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don't do that, don't you know it's dangerous to link to the Old Ones?

So anyone got any other fantasy CYOAs?

Wait, the separate images one?
Isn't that the old version? The newest version is in a pdf.

Anyone interested in seeing an update to SpessRefuge now that Lurl has left it open?

I'm considering trying my hand at an update and i'm looking for suggestions

Man PDF's annoy me, also I don't have a PDF, I only have the images saved on my computer. And I did not know it was updated. If you want to post the updated one go ahead.

So, we have two magic-users, now. Plus, I added a "drawback" to the general gifts. You can get Welfare for free... if you show up and do work for 25 hours per week. This arrangement is called a job.
(1/7)

yes

yes

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Wizards are fantasy, right?

The job covers the roommate expenses, too. And I guess they're not taxing that paycheck, so there's that. And no, you can't take the job AND Welfare.

Oh, whoops. I forgot to number the previous one.
Moving on...
(3/7)

It takes so long to catch up and get to the new page.
(4/7)

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Almost there...
(5/7)

> I added a "drawback" to the general gifts. You can get Welfare for free... if you show up and do work for 25 hours per week. This arrangement is called a job.

Fuck this shit.

>mfw I've been gone for a while and have a bunch of new stuff to go through

>No pastebin link

pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu

>added a drawback

hahaha...haha...ha......no.

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System is the only good faction. Literally. Why pick any other faction to fight for?

I NEED TO WORK? WTF MAN

New page!
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It's called a "drawback," user. Talking to all the other cool creatures isn't supposed to be fun.

I hope you like it!

That's why it's optional.

Well I guess it's time to post Ver. 1.0 of the finished product.

I have this weird feeling that it won't live up to expectations but I've honestly learned a lot about making cyoas from making this and Ill probably post updates in the future so yeah.

Also fun fact god has a special place in heaven for proofreaders so do what you will with that information

1/5

>Job
Depends what it is.
>Have to talk to people
No. Why are you picking on us and being a huge jerk?

Eye candy(7)
Cosplay(9)
Sexual harassment(13)
Experimentation(17)

Transform human(15)
Heal(12)
Necromancy(8)
Golem(6)
Flight(4)
Grow & Shrink(0)

If anyone wants to come at me, I'll just kick them with the force of a nuclear warhead.

Literally optional. They are willing to supply you with paid work if you request it. It's actually a very kind option, even with the generous arrangement offered originally, as some of us are essentially unemployable otherwise.

Beri this is bulllshit. These two are terrible. And you added a drawback? What the hell were you thinking?
Just kidding, I'm going to read it a get back to you. Thanks for the OC.

I posted WIP of both of these pages so I'm more confident in them then the other 3 but yea

as always I would love for you to tell me where I could improve and what kind of classes or schools you would like to see in a future update

2/5

Those of us who are unemployable can't do this job either. Most people who are, have weird ass neet anxiety issues and can't interact or talk with real people without freaking out. This is a fucking customer service job, it'd be like cruel torture.

(7/7) Done.

... I'm sorry. I didn't think an optional addition like that would be so disliked. I just thought some people might want to meet more / unlisted creatures, even if only as friends.

You made my heart skip a beat...

Tell me. What makes a good waifu cyoa?

Fuck you, Box. You couldn't wait for Beri to finish so that the filenames wouldn't get all out of order? I'm going to have manually rename them or wait for somebody to repost yours in a later thread.

Admittedly true. My biggest issue is mostly to do with chronic pain, and I doubt being just "given" a job will make it easier to actually do it.

I had a little help with choosing images on these next two. Turns out it's really hard to make 40 different companions and make them all appealing but yeah

If you guys want I can pull a highlander and throw your OCs in future updates as companions

Don't worry, unlike I've worked tech support and have some experience dealing with angry people in person and over the phone.

It is hilarious how mad some people get when you tell them they fucked themselves by leaving their power cable in another state while they're desperately trying to work at the airport.

See

don't worry man, maybe you should put it like "This is all OPTIONAL YOU DON'T REALLY HAVE TO DO THIS" or something like that, cause most of us here are neet with anxiety problem. (like me)

Adventure, my man. I want to kill beasties and explore dungeons with my waifu supporting me.

>Druidism
>Patchouli
>Not "alchemy"
>Not "elementalism"
>in [current year]

Oh wow. This genie is...perfect-ish. Don't know if she'd let me live the NEET lyfe desu.

Tome & Home + Job

Genie
Interior designer
Immortality (/ss/)
Attract Others
Her

+ her 'drawback'

shit man I didn't even realize Beri was posting, I'm really faded right now and probably shouldn't be drunk posting like this Sorry to you and Beri

I always considered waifus to be my area of expertise but I really tried to avoid writing characters as explicit waifus in this one but a few slipped through anyway

4/5

I see nothing wrong with doing work and getting paid. Hell 400 dollars for only working 25 hours a week is great if I worked full time it would be almost 800.
Anyway Beri I was wondering what do magical girls fight? Do they ally with demon hunters?

i hate working, butt fuck it,

Orb of Life
Welfare (Free)
Encyclopedia.

Fei La
Lovemaking (Free)
Homemaking

Sex Drive
Demon Sight
Love Potion #14

>Inas
>Known of this is true.

fuckin shit i replied to the wrong image

I've always considered quests to be more of a jumping off point for write fagging or a way to flesh out the world so you can consider this page optional if you want

I also ended up cutting out school clubs, I wrote up a couple of drafts and was never satisfied with what I came up with but I'll try to get them in a later update.

5/5

Base (+2)
Accomplice (+3)
Master's Will (+2)

Dance Magic (-3)
Charm (-4)

I can convince anyone of anything, as long as the argument is made in musical-dance-number form.... ANYTHING!

fucking kill my drunk dyslexic ass

thanks for pointing it out

Gosh, what manner of enchantment could require her to sneak her into your bed?

Also what kind of creatures would you get with sealing?

Cute waifus, mostly

I have that effect on people.

Kaila
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Local Idol
Coincidence
Magic Tome
Bonus: Sure.


or


Jeanne
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Fashion Designer
Attract Others
Me
Bonus: Nope.

For my final choice I think I'll keep Andrea. I was originally conflicted between Twile and her, but then I realized I can play games on my laptop, making them EVEN MORE IMMERSIVE.

If the waifu has a fetish or is designed to fit one, they'd better be able to make it work.

Like if they're into excessive sex, they'd better be able to make it so you can too. Or for there to be a perk that otherwise helps.

Could Jeanne make it so people don't hate you for being a trap?

Rolled 4, 2 = 6 (2d4)

Ej Har

Arcane Magic * 3
Potion Mixing *3
Smithing * 2
Knowledge(Magic Theory)
Blood magic

Blood magic
>Companions
Luvyna
Malyvin
Nashwa
Cassiopeia
Eloise
>Events:
>Battles
Battle
Hunt
>Harvest
Basilisk Den
>Summit
Research
>Life
Bodyguard
Blind date

Thus the legend of the greatest raw-mana wielder begins!

I rewrote the job offer to be more encompassing. Sorry for assuming everyone could handle listening to waifus vent.

For some reason I had thought that using the same text box style as the optional drawbacks in the later pages make it clear enough. That doesn't work at all for the first page, though. Is it better, now?

Glad you like her. Yeah, she wouldn't mind if you stayed at home. Especially if your body isn't adult.

I'm happy someone liked it. Magical girls fight weird shadow monsters, evil demons, and various other objectively evil threats that face the city.

There's a slightly more different job now, if you prefer it.

There's no need to apologize to me.

She just doesn't want to wake you up when she sees you sleeping so peacefully.

Yeah, nanobots are more effective that the Rift or Vive.

Well, if you're taking the optional bonus, you you'll have a high-specialized but still cosmically powerful genie standing behind you to prevent any bullying. She could just turn anyone that gives you a hard time into a little girl. Speaking of which, since you have endless wishes, you could just wish to be a girl, if you find that preferable to trap. But, no, she can't really do anything that effective to alter unwilling minds.

What happens if one is not gay but rolls a same-sex partner for the ball?
I've never been in this situation. It seems like the people are explicitly expecting something romantic, and y'know..

you would just hang out then. as long as you two are seen enjoying yourself no one's gonna care if you two aren't into each other romantically just that two popular students can form a strong friendship with each other.

Muscle
Immolation
Immortality
Mind
Ideal Form (Noctis ff xv)
Monastic
Abjuration
Lightning
Charisma
Armor
Katana
Waifu (Lightning from FF XIII)
Fresh Water 4pts
Plains 6 Square Miles
Village : 100
Cult : a single female prophet
Small House
Walls

thank you man, it's better now, god bless , keep up the good work

Thanks.

For clarity, can you only ever take one instance of one unique class offered by your school? Or could you, say, take Airship Training 3 times as an Odesium student?

Orb Of life
Welfare desk job (hopefully i don't have to talk to people)
Dream home
Encyclopedia

Fei La
Lovemaking (Free)
Homemaking

Sex Drive
Demon Sight
Love Potion #14

you can take airship training 3 if you want, there's no restriction on school specific classes except for the whole school specific part

>hopefully i don't have to talk to people
It's mainly just data entry. At most, you'll have to talk to the office lady that gave you the job.

What's Fei La's type, anyway? Like, if you let her demonify you into a body she likes, what would she go with?

What happens if you wear the slime gown yourself? Could you share it with Mishe?

What's the upper limit for macaron effects? Also I don't understand why the peaceful bread spirit is the one who offers to turn you into a magical supersoldier. Little odd desu senpai.

>both of those new waifus
Naisu naisu.

>magical realm
blast from the fucking past desu
too bad it went down in flames

Battlemage
Acadamy
>Lunestier
Classes
>Magic refinement x2
>Arcane magic x2
>Elemental Magic x2
>Maneuvers x2
>Tactics x2
Will eventually reach level three in the field.
Companions
>Suzette Highking (a fellow mage of a similar specialty should be useful)
>Evergreen (more magic)
>Luvyna
>Trap catcher
>Crale Edwards
Events (did not totally understand the rule so bear with me)
>Bodyguard (Suzette will want to hang with her sisters no doubt)
>Escort (sounds fun and mysterious)
>Security
>Battle Royal x3
>Great hunt x2

Rolled 3, 3, 3 = 9 (3d4)

Gonna try to go in blind, not going back and re-building as I read and I didn't check out the WIPs either. This is the "what I might choose if I were actually in this situation" build, I suppose.

>School
Odesium
[Typo is Uzuza description. "calming their views are outdated" should be "claiming their views are outdated".]

>Classes
Ranged Combat x2
Tactics x2
Smithing x2
Knowledge (Military Engineering) x2
Explosives x2
Really hard to get everything I wanted, so I guess I have to settle for not reaching the level of an unparalleled master. Going for a Jean Baptiste Eugene Estienne inspired General of Artillery build.
[Smithing "no sound more wonderful then the sound of a hammer" -> "than"]

>Companions
Malyvin
Valerie Bluewood
Znanje
Bathsheba
Tash
["Some may teach you there skills" -> "their skills"]
[Malyvin: "Luvyna and Valeria you were the terror" -> "Luvyna and Valeria; you were the terror"]

>Events
Research Proposal x5
Basilisk Den x2
Blind Date
["Battle Royal ever year" -> "Battle Royale every year"]
[Harvest Festival "let their hair done" -> "let their hair down"]
[Research Proposal "there" -> "their"]

Really liked this, lots of options! Current build is based around advancing the science of magically-supported artillery in large-scale conflict. Invention, production, logistics, tactics, and strategy are all important factors here. Not much use at all in a stand-up fight but I've got some skill in leadership and planning. Estienne basically invented both tanks and military aviation, and so I hope that my character here could live up to that legacy.

Mystery Box

>98 years ago

So I've got two years to become a hero in time for the next demon invasion?

I hope this world has some good heroes, cause it ain't gonna be me.

Odesium
3*Potion Mixing
3*Smithing
3*Knowledge
1*Explosives
Luvyna, Hana, Chandara, Eloise, and Tash
Research Proposal, Fund Raising, and a Blind Date

I think I'll just open an item shop while the world is ending.

The Paladin girl Crayle is a waifu she is a paladin. My type, I'd want to smite evil together with her.

Just to make sure, using Demon Sight while working is allowed? I won't get in trouble if I incite lust in a qt monster girl I meet while working?

yeah i think i need to rewrite the rules on events, ideally there should be no confusion when reading it, ill go over it again when I've sobered up

Thanks a ton for pointing out proof reading stuff

Check out those dice trips. Let's see, my blind date is... Chuuni girl. All right, no big problem here. A bit silly but hey, I'm pretending to be a 19th century Frenchman so who's really in the wrong here. Pretty cool to meet up with and spend some time with someone way outside of my wheelhouse, both in terms of personality and skills.
["it's best to just role with it" -> "it's best to just roll with it"]

Might make a very research focused spellcraft build too, then a muscle wizard. The latter in part because I saw that Korra was a waifu companion option.

Still one of the funnest cyoas ever.

1d4chan.org/wiki/Magical_Realm_Cyoa/Sapphoshire

>Light Elf
18

>Intriguing
17
>Well-Endowed
15
>Lifetime (I ain't dying yet!)
9

>Sweet
8
>Yan
7
>General Magic
5
>Weaponmaster
3

>Wells
0

Just adventure with my brave hero succubus and do everything I can to help with her quests, protect her when I can, and attend to her special needs as a succubus.

>She just doesn't want to wake you up when she sees you sleeping so peacefully.

You'd think she'd just say bedroom then, unless the enchanting method requires something lewd like holding your hand or cuddling up next to you

>Fei La's type
Clean, handsome, but not too hairy. Stubble is okay. Slightly toned. Well equipped for her favorite activity. But that's just the slightest of preference. Her loyalty is above running out on you for someone better in the case that you're not transformed.

>slime gown
It has no effect on humans. If you're a slime then you'd be able to both squeeze in it at once, but are either of you really going to accomplish anything like that?

>upper limit for macaron
Well, the weapon is going to end up being something that ought to be mounted but that you can somehow carry with ease. The upper limit in the other effect is... uh... "very cute."
>Why Pan makes supersoldiers
Even if the it is enchanted food, taste is important. The taste of the combat enchantment really brings out the taste of the cute part, thus the joint recipe. It isn't that she wants to make soldiers. It's that she wants to make the tastiest treats she can.

>Naisu naisu
Thanks!

Your boss is not the sort to be strict with formalities. Besides, if she tattled, they might investigate her (mis)use of the ability, too.

I think you linked wrong.

>or cuddling up next to you
Well...

Giving her a type is a poor move desu. Now people will feel inadequate no matter what you say.

Anyone remember Archmage CYOA?

The guy posted a wip but never delivered. Can someone post that wip? I need it for research.

Thanks in advance, going to bed so I won't reply.

Don't apologize. Seeing all these NEETS freak out over the concept of a job is funniest thing I've read all day

Shit forgot to mention I purposely left out race, appearance, and gender stuff because I think limiting that kinda shit puts unnecessary restrictions on the player. If you want to be a little girl then go for it man as long as you're happy and having fun I don't care if you wanna be a lobster or sentient shrub just do you

It's the idle thoughts of a virgin succubus. She'll be much more into whatever her first experience is. Unless capitalized upon, it will be a fleeting interest. Don't underestimate how impressionable she is in her current state.

If you say so...

I feel like I'm being railroaded into choosing St. Flares, because it has Kit.

>If you say so...
Nah, being polite is better. Don't worry about that guy, just has a superiority complex.

Lunestier

Arcane Magic x3
Elemental Magic x3
Magic Refinement x3
Magical theory

Suzette Highking
Nashwa
Evergreen
Chandara
Luvyna

Battle Royale
Great Hunt
Escort
Basilisk Den
Security
Research Proposal
Battle of the Arts
Bodyguard

Full power magic build. Bathsheba would probably have been more valuable (as a research assistant) than Chandara, but she's an obvious plot hook. I also refused to repeat any particular event, in order to open up as many quest chains as possible for later in the story.

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>Her loyalty is above running out on you for someone better in the case that you're not transformed.

Just curious what a sex demon's idea of the Ultimate Waifuform would be. I was kind of expecting something turbolewd.

>gown

I was thinking of taking turns, actually.

it would make you the first person to take st flares

I haven't made a build yet, but I'm torn between St. Flares and Lunestier. I blame it mostly on wanting Druidism.

Maybe so, but all the same, that was pretty pathetic.

Do they ally with demon hunters or are the demon hunters to extreme for them?

>It's pretty pathetic that people with extreme social anxiety couldn't handle a job that involves interacting and talking with a lot of strangers.
Really? I guess it's pathetic a paraplegic can't be a marathon runner, right?

I like the new options, but none of them super stick out to me. Don't know why though. I think I still like Mishe and Harmony the best, though Alice and Andrea are pretty good.

Maybe it's because they don't specifically cater to my fetishes enough
Some sort of tall mini giantess/amazon or shapeshifter when?


Also: "Basically, you'll talk to you people like yourself..."

Probably either like her big sister Not-Morrigan Aensland or whatever makes her husbando deliver maximum spooge.

I don't know what images are the newest, but the builder should be up to date.

63afd638575e0a2fbdda19bd44f65d165d6ed49c.googledrive.com/host/0B3kTDrvhIDLzay1iUmV1UmVKcmM/index.html

Aren't all the realms still on that google doc?

What is Kaila's magical girl theme?

>this is what neets tell themselves

Man this is a sad one. You know this CYOA should let you be able to take more boons at least 2 the knight and the mountain that way you can fight the endbringer.

I think post people consider politeness a good thing, user-kun.