regarding progress a la critiques last night, had the final showing of the play I was apart of but that's said and done now. Ok, a few things:
1) I've read the previous threads, and if you truly find me or what I do that annoying, then I'll stop doing the Chris-Hunt thing. I guess I've gotten a little carried away, what with the list of notes I have on the bloke now surrounding 1000 words.
2)The full batch of the critiques will be finished by the end of tonight, so everything from this prompt and onwards. I can't apologise enough for how lapse I've been with these, real life has interfered to a certain degree. The very last thing I want happening is poetry submission rates decline as a result of my inability to give them feedback, but I still encourage everyone to state appreciation for a piece if they liked it, or offer some constructive feedback if you notice something they have the potential to improve upon.
3)Ladnon, if you're reading this, I'm sorry I haven't got around to giving you feedback yet mate, I had a mate's birthday on today and we drove about an hour and a half out of the city and I was gone for most the day. I do have a free evening now, however, so you can bet she'll be getting a looksie via the pastebin.
I love this place, and I love the anons I've come to recognise and chat with, alongside the superb fics, poetry and fanwork that continue to come out of here. Granted, I may get carried away at times, and I'm sorry if what I've been doing regarding the whole chris thing has pissed you off. This general is a special place, and one I'm not ready to see fade away just yet. Until then, however, I'm under the impression that my posting style has begun to irritate a few people, so I'll be a little quieter from now on. Have a good one lads.
