CYOA general: The thread for general CYOAs

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UPDATE - Two new girls. A full 20 pages, now.
(1/20)

(4/20) - Fei La & Mishe
(5/20) - Twile & Harmony
(6/20) - Omne & Pan
(7/20) - Alice & Andrea
(8/20) - Kaila & Jeanne

Why is Erica the best girl?

(2/20)

(9/20) - Kataline & Floof
(10/20) - Saki & Oki
(11/20) - Chere & Yin
(12/20) - Lillan & Bloom
(13/20) - #056 "Bunny" & Medi

Because you believe she is the most attractive or has the best personality. People may disagree with you, but that is mostly because there is no objective best girl.

Uh.

Three-word descriptions sound interesting, at least.

Smug loli billionaire and demonic bully witch.
(3/20)

(14/20) - Flo & Beyn
(15/20) - Melody & Falchion
(16/20) - Caldera & Lyze

(20/20) - Miya

Whoops it didn't attach. Let's try that again.

(17/20) - Avarice & Hex

How does the first part of the Planar power work? I'm unsure.

I was right when I said these sounded interesting.

That was the NEW PAGE, by the way.
(18/20) - Library 1

I think there may be a typo in hex's description: just spend a few hours instead of house

Quick question; what would happen if I "accidentally" kill my new monstergirl roommate?

So if she's usually confident enough not to use Sex Money, does that mean sometimes she does work as a prostitute?

(19/20) - Library 2

Weird. When I proofread her actual page, I found that same typo, where she said she wasn't going to put on a maid house (uniform). I think I have houses on my mind. I'll post a fix in a second.

Glad you like it!

Well, definitely jailtime. Quite possibly for life. If they had any special connections, it could even be worse.

Huh Smug Loli actually interesting, and Hex is viable choice due to how varied her power are.
Infact Hex's up there with Fei La and Jeanne.

I like this Beri~

Huh, Thought the punishment for murdering monstergirls would be higher, given I'm being put in charge of them by an organization that deals with supernatural beings.

>Hex is literally an NTR option.
Why do people keep forcing this shit in?

What would being Hex's 'pet' entail?

>Soul
because Cosmic has a timer, and Mystic is being a nerd
>Ghost
Psionic's weirdmess factor is nice and all, but you can't compete with Ice magic
>Mobility evolved
gotta fuck up those nerds trying to flee
>Restoration
Since I didn't pick Evolved Form

Gotta fuck those Mystic nerds up.

Looks like she'll fuck you and turn you into soup and a maid like she does other people she kidnaps.

>this is OC btw

These new ones keep running into the problem where you make EVIL characters, in an organization that's trying to integrate humans and monsters. Avarice is generically evil rich person stereotype, which some can tolerate, but Hex literally kidnaps, tortures, and rapes people. Why would the organization tolerate that?

The full CYOA is
>9,600 words
and the intro is
>520 words
It's totally fine if you're turned off by that and you're not interested, or you're only reading the descriptions for the companions you want to bang.
The intro is basically "you're a character, not you transported to a magical world, and you'll basically become the #1 greatest guy of all time" in case you don't feel like reading it.
Again, that's totally fine.

>Page 1: 5276 words
>Page 2: 4333 words
>Average 150 words per companion

Oh, sweet, you redid this one!

My love for you repeats twice.

No, that means that sometimes she gets tired of being called a loli & otherwise bullied by Concupiscence.

Thanks, I'm really glad you enjoy it!

It really depends on their individual connections. There's a lot of people that wish Chere was dead. Sometimes, she's even one of them. There wouldn't be much consequence beyond normal murder charges, there.

(3/20) - I fixed that one typo. No *need* to save this, though, since it'll just update again when I add more.

Is she? She just wants you to help her torment people. Like a husband-and-wife supervillain kinda deal. She doesn't have sex with the kidnapped people. She'd rather call them pathetic after having orgasms from command alone.

She'd do the same sorts of things she does to other people, except more gentle about it, only doing the ones you're "okay" with, unless you make her mad. That makes the cards still useful if you take her bonus, because she won't be extra mean, even if you upset her.

Yeah, I'm turning away from the "evil" trend, now. The next pair won't be as grim.

No submissive option at all?

My Love for You at special is supposed to be 2 option? ~

>Is she?
He kidnaps people to 'play' with and uses her arousal powers to get them off.

>It isn't NTR to kidnap some married woman and force her to cum from you.
>It isn't NTR to you to kidnap random women and get them off.
No matter the method, doing these things is cheating.

I'm going to read it now and build for it but I already wanted to tell you that this looks amazing!

Turning away from the 'evil' trend doesn't make it less of a problem that it was a thing at all. It doesn't make sense for your organization to tolerate them.

What if they're singles and she doesn't lay a finger on them when casting Arouse?

AVARICE:
Can I take her up on her offer to find Concupiscence? /s

Orb of Life
Welfare - Could use more money for powers like this.

Money makes the world go round and round,,,

...Those seven sins in red are making me nervous.

Prime The Pump - Fuck up some commas, yeah! $40000 to $100000...

Sex Money - It feels good to do what I want! It feels good to see the disgust in their eyes!

Penny - I mean, the other two will bring horror and ruin to me...

Bonus - This isn't really an option you can choose yes or no to immediately, is it?

Ranks: #7, between Miya and Fei La. You might think I love her for her money but I know what I really love her for: it's the fetish bait. And also the money.

...Although I don't mind too much sin in real life, it seems a bit darker here, though (probably on purpose), and that's why she's not higher (which might be a good thing, all things considered. Especially because I'm an anti-capitalist).


HEX:
She submits as she dominates, she gets out of her head as she talks to the ceiling.

Dream Home
Library of the Supernatural - I read the description for Mini Soup, and I kind of draw the line at making people think they're going to die. While I'm almost never going to use it, I'm going to make sure she stays out of real trouble.

Cleanse - Stay clean!

Ideal Form - This should be interesting. For both me and people's therapists.

Portal Hole - Useful!

Bonus - I usually like this shit, but Magic Cards are useful when I'm too tired for this shit.

Ranks: #3, between Melody and Harmony. (What, no music-related name? Breaks the juxtaposition there). This is pure fetish bait and I am completely okay with this. Just... don't go overboard, or I might faint.

Then it's NTR to you, because she's doing magic sex things to people. It's like trying to say it's not cheating if she jerked some guy off with psychic powers. It's still her and her methods doing it.

Maybe that's why they're rooming them with you, so you can correct their behaviour with your justice boner.

How? No indication that you're expected to or method to do so is provided or suggested.

Thick headed also has Camoflauge's description.

If this is what you turn out, I regret being nice to you last thread.

Whoah, what the fuck happened? I went to bed like seven hours ago and everything suddenly turned into a huge discussion about the drawbacks Hero Academy?
Jeez, I didn't realize CYOAs were such serious business.

Doing this, but damn that's a lot of words. This is literally longer 4 times as long as my exam assignments for university's.

Is jacking off to chinese porn pictures NTR then? Because you're pleasuring yourself with your waifu, not your 3d gurl/guai/apache attack helicopter. Not that you have any, so a hypothetical question.

You shoould help them integrate with society user~ Isn't it's normal for to also correct their behaviour just like with lyze?

Everything is serious business when you're autistic enough.

>user is comparing masturbating yourself, to using your magic or psychic powers to get someone else off.
Are you stupid? Porn isn't real.

>CYOA about gentle femdom by a physically superior woman
>why isn't anyone into being user's fucktoy
gee I wonder why

She does things ironically. Sexual punishments apply to people that come on to her, ie people that aren't in a relationship / faithful.

Well, the library bonuses for Fei La don't apply to witches. Even if they have vaults full of Orbs of Life, they're a bit lacking in the justice department. But also, . It's the best way to deal with the problem that fits into their mission statement.

You don't like them, then... Well, I'm almost halfway done with the next page. Maybe it'll be more to your liking.

>not liking smug demon lolis
>not liking sociopathic dominatrix witches

For most user it's probably true as Emotionbal betrayal or something stupid like that.~

What type of cyoa would you like to come true, anons? A waifu cyoa or a cyoa where you get power(s)?

Neither is magic or psychic power, doesn't stop others from arguing about it.

>She does things ironically.
>She cheats on you ironically
Wow that totally makes it better. Not.

>Sexual punishments apply to people that come on to her...
No indication of that, doesn't mean she's not cheating on you when she does it.

...

Seven Sins. Superpowers that give me retarded powers + no one knows I have powers even when I use them right in front of them + it's on Earth + it's me, not a character = yes.

Well, to be fair, it's a less stupid idea than those two "Criminal Girls" CYOAs a while back.

If I could suspend my disbelief for that, it's a lot easier to suspend my disbelief for this.

I don't think you got what he meant...

>It's the best way to deal with the problem that fits into their mission statement.
But that's NOT a mission statement, don't you get it? You're giving us evil people and not telling us we're expected to reform them, not giving us the ability to, and are ACTIVELY ENCOURAGING us to do evil with them, sabotaging the group's goals.

You're right, I don't. Because nothing he said really counteracted what I was. He just said she's being 'ironic'. Doesn't mean she's not getting people off.

Well, I'm not Beri, but I could make an argument for the Library of the Supernatural (especially the two entries for the new, evil waifus) showing that the organization really does FIGHT FOR JUSTICE!

>ACTIVELY ENCOURAGING us to do evil with them

Are they? Or is the girls themselves, whose offers you can turn down?

>He likes cheating

Of course it's ironic user, afterall she cursed the one that flirt with her~

Salty user is salty~

This one?
I take you prefer power.

Maybe Avarice's, but Hex's only protects you, it doesn't help you stop her.

That part of the post is referring to Beri.

He means she's doing it as an ironic punishment instead of in a sexual/romantic way, like in, for example, Dante's Inferno.

Avarice seems dangerous, albeit, the lesser danger of the two

Is it possible for one to manage not to end up in crippling soul debt just by being careful, or would it require turbo-vigilance?

Couldn't finish reading Hex. Fucking disgusting.

It's not cheating if both knows user~

That doesn't mean she's not cheating by getting people off. Especially when they come to her and she indulges them. It's not saying being a prostitute isn't cheating because she's just doing it for work, not romantically.

Well, tax evasion is a horrible crime.
...Not what you meant?

Perhaps if you use it cleverly enough.

I disagree. Hex isn't actively malicious.

...Since this is just a CYOA, though, I can ignore both.

>Perhaps if you use it cleverly enough.
Being an annoyance doesn't change her personality, user.

A prostitute would get actual sexual pleasure from work; Hex is just doing it for (what I presume is) the smug feeling of poetic justice and nothing sexual.

Is it cheating if you play with your neighbors dog in front of neighbor? No it's not.
Well she also do it justforthelul...

>you prefer power.
I prefer power when no one knows I have it.
Pride 2/3 + Sloth 2/3 + Lust 1 is the greatest ever. Everyone assumes I have the best skills, I can live with people and they'll do whatever I say without question.
Power + no one questions my power, that's the best, user.

No, they really don't. It's just a job. If you're talking about the raw physical reaction, then that's not necessary either, footjobs, handjobs etc are things.

Playing isn't cheating. Sex is.

She's not even do any sex with her toys user, she only cast arouse.....

Okay, maybe they don't actually get much pleasure from the work, but theoretically speaking. You know what I mean.

So you want power and anonymity. That's reasonable.

Which is getting them off. She's using magic to satisfy them sexually.

I do, but that's why I mentioned handjobs and the like. A sex act doesn't need to be pleasurable to both parties.

Satisfy? Is it really satisfying instead of forcing them user?

Besideds if you really THAT desperate to say she's cheating, you always, you know, TALK to her?

Beri! Don't get discouraged because of these one or two negative responses!

Most of us still love this CYOA--in fact, this is statistically one of my favorite pages if I calculate the average ratings for both girls on them.

ay. It was going to be much bigger, with a Marketplace and library and I already planned 5 "chapters" you could read, like The Beginning of the World, the First War, how Hope came to be, but I couldn't add a CYOA element to it.
I'm sorry.
No. "My love for you is ticking clock" is a reference. You don't have to pick both, it's just, they're kinda opposite and amazing to have both.
thanks.

Apparently I fucked up with some discussion. Please, if you see more fuckups, let me know.
Yeah... It would've been more if I wrote those chapters out.

Guys, we haven't even had 100 posts yet and your already starting a shit storm? If your going to have one, at least wait until halfway through the thread.

Force? If you want to talk about force, are you implying that if she raped someone (which this basically is), then it's not cheating because she used force?

Cheating is an inexcusable act in a relationship. Talking about it or not.

> Satisfy
> Implying suddenly having a stiffy and no way to use it short of finding a bush is to wank off in is satisfying.

But I digress, this is another stupid conversation.

>79 replies
>16 IPs

I don't even wanna see how y'all are gonna react to my OC if I ever finish it.

>One or two
Ignorant. You don't have to suck his cock when he does something stupid.

>36k pixels wide

Maybe that's my fetish, user.

Does anyone have a good image for a:

>Blink style short range teleportation.
>Portal creation.
>Running fast.
>Person with wings.

yes, I suppose. I don't want people to know I have powers. I don't want people to expect me to be a hero, or to abuse my powers, to avoid me or know I did shit to them.
I guess I want both powers and to be comfy?

>one weapon, one armour, one object
>no "object" section

Does it mean I get one weapon, one armour and another one of either?

Aroused makes them orgasm too.

Don't lose your way user.

Good job, Beri.

>Orb of Life
>Surveillance
>Welfare

>Hex
>Yes to her offer
>Cleaning House
>Ideal Form
>Arouse
>Portal Hole

I would totally use Ideal Form on myself, because I want to be a little futa. I would use Arouse to bully the maids, and Portal hole for cheap travel to places I have been to (exactly how many of these holes do I have?).

I'm equally in love with and terrified of this CYOA. Soon enough it will eclipse the sheer insanity of Alice and ascend to the realm of legend.

Cheating imply she felt romantically to her toys user, now is she looks like attracted to her toys romantically? nope.

Saying cast arouse is a sex act is dumb user.

Also she told you about it when you met her, so it's not even "cheating" yet.

So you could talk her out of it if you so inclined.

Or you could just whine and whine user~

When Beri opens with a cuck CYOA, it can't be helped.

Both girls are shit.

Also, "My love for you" skill is there twice

I suppose this IS a way to be more strong...