CYOA General

You forgot to post the picture of that serious looking fish guy from Spongebob.

Other than that, it's a pretty magnificent new pasta. Delicious.

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MInd Control DLC per request

This is the creepiest cyoa I've ever seen. Good job?

You must be very, very new to Veeky Forums if cute lolis creep you out. They're not even doing anything sexual.

>Making an cyoa
>Not sure whether to make it a choose one or a multiple choice with rewards for particular choices.

What would you guys recommend?

Multiple, choose one is boring.

No, what creeps me out is that it's a lolicon cyoa subtly - or trying to be subtle - disguised as a daughteru cyoa. I can imagine the type of creep who plays that cyoa reading through those descriptions and weighing the pros and cons of which underage girl he's going to rape. Messed up.

Reward with particular choices.
>not wanting a daughterfu to protect
What's creepy about it?

Kamiko, all day every day.
>Befriend the young girl
>Treat her well, buy her books, a laptop and help her develop her writing skills
>Introduce her to RPGs as another outlet for her creativity
>When she is willing, have her take me into her written world
>Go on adventures of high fantasy, soft sci-fi and other wonderous worlds
>Hold her hand and giver her head-pats

On a side note, I'm making a cyoa that is a kinda mashup of this one and the Alice one (basically a "roll and choose your own magical girl"). Any suggestions or tips? I was going to do point buy and have stats but the last time I commented on that you all seemed apprehensive about that.

If that creeps you out, you are also new to Veeky Forums, a website founded by lolicons. Hell, getting offended by ANYONES fake fetish is pathetic here, and incredibly childish.

But you know, this may come as a surprise to you, but plenty of people really do want to raise children purely. It's a natural instinct. Even plenty of the lolicons wouldn't be able to go through with it and would just be a regular dad. Hell there used to be a comic like that which got posted all the time.

So, what you're saying is that you're a pedophile.

That's some pretty lewd thoughts you have there about children user. You should get that checked out.
Kamiko so we can go on storybook adventures and I can help her get better with people by interacting with fake ones. I'll even write books with her.

>choose one is boring.
I kindly disagree with that sentiment.

Stats are fine if you're going for a fantasy approach, because then stuff like strength, endurance etc will actually matter. If it's a mundane setting they're not needed.

He can't get those kinds of lewd thoughts out of his head, so most likely.

Nope. Still intend to do it but I'm just not doing it at the moment. It'd get in the way of my watching episode after episode of King of the Hill.

Got to be in the right mindset to do something, I'm the sort of person that gets in that mindset only once or twice every several months.

Yeah it's not bad. It's not exactly a talking dog though.

Pic is a failed applicant, background didn't work.

Have an option that let's you build your own girl as well as picking out existing ones.
Have quests and/or complications to overcome
Choose favorite foods and activities (Swing sets, coloring books, tag, watching cartoons, etc. )
The place where you'll live

I'm just looking for comfy times.

I'm think 4 stats
Athletics
Smarts
Health
Magic
I was thinking of having a charisma like stat but scrapped it in favor of rolling their Briggs-Meyer Personality.

Do you need to change the background color or remove it completely? Since it's a solid color should be pretty easy to change.

C-can I play a (m) bodyguard and marry Prince Cael?

Gonna dump the whole thing.

You'll be able to pick three things about them and if you take complications you get more (capping it at two complications).

Quests are a given, it will have 10 to pick, roll for.

Comfy things will also be a thing in that one rolls for their hobbies, houses grant a passive boon, etc.
It's a bit of work, but I'm hopeful I can pull it off.

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Problem is basically that he's not standing on anything.

Fairy King is going to be a lot less consistent in art style as I couldn't find enough decent art of fairies all by the same artist but the dog without anything in the background really doesn't look right when put on the same page as the others.

This picture is probably the most distinct from the style of the dog. Sort of feel like they could sit at opposite ends of the page okay if the dog wasn't standing in the void.

>you're a pedophile for acknowledging that daughteru cyoas are not intended for the purehearted childless maidens of cyoag

Projecting much.

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And the "DLC"

>projecting your latent pedophilic desires onto other people

>gain technology/magic/symbiotes/whatever capable of incredible mind control and more
>use it to build a harem

This is why men are the inferior sex.

Don't you think Briggs-Meyer is too... uncute?

The concept of projection is likely why that user came to that conclusion.
It's fickle, isn't it?

What would you use then?

>no you
No. You!

>calling out pedophiles mean you're a pedophile

>maidens
Sexist much? Guys want kids too to take care of, and some girls are lolicons.
This cyoa creeps me out because I know it's subtly meant for ring fuckers.

Why not use the classical fairy hound? A huge scary dog, either black or green depending on where you are. Just your typical cu sith.

>I know it's subtly meant for ring fuckers.
What?

Single guys who want children are laten pedophiles. Except if they're gay. Then it's just their feminine instincts kicking in. Single straight guys who want children should be put on a watchlist though. That cyoa should be great for singling them out.

>Declaring that you can't help but think of innocent young girls in lewd ways and pant breathily as you insult those nasty predators that'll take advantage of them.
>Calling anyone out but yourself.

Scratch Briggs-Meyer, going with this

Sort of the idea initially but getting magical dog is harder than it should be. Finding a good picture of a magical dog that looks nervous is even worse.

>implying a woman can be a pedophile

Sorry user, I'm just worried for all those fictional girls who'll be raped by nasty anons.

Can't you just write out personality traits on your own?

Could work, but you'll have to cut out quite a few if they're all going to be little girls. Unless you're planning on including vampires and other 'older than they look' archetypes.

B

Justify all those teachers who keep raping their school students then.

I'm going to trim that list down to 19 (roll a 20 and pick one of your choice)

Exactly.

Gonna post some cyoa.

Still working on companions for the Universal War CYOA.

If anyone wants to make one, I may add them of they're interesting enough

Here's the template for those that missed it before

Name, title, homeland
Quick sentence description
+ positive trait
+ positive trait
+positive trait
+/- mixed trait (optional)
- negative trait
- negative trait
Character quote

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I know what you're doing, author-san. Do your own work!

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Don Chupetin Constantin, Protector de los Inocentes

This valiant Knight protects all who are truly innocent, especially the children of the worlds.

+ brave, loyal and determined
+ brilliant strategist and swordfighter capable of defeating many an enemy a "mere" swordfighter should not be capable of defeating
+ trusty horse can carry both of you if needed
+/- will chase perceived pedophiles halfway across the world to lay justice on them
- will not stop talking about the innocent children he wishes to protect
- could be just a tad bit obsessed with this whole protecting the children thing
- no self awareness whatsoever

"That young girl! See how her gentle legs tire and her tender hips tremble at every step! Quick, I shall carry her!"

Really love this one

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Shut it, anime poster. I have at least two dozen Companions written already. I just like to include you all.

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So do you like rape cyoas or just shit cyoas in general?

I'll never regret bullying the author away.

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Yeah, right. Now shoo! Do your own work!

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>two dozen
Calm down bro

Not subtle enough.

Yeah well you're a douche.

House Apollo for life.

Insult me more, daddy.

Fuck you

I'm with you man.

house hermes
attributes
allulre 3
elusive 2
force 2
study 2
threat 2
favorite class art, business, law, animal handling, biology, chemistry, computer science, dancing, driving, engineering, history, home economics, journalism, language arts, magic, math, medicine, music, physical education, physics, psychology, self defense, and theology

flaws minions, flight, incredible size, venom, monster, authority and flunkies

physical
artifact armor, artifact weapon and athletic

social clique, friendly, lesser enemy and wealth

dominant competitive and feared
inhuman amphibious
mysteries amnesiac teacher, discipline comitte election, dryad's blessing, fairy rings, ghost hunters club, magical girl, martyr;s grail, monster repellant, rapture herald, rising star and wishing well

Shit attributes. Enjoy getting raped.

I like CYOAs because they are inspirational.

This cyoa is so ancient that if you haven't seen it by now, you must be fresh off the boat from reddit or something

It's definitely on there, I've seen it.

I've seen it before, I just like repeating how creepy daughteru cyoas are. Especially when they're of the non-blood related variety.

You're pretty hung up on this guy.

I'm trying to get some discussion going and where the fuck are the americans?

Present, faggot.

You called?

Liar. Americans are incapable of being quiet. We'd notice when they get here.

If you want this, you gotta put a ring on it.

Here

I live in America at the moment, does that count?

I've been here all day slut.

That depends on where you're from originally.

American standing by

Bored.

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Sweden. Does that count?