CYOA General

Does the element take up a choice?

Yes it does. Sorry if I didn't make that clear.

Fire
|Pyrokinesis
|Heat Resistance
|Ignite Passions
|Lava Manipulation
\White Fire
Water
|Calm
\Purify

Name: Rowan
>Lunestier

Courses taken:
Martial Combat (2)
Elemental Magic (3)
Aerial Combat (3)
Magic Refinement (2)
(I'm sorry, Setsuna, but I can't join you. RYOUMA HERE I COME MAH NIG)

Companions: Luvnya, Valerie Bluewood, Tennie Northbreed, Mecherath, Suzette Highking

Events:
The Gran- Great Tournament: The Great Hunt(Year 1, 3, 5), Battle Royale (Year 2)
The Harvest Festival: Escort (Year 4)
The Grand Summit: Security (Year 4)
The Gathering of Life: Bodyguard (Year 3), Blind Date (Year 2)
(Dem tigrexes tho)

Well, this is... my story. It's... kinda weird, kinda long, but... I think it was a good story, at least.

It all began when Valerie mentioned that her parents were planning on sending her off to Lunestier one day. Of the four of us, I think only Malyvin applied for a hero academy at that time. I mean, he was a good kid and all, and he usually needed one of us to keep his laziness in check, but I'm sure he'd shape up in time. Val, though, wasn't even really choosing. Lunestier was pretty much the hero academy for nobles, though, so it wasn't that big a surprise. Luvy and I decided that we'd apply for Lunestier, too.

And so, it began. The three of us all would take courses in Martial Combat (Valerie, of course, was the best out of us in that), Luvy and I would take courses in Elemental Magic (she was quite good with air magic, which is fitting, to say the least), and I... decided to take courses in Aerial Combat. I was always interested in flying. The wyvern riders I saw flying overhead back home seemed... so carefree, and happy.

Oh, how wrong was I in believing that.

I think I may have misunderstood your question.

Drop calm.

Don't worry about it. Mops is barely coherent at the best of times.

She sounds like a person who has failed high school English multiple times.

Okay, just for clarification, when I said you had to buy the element, I meant the ability to manipulate it (pyrokinesis, hydrokinesis, etc.) Sorry for the confusion.

I'm on my phone, can someone post an Alice? It's a great timewaster on train rides

How do I summon Angelanon and get her to lewdpost with me?

Again?

Call her OC characters shit to summon, then slowly deviate towards lewdposting.

betrayal sounds awesome, i can make Crossed happen

This frog is sad because he doesn't have any OC.
Can you guys help cheer him up?

Literally the first post in the thread.
You can stop frogposting now. Maybe you could even make some OC yourself.

I was actually going to post an update for my CYOA, even though posted his own OC. But you made me change my mind and I'll wait for a bit.

It doesn't matter what I'm cursed with.
I'm finally blessed with a reason to kill my self.

Ragnarok
475 points

Fairy/dragon [450]
Draco meteor, Dragon Pulse, Moonblast, Light of Ruin
Sturdy

Special attack +6. 300 sp.a [330]
Attack +0 0 a [330]
Defense +5 250d [230]
sp.defense +5 250 sp.d [130]
speed +2 s 100 [100]
health +3 h 150 [30]
azura flute [25]
mysterious ring [10]
city [-50]

12 companions
Tex
Flafnir [11]
Wiggle [10]
Xyel [9]
Jane [use mysterious ring]
grim [8]
loki [7]
Xana [6]
Bow [3]
D [0]

The cult of nox [-25]
The end [-0]

I like it but there are not enough ragnarok companions.

>I'm looking for that random powers CYOA, the one with 10d164, the deals and the challenges.

Mission complete.

I only made it into the previous thread at the last minute. So I decided to repost.

Easy enough since it's the truth. It'd be nice to see something more interesting than a healing based angelic character every once in awhile.

You better not be the atention whore from wed.

>Earth
Geokinesis
Miner
Seismic Waves
Eye for Wealth
Living Stone
>Metal
Ferrokinesis

give rocks

>White Fire
>Get knocked up
>Crematory fourth trimester abortion
>???
>Profit

Looks good. Water is missing it's title on pg 1 just fyi.

Whatever happened to this CYOA?
I remember seeing it a couple of months back.

I like it, but wouldn't 10 powers in total round off builds a bit better than 8? Just my two cents, though.

Also, I think it would do your CYOA will to include ways to stop and reverse aging for Hyper Metal and Generator, too.

Why would something happen to it?

But hyper metal has the age slowing reinforcement, which I think is better suited for Metal.

Meant Metal has Reinforcement, which slows ageing. Ignore the previous post.

Probably not. I was working on Wednesday.

Okay, a reasonable amount of time has passed. I'll post my update in a few minutes, once I finish compiling this damn thing.

Hopefully no one will go blind like the last time.

thanks for the Kipchaks user

Just how slow is 'further than a crawl' for Reinforce?
100 times slower? 1000 times?

Initially, I wanted to make things less complicated for you all and rearrange things in a better way.

But then I gave up and made everything even more complex.

>But then I gave up and made everything even more complex.
This brings me immense joy.

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Pffft. I like you.

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I remember seeing a page from an incomplete CYOA where you had to choose a city. Some of the choices were Berlin, Chicago, London and Shanghai if I'm not mistaken

Does anyone know what I'm talking about?

And I believe that's it. I'll bugger off back into the darkness I came from now. Please don't turn the thread into a shitfest like the last time.

It was probably Urban Fantasy.

Haven't heard from the author since he announced his journey to the west (or more specifically, from somewhere in the Middle East or thereabouts to the US of A).

probably quiet's urban fantasy thing. Her family found out she's a fuji, and now they're making her take a virginity test before she's allowed to use the computer again.

Pyrokinesis, Aquakinesis, Aerokinesis, Geokinesis, Ferrokinesis, Cryokinesis,
Electrokinesis, Heat resistance. I am the Avatar.

The CYOA in the OP is not OC, it's an old one.

I know, I just missclicked.

Oh. So it was never finished then, ok. That sucks, it looked really good

Thanks for changing the portrait of Uliana! now is 100% better

Hell yeah, motherfucker. I was so wating for this, time to read all those hordes of pages.

Sweet, I'll look it over and try and post a build.
Cossaks 4 lyfe.

Why are you so obsessed with everyone being a girl?

>Getting rid of the concubines law.

0/10 would not make a build for.

>she's a fuji
What's a fuji?

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A mountain.

Japan is very concerned about the virginity of its natural landmarks.

It's a good descision even if it means i won't be able to take my Diadochia as i probably would need Vasilisa's bonuses. Didn't read all of the update yet, but hard descisiond like that are always good, eve if we wish to have just a bit more.

meant fujo.

only lesbians would put up with all the abusive femdom found itt, user.

So if a baka gajin climbs up to her top she would be ruined forever?

Only if you put your dick in her.

yeah mang that's it

Thanks, you are the best.

Can anybody post the latest version of Emperor Quest

Ok im improving my shit..
>Name
Vardik Menna

>Academy
Lunestier

>Classes
Lunestier:
x1 Deplomacy (Because i belive debating is essential to logic)
x1 Arial Combat (Controlling the high ground is allways usefull)
x1 Magic Refinement (Maybe this is what i use the logic for.)
x1 Duelling (People must be ready to back up their convictions with enough force to fullfill them. Not like some undiciplined rabble brawling to get their own way, but a refined and noble art.)

Regular:
x3 Tactics (Master)
x2 Summoning Magic (Advanced)
x1 Martial Combat

Exchange student:
Odesium:
x1 Enhancement

>Companions
Valerie Bluewood
Yung Tashi
Mecherath

>Events
The Great Tournament: The great hunt
The Harvest Festival: Fund raising
The Grand Summit: Research Proposal

>Clubs
Cultural Club: Boardgames.
Educational Club: Debating.

>Drawbacks
Exchange program. -1 friend. (Who needs more than 3 close friends?)

Background:
Vardik is a tactics geek, he enjoys simulating great battles in his head and developing military strategies and tactics to use vertually anyones talents to the peak of their ability. To this end he has even studied summoning magic and learnt how to use animals abilities in some pretty esoteric and unusual strategies, stiking bargains with them using his diplomacy. Hes also studied arial combat as part of the recommended Lunestier carriculum and so seeks to form compacts with flying animals aswell as terrestrial. Hes pretty socially inept but he might be overheard talking to his friends about using great eagles to deliver warbears to the battlefield, though he doesnt understand how lame he sounds.

Continued.

Continued

Vardik has a pretty strong sense of morality though, and would never enter into a compact with an animal that wasnt mutually beneficial, because of this he has made friends with Valerie Bluedwood. But stragely as if the opposite, they are also friends with Yung Tashi and appreciate his enterprising mind aswell as his unusual ways of getting what hes after. Tashi is a tactician of his own style.

Lastly Machearth joined the group for some reason, its said she has dirt on everyone, including something really embarressing about Vardik which he cant bare to talk about. However she doesnt manipulate eveyone in the group so hard, and sometimes enjoys kicking back and relaxing with them when not playing around with other groups and people.

You mean
stick your flag in her

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>I gave up and made everything even more complex.
Good.

I'll make a build late tonight.

Metal:
Industrial Knowledge
Reinforce
Will of Iron
Hyper Metal

Electricity:
Electrical Knowledge
Energize

I'm gonna make a suit of powered armor.
IN A CAVE!! WITH A BOX OF SCRAPS!!

Was re-reading what I've posted and only just noticed that I made a mistake. One of the vassals' text says that he will give +10 loyalty to all factions for each holding that he owns. The catch is that there is no measuring system for the factions... I forgot to implement it. Whoops.

Just assume that he makes factions vaguely more loyal or something.

Definitely making a The Bastard [Upbringing] + Agnes [Spouse] build to spam laws.

There will be many Crown Sorcerers.

I'm not making a build for this, but it looks prettier than the first version, so good job there.

A little nitpick for a spouse page: knyzhna is the knyaz's daughter, knyaz's wife is knyaginya.

But I was mostly correct - I generally referred to them as knyazhnas since they too, daughters of knyazes before they marry (well, most of them). Also I think it just works better in English that way.

Fuck yeah, my fellow slavic-american compatriot.

Now expand Blood Magic. People's main concern is the sacrifice system. I suggest toning every sacrifice level down to make spells more accessible, otherwise actual wizard seem much more powerful than blood mages in a direct confrontation.

Updated build for new version! Kind of sad I can't have a wife now:(

Anastasiiya Vasnetsov Sviatoslavovich
>Glory 9
>Honor 1
>Will 4

Background
>Red Season
>The Maiden
>The Kladenets (Dragonslaying)
>Vasnetsov Dynasty
>Sviatoslavovich Branch
>Cult of Svarog

Skills 75
>Leadership 75
>Strategy (Svarog)
>Dragonslaying (Svarog)
>Protection (Svarog)
>Logistics (Spouse Ability)
>Fortification (Spouse Ability)

Lands
>Hereditary Monarchy
>Northern Straights (Capital)
>Okhta (Crown Land)
>Lada (Crown Land)
>Kitej (Feudal-Nikita)
>Severia (Frontier)
>Nikita Popov
>Svyatogor
>Total Warlord
Money 3000
>Helgi The Seer Military Access 500
>Ivan The Fearsome Alliance and Military Access 1900
>Detinets 2100
>Port 2350
>Watchtowers 2500
>Treaty In Black 3000
>0% Revolt Risk

Army 4250
>Dragon 200
>Rusalka 250
>Leshik 350
>Domovoy 425
>Bolotnik 525
>War Mammoths 1275
>Bear Cavalry (x2) 2275
>Firstborns (x4) 3275
>Frontier Gunners (x3) 4175
>Village Militia 4225

Will write up story next!

Because it's not finished, there is no quest page, no complications, etc. It could do with a little more, because it's an interesting concept.

>slavic-american
>american

Take those words back.

>Blood Magic

Eh, I'll hold a grand council to ask what other people want too. Just a bit later.

I'll give everyone an update soon.

we believe in you fampai.

People bitched and moaned about the cat people. I think it caused the author to leave.

All Veeky Forums does it drive away authors.

Scroll up two posts. He's right there.

Yeah, they are knyazhnas as we meet them, but the way it is phrased seems like it speaks about a woman beside the knyaz. But whatever, english speakers wil see no difference.

Yeah, I remember that. The guy who was bitching about it was a real autist.

>Hydrokinesis
>Calm
>Purify
>Cryokinesis
>Calm
>Purify
>Freezing Aura
>Eternal Ice

>Hydrokinesis
>Weather Manipulation (Water)
>Electrokinesis
>Weather Manipulation (Lightning)
>Aerokinesis
>Weather Manipulation (Wind)
>Flight
>Divine Wind

Pretty cool.
Basically Storm, then?

Ferrokinesis
Magnetism (Metal)
Industrial Knowledge
Reinforce
Electrokinesis
Magnetism (Electricity)
Electrical Knowledge
Energize

I will never lose my keys again. I will finally stop breaking everything I touch. Whenever I end up breaking my headphones for the hundredth time, I can fix them. Hopefully. Those repeated all-nighters will stop bothering me.