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David Hill
I did that once, too. I even asked if he could help me figure out a way to make it happen. He refused.
Kevin Anderson
Posting some WIP OC to get critique/help motivate me to finish.
To give people an idea of what's coming, the Aspects/Powers section will, on the Left side, contain aspects of the Familiar that a Master might want their succubus to have (for example, heightened libido, addiction to semen, extra erogenous zones, and so on) while the Right side will contain your basic succubus/demonic powers - shapeshifting, hellfire, anything a new Demon might want to be able to do.
The next page will start out with Terms of Contract. The Left side here will contain the actual things that the Familiar will actually have to do for their Master. Note that you'll have to take clauses here for your Familiar to actually be required to use powers purchased in the above section for you (so getting coins back by giving your familiar powers will be negated.) The Right side will contain clauses that will give the Succubus leeway in obeying the master, as well as additional connections within Hell (for example, a "Friends on the Other Side" clause that gives you connections in hell that can punish your master if he abuses you.)
The final section will be some general perks and flaws that cost the same for either Master or Succubus - things like "You have to share your succubus/be shared by multiple masters".
Thoughts? I'm open to suggestions and criticism, there's lots more for me to do on this... and I'm terrible at GIMP.
Bentley Foster
I'd get myself drunk, go out into the forest area nearby so I'd be found in the morning, and cut my arms up.
Problem with pills is you don't know how many to take, and there's time to change your mind. You could end up alive with liver damage and you'll have to spend time in a nuthouse.
The asshole wouldn't give me any pills.
Parker Price
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Please. Don't kill yourself, but also don't talk about it here, this isn't the place.
Parker Robinson
The only advice I can give is to continue what you're doing.
You're doing the Lord's work, son.
Angel Thomas
But they're going to continue talking about their sad miserable lives here and when they're not doing that they're shitposting.
Julian Russell
I like how you get option to both be/have a succubi.
It sounds like a proper build would need you to run down both sides, correct? To create either your succubi or the terms of contract with your master.
All in all, it seems interesting.
Ethan Ross
I'm not going to, it would be a hassle for everyone.
I just wanted some pills that could kill all thoughts, but nope. Can't get that.
Adrian Reyes
Thanks! I wanted to make a lewd CYOA that actually appeals to both the "I want a waifu/fuckbuddy" and the "I want to be the waifu/fuckbuddy" crowds at the same time.
>It sounds like a proper build would need you to run down both sides, correct?
Yea, I haven't determined the exact prices for things yet, but the starting Coins won't be enough to really get anything - you'll have to take some options from the opposite side, and in the Contract section there will be certain things you'll get no matter what (since you have to have some kind of contract.)