CYOA Thread

>Primary and Secondary
aw, hell, not just one or the other
aight

can you remove slave collar and then put it on someone else?
Very important if you try to defend your ship and yourself from enemies

Maybe. It really depends on where you're going with it since the original is a pretty closed world. Somewhat similar to doing a Eureka Seven CYOA.

Twile doesn't share memories, only thoughts. I consider that to be surface thoughts, like whatever is running through your mind at any given hours of the day. It will be virtually impossible to keep secrets and she'll learn about any memories you inevitably think of, but she won't share your memories themselves.

If she did there wouldn't really be much of a line between her and you after a while.

I agree about the autopilot, but if I chose that (I'm stuck between that and ghost writing) I'd mostly be relying on her to exercise and maybe cook if we don't eat out, NOT to do every little shitty task in my life. What it ends up coming down to is one of us has to earn money and the other has to work on staying fit and healthy. We can share equally, but one of us is bound to prefer doing some activities or dislike some things we have to do anyway less, so I think it evens out.

The thing I DON'T like about Twile is her general personality. Good thing is that she's moral enough to rarely take over without permission, that's bound to carry over into other things. Otherwise she's described as a prankster, childish, and a showoff.

I feel like childish will improve over time, prankster we can probably work on not pissing people off with, and show off I can live with.

yes

>Reading through the cyoa since it's my first time seeing it.
>The grammar is perhaps the worst I've ever seen.
>Get to the perks and read the No Obsticale perk.
>The only thing you can't get over is your depression.

10/10 what the fuck

>edgy shit
KLK had edgy shit?

No.

whoops yeah i meant thoughts. There are certain things that i think which are downright nasty and mean but i would never say them out loud. I would hate myself even more if someone i liked or even a stranger knew what went on in my head. I would feel like complete shit and though she might understand where my feelings come from and that i don't mean it. It still won't change the fact that these are my thoughts. Id feel like a huge asshole. I am mainly hoping that she and I can be good friends and i think her reading my thoughts will sabotage the entire thing.

Also i agree that her general personality is a bit lacking. But i do also think that she has the most potential. Like what this user said .

and as a tangent i'm really surprised how high Fei La has been ranking .

FYI all the posts you quoted were me.

I'm quite keenly aware of how my thoughts can sound. Generally I'd have more to worry about lewd or downright disgusting, and occasionally overwhelmingly embarrassing, than anything particularly mean though. It's probably best to save the "deeper bond" until we get to know each other better and are at least prepared for what we are going to be hearing.

Definitely going to want to do it anyway though, even if only so that while I let her use my body I get to use the true form benefit myself as well as see what she's seeing with body swap. Especially important since that will be a pretty significant chunk of time, up to an equal share which could be divided over longer intervals if necessary.

The main appeal with her, although I actually like the general closeness with the way she's set up, is that I feel like I would really be giving her something special that few other people would. More importantly that something is actually a mutual gain, because while she has control I will get to experience things I otherwise wouldn't, I might actually learn to enjoy some new things that way. That's what makes it a relationship rather than just a waifu who loves me absolutely for no explicable reason.

>surprised how high Fei La has been ranking
Semen. Demon.

I like the idea of making deals and magical contracts with people. Is there a cyoa where that plays a significant role?

There was that Demon CYOA where one type of demons was the classic contract making demon.

I remember someone posting a WIP of a CYOA where you make a contract with some manner of mythical creature, with each creature having their positives and negatives, plus the type of contract further affecting how the creature would affect you(r life), from being able to shapeshift into the creature to having something of a guardian deity, or something along those lines.

Holy shit, I finished the first page and forgot all about it. I didn't even post it. I should probably continue.

... I remember why I dropped it. Veeky Forums thinks it has an embedded file and I can't post it. Fuck that.

imgur.com/eaJMd4K

Did you try saving it as PNG instead of JPG? Or fiddling with the quality/compression settings?

Let's test if the problem persists...

Apparently imgur's additional compression "fixed" that particular problem for you. If fiddling with the quality settings and directly saving as PNG/JPG don't work, try something inane like saving as PNG, opening the file, and resaving as JPG.

Thank you. I should probably finish it now. I

I agree with you but that only makes the option of picking Twile much more scarier. I have to expose myself to her. She's not like the other girls where they can love me no matter what. I have to actually make an effort to try and be with her to make her happy. Her bio said that she was sealed in a hand mirror after being with the last host. That must hurt a lot. Being with her is a huge commitment. With both Harmony and Jeanne I have good reasons to stay with them. They can take care of me and we can have a decent relationship. It probably won't be something meaningful or life changing.

I don't think I'm strong enough to take that risk.With the other girl's the worst case is that I get bored, with Twile the worst case is that someone ends up with a broken heart.

>RS-Stalwart

>Body
Fit male

>Perks
Light feet, Melee mastery, Stealth, Durable, Berserk

>armor
R-45

>weapons
Electric sword, high frequency machete,

>Utilities
Night vision, Force field projector, Slave collar

Too bad we can't trade weapon for more utility, but anyway. Maybe melee combat is outdated, but on this world everyone fights with swords and arrows, it's but mine time to shine. Very sneaky and extremely dangerous as what can be more deadly than ninja? invisible berserk ninja

I think it's a bit worse than that. More along the lines of someone ends up stuck in a handmirror with a broken heart, but even that might be getting off lightly.

I definitely agree with you, including the part where if you don't think you can handle it you shouldn't pick her. After all, if it were something anyone could and would do, like say feeding fei la, it wouldn't be special and it wouldn't have the appeal it does. I think I can though

Stat me in Hero school

Unholy Arts x3
Summoning Magic x2
Unarmed Combat x2
Ranged Combat x2
Physical Training x1

Looking at the bright side though, she understands how this works. She knows you won't be able to control your thoughts and that they won't always be something she should hear. Not that she won't hear them, but she'll be far more understanding than a normal person would if you were to actually speak your mind to them.

Once you can come to terms you'll have someone who you'll NEVER need to be afraid of being completely and totally honest with. The way I see it that's better then the sex, the body and all the potentially fun things you might do with her put together. But that could just be me, as someone who always thinks things over a thousand times but is afraid to actually speak even if only just for the fear of saying it wrong.

Don't you guys realise Twile is just an inferior Andrea?

I like Andrea, but the two are nothing alike. Andrea doesn't even give you a body changing option.

Giving Andrea her soul is nice, but it's also easy. It's just a magical fix which strips most of the meaning to it. That's about the only similarity between the two though, that you can build a relationship out of something you do for her.

When it comes to being open, I have to open my mouth with Andrea. Even if she has so little self worth as to not judge anything I say (that's the only way to describe it "I am a robot so I have no right to hate you for the shit you say"), it still doesn't help me get over my own personal problem.

Don't sweat your English, making OC is hard work.

Both are potential workdrones that can greatly enhance your quality of life. The only difference is that Twile has a personality while Andrea's bonus makes her completely subservient. Twile doesn't require resources though but neither does Andrea with her special reactor core.

Soul Andrea + bonus is the best choice imo.

>and as a tangent i'm really surprised how high Fei La has been ranking
She's a submissive virgin who falls in love with your dick, and lives to please and love you.
She's the virgin Waifu that fucks like a Croatian prostitute that user loves so much.

UPDATE
This page had some very minor wording changes at the top but that's it.
(1/10)

When worlds collide
(2/10)

She's also a demon so you'd be denying yourself paradise for a sinful perverted relationship with a hellspawn. No, I'd prefer a wholesome supernatural christian waifu.

>submissive giantess waifu

Please let it be so cause DIAMONDS.

And back to the grind
(3/10)

Well, you'll have to wait like 10 minutes for me to get through the pages.

Yeah I'm not picking EITHER of them to be workdrones. You know how Twile can best enhance my life? By having fun in ways that I wouldn't have thought of or gone through with, while I ride along in the back of her mind.

This is really pathetic. Particularly

> With both Harmony and Jeanne I have good reasons to stay with them. They can take care of me and we can have a decent relationship.
>With the other girl's the worst case is that I get bored

Is this what you think a relationship is? A !mother taking care of you? Sure Twile is problematic if you value anything that could be mistaken for privacy but get a grip, Bitch.

(4/10)

>paradise
No proof of Heaven existing.
No proof that Demons come from Hell.

(5/10)

Really glad you decided to add more. Future girl might be interesting, though I doubt I'll be a great fit.

Raises the question though, since all the girls are immortal I guess that means everyone in the future is immortal too? At least in her future, which may not be THE future anymore but it's still plausible. That's a really scary thought.

(6/10)

>LITERALLY having sex with a live demon
>m-maybe god isn't real, right? m-maybe demons don't come from hell, right?

Kek. Enjoy eternal damnation.

(7/10)

>KATALINE
They have other things they do there without Wi-Fi... Like yarn-ball. The hit sport.
>FLOOF
She'd certainly appreciate not being the only moth, but she wouldn't ask you to lose your voice over it.

SAD stfu and go work on a cyoa. stop shitposting and trying to incite arguments.

How would Kataline react if you introduced her to the wonderful world of catgirl porn?

I don't know, user. more waifu options are always appreciated, but are you sure you don't want to add a few more cozy life ideas? Slime girl daycare's got a few details i've always liked just for that feeling.

Almost there...
(8/10)

Poor Omne... she wants legitimate thanks for what she does.

>no proof
Well would you look at that.

New page
(9/10)

Those two are rather popular. And again, Twile is very hit-or-miss.

In a objetively 100% good Heaven, fucking the only good demon probably wouldn't be a problem.
We're all going to hell anyways for fapping to waifu cyoas

It's the sort of setting where stupid nice demons get put on buses to Earth and demon hunters just give up once the demon gets a housemate.

I doubt Hell is particularly serious business either and having a demon who by the time you accidentally die is probably going to be reasonably high up in the hierarchy due to your "encouragement" having your back would probably let you land on your feet.

And the library.
(10/10)

>workdrones
That's kinda... dehumanizing...

Flattered and embarrassed.

Maybe if/when I quit adding new ones. Maybe.

Yeah, it's not like she's evil, so her heritage is less important. The objective good would tell you to breed the evil gene out of all the demons so that there'd be no bad ones left. But that kind of large-scale eugenics won't happen for hundreds more years & even then, it's only going to hit humans.

>giantess is a powerbottom

She's not submissive at all.

>She knows you won't be able to control your thoughts and that they won't always be something she should hear.

Good point she will be a bit understanding. I think I was thinking of all the downsides and was barely considering the upsides.
"No matter what life throws your way as long as you have one good friend to help you through it then you just might make it". Thanks for talking to me about this cyoa it was fun and I learned a lot.

I think I will make a build for Twile.

Orb of Life
Library

Employment (Get a nice desk job)

Ghost Writer (Because I like reading but rarely get around to doing so.)
Body Swap
Real Form (Free with Encyclopedia)

Chains that Bind (I can lucid dream already and Ruin Rock seems useless)

Eh, I'm a pathetic guy in general. I'm a coward even though I don't want to be.
>Is this what you think a relationship is? A !mother taking care of you?
Wouldn't know. I barely interact with other people. I don't understand why people do certain things. Most of what I know about relationships is from 90's sitcoms and other shows. I also did make a distinction between choosing Geanne and Harmony and the type of relationship that would occur. I said it probably wouldn't be meaningful. My intention was to imply that a relationship with Twile would be more meaningful but i guess i wasn't clear enough.

>get a grip, Bitch.
I don't think there is a need to get so aggressive but w/e.

>dehumanizing to use a workdrone as a workdrone

You were the one who made Andrea a completely submissive robot so don't judge me when I actually use it as one. That's bullying.

...

>I doubt Hell is particularly serious business either
And now I want to make a CYOA with FunHell, with waterparks and barbecues and cute demon girls, because Lucifer can't handle the bullying anymore and just wants some friends.

>Hell is actually an incredibly advanced utopian society because all/most scientists go to hell

Do this.

Fei La still best.

I like giant women as much as (much more than) the next guy but an increasingly curvy demon in love is still better than the other options.

Demon roommate was basically that.

I want to make a spin-off where you're an elven male raping cute bara orcs in revenge.

>I don't think there is a need to get so aggressive but w/e
I just have no patience any more for this nonsense since browsing /r9k/. One too many
>tfw no mommy gf
threads.

For the record this is not me apologizing. Being this whiny is really pathetic. It doesn't matter if you admit that you're a bitch if you do nothing to change.

>mommy gf

Isn't this like a girl wanting to call you daddy while you spank her?

There's nothing wrong with that.

> I can lucid dream already

I think you misunderstand the dream gateway, she says she CAN'T make them more lucid, it lets her enter your dreams "physically". I actually combos really well with being a lucid dreamer as it lers you reshape the dream world for the 2 of you.

She can be. You just need things like Housewife & to take her deal. It's even in her culture for the husband to decide the wife's work. You could also get the Chieftess Bikini modified to fit you & be able to seem imposing to her. Is that not good enough?

That's a very optimistic view of Twile. Most people tend to focus on "never privacy" instead of "eternal support."

Well, yeah, she's a robot, so I guess dehumanizing is more acceptable, but Twile's just a ghost thingy.

Even Oki's target audience prefers a succubus...

The dreamworld is also the only place you can physically have sex with eachother.

Exactly. So the question is how to make it different.
We know from experience user will scream at the prospect of getting s job, even if it's flipping burgers on the grill while drinking beer, so that won't work.

That, the weepy misogyny, low level of general maturity, unashamed leeching off of other people's goodwill, and once prevalent /gfd/ threads make it clear: the idiots are expecting their partners to be surrogate mothers. If it was just calling your wife 'mommy' during sex, it would just be one cringeworthy thing.

She's still a bit too assertive and the whole "cute" thing is a major turn-off. Giantesses like Chieftess Subnburst are more my style.

...

Just make user an (arch)demon or something and give him enough prestige. Anons might not want a desk job but I guarantee most anons would like being a CEO (in hell).

That's a shame. I was hoping that she would be liked more. At least she's been commented on. Saki isn't that popular.

It is hell, though. If you want it run by scientists, do look up Shiro Ishii for inspiration on how they might conduct themselves.

Saki is smug incarnate with a dash of tsundere. That's a very specific niche. Fucking tiny titted bitch even calls me ugly to my face. ;-;

That was not me.

Unless, by SAD, you are referring to not-me. Then he is likely the person you are referring to.

You can do that with Real Form. She's "real and 3d" and YOU "can see and touch" her.

Except you become an arch demon in arch demon roommate and can potentially rule over hell while being Lucie's personal sex slave, of course.

my idea was actually to add a hierarchy, so you can take various positions/jobs and get more shit for the higher responsibility (think like that Hunter CYOA - big powers = boss battles, low power = fight rats, but you won't die).
user will still scream that he can't be a NEET with a waifu and a perfect life, so any ideas for that?

Call her a smug bitch all you like, but don't insult the perfect tits.

Not sure if there's enough of that sub-genre to make a proper background collage...

I prefer my logic hells run perpetually by robespierre thank you, hes had enough time to cement his shit

Tiny tits fetishists are just trapfags in denial.

>mommy
>daddy
disgusting tbqhwyf
/r9k/ is actually my second most browsed board after /g/. There are some pretty entertaining threads on there. It is an echo chamber for some negative emotions though. Also for the past couple of months the board as a whole has gotten pretty gay.

Yeah I did misunderstand that. I guess I'll swap Chains with Dream Gateway.

>Most people tend to focus on "never privacy" instead of "eternal support."
Privacy is for people who have something to hide. Irony btw

True, but you had to go through a nonpowered year first.

I like this, just don't make the Legend-hunter equivalents a bunch of moralfags like in the Hunter cyoa.

user won't scream a thing though. We either like to go full NEET with perfect life, or full CHAD with tons of power. It's the inbetween that we hate.

>Even Oki's target audience prefers a succubus...

It's pretty much all down to the love potion, makes her a loving waifu option in a CYOA of probably sexually interested roommates.

It's like a minor version of the immortality problem with CYOAs in that either all the options should have it or none of them should as otherwise you've thrown off balance by providing something that a proportion of people will always choose.

You either have to give some justification for all the waifus loving you (e.g. they're from the waifu dimension, Vampire Queens are just like that, etc.) or none of them.

Or just accept that Fei La is best.

>privacy is for people who have something to hide.
>"user is such a nerd. I had more fun in that stupid mirror. Why couldn't they give me to a cute guy. Uh? What... you heard that? Just a prank, user! Hehe..."

It's all fun and games till you overhear Twile's actual thoughts.

"11x11 = 121, 12x12 = 144, 13x13 = 169, 14x14 = 196, 15x15 = 225, 16x16 = 256, 17x17 = uh... it equals.... I forgot. Quick, I need more math problems before user finds out I love him. Um, um, 1x1 = 1, 2x2 = 2, 3x3 = what? You heard me say something? D-don't be silly. I'm just practicing my math. I wasn't thinking anything in particular.

If you say so. I'm pretty sure video games and the taste of food are way better than being a mirror in an office.

I'm actually not sure what i would do if i heard those words. If she hates me from the getgo then i guess I can't do much about it. I just have to put myself out their and hope for the best. Now if only i could find real life situations that i would want to put myself out their for.