Okay lads, I've been designing a religion/mythology for quite a while now. Need advice on everything except formatting.
First of all. The entire universe is very similar to a nut or a fruit. It has a shell, that is, bedrock, it has flesh, that is, water, soil, sand, and everything else that is built upon bedrock. And it has seeds; The sky.
Sins exist. The greatest sin is fear, which manifests itself in submission and cowardice.
When a person dies, they ascend upwards. Keep the fact that the earth is "inside out" and the sky is the centre of the globe. THe sky is a big dark nothing, made up out of pure magic. The only things in it are heavenly bodies. Now, the sun is clearly the biggest of these. The sun is, in this mythology, a tunnel to the other side of the world, the path to the afterlife. It is where believers go to get cleansed of their sins, in heavenly fire. The less bad stuff they have done, the faster they go barelling through the tube that is the sun, and soon land on the other side, the afterlife, a place that has always existed, but not been inhabited untill the founder of the religion figured out how the world works.
Said founder was a warrior poet, a totally-not-Muhammad named Raz'az
>Which roughly translates to Godlike, or almost god, or more specifically, 'az means "As close as you can get without being it" and Raz meaning immortal, omnipotent, all of that shit.
Raz'az united the vast lands of the peninsula as one, and wrote the truth on the world as he went about conquering city state after city state, settling what rocky highlands and plains that was uninhabited before his soldiers marched over it. The religion in question is extremely rare outside of the peninsula, and its' worshippers are seen as barbarians at best, and are satirized as cannibal beasts at worst.
Said founders texts has all been written down, his philosophical musings and pseudoscientific investigations leading to be the holiest book in all of that religion. Cont