/cyoag/ CYOA General

Hey guys. I've had an idea for a CYOA. Not sure when I'll be able to get on with making it but first I'd like to hear some opinions. So, I'd call it an HFY CYOA. I am thinking to make it a point buy with positive and negative choices that would be required to be 0 by the end of the generation. It would consist of two huge blocks: setting generator and humanity customizer. In the first one choices would be on some in- universe laws of nature like possible FTL methods with types of said methods(wormholes might vary in how to make them and if they need to be tugged to the system first, for example), Fermi paradox solution(s) for this specific setting(Haven't searched hard enough, filters before sentience, filters after sentience, berserker Von-Neumann probes, a bunch of other choices or any mix of the above), what aliens might exist(aliens that are like humans with forehead ridges, similar to Earth lifeforms, carbon only or full alien with alternative chemistries and stuff), what best power generation technology is available(fizzion->fusion->one of many matter- energy conversion methods->zero point energy and stuff like that), best reaction drives possible, yes/no on reactionless drive existence as well as how hard they are to get(and the same for stuff like self replicating robots, nanomachines, AI, astroengineering and some other stuff), opinion of most races on some technologies, what races there are and so on. It would be 'sliders' on how docsmithian you want it to be and how much realism you want to shove into it. I will probably dig concepts heavily from places like Orion's arm, Stellaris and a huge amount of other places I know of. Humanity customization would be choosing how humans are different from everyone else. If we are seen as cute or ugly or horrifying, if we are feeble or ridiculously mighty, if our weapons are better or worse due to being radically different, too advanced or outdated, if we lack some crucial technology for a while or forever and so on.

Fuck off with the autistic waifus.

Give me some HARDCORE GRITTY and WITTY SCIFI.

Go for it

It would also probably be way too complicated as I plan to include stuff like advanced government types and layers upon layers of other complication on how different it could be.

What if I want HARDCORE GRITTY WAIFUS?

this.
i have burn sores on my dick already.

Are they Scientifically Fictional?

you got it

If the world has storm magic, sure.
Guess there's no telling which fantasy world you'll be in, right?

I think a choice to allow inbreeding would have unintended consequences related to history of the settig and would imply a lot of other stuff. Covergent evolution won't let you to fug an alien after all. But fuck it, why not.

Ignore this dud. Sperg out about the waifus all you want, on two conditions:

1. Post some non-waifu CYOAs, too.
2. Post at least one CYOA that lets you be a robot.

Robot CYOAs are rare

>when people use your CYOA to shitpost

feels bad, man.

Who needs to be a robot when you can be a whole Matrioshka brain cluster!

Don't worry, someone will post another CYOA that'll cause various flavors of autist to get fannytroubled, and your CYOA will be forgotten for a bit until you can reintroduce it, pure(ish) again.
It's me, I'm posting the spergbait, because I actually like it.

Italics how is the Order going?

I wouldn't really call them gritty, but KAIFU has some pretty horrible backstories for some of the girls. Does that count?

>spoiler
Well, you caught me by posting an old version.

rwby is lesbian trash.

Are there any actual mechanical changes, or is it just formatting?

What a coincidence, so is my taste.

>Starts with tentacle rape & mind control
Fuck you.

It's a sex CYOA. It's kind of the point.

>just formatting
As far as I can tell.

>lesbian or yuri
>trash
pick one and only one

You know, I don't believe I've seen a CYOA yet where some eldritch deity comes up to you and says:
"Hey there, I'm gonna rape you to make some babies. Shh. Shh. It's okay. You get some choices about how you want the fuck to go down. Don't worry, I'll make you like it."

Slut life exalted

This is kind of what I meant by a somewhat less-human form.

Mother of Beasts and Earth

>Genitalia
Vagina
-Embellishments
-Cilia (1)
-Plush (1)
Vagina (1)
-Musculature
-Plush x2 (2)
Vagina (1)
-Lubrication
-Lumen (1)
-Plush (1)

>Shape
Broodmother (1)
>Chest
Cursed (1)
Multiplicity (1)
>Influences
Multiplexive
>Face
Primal

>Flourishes
Lactation (1)
-Bountiful
-Nurturing (1)
-Aphrodisiac (1)
-Dependent (+1)

>Progeneration
Brooding
-Conditional Emergent (1)
>Specialty
Multidunious
-Monarch (1)

>Dowry
Lavender Grimoire (3)
Rite of Flesh Union (2)
Nuptial Torc (+1)
Primordial Woad (1)
Primal Array
Celestial Charms (1)
Argent Spark (1)

>Bonds
Thrall Horde (1)

>Urges
Throne's Shadow (+1)

Pedigree: 6
Status: 0
Allure: 6

Built at 19 favor. Her appearance is similar to that of the Venus of Willendorf mirrored three times around a vertical axis. Hers is a large, pear-shaped body with three faces, three pairs of long, strong arms, three pairs of massive, pendulous breasts, and three pairs of vestigial stump-like legs that serve only to guide and lock suitors into her three varied but equally scrumptious holes. Her faces seem stony and crude, as if carved by zealous but inexperience hands, but she somehow manages to exude an aura of warm motherliness for all.

(cont.)

Well you have now.

What I'm hearing is that I'm breaking new ground here.

The majority of her spacious interior is made up of a complex system of extra wombs that are almost always in use. Even when she was presented as a virgin bride to Teitat-in-Lavender her belly was swollen as if with child, so fundamental to her form is her primary function. Almost all her time is spent giving birth (a much easier task than it would have been in her pedestrian, previous form) and caring for her immense brood; they and her equally savage retainers suckle at her never ending teats while also nourishing her as they contribute genetic information for future generations. Most of her horde is self-propagated in this way but of course Teitat's plans require a more directed path from time to time and the Mother of Beasts and Earth provides unique opportunities for complex combinations of different suitors and allows for many generations of growth and refinement in a relatively short period of time.

She uses her Rite of Flesh Union to incorporate a suitor, willing or not, into one of her three sides, adding a new flavor, aesthetic, and genetic combination to that third of her breeding potential. Her partner's mind is allowed to perceive the world through the sensory input provided in that part of her body but they are effectively locked in and left to watch as "their" body works to a plan not of their devising. When they are released, days or aeons later, they remarkably sane though very changed, resulting in a much more motherly and caring outlook.
This shit ain't even my fetish (or, wasn't) but it seemed like a pretty interesting and surprisingly arousing outcome from some of the choices presented in the CYOA.

Well yours doesn't exactly do that specifically. A Bride is of slightly higher status than "hey buddy, gimme your semen". They've got some gilding on their cages.

This is probably closest. But you can actually make choices that get you out of it.

I remember an old one from /d/ where some goddess impregnates you in your dreams and turns you into a monstergirl (or a monsterboy, but you'd have to give birth from your dick).

It was called Mother of Monsters or something.

So this seems like a pretty shitty CYOA for me to learn how to CMOA. So, I vote we GET a Battle Mage. And then the next person picks something else or?

something like this?

what

Stick it on imgur if you have it.

Blacksmith is probably the only one worth choosing if you have a choice.

Is there any reason to take Chakra Eye and Elder Gaze if you have Quasicosmic? Do they enhance each other, or can Quasicosmic pretty much do what the others do?

Presumably they add to your abilities.
I.E. You can be quasicosmic in nature, but still be shit at seeing the elements of your own nature around you.

Well done! A prime example of your point. Bit of a shame about the Status score at the end, but since you're going with a passive strategy I don't think that will trouble you too much in the end

This guy:
Got it right. Quasicosmic integrates, Chakra eye percieves, and Elder Gaze attracts cosmic energy

I'm a fan of degradation and slave stuff anyway so that's a common factor among my builds. Plus the idea here is really to be more of a "marital aide" than anything else. The large scale version of an idol used in primitive fertility rituals.

anyone have the waifu one where you also have to deal with the parents?

There really isn't, come to think of it.

Ok! Thanks for explaining!

I think a dark lord type might be interested in you since it sounds like you could make a whole army or something like the brood mother in Dragon Age.

Compromise:
WITTY and GRITTY waifus and autistic SCIFI.
GET SPESSREFUGEE OUT!

You had me at HFY.

Alright, turns out it wasn't actually lewd.

Not sure if there's another page or an updated version, and I can't be arsed to find out.

Ah

yes

You're not Sandra, I'm Sandra!

>RACE: Half-Dragon (14 left)
>BODY: Jacked (13 left), Well-Endowed (11 left), Lifetime (8 left), I Ain't Dying Yet! (5 left)
>SPECIAL: Weaponmaster [Shield] (free), General Magic (3 left), Yan (2 left)
>HERO: Kellie (0 left)

I am doing this correctly, right?

Anyone got the one page blue background CYOA that kinda looks like this one

All I remember from it is that it's about you being this universe jumper and one of the options you get is a flying whale

The fandom is

Isn't rwby like full of religious propaganda?

2nd Lieutenant Sterling Vass, reporting for duty!
>Guardian [10]
>Human
>Atlas
>Ring Leader
(I wanted something to to with rallying teammates, or some kind of communication ability, letting a unit with him in act as one entity, increasing efficiency to a near-maximum, but summoning mooks works too I guess.)
>Hope [10]
>Will [10]
>Intelligence [10]
>Combat [40]
>Tactics [20]

>Melee: Kriegsmesser (100)
>Ranged: Officer's revolver + Dust Mod (250)

>Scroll (0)
>Wilderness Gear (50)
>Dust Charges (50)
>Rebreather (50)
>Parachute + Grappling Hook (150)
>Targetting Glasses (150)
>Armor (100)
100 lien left over, it's generally a good idea to have some cash on hand in case of emergencies.

No, and I'm not sure why they think there's lesbians.

Religion has been mentioned once in three seasons and only then as an example of what would get fucked up if the secret conspiracy went public and disrupted the status quo.

>religious propaganda
wot?

I mean, the way the good vs evil stuff is set up. Not like them specifically mentioning anything.

Well whatever, they viciously ripped off Soul Caliber, and even poor Zasalamel at that. That's enough.

The good vs evil stuff is based on fairytales, not religion. Even most of the characters are based on fairytale characters.

And I've not played Soul Caliber, can you explain how it rips it off please?

...

...

There's literally nothing wrong with that.

Well I updated this based on info and suggestions. I dropped Kleptozzological, Multitudinous, and Throne Shadow, and added Nurturing, Dependent, Quasicosmic, and Thrall Horde. And I had Oviposition costing me a Favor instead of giving me one so I had one more point to spend, so I used that for Synergism which costs a point now. So now I have better stats and more magic potential.

Queen Saralindra Helviiryn, Fallen Angel, Mother of Spiders

Pedigree XXX
Status XXX
Allure XXXXX

Genitalia
>Vagina (1)
>Embellishments
>Lubrication
>Musculature
>Plush (x3)
3

Shape
>Alluring
3

Chest
>Gifted
>Multiplicity
4

Influences
>Psuedodevascent (Angel)
>Quasicosmic
7

Face
>Regal
>Chakra Eye
>Elder Gaze
9

Flourishes
>Ouroboros Metabolism
>Godly Cleanliness
>Lernaean Hymen
>Lactation
>Nurturing
>Dependent
>Gate to Ecstasy (x2) all free Upgrades
>Reproductive Channel (x2)
15

Strategy
>Synergism (no Specialty)
16

Treasure
>Primordial Woad
>Abyssal Ink
>Celestial Charms
>Argent Spark
>Argent Blaze
>Nuptial Torc
>Regal Array
21

Bonds
>Thrall Horde
>Chaq, Spider-Goddess
>Oviposition
>Amazing Spider-Parasite (Chaq)
20

>Get kidnapped to be bride of Teiatat.
>He probes my mind and learns I like beautiful magical Angels.
>Turns me into beautiful magical Angel.
>Seems like he's being nice, but turns out he enjoys seeing Pure Angels get corrupted into Fallen Angels.
>Teiatat gives me to the Spider-Goddess Chaq so that she can use me to produce healthy spider spawn who will serve Teiatat.
>I have some status as a Angel and lots of magical potential, and might someday escape being egg incubator.

>oral breeding

Well, there's nothing mechanically wrong with this, and there's nothing wrong about the backstory. I give this one the EDG seal of approval!

>HISTORY: Familiar Face [90]
>AGE: 17
>RACE: Human
>ACADEMY: Atlas
>NAME: Donar Wiz
>GENDER: Female

>SEMBLANCE: Force of Nature (Lightning)
>GIFTS: Fear [80], Energy [60], Beauty [50], Intelligence [40]
>TALENTS: Combat [0]

>WEAPON: Cybernetics (left arm) [500]
>WEAPON MODS: Blaster Aug [300], Dust Mod [250]

>ITEMS & GEAR: Scroll [free], Dust Charges [200], Armor [100], Wilderness Gear [50], Rebreather [0]

An ordinary girl with an ordinary plan, and it probably sounds something like this.

youtube.com/watch?v=LcgMFzfsoI4

She doesn't mean to be as creepy as she can seem sometimes, but she just hasn't been the same since the arm. Some people might start moping for months after losing one. This, however, was not what Donar did.

That was when she /started/ smiling.

The arm is named Irminsul, by the way.

The fandom might be, but the series...really isn't. At all. In the least. Remotely. I mean, the memorable pairings constantly thrown at us are heterosexual so...

The point of sex CYOAs is to watch some random woman be physically and mentally raped by some shitty tentacle thing? That's retard. You are an idiot.

The point of this one is. Are you broken?

...

Maybe you wanted him to give you a trigger warning too?

I actually can't have babies of my own because Synergism. So I'm really magical egg incubator for Chaq who has Oviposition and Spider-Parasite. I have some Pedigree perks that make me desirable for this. Because things like Ouroboros Metabolism and Godly Cleanliness, I don' have to eat or drink or normal bodily functions, so I might as well incubate eggs everywhere I can since it says Chaq reproduces in quantity.

Thanks for looking it over! I'm looking forward to locations and political sections!

I'm not a big fan of the intro either. But when I read the rest of the cyoa and started working on a build, I thought it was good overall.

The point of this one is to fantasize about being that woman.

It's pretty hot desu.

The framing device stays. It's meant to titilate and disgust, to draw the reader into the setting of the CYOA the same way a fist to the face brings an individual into a fight.

I know it's not everyone's cuppa, but I don't know how to make a kaleidoscope out of text that resolves into a sexywrong intro for every person who reads it.

What if you are that woman in real life? What if we all are?

Can we get a 'That Woman' expansion pack, Lavender?

Maybe she gets left back on Earth, starts having flashbacks, likes it. Becomes some sort of witch. Can't stop FEELING THEM. You know?

Her fate is already accounted for in the CYOA. Search the document for the term "thronemaiden"

What is this "you have ___ favor" bit? Is this blank because it's a WIP, or am I just not good enough at fine print to figure out how points work here?

Right. But in the expansion pack, the Bride kicked her in the cunt, and she fell back to Earth.

He's still deciding on points and/or getting ready to add the geasa. I believe most have used 20 points.

Blank because WIP. The number for the current build is 20 favor based on my personal build and other's test builds, if you'd like to make a build yourself

I pick trash. Because it is.

It's obvious you're not Angel. She hates anything to do with dicks and is afraid of pregnancy. There's no way she'd make a build that involved breeding, and especially not getting all her holes pounded by giant spider-monster dick.

What you've written is basically porn. Do you require so much detail and time spent on it?

You people disgust me.

>is afraid of pregnancy
Don't worry, a few years and that'll turn into a massive forced impregnation/risk fetish.

The hormones get to 'em eventually.

Thank you for your opinion.

Farmer and Soldier are both comfier.
Miller is safe if you aren't a dumbass.

>Soldier
>Middle Ages
Don't worry, you're dead of dysentery before you can even make the choice.

>HFY

Well, the way you've outlined the thing makes it seem like I could still find a few ways to enjoy it but still. HFY? Goodness.

Complicated is good! Make it happen buddy.

There's nothing inherently wrong with the concept, it's just when people go overboard and take it as what would definitely happen. It's entirely dependent on factors outside of our control, but superiority over a Xeno race is completely possible. What mostly matters is who found who at what tech level.