/cyoag/ - CYOA General: Just Like My Animu! Edition

5/6

>Quests have been removed
:^)

6/6

This was going to have a supplement with player builds for companions.
I guess that didn't work out?

Alright quester. Thanks for trying to make your own side look bad.

>le ebin slippery slope maymay

Anyway, have more CYOAs because I don't like shitposting without actual content.

...

>

...

>(You)

...

...

...

Name: Lindaswen Thereliel (goes by Lindas)

>Lunestier

>Arcane Magic x3
>Summoning Magic x3
>Tactics x3
>Magic Refinement
>Maneuvers x2

>Valerie Bluewood
>Allyce Westhold
>Crale Edwards
>Tennie Northbreed

>The Great Hunt (every year)
>Security
>Bodyguard

>Art/Music
>Paranormal Research

>Bookworm

I was a orphan adopted by Lunestier groundskeeper. A teacher saw that I have strong innate magical skills. So I got accepted in the prestigious magical school.

Hopefully with my summoning magic and tactics I can basically become a general of my own magic army and I can use arcane magic to protect myself and support my army. After graduation my friends and I can go on quests to find treasures and lost knowledge and help protect peasants and kingdoms. After I become stronger, I can take over a old castle as base and start small Queendom of magical creatures summoned from the different planes. Then become a famous mercenary company and have my magic army help settle conflicts in exchange for extravagant gifts and titles.

Eventually have more titles than all those pompous spoiled students at school who wouldn't except me because I'm "poor" and "low class".

...

Universal War

The more I see this the more I am annoyed by it.
I get that it's your fantasy and that we're in no way hurt by you being a Mary sue in your own story.
But I mean, damn, you go out and find a spot with a castle and become queen. What's more, your classmates have been picking their noses, accomplishing nothing, all the while so you can lord your superiority over them.
I get that I'm being petty for complaining about a CYOA build, but you keep reposting it like you'remassively proud of it.

Those must some real scrub tier summons if you can summon so many of them.

Just be glad the grammar doesn't give you an aneurysm.

What do you It woul be like being married to constel?

>St. Flares

>First Aid, Tactics, Unarmed Combat, Elemental Magic x3, Survival, Blue Magic x3

>Luvyna, Valerie, Malyvin, Eloise, Kit

>The Great Hunt, Fund Raising, Security
>Bodyguard x2, Battle Royal x2, Escort

>Paranormal Research Club, Art/Music Clubs (Sculpting Club)

HAHAHAHAHA

>you go out and find a spot with a castle and become queen
>your classmates have been picking their noses, accomplishing nothing, all the while so you can lord your superiority over them

Maybe Lindas' goal is to have more titles and recognition than classmates, but it's always a uphill battle full of as many misadventures and setbacks as successes. And maybe fact that Lindas is really just a mercenary leader based in the ruins of an abandoned castle and "Queen" of a tiny area that isn't actually recognized as a country by anybody is a source of constant frustration, which reminding her of can lead to severe punishment or death. But no matter what, she never gives up the fight!

Well it's a army, so most of summons are just minions. There'd be a few powerful ones there to though.

Wealth. Body is extremely limited, mind means abandoning my humanity, power requires juggling a billion different balls, and faith requires faith in myself. But wealth can buy me whatever I need, if I'm understanding that supernatural purchasing ability correctly. Sure it's the second least-stable, but l have faith in humanity's desire for more.

Could you at least say "this is about Pokemon Personified"?
I know asking you to write a coherent sentence would be too much, but you should be capable of that much.

The Lovers
Angel's Face, Pursuers (37)

>Personal
Twin Souls
Shapeshifting 2 (35)
Beauty 2 (33)
Scanner 2 (31)
Immunity 2 (29)
Miracles 2 (27)
Survivalist 2 (25)
Constructs 2 (23)
Training 2 (21)
Animus 3 (18)
Alchemist 3 (15)
Endurance 2 (12)
Evolution 3 [Ranged attacks] (9)
Regeneration 3 (6)
Toughness 3 (3)
Elemental 1 [Earth] (2)
Telepathy 2 (0)

>Lover Build
Toughness 3 (17)
Muscle Mass 3 (14)
Regeneration 3 (11)
Speed 2 (9)
Evolution 3 (6)
Destroyer 2 [Personal] (4)
Elemental 3 [Air] (1)
Endurance 1 (0)

>Lover's Stones
Magus Gem [Occultist] (15)
Melee Weapon [Special, Light] (9)
Saving the rest.

>Personal Stones
Magus Gem [Mentality] (150)
Blue Box Armoire 2 (135)
Handy Bag (127)
Universal Maps (118)
Blue Crest Seal (98)
Ammo Vault (90)
Battle Moon (86)
Gravity Gun (82)
Servitors [Synths] (64)

Saving the rest.

>Companions
Lover. Galatea. (Free)
Athena Hawkwood (Paid for)
Jeweled Maiden (5)
The Muses (4)
Xath (3)
Alfonso (2)
Dean Winchester (1)
Sphene (0)

My current ideas for a different RWBY cyoa:
- A level of power selection. You can be NPC-level, named character-level, main character-level, or Maiden-tier broken character. Obviously more power = more involvement in the plot and therefore you will be at a higher risk.
I'm unsure to include this or not.
- A bigger expansion on weapons. Price stuff differently based on how good they are. Basic swords and shields are cheap, weapons with multiple forms that can use Dust are incredibly pricey.
- More semblances, some of which will not be based on the show.
- Colored Auras that give you abilities, such as a Aura that regenerates in combat or one that has a "shield-gate" that makes attacks with low force do nothing (small arms' fire, glass etc.)

I thought of including options for either following the story of the show, removing certain elements (the Maidens) or something else entirely... but that would make it harder to team up with other people, and that was by far the best part of the cyoa. I'd hate to get rid of that.

Unique Armor
Unique Weapon
Time
Abode (Free)

>Patron

Tempted to go with Father Of Beasts.

I meant to ask "how does that sound?", but I forgot to include it in the post.

And the companions? :^)
I think that It sounds good and removing elements from the history sounds ok you can make an multiplayer option that gives points if you make a team with other Anons like team RAPE

>And the companions? :^)
>I think that It sounds good and removing elements from the history sounds ok you can make an multiplayer option that gives points if you make a team with other Anons
This.

>RAPE
>Rouge
>Azure
>Pink
>Emerald

It really existed?
awesome

no it fuckin didn't I was making shit up since they're all apparently named after colors.

>tfw I still remember the greentexts for that
>tfw I was the one who wrote Augusta's build

>companions
That wouldn't diminish from interaction with other people ITT? Companions are NPC's that do anything you say, making you team leader with no problem.
The idea was to make a little comment at the end saying other players have higher power levels than regular people, and that's your motivation. Giving you points for playing with others seems odd.

UPDATE - 1 new page.

Team RAPE was fucking beautiful, and bless whoever wrote the stories. Those stories are why I desperately want another RWBY cyoa. That, and how natural it is to team up.
if only I had the damn file on this computer.

(This page had a very minor typo-fix & is changed)

I think I'm going to cry
Awesome I wish I could read the stories...

...

Oh boy, the filename was exactly what I remembered.
>Glynda is not impressed
Seriously user if you're reading this, you are beautiful. You're an absolute madman. It never ceases to make me laugh.

Two new girls. Relax in the light or embrace the dark?

NEW PAGE

As always, please inform me of any typos you find.

Wait, is this fanmade or am I dreaming?

Library 1 - Library 2 - (pic related)

Miya Intro - Miya Page - You're dreaming?

Sub-shade: "they aren't as smart OF social", you meant "or"?

Orb of Life
Welfare
Surveillance

Sola
Radiant Glow
Slendor
Holy Grail

Just give me anything that makes me happy and optimistic. Free stuff and a qt girl are also nice.

>an multiplayer option that gives points if you make a team
Ideas for how to do that without making it retarded? You know, without stating
>make a team with another player
I'd like to keep it obvious to everyone who isn't daft but never outright state it so those guys who militantly hate multiplayer and PvP won't toss a shitfit.
Awarding points to do just that sort of defeats the purpose.

Thanks, I'll fix that.

>Slendor
I think you left out a letter, unless maybe you were wanting a spooky tall man.
Can't argue with
>Just give me anything that makes me happy and optimistic
though. That's raw, intrinsic satisfaction.

In response to all this, I believe you have all forgotten the most important rule: pic related
Harmony being a notable exception.

Forgive me, I actually thought I spelled the words right. Next time I wont rush.

Rolled 2 (1d3)

>Orb of Life
>Library
>Employment

Now if only I knew how to choose between Falchion, Flo, and Melody. I'll just roll a die.

>1. Flo
>2. Melody
>3. Falchion

Looks like I'm rooming with a muse!

>Lessons
>Automatic
>Instrumental Dress

And apparently we can get the band back together. Neat.

>In response to all this, I believe you have all forgotten the most important rule: pic related
No, I didn't forget it. I picked my waifu and didn't read any of the other girls you added afterwards since I wouldn't change my pick.

Great job man.

Blood Money Build

>Class: The Ranger
Skills
>Weapon Proficiency: Pistol (free)
>Stealthy
>Melee Specialist
Perks
>Assassin
>Gunslinger
>Brawler
>Lucky
Vehicle
>Motorcycle x2 ($1700, $3300 left)
Weapons
>Big Iron (Free)
>Machine Pistol x2 ($800, $2500 left)
>10mm Pistol x2 ($500, $2000 left)
>Silencer x5 ($500, $1500 left) (Big Iron, two 10mm, Companion Main Weapons)
>Extended Mags x3 ($300, $1200 left) (Big Iron, Companion Main Weapons)
Faction
>Whoever is paying us.
Companions
>Aleksander (Free)
>Nova ($1200, $0 left)

Aleksander doing long range, me handling infiltration, and Nova on standby if anything goes wrong. Given how nothing SHOULD go wrong, Nova is also getting paid to do weapon and vehicle maintenance.

Missions, Sallvation-Legion War and Organized Crime.

As the Legion is a bunch of cunts (Aleksander's words), we'll be doing merc work for Salvation. In the midst of doing so, we become involved in the Syndicate by saving someone from an assassination attempt that was not actually perpetrated by the Legion. This leads to a self-preservation driven dismantling of the syndicate, starting at the bottom and working up.

Those weapons, that ammo, and all the Rep and Goodwill I'll ever need to settle down and live a luxurious life of running a government-sponsored guild of assassins.

Well, maybe not ALL of you had forgotten. That's the trouble with mass-replies.

Thanks!

Well I don't usually do builds for lewd cyoas, but I kinda wanted to try one since bored and thought one where I could trade lewdness for benefits and magic might be ok. So here's Slut Life Exalted build.

>small god -15

>curvy +2
>beautiful face +6
>short +2
>d-cup +2
>bubble +4
>adaptive +6
>adult (24) 0
>golden blonde +2
>sapphire blue eyes +2
>pale skin +2
>feminine voice 0

>additional breasts (x2 c-cups) +3
>aesthetic mutation (elf ears) +1
>infertility (don't need overthrow of the lunar tyrant now) 0
>tools-make-the-craftsman understanding +1
>youthful mountains reinforcement -1
>laughing at the wind bears -2
>man-pelt amendment (only normal hair for head, eyebrows, lashes; everywhere else super fine/light so not noticeable) +1
>seven gates yielding -1
>icon-eye inscription (cat eyes) -1
>ardor-glance indication (violet) +1
>rapid pregnancy -3
>endless lactation effect +1
>eternal virgin purification +1
>biomotonic cleansing -3
>cleanliness near godliness -3
>vitriol-gut digestion -3

>lifelong servitude +14
>tentacle monster +15
>insect queen (+ovipositor) +25
>archetypical combination (tentacle monster and insect queen combined) +5
>archetypical master (tentacle monster/insect queen combo is my real master) +15
>health and hygiene (body care package x2, make-up package x2, healthcare package, maid) -19
>mortal-taming colar (+mortal-taming leash) +6
>breeder +10
>restricted raiment (+jewelry) +8
>essence refinement (x3, first is free) -24
>time denying kata -10
>longevity (3) -30
>immortality -20

+135-135=0

Explanation incoming since to many characters with build and some choices not exactly what they seem.

Ok, so the being that summoned me to it is a Small God. Insect Queen says it can include "minor behemoths, strange gods, or bizarre demons", so I figure taking Small God with Insect Queen and Tentacle Monster, with Archetypical Combination can make some kind of minor eldritch God. So this eldritch God has ovipositor to and needs a living incubator to keep eggs in, and I'm perfect for that because Seven Gates Yielding, Rapid Pregnancy, Additional Breasts, and Endless Lactation Effect. I'm infertile (because getting pregnant=ew), but Rapid Pregnancy doesn't say that it requires fertility. So I figure it can mean that I can incubate eggs so they're ready to hatch faster, making me perfect specimen for this job. I wish Easy Pregnancy didn't require fertility, otherwise I'd pick that so holding egg wouldn't be uncomfortable.

Pretty much every other choice is related to my comfort. The eldritch God cares a lot for the well being of its eggs, so it makes sure that I live life of supreme comfort and luxury. Just lounging around draped in jewels with a maid to clean up after me could get boring aftr awhile. But Immortality just so happened to require Essence Refinement x3, so I have strong ability to learn magic. I didn't take any extra choices to boost magic, so I'd have to learn slowly with lots of studying. Thankfully I have lots of free time to do it and eldritch God shouldn't mind as long as I don't exert myself to much.

Eldritch Gods probably live very long times, so I might have this job for thousands of years. When something does eventually happen to it, I will have learned lots of magic and can explore the multiverse as a powerful sexy sorceress.

My outfit is like cross between Cleopatra one and Slave Leia one, so like sexy-skimpy and all made from gold and jewels. This is to show how valuable I am as incubator for baby demi-Gods. And I have to have the Collar and Leash because I'm owned. And I'm very attractive busty blonde.

I didn't read a word you wrote but I like knowing you dream of receiving pearl necklaces.

etc.

You know, with cyoas of this size it'd probably be way easier for everyone involved to use some interactive framework instead of tons of pages.

Like, make a simple layout with a drop down menü, then show/hide the right blocks with jQuery. Mix in classes when the clicks on a div that highlight it to mark selections and you're done.

Since you're asking for feedback:

> You're doing the Lord's work, user.
> Maiden tier bullshit might cause a shitstorm.
> An expansive list of Semblances would be amazing.
> If you do include Maidens, then also make up other crazy bullshit to compete with them.
> Such as being a centuries old powerful Grimm, or weird abomination.
> Your aura idea is great.
> Don't be afraid to deviate slightly from Canon.
> Allowing anons to waifu named characters might cause a shitstorm.
> I somewhat desire this shitstorm.
> Various situational perks, such as constant luck, would be interesting for Character building.
> Make up teachers who's class you focus on, each with different benefits.
> I wish to hug you.

So there you have it. My opinions and suggestions.

Well maybe you should've read it. It's not a "pearl necklace" ZZ Top. It's a LITERAL physical collar and leash that represents me being property of the eldritch God.

Normally, I support making things browser accessible, but that would make it both larger (due to not being compressed to a single image) and less portable (since you can't attach webpages to your Veeky Forums posts). Furthermore, while it does allow for certain interactive abilities, it also takes away some artistic freedoms (Adding outer glows and drop shadows to browser text isn't easy)
I did consider rigging something up for Dungeon-Meister once (complete with basic advenuter AI), but didn't wanna have anything like that up on the web using artistic assets that I can't even remember the origins of. I decided that if I ever do such a thing, it would have to be redone by hand, so I scrapped the idea.

I don't get this. Which are considered unique event?

I can see your concerns, but I have to disagree on filesize. You could convert the images of each page into a background image, either a hard 1:1 representation or a smaller collection you assign via background position.

But then my perspective is probably warped by my work. Maybe I'll redo something old to try it out, working without magento would be welcome change of pace.

Each one within a box. In other words, "Battle Royal" is a unique event, while "The Great Tournament" is when that event takes place.

>Classes
I definitely wish to add that, so you have more of an idea of what to actually do. Same with the event where first year students shadowed a Huntsman. Possibly an event that includes another team, either from the show or the thread.
Give you a feeling of actual being there, if you know what I mean. Knowing that the world is alive.
So I'd like to add classes and events, without ripping off Hero Academy too much.
And I don't think I'll had the difficulty thing. It would cause a shitstorm and I don't particularly care for those.
Companions - if I did include them, which I almost certainly won't - would not be copy-pasted from the show except for my waifu.

So which are the non unique events in that case?

Fuck I was just going through the pick a godess or godess to mortal dating site cyoa and wondered how much of a mad man someone would have to be to go polyheistic with hera and ishtar.

Like I said, you're doing the Lord's work.

But be warned, would you leave your waifu in the CYOA? Even when knowing of the other anons?

In this case, "unique" means "different."

In other words, you can't pick Battle Royal eight times. You could pick "Battle Royal" 6 times maximum, but you'd participate in two other events. Does that make sense?

...

So does this mean if you pick basilisk den and end up running it into the ground, you can't pick it again?

A.

Unless they start it back up again the next year.

By "running it into the ground" I mean kill everyone that has anything to do with it.

Go back to /qst/.

Jesus.

>mfw

What about him?

Do people even understand what a CYOA is anymore?

Oh lord no, mai waifu is for me alone and you can't have her!
Mind you, I still need to get used to university starting again and getting into a rhythm, and there's some other stuff I'll have to do, btu I'll keep thinking up what I want to do with the cyoa.
I could definitely see myself adding the fan-made characters as companions, but that's when all discussion of the cyoa has seized, as a sort of "thank you for enjoying".
But that's the closest you'll get to companions, and you could've chosen them at any time anyway.

>Voluntarily becoming a sex slave/breeding machine for a monster with dozens of inhumanly large dicks and ovipositors.
>Being fucked silly and kept constantly pregnant or giving birth for thousands of years.
>All this simply for a comfy, luxurious "free" ride.
Wow! You really are a dirty little slut AA!

Still waiting hopefully , cyoafriends.

please ignore the bait

Eh.

Holy crap, seeing all of this is reigniting the spark to finish my Pokémon D&D ruleset booklet. The groundwork is basically finished, it just needs polishing off, but I can't be arsed to finish it and I doubt anyone would be interested in it.

Ruby must be protected.

This is good, for the waifus must be protected from the horrors spawned by our sinful world.

We are the horrors.[spoiler/]

Sorry man, searched through my entire 300+ CYOA library and still couldn't find it.
I believe I have seen the CYOA you're talking about before though, and I do have that Caves CYOA.

That's a damn shame. I really liked that first one more than the second, for all the bennies the second added. The areas were more diverse in the first, being drastically different from one another. One direction was Spooky Scary Skeleton Town, another was Dark McWhatthefuck, Dvelves another and then there was the Hyper Light Drifter 'advanced civilization falls' location. Shit was hype.

Good to see you back, beri. Though I'm still sticking with Yin.

>Yin
>Deal: Taken

>Orb of Life
>Library - Bonus not used (yet)
>Employment - Data Entry

>Sewing

>Death Sight

>Death Armor
>Dullahan Scythe

So, RWBY + NieR?