CYOA General; Power>waifus edition

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Here is some OC for you guys.

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Does it have waifus?

No. It does not.

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I just looked over it.

You may be able to romance some of the characters, but trust me, you don't want to.

Then what's the point?

Although I understand why, I find it funny that the power "Seductress" is in a category different than the category "Seductress."

Good first attempt OP! But, try to make your next attempt at CYOA closer to

Power, dear user. The raw destructive power of the apocalypse being at your disposal is the point. to be able to decide the fate of entire nations and races is the point. Becoming a force of incredible power is the point.

Plus, there wasn't a four horseman cyoa yet and I wanted to make one.

This is like a more destructive, maybe edgier version of the Sins cyoa. Oh, and I pick Pestilence. We're going full Papa Nurgle.

Like I said, you CAN have waifus in this...

if you're into guro or something?

>Good first attempt.
I've made about three other pdf cyoas before this (one of which is being reworked, and the other needs a little lore but is mechanically finished.)

I choose to become the horsewoman of death! The vile plague of humanity has persisted to long! It's time to clean this place up!

If I'm deathless, then who will be my friend when humanity's gone?

I always knew I was some kind of sex demon on the inside.

This cyoa will never be finished just like the Short Superhero cyoa. So please stop posting it.

I'll be honest, that cyoa inspired me a little.
Also, I thought Famine would be better suited for the god of decay.

"Tortured Chaos."

That doesn't sound succubus-like at all! That sounds like some sort of edgelord!

Make a metal band.

>Deadly Curse

Wow, how fucking edgy is my name.

I'll be honest, Death sounds the least horrifying.

As such you are now named Egdenon go for and spread your edge

Nobody. Animals, maybe, but no humans. Though that should take quite a while given there are seven billion humans on the planet right now.

>wicked virgin
I can't even get any as a succubus...

Wait, I read it wrong. It's actually "Tortured Silk."

Which is better, but doesn't make much sense.

Not really a lot of choice here, OP.
>Pick a horseman
>The end
I feel like you could easily flesh this out over time. Add optional powers you can with points, add drawbacks like being hunted by another horseman, add options for escaping the cycle, etc.
Your writing is pretty good, but this seems kinda unfinished.

I'm picking Death too, we'll be Deathless buddies in a cold, dead world.

Blazed Heat, thanks mom.

>Eternal Goddess
Would be nice except I'm a guy.

Better than Wicked Chaos. I wanted something more sensual... like Sensual.

I feel your pain.

Not anymore.

But how can you two be Deathless if you're both Death?

Luscious Escort
Well then

>Tortured Escort
Well, it sort of fits. Not because I'm a masochist, but because I have really weird issues with sex, so being a sex demon would seriously fuck with me.

GODDAMMIT

I wasn't even paying attention to the numbers until now, but this was so close.

Anyone a sauce on tihs?

To be honest, I kind of wanted a simple cyoa to try out an Idea I've had for the longest time and to better my writing skills for lore. Will not try and flesh it out too much more (maybe some challenges) but will work on another cyoa.

Also, thanks for the compliment.

I posted it last thread for you.

Tower of God manhua.

>Off by one
Alternate universes, my man.

>Eternal Bliss

10 cyoas of your choice become animated movies/shows. What are they?

>Hardened Virgin
I'm not actually a succubus, I just take care of finances.
Sometimes you need to shank a bitch.

>erotic passion
Meh. at least the last part fits

It doesn't matter how many there are! It must be done! The old Gods command it! They chose me!

>we'll be Deathless buddies in a cold, dead world.

Ok!

>Delectable Virgin

Ooh sexy!

Oh well, not for me but thanks

>Hardened Virgin
God, that's too perfect.

I got that one too.

>loli

>Aphrodisiacs
>Relaxing area
>Charm
>seductress
>Ambrosia
>Lust eyes
>Flight
>Weirdness factor
>Metabolism
>Own production

>Lili
>Alli

it needs more depth.
or if i where to shitpost it at you "IT NEEDS MOAR MOAR!!!11ONE"

Traveler 10 times.

What do you mean by depth? I'm curious now, what can I do to improve it?

>Fierce Virgin
th-thanks

Like- what kind of story, it could work but you'd need to do it as a set of Stories about individual Travellers infinite-chan.

perhaps there is more to this world ending then simply four horsemen?

perhaps there are perks?
perhaps multiple horsemen that specialize in subschools of said horseman?
maybe more than four...'classes' many other religions have MANY different world ending entities or world STARTING entities that you could draw inspiration from?
perhaps you have a choice of settings (fantasy lands, grimdark future, modern day erf, etc.)

which direction do you want to go? there are many types of depth. hell look at traveler or star dust or any of the big wig cyoas.

maybe you've got a new big wig idea churning...

Monster Hunter Anime
Kingdom Crusher/Diplomacy tv or animated show.
Dungeon-meister anime
Battlemage anime
Overlord show
Solar Inheritance show

But why keep asking, user?

Thanks to one of you jackasses sending me this, I'm now Eternal Virgin, the neckbeard succubus.

Good luck finding the spirit energy you need to live.

Saw this posted last thread but hadn't had a chance to make a build. I'll post then read.

Warm Chaos

I feel like this name generator has a whole lot of dud options.

Thumbs up from me mate. Nicely done so far, will post proper feedback in a mo.

While this sounds good, when I was creating this I wanted a simple one choice cyoa, much like pic related (has been a decent influence, thanks again Quiet.). Though If complexity and depth is what you want, I have good news for you.

I am currently working on the remake of the energy cyoa to add more lore, perks, and companions (maybe now I will add a faction or two.) However, I have run into a few problems. Firstly, I am not sure whether to make the cyoa a form of mid fantasy (only a few know magic and creatures like werewolves don't exist) or soft sci-fi. Secondly, I still need to work on companion backstories and names, which might take a while (though I am taking suggestions if anyone wants to leave one.)

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So the Avatar of Hope lived, on average, 19.99 years each life? That's a bit shit.

>Blazed pleasure

Hope you're all ready to get high.

>Big
>Aphrodisiacs
>Love potion
>Relaxing area
>Charm
>Induce arousal
>Targeted arousal
>Flight
>Metabolism
>Own production
>Alli
>Remme

"Blazed Agony"

Oh god, I've become That Guy

Alas, I lost my stardust folder and I wish to restore it. Post the recent stardust along with the dlc/romance/modules if you have it. Here's some art in the meantime.

>Tortured Compassion

Fitting.

kiss the cyoa author

apparently Veeky Forums hates my pngs now

>Alluring Bliss
That's fine.

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Pride is the best by far in terms of abilities, followed by Sloth.

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True, but Gluttony has the potential for the most raw power.

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and i think that's it

also updated one portrait in this one because it was outdated

>Luscious Chaos

I can live with this.

>Class
Vanguard. Adaptability and survivability are good traits, and a good starting point when I hope to have a very long lifetime of experience.

>Weapon
Dearg.
Speaking of adaptability, spears are very flexible weapons and having anti-magic capabilities are very important to me.

>Armor
Revier.
Speed and Maneuverability. Soar was another close choice but I think I'll take the lightning over it. It's close enough that I'd probably pick whichever one looked coolest, to be honest.

>General Skills
Stamina
Camouflage
Tame
Packmule
Acrobatics
Hot Blooded*
Cold Blooded*
Really stressing the theme of survival here. I can go just about anywhere and be unnoticed while I'm there. Tame is a great combination with Camouflage and while Breath would be another important skill I just don't have room for it. Packmule is maybe not as important and Quick Study just sounds like something everyone in this position would have.

>Special Skills
"My love for you...
Indomitable
"My love for you... combos well with Stamina to help ensure I'm at the top of my game most of the time. Indomitable is almost a must-pick for me in a setting that even hints at mind-altering enemies.

>Basic Spells
Blink
Purify
Analyze Item
Grappling Hook
Hyper Jump
Earth Wall
Utility spells, mostly. Planning to mostly rely on my strength and my spear when directly in combat.

>Advanced Spells
Nullify
Air Burst
Arc Lightning
Cure
Heal Major
Second verse, same as the first. Decided to take one direct-damage spell in Arc Lightning instead of Shockwave, figuring that Air Burst could handle the knockback role.

>Companions
Emilia
Hell yeah. Girl's gonna get buff working with me and we can tell her parents to frick off.
Ann
I swear I'm not just picking battle waifus! Ann's skill in tactics and strategy is definitely something I'll need starting out.
Aron
Seems very bro-status and I admire his drive and work ethic. Kind of a poor move with that childhood friend, though.

>Branded Goddess

i sound like a tavern

Succubus Time!

Body Type
>Big

Perks
>Passive-Aphrodisiacs,Relaxing Area,=2
>Active-Lewd Area=1
>Seductress-,Ambrosia,Round Two=2
>Misc-Flight,Tail Control,Weirdness Factor,Metabolism,Increased Production=5

Roommates
>Alli and Keki

Thank you senpai I bestow upon you the blessings of a thousand stars

>Luscious Ecstasy
Hmm, not too bad I guess, I'd probably go by Lu to keep it simple

Where we at so far.

Loli
Own Production(9)
Increased Production(8)
Ambrosia(7)
Aphrodisiac(6)
Relaxing Area(5)
Charm(4)
Emotion Link(2)
Seductress(1)
Tail Control(0)

Remme, Alli.

Quiet stop posting and get back to work. That way we can get further.

thanks, i will tell the cosmic neighborhood of your doings

but i'm not muslim

O-Ok...

I am going to make it hurt user. And, you're going to like it.

>m-muh symbology

Looking forward to it.

>Got deleted despite not being a roll CYOA

Please make it hurt, Quiet. I like it that way.

>Pure Blood
I was bit by a wereloli

can anyone post the newest version of this?
thx

Hey, just had a question for everyone, what do you think about Portland, Oregon as a city-state for Urban Fantasy?

I went there about five years ago and liked it, so I did write it up a while back but now I'm not sure if I should put it in.

Sounds good.

I'd fucking love it

Yeah, totally. Just finished. My fever got worse, so I didn't proofread it. I don't think proofreading would do much in the state I'm in.

UPDATE - 2 new girls.
(1/20)

(4/20) - → Fei La & Mishe
(5/20) - → Twile & Harmony
(6/20) - → Omne & Pan
(7/20) - → Alice & Andrea
(8/20) - → Kaila & Jeanne

It's in the last thread, at the top.

20 images? Nigga make a pdf